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Posted: 7 years ago
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A breath held as the chakra missed him by inches
A breath held as the warrior walked towards the fallen
A breath held as a hand he held in love and promise

A breath held as a promise was asked
A breath held as a memory breezed by
A breath held as a sword was listed
A breath held as a poetry was about to be unraveled.

A breath held again as he remembered
A breath held all because of a pair of eyes
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing as usual👏
U have described their feelings so perfectly
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Missed after break, power went puff. Someone please update what happened
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Haven't watched the epi yet...but ur poems are always so intriguing when one misses the epi!!
Beautiful as usual👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful !! Absolutely matter of fact... flows seamlessly... waiting for an OS from you now ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow Jayshree u weave magic with words so well put 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you all girls, for the love you all shower ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very well written. 👏
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Kshithi

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