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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello everyone I am back, I wasn't going for this type of story so I will post another... MI was debating actually even posting it... But let me know what you guys think... Thanks
Ratan and Dia were finally married, and know it was time for there shuhag raat!

Dia's sister had quickly decorated the room
She made Dia sit in the bed with her face covered in the ghungat

Ratan was hesitant to go into the room, but he was forced

Ratan couldn't beilieve Dia was sitting on the bed with her dupatta covering her face Ratan thought to himself 'omg meine shadi toh kar lee, magar ab is 30 year old ka needs mujhey puri karni paragi... She must be desperate...'

Ratan went towards the bed, and sat on the edge of the bed

Ratan: Dia I know we are married and I know what you expect from me... I want you to know that I will try to fulfill your needs

Dia just nodded her head

Ratan: should I turn off the lights?
Dia nodded her head again,
Ratan gulped his silva down his throat and turned off the lights and went near Dia picked her ghungat and put his hand her on check
Ratan: why does your check feel so rough?
Ratan started moving his hand around her check and he left pokey stuff inside his hand

Ratan could feel something was not right, he got to turn on the lights and he couldn't believe he saw Yash bana
Ratan: AAAHHH
Yash was laughing like crazy

Dia quickly ran into the room she had changed her clothes and was wearing a simple suit
Dia: kya hua Ratan-Sa... Yash bana
Yash finally stopped laughing: pataye kya hua Ratan-Sa
Ratan: Dia yeh... Dia mein... Dia wohh...
Dia: kya keh raha hain app?
Ratan left the room, he couldn't believe what had just happened... Yash also left the room behind him

Yash: Ratan-Sa Pease wait
Ratan: humhey apse baat nhai karni
Yash: please wait... Okay sorry, but what were you going to do you Dia is not like that type of a girl... Even tho you are married but Dia is not ready to jump into bed with you... And you should know that by know about what kind of girl she is

Ratan left bad: I know but I just thought that maybe she was waiting for this day her whole life and I wanted it to be special
Yash smiled and went away and Ratan went back to his to the actual Dia!

Ratan: Dia I want you to know that I came into this marriage whole heartily and I promise I will be the best husband and will always be here for you
Dia eyes got teary
Ratan: I know our marriage wasn't the best described but still I hope there is hope for us
Dia quickly went and hugged him tightly
Dia: thank you Ratan for your understanding

Okay guys I don't really know what I wrote... Lol I wasn't going for this type of story... So I will be posting another one shortly, but I still hope you guys like it I tried making it funny! Thank youu



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice, 😆 Ratan and Yash part were hilarious 🤣🤣
Mina H thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nags-

Very nice, 😆 Ratan and Yash part were hilarious 🤣🤣



Haha thank youu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello Ganga,
Are you the Ganga Chowdhury from DiRa live ?
surbhimathur thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hahahaha loved yash and ratan's part! 😆
Superb!
Keep writing :)

Now I am going to read the other OS with name' Lol
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Hahahaha loved yash and ratan's part! 😆
Superb!
Keep writing :)

Now I am going to read the other OS with name' Lol



Hahaha, thank you for liking both of them, I also wrote another one named dil de Gallan...!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice os
Ratan yash part is funny

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