Juda hoke bhi tu mujhme kahin baaki hai,last st on pg 91 updt on Feb 3 - Page 52

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Police was taking away simmi-param when simmi ran to Toshiji and said -please mumma bacha lo mujhe, I am ur simmi. Main aapki beti hoon mumma. She said crying while Toshiji looked away and said -issi baat ka toh dukh hai simmi, ki tu meri beti hai. Warna mere puttar ko takleef pahunchane ke badle main teri jaan le leti. She said and shrugged simmi's hand.

Simmi went to her father but he too looked away.

Simmi-waah kya rang badla hai sabne. Kal tak har koi iss ishita ke nafrat tha, aur aaj har koi mujhe nafrat se dekh raha hai. Everyone is blaming me, but kya galat kiya hai Maine. Bas iss raman bhalla ko ek medicine hi toh di hai, so that he can forget this wife of his. Toh kya galat kiya. Main ishita ko dard dena chahti thi. Kisi apne ko khone ka dard, apne sabse kareebi ko khone ka dard. Mumma aap mujhse gussa ho kyunki Maine aapke puttar ko maarne ki koshish ki. Aur bhai aap, kyunki main aapke bachchon ko takleef di. Aap logon ka dard apne bachchon ke liye hai toh zara mere baare mein sochiye, she killed my ananya, mujhe kaisa lagaa hoga. Isne meri bachchi mujhse chin li. Main kaise jee hoon apni ananya ke bina. Aapka beta toh zinda hai mumma,meri bachchi mar gayi. Puchiye apni bahu se, kya woh mujhe meri bachchi lauta sakti hai, mujhe meri ananya lauta sakti hai. If she can do that then I will happily go to jail accepting my crime. She was saying when she heard-i wanted to give u ur ananya back simmi.but u stoop just too low in ur revenge.

Everyone was shocked hearing this and turned to the person.when ishita said -yes simmi, I wanted to return ur ananya to u. Main maanti hoon mujhse bahut badi galti hui, bahut hi badi, but main bhi Ek maa hoon and I can feel ur pain. So I wanted to give u some solace and even tried to, but u were so blind in ur revenge that u didn't even give me a chance to give u, ur happiness back. She said making everyone confuse.

Raman-yeh kya keh rahi ho ishita??

Simmi-kya bakwaas kar rahi hai, meri beti ko maar kar usse kaise mujhe wapas kar sakti thi tu.

Everyone was looking for explanation from ishita when she called someone. All turned towards the door and all could see a boy in his mid twenties coming taking a small girl in his arms. The little girl was of about 15 months, she was sleeping hiding herself in the boy's arms.

Everyone looked at ishita and she said -yeh hai ananya, meri aur raman ko beti. She said making everyone shocked.

Raman-hamari bachchi, yeh kya keh rahi ho ishita, aur yeh ladka, who is he?? he asked all shocked.

Ishita -batati hoon, Sab batati hoon. When I went to jail,meri tabiyat aksar kharab rehti thi, but I never bothered thinking its all because of my loneliness. But one day I fainted and after checkup I got to know that I was pregnant, that too five months. Mujhe realise hi nahi hua tha that I can be pregnant also. Even my baby bump was not visible as the baby was too weak. I was in a fix after knowing the news, as our kids were grown up and I was also in such a complex situation, but somewhere I was happy that finally I got to experience this phase of my life. I wanted to call raman and tell him all the truth but himmat nahi hui. Phir Maine socha shayad joh gunaah mujhse hua hai, yeh uske repentance ke liye hai. I thought to give the baby to simmi if it happens to a girl child. Haan ananya ki kami kabhi khatam nahi hoti but I can't do more then giving my own child to u. Ek aisa bachcha joh har tareeke se mera tha, main jiski asli maa thi, I wanted to give that to u simmi just to give u, ur happiness back. And from god grace after four months, I really got a baby girl. I was too happy and called home, but no-one picked the call. Maine bahut koshish ki sabse baat karne ki but kisi se bhi baat nahi ho paayi. I was very worried thinking now what will happen with my child, kya woh bhi mere saath jail mein rahegi. Main iss baat ko le kar pareshan thi hi, ki Ek din constable ne bataya mera beta mujhse milne aaya hai. I was happy that adi came to meet me but adi nahi aaya tha. It was nirvaan,aliya ka bhai, jisne kabhi mujhe amma kaha tha. He came to meet me, I was very happy.i can rely on him, I gave my little ananya to him, I told him to take care of her and like a true brother he took care of our child. He use to bring her to me but Maine mana kar diya. Phir ashok ne mujhe chudwaya, I wanted to come here and give simmi, my ananya, but simmi ne joh kuch bhi kiya mere raman ke saath, meri pihu ke saath, meri himmat chut gayi uske haath mein apni masoom si bachchi dene ki. That day I decided that I will give my ananya to simmi. Aur kisi aur ko bhi nahi bataya ananya ke baare mein, kyunki main nahi chahti thi ki meri choti si bachchi, simmi ne ghinone khel ka mohra bane. She said crying bitterly while Raman wrapped his arms around her.

She cried and said -raman, main usse uski ananya wapas karna chahti thi but she stoop just too low in her revenge. She said and again cried.

Raman hugged her tight and said -its good that u decided otherwise, hamari bachchi charity ke liye nahi hai. He said and consoled her while everyone was looking at ishra and the little ananya who was still sleeping peacefully in nirvaan's arms.

Simmi walked slowly to the little ananya to take her in her arms when raman took ananya in his arms and said -u r not allowed to touch her, yeh meri beti hai, sirf meri, yeh meri ananya hai. He said and hugged his little daughter to his heart content. He showered the little face of ananya with many kisses and said -tu meri beti hai, meri aur meri ishita ki bachchi, hamari bachchi. He said kissing her again and again while the little girl woke up feeling his hard stubble and start crying.

Raman -chot lag gayi kya, sorry bachche, see beta I am ur papa ur papa, babu. He said rocking the baby while ishita was just admiring him with their child.

Simmi-bhai please de do naa, bas ek baar. Ishita, main tujhe maar kar dungi. Tere pairon mein gir kar maafi maang lungi, please mujhe bas ek baar ananya ko choo lene de. Bas ek baar please ishita, bhai please. She was crying and pleading while Raman wasn't ready to give simmi the little ananya.

Ishita -raman, Ek baar de dijiye.

Raman-no ishita, I will not give my daughter to anyone, naa simmi, naa koi aur. Noone can touch my daughter. Meri bachchi ne bahut kuch saha hai, itne din apne mumma papa ke bina nahi hai. Aaj joh mujhe mili hai, I will give her to anyone. He said holding ananya tight not ready to give her to anyone.

Simmi cried bitterly holding raman's feet and said -please bhai, just once. Yeh meri ananya hai, ishita yeh meri ananya hai naa, please tell bhai to give me.

Ishita look at Raman with pleading eyes, at last raman showed the baby to simmi. She took the baby in her arms and kissed all over her face. Ananya got irritated by the disturbance and start crying. Raman took her back from simmi while she cried and said -tune thik kaha ishita, agar main nafrat mein itni andhi nahi hui hoti toh shayad aaj yeh sab naa hota, hum sab Ek saath khush rehte.she said crying and went to the cops.

Param look at simmi crying and said -tu pagal hai kya, emotional Ho rahi hai. Woh ishita aur raman ko beti hai, hamari nahi, usse kyun wapas kar diya, uske bal par hum yahan se bhaag sakte the.

Simmi look at param and slapped him.

Simmi-main galat thi, tumhara badla ananya ka nahi tha kabhi. Tabhi iss bachchi ko dekh kar bhi tera dil nahi pighla.she said and went with the cops, they took param too.

Raman hugged ishita and ananya tight when adiru and pihu came to them. Pihu forwarded her hand to take ananya and said -ishimaa, yahin toh surprise hai jiske baare mein aap bol rahi thi.

Ishita nodded and pihu took ananya in tight hug. Adiru too hugged ananya tight. Ishita looked at Raman and both hugged each other tight.

Ishita -thank u so much raman, for doing all this,mujh par bharosha karne ke liye, mujhe paane ke liye u did all this and because of this finally hamari family puri ho gayi.

Raman-thanks to u, yeh tumhari struggle hai ki hum aaj bhi saath hai, aur sirf itna nahi, u gave me another reason to be happy. Hamari bachchi, hamari ananya, thank u so much ishita. He said and hugged her more tightly.

He then went to nirvaan and thanked him for supporting ishita when she was all alone. Nirvaan just smiled and said, ur welcome.

Adiruhu came to Ishra taking ananya in their arms and hugged ishra tight. Romi came and took ananya and said -bhabhi, she is just so cute. Hamari choti si princess. Thank u bhabhi, for giving us this little doll. He said kissing ananya.

Mr and Mrs bhalla was also coming to take ananya in their arms when raman stopped them and said -meri beti ko choone ki zarurat nahi. Maine pehle hi kaha hai that I will never forgive u. Aap logon ne meri family ke saath bahut galat kiya hai. And this time I don't have energy to forgive u all. So I have decided to leave this house with my family. He said making everyone shocked.

Toshiji -yeh tu kya keh raha hai?? Ananya hamari bhi kuch lagti hai??

Raman-nahi ,yeh sirf meri aur ishita ko beti hai, kisi aur ki kuch bhi nahi. Aur sahi keh raha hoon, bahut ho gaya. Bahut khel liya Aap sabne mere parivaar ke saath. Simmi aur param mere parivar ke saath khelte rahe and u people let them do that. Nahi main nahi maaf kar sakta aap logon ko, actually main maaf hi nahi karna chahta. So I am going taking my wife and children. Pihu aur ananya bahut choti hai toh woh dono toh mere saath hi rahengi. Agar adi aur ruhi hamare saath aana chahe toh aa sakte hai. But it's confirmed that we r going. He said looking at everyone.

Adiru came to Raman and said -hum wahin rahenge, Jahan hamare ishimaa aur papa rahenge.

Raman -ok then come with me, Aap log pareshan mat hoiye papa, I will care of u and maa,jis tarah se aapne mere parivar ko besahara kar diya tha, I will not do that, but ab hum yahan nahi rahenge.

Ishita -but raman,

Raman -no ishita, not this time. This time let me take decision for us. Just hold my hand and be with me. He said and ishita nodded holding his hand giving him the much needed support.

Mr bhalla was about to say something when romi said-its good bhai, that u want to go. Kyunki hamara parivaar ab parivaar nahi raha. Aap jaiye aur apni zindagi mein khush rahiye. Koi toh iss suffocation se baahar nikal payega.

Mr bhalla couldn't said anything and Toshiji start crying when raman turned holding ishita ,adi picked little ananya while ruhi hold pihu's hand. Soon ishra and their kids went out of bhalla house leaving Toshiji crying and Mr bhalla guilty.

Raman -joh beet gaya, woh khatam ho gaya. Now it's a new beggining for us.

Ishita nodded and hugged him, kids too hugged them and all shared a family hug waiting for a beautiful tomorrow together.

That's all, here I end this story.i know ananya was unexpected but what to do, I always wanted Ishra kid who truly belongs to them. So try to enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

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Edited by cutieruhi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Baby!❤️ Loved this idea. And your story was amazing. Will miss it. Try for an epilogue please?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely ending.. Loved it.. super.. thank God Raman left everyone..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely part
Wonderful end update epilogue soon
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Superb awesome update
Love ishra
Update epilogue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb story
anaaya is a surpice
what I liked most is Raman not forgiving Mr Mrs bhalla they deserve ishra hate
In the show also I want Raman to trash Mr Mrs bhalla after getting his memory back they deserves this only
simmi and param got jailed
ishrarudhihu and anaaya happy family left bhalla circus love this part
epilogue please
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful shot... Will miss this story...
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superb update
loved little ananya
liked the way raman take a stand for his family
romi supported raman decision
seniors bhalla are feeling guilty
nice
thanks for pm
waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 7 years ago
Omggg what a superb update didu
Loved it totally
Simmi was crying n begging forgiveness but none forgave her
She has gone so far that she only deserves punishment
Didu ananya part was fab ishra n every ishra fans deam baby..
It was like hmari muraad show mein naa sahi yhn toh puti hui ishra baby ka..i love u for that surprise
N the best part of the update was raman taking stand for his own family
He left that selfish n thankless family n went away
How i wish cvs should learn something from u guys..
In duffers ko yeh sab ideas aate kyun nhi hain..
Didu try to give epilogue soon
Dying to read ishra with their dream baby n ours too...
Continue soon didu..

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