RishBala FF: Her King! (Completed - 23/02 P : 74)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Awesome update
The poem is some puzzle to solve I guess
Rishbala are attracted to each other
What did Madhu find?
Waiting for the next update

Thank you so much dear!

You might be right about the poem dear! ;-)

Yes the attraction is in air LOL

What she found will be revealed in few hours

Thank you

see you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: Hend_Refai
Lovely update

Thank you dear!

Glad you find it lovely

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: Varsha15778383
The poem is so mysterious I think madhu the journalist will find the mystery in it
Within seconds if this two are reaching in their la la land by seeing their eyes then what will happen when this both fall in love .So curious to know
What shock are you gonna give tmr .
Is it someone finding out what madhu actually is or finding ans for the mystery poem or sultan and dipali conspiracy or...
Guesses got over will wait for the actual shock from you tmr
Update fast
Its getting interesting day by day

Thank you for reading and giving your views dear!

Interesting point about the poem! Let's see! ;-)

Well things will be always Lalala LOL

Well not me but the king has a shock to give Heee

Soon let you know dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: ...Seema...
A very nice update
Madhu asked rk to stop caring about wat people think of him.
Dat was really a nice piece of advice
Then he showed her his fathers poem n dats depicted a sort of mystery/riddle
Madhu found a handle dere n rk went out to check on d horse n all
Dere moment was disturbed by mr.horsy hahaha
Looking forward to next update

Thank you dear for reading and liking it

Agree yaar! We can't progress if we keep on caring about what others say.

Yup! They are feeling it has a secret in it! Let's see!

Hope you like the shock Heee

See you

Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

Nice n intriguing update.
The poem is a riddle leading to some mystery or anything?
Rishbala started having feelings for each other.
Madhu found something.
What is the shock awaiting us?
Update soon.

Thanks dear!

Glad you find it nice and interesting

I can't reply to any of your questions here dear! Sorry!

Yes! They are getting close Heee

See you soon!

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#276

Haila!! there was such an interesting story going on & i did not know about it😲

very nice concept..
loved this royal theme bases story..'
madhu's character is fun & adventurous..
she sure has lots of guts to snoop into the palace stay there stating a lie..
RK has this mysterious aura which is intriguing..
He is much more than what meets the eye..
pakhi is a cute little thing..
sultan the jealous cousin & deepali is the evil ex..
Queen is strict & maintains the royal decorum.. yet is loving & caring towards her kids..
all characters are well thought & well written..
there mysteries hidden in the royal palace, madhu's risky escapade & rishabh's behaviour... everything makes the story more thrilling & exciting to read..
eagerly waiting for coming updates..

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
Haila!! there was such an interesting story going on & i did not know about it😲

very nice concept..
loved this royal theme bases story..'
madhu's character is fun & adventurous..
she sure has lots of guts to snoop into the palace stay there stating a lie..
RK has this mysterious aura which is intriguing..
He is much more than what meets the eye..
pakhi is a cute little thing..
sultan the jealous cousin & deepali is the evil ex..
Queen is strict & maintains the royal decorum.. yet is loving & caring towards her kids..
all characters are well thought & well written..
there mysteries hidden in the royal palace, madhu's risky escapade & rishabh's behaviour... everything makes the story more thrilling & exciting to read..
eagerly waiting for coming updates..

Oh dear

Thank you so much for this lovely message!

Well this one is a different one as I don't PM everyday.

It's only with other stories I PM!

Happy you liked the theme of the story!

Well yes! It's a priceless thing to be fearless LOL

You are absolutely right about RK! He has hidden things!

Glad you liked all the characters!

Well this is based on a film and I'm doing justice to what was shown!

Hope you like the upcoming parts too dear!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#278

Part 22 (Previous part : Part 21)

Putting the diary on the table, she turned the handle and right on the side of her head, a small drawer kind of wooden plate opened from under the table with a file containing few documents in it.

Getting on her feet, turning back to check if the Prince is on her sight area, she took the file and opened it to see loose papers in it.

Hearing the horse whining sound, she turned once again to check before getting back her concentration on those documents.

Closing the file as a thought crossed her mind, she looked at it with confusion written all over her face.

***

As time went by, the Prince and the lady made their way back to the palace in one horse as the other one followed them with happiness as if it's its habitual way from palace to cottage and back here.

And as they neared the area, a lady from one of the top floor stood still in her place as she spotted them. And it's none other than the Lady Deepali, in her night suit from a guest room.

With rage filling her eyes and jealousy coming out of her ears, she pulled the curtains and switched off the light of the room.

And the Prince and tutor reached safe to their own place after putting the horse in their zone.

***

Settling comfortably on the bed, she pulled out the file and opened it to see the documents one by one.

And she found a form, then a letter and two copies of Birth Certificate.

Getting each one in each hand, she stared at the names written on it.

On one hand it's written Rishab Kundra and on the other hand, it's written Suresh Chauhan.

Her face stilled as realization hit seeing the next paper on the file.

Putting the birth certificates down, she pulled the remaining one paper to confirm her thought that the Prince is adopted. Rishab Kundra is adopted. And he might be not aware of that.

"Oh, my gosh!" she said reading the Certificate of Adoption again and again.

Minutes passed and she did her daily job.

Contact her friends through video call.

"You are not going to believe this!" she said "The prince was adopted!" still in her shocked state!

"No way!" Trish says shocked of the news.

"Yes way!" Madhu says as she pulls the birth certificate "I've got his original birth certificate, a fake certificate the royals created and adoption papers."

"This is huge Sunshine!" Sikky.

"You think he knows?" Trish questioned.

"No!" putting the papers down "Being adopter means he would have to forfeit his rights to the crown!" with a serious face "If he knew about it, he would have used it as an out a long time ago."

"Have you told to Edi?"

"No!" with a more serious face "And you both can't mention it either to her." Madhu.

"What are you gonna do then?" her friend.

"I don't know yet!" she says shaking her head.

"You have got a legit Canamais birther scandal in your hands! And you don't know yet! This is not you Sunshine." her one friend.

"Break the story!" her another friend adds.

"This is somebody's life that we are talking about!"

"Yeah! But you said it yourself that he doesn't want to be king. May be he will see it as a blessing!" the lady on the other side of the video call said.

"Finding out you have been lied your whole life?" shaking her head "It won't be a blessing."

"This news will make your career Madhu!" Trish and Sikky nods as the cut the call leaving a thinking Madhu over the matter in her hands.

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Thank you buddies for reading!

Hope it wasn't a big shock for you all!

Let me know if you liked it through LIKES and COMMENTS

See you tomorrow!

Next part : Part 23

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#279

This is so sad.

Rishab is adopted. Madhu won't say it to anyone. But what about her friends? Maybe dips was eavesdropping on madhu n heard this or maybe sullu. Then they'll use it against rishab. Dips is jealous seeing madhu n rishab. Update soon.