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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome story...


maan is training to preist...

and geet is going to break it haahaaa😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Teaser-



"Meri shadi bhi apni pasand ki ladki se karne wale hain. Khair main use bachpan se jaanta hoon to mujhe koi apatti (problem) nahi, par kabhi kabhi main is pinjre se azaad hona chahta hoon. Is liye main chahta hoon meri tarah tum dono apni zindagi dusron ke nahi balki khud ke hisab se jiyo, kisi ko pasand karna koi paap nahi hai Maan. Yash humara dost hai aur agar wo us ladki ko apnana (accept) chahta hai to main iska sath dunga, waise hi agar tum kabhi kisi ko apnana chaho to tumhara bhi hum sath denge. Tumhara prashn jo subah tumne Guruji se poocha, mujhe samajh mein aa gaya tha tumhare mann mein bhi koi duvidha hai , par agar tum koi aur raasta apne mann se teh karna chaho usmein koi galti nahi,
Adi said looking at Maan.
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Posted: 7 years ago
again I'm thinking adi n geet
honestly I feel odd
actually never read them paired up just that's why
nice teaser
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Posted: 7 years ago
seems like adi and geet but it cant b buddy
poor msk will get shock out of his life
and geet uff buddy why confusion
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

interesting update
dadima won't let maan follow that path so planning his marriage
there geet too
don't think it can be maan
how come dadima choose her
feeling that it can be adi
adi bhag jayga maan shaadi kar lega ..woh my wild imagination
thnx for pm



hehe lets see


Thank u buddy
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

seems like adi and geet but it cant b buddy

poor msk will get shock out of his life
and geet uff buddy why confusion



confuse mat ho buddy 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

Lovely lovely & cute update , omg maan so cute yaar as well geet also . dadi always cupid role in maaneet life . maan want to become priest but dadi want heir , she locked maan in room with help of dev & servants, but he escaped to reach Himalayas, yash confused mind , he did not understand guruji unhidden words . Guruji said about world desires buy yash thought he said about maya his GF 😆😆😆..hehehe.he so sweet . maan not helped geet , she seeking for help to remove throns from her foot but first he mermised her beauty & voice right . he ran away without help her , angel angry with maan , geet recognized maan in ashram , guruji defenced maan ,he followed his orders so he did not help her but geet saying right , man Or woman if they need help , we help them right . geet so cute yaar , she teasing maan. Maan addressing geet ko devi like old years . omg she makig call to geet .but he addressing her to geetji. Dadi doing her work , she talked with girl family hand for maan marriage . maan also hide to geet .he ran out from house .khurana gents ka tradition run out to family & going to priest, first dadaji went out ,she don't know he lived or not if he alive , dadi found him, dadi making his life to hell but he deserve it also .than maan father run out time god he fallen love with maan mother ,he escaped fro priest life . now maan turns , I know this geet making realize family life important for life . geet slipped from tree but hero caught her in correct time , if she fallen down also nothing happened to her , maan embrassed while geet teasing him . so cute yaar . everyone thinking priest life was best than family life but its not true , they cannot face family problem so u tried run out from every problem & hide behind in god . its is not correct yaar . I want geet become Menaka for maan (vishmamitra) . she will break his thapas soon . poor maan ..geet family also selected groom for geet , she wont marriage . she shocked seeing photo .its maan photos or adi . I hope it was maan photo.😳

Thanks for Pm & continue soon.😳

Buddy , I want long update..i know u have exam ..after exam u will give long update .i don't mind . 😛








Glad u liked it buddy😃😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nefret19

Yipppeee:):):) Maan Maan Maan:):):) Its definitely Maan buddy:):):) My wish came true:):):) But then na I hope Geet does not tell Maan and he runs away yaar:):):) OMG! Dadima is so cute in her flashback...her hubby had left her to become a sage...don't tell me that he is the one who lured Maan into becoming a priest? I will thrash him badly yaar...For trying to make our Maan a sanyaasi...then what will happen to my Geet...

Geet so cute...she is unlike the genteel ladies...So cutely climbing tree to pick fruits and teasing Guruji's student Maan:):):) And she doesn't want to get married:):):) Don't tell me she will reveal it all to Maan and encourage him to become a priest? Or run away? OMG:):):) My mind is running with weird ideas:):):) ROFL:):):) Excited to read on buddy:):):)




can be buddy hehe lets see


Thank u buddy😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you four support😃😃







Part 4




A Friend in Need




"Tu pitega ek din aur main nahi bachaunga us din tujhe, Maan entered to see his friends arguing. "Par maine kya kiya bas naam hi to poocha tha, Yash pouted. "Aditya, Yash, kya hua, He asked. "Maan ye ladka pagal hai, aaj ye pit jata agar main nahi aata to, Aditya said rubbing his forehead. "Kiya kya isne, Maan asked. "Ladkiyon ke peeche ghoom raha tha aur ek ka raasta rok ke naam poocha uska, agar main samay par nahi aata to us ladki ka ghada (pot) aur iska sar hota, He told Maan.







"Yash ye humara sheher nahi gaon hai, tu marwayega humein, Maan said. Yash pouted, "Mujhe wo achi lagi is liye poocha uska naam. "Yash tu shiksha poori kar ke wapas chala jayega to us ladki ke peeche kyun bhag raha hai jab tu use sath nahi le jayega, Aditya tried to reason with him. "Main itna bhi gira hua nahi hoon jaisa tum log sochte ho, main usko sath le jaunga , jab hum shiksha poori kar lenge, Yash said not liking at being pointed on. "Agar aisa hai to hum teri madad karenge, Aditya said now relieved with his answer. "Par Aditya, humein Guruji se chup kar ye sab karna acha nahi rahega, Maan said. "Maan , main tumse kuch poochoon, Aditya asked. "Haan poocho, Maan said. "Tum yahan apne parivar ki marzi se yahan aaye ho ya ..., He asked.




"Wo main..., Maan stammered. "Khud ki marzi se haina, Aditya understood and Maan nodded. "Main aur Yash apne maa baap ki marzi se aaye hain. Unke hisab se humare jeevan mein anushasan (discipline) ki kami thi is liye unhone humein yahan bheja, He said. "Meri shadi bhi apni pasand ki ladki se karne wale hain. Khair main use bachpan se jaanta hoon to mujhe koi apatti (problem) nahi, par kabhi kabhi main is pinjre se azaad hona chahta hoon. Is liye main chahta hoon meri tarah tum dono apni zindagi dusron ke nahi balki khud ke hisab se jiyo, kisi ko pasand karna koi paap nahi hai Maan. Yash humara dost hai aur agar wo us ladki ko apnana chahta hai to main iska sath dunga, waise hi agar tum kabhi kisi ko apnana chaho to tumhara bhi hum sath denge. Tumhara prashn (question) jo subah tumne Guruji se poocha, mujhe samajh mein aa gaya tha tumhare mann mein bhi koi duvidha (doubt) hai , par agar tum koi aur raasta apne mann se teh karna chaho usmein koi galti nahi, He said looking at Maan.







"Tum ne sahi kaha Aditya humein apne dost ki madad karni chahiye . Yash main bhi tumhari madad karunga, nahi to tumne to pitne ka plan bana liya hai, He laughed making Aditya smile and Yash grin. "Chal naam bata uska, Maan asked. "Pari, Yash grinned. "Chal theek hai hum madad karenge uske maa baap se tere liye baat karne ki, Aditya said. "Thank you, Yash said acknowledging the gesture of his friends.




"Mrs Khurana, I have called you today as Dev was found beating up another boy from his class, Dev's class teacher informed. "But I think there must be a mistake, my child is not violent, Dadima defended her child knowing he is a quiet child. "I don't know Mrs Khurana, but he won't speak a word, His teacher told. "We have been trying to talk to him, may be he is not finding it comfortable from being transferred from his old school, be it whatever, we can not tolerate this type of attitude, His teacher said. "Maam, Dev is not wrong, he was just saving me from Ayush, A young girl came in defending him. "Meera, you are not supposed to interfere without permission, The teacher chided.







"I think you should hear this girl too before putting the blame on my child. I have raised my two grandsons and they are not rowdy that they will start creating a ruckus, so if you are not interested, let me hear this girl, Dadima said. She turned to Meera and said, "Tell me dear what happened."Maam, Ayush has always been bullying me as I'm not from a rich background Dev saw that and tried to help me, but he pushed me due to which I feel and hurt my head, I just came back from the infirmary and got to know about this, She said. "See my child was just helping his classmate, Dadima said. "I'm sorry for the trouble Mrs Khurana and I will see to it that the other child is punished, The teacher said. "Thank you child, Dadima caressed her head lovingly. "It's okay auntie, Meera said. Dadima was happy that her child was making new friends hopefully he won't follow his brother's footsteps and now for plan two for her stupid elder grandson.



"Maa, ye to Maanji hain, Geet said. "Tumhe kaise pata betaHer mom asked coming out of the kitchen. "Kyunki ye to humare Guruji ke shishya( student) hain, Geet said. "Kyaaa, hey bhagwan ye kya hua, meri beti sadhu se shadi kaise kar sakti hai, Her mom said. "Maa, rukiye koi galatfahmi hui hogi, Geet tried to calm her mother. "Kya hua, Her father came out hearing the commotion in his house. "Meri beti sadhu se shadi nahi karegi bas, aap mana kar dijiye is rishte ke liye, Her mom was going bonkers thinking of her daughter's future. "Sadhu, ye to Maaji ke pote Maan ki tasveer hai, tumhe kya ho gaya hai, Her father said not understanding anything. "Baba, par ye to Guruji ke shishya hain, Geet said.







"Haan mujhe pata hai, He said calmly making the mother daughter duo looked at him as if he had grown horns on his head. "Aapka dimag kharab ho gaya hai kya, Her mom was now furiously glaring her husband. "Suno to, ye ladka yahan ghar se bhag ke aaya hai. Unhone mujhe sab bata diya hai, ladka shareef hain aur humein apni Geet ke liye kya chahiye, Her father said. "Beta tumhe koi appatti (objection) hai kya, is ladke se, He asked his daughter. "Nahi baba ..., She said. "Par mujhe hai jo ladka ek bhagauda(escapist) ho kya meri beti ko bhi chod kar bhag jaye kal ko to aap kya karenge, Her mom expressed her worries.




"Isiliye Maaji ne humein phone kiya tha. Unhe humari madad chahiye, He said. "Madad kyun baba Geet asked. "Wo main tum logon ko samjhata hoon, He said. He told them the plan of Dadima and Geet was grinning mischievously by the end.







"Baba, aap chinta mat kijiye, main dekhti hoon ab ye kab tak is sadhu ban ne ke chakkar mein rehte hain, She grinned thinking of something. Her mother though was worried, agreed at last after much cajoling by her husband. Geet went up to her room deciding upon something. Maan on the other hand was unaware of what is going to come his way and decided to help his friends and slept thinking of tomorrow.



So here is the next part, please do give your honest reviews😃😃





Precap- ??



Edited by pixelflower620 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yash likes pari.
Adi here is so matured.. he gave nice advice to maan & yash..
Dev was helping meera..
So geet saw maan's photo..
Her mother does not agree for marriage..
But her father made them agree..
What are they planning to do with maan??
Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 7 years ago

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