arshi ff- Complexity Ch 4 29 Dec 2017 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilman

Are you making changes to your previous story? as I remember reading this story with same title and concept?

yes I am rewriting the story. Basic plot is same.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: poojasidd123

Whoa. Very intriguing. I'm sure that kaku is Khushi herself, isn't she?😲 So many hints out there. Doe shaped hazel eyes, fair complexion, sweet voice and then her blushing in the end due to his handshake. Arnav is in for a huge shock! So this is the past where anjali gets kidnapped. And Khushi has been a very poor yet confident orphan due to the harsh environment she grew up in. Looking forward to see how Arnav transforms her life and what actually happened in the present. Is she really murdered??

yes.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 4
CLIMAX

(2016) Present

16+

Payal gulped the next shot, cringing at the bitter taste. She called the bartender for one more drink. No more virgin Mocktail for her, she need to get drunk, hard drunk. Its been so long she had gone mad drunk. She put her head on table and turned it to towards the dance floor. How happy everyone looked while dancing with no worries, with no dangerous boss to sabotage their careers, no parents to keep on measuring your ability again again.

What her life has turned into,she hold her head in both her hands, clutched her hairs in anger.she screamed in anger. She feels like banging her head on the table, but she still has not all, had she. She moaned finally banging her head on table slowly.

'Great! I am struck in a stupid assistant job. My dreams job of being journalist, for which I went against my parents to has turned to my doom. They wanted me to join the family business but I wanted to follow my dreams, look where it left me' she thought.

"a pretty lady like you should not be sad,its make world turn to gloom" the cute bartender said smiling at me. He has been a great partner today, handling my breakdown antics and giving me tequila one after other without asking any questions.

"pretty i meet be, but still so lonely" she flirted back biting her lips.

"how about I join in your loneliness, you want be lonely anymore" he said in his husky voice. He had that sweet look to him.

'His dark back eyes looked at me with lust and I looked back with same lust for him. I have never slept with a bartender in my twenty nine year old life, I think it's time I check it out of my bucket list.' she thought.

"why not sure.it will be really good if this day ends with a dangerous climax" she bit her lips and licked her lips with her tongue, tightening her arms around her breast making them more clear for his view. She was sure with way the cute bartender stiffed a breath, that his pants must have gotten really tight right now. She knew that she was beautiful and she was not shy about her body. Being brought up in rich family does have it perks one being the confidence and freedom that you get.

As his shift ended they went to a hotel. He said his home was conservative and she was not willing to take any stranger to her apartment, she can't deal with a stalker right now.

She entered the hotel room, with him following her. The moment he closed the door she kissed him hungrily and he return with same enthusiasm. She was glad that he was so intense and hard for her so soon. She really can't handle shy, little cry babies with little friend that is of no use.

She took his clothes off and he hers while kissing each other madly. Lust is all they felt, Lust is all they could afford. He pushed her on the bed coming on top of her.

"ready to see heaven." he said and bit her neck and licked and ducked it to decrease the pain. She moaned louder and louder,her body feeling like feather, he clearly knew what he was doing and she was happy that she had not got stuck with inexperienced man, they are one the worst.

First his experienced fingers made her come, making her head float into oblivion. Her body so charged with the intensity and she begged him to thrust into her. He soon obliged her command and entered her in one smooth move, making her scream in pain and pleasure. He increased his pace, thrust harder and harder till the moment she forget who is was, who he was and where they were.

He made her reached her climax and soon he got his.she was feeling so light and happy. Drink and sex two things that make all your worries fade away,even if for few hours.

She woke up at three in the morning, she wore her black shirt dress and red high heels and soundlessly made her way out of the room.

She walked the lonely street past midnight, such a bad idea but what was she supposed to do, her car broke down midway and her phone died.

She clutched her heels in her handle, she felt like she is doing her walk of Shame, thank fully no one is there to witness her except some stray dogs and homeless people.

Her eyes turned towards a house, which was covered around with barriers created by police. She moved more closer to the house. She tried to remember where she has seen this house before, where, where??
Suddenly she gets a flash of seeing the same house on news.

'it's.. It's house of man who killed his wife.' she whispered to herself. She felt shiver run down her spine looking at house covered in darkness. Who would have know that a house that was once full of light will submerge in darkness like this. She don't wish it in, on even her worst enemy.

She turned back to move away, but something stopped her in her track. She don't know what happened and why suddenly she felt the urge to enter a crime scene. Maybe alcohol has really affected her thinking. She chuckled at herself.after few minutes of thinking,she moved towards the house.

'what the hell! Let's check out one of the items from my bucket list' she thought.


As she moved closer she saw a constable sleeping near the door. He was in deep sleep, holding a wooden stick on his hand, his bloated stomach almost on verge of breaking his shirt's button. No real security
Wow!

Murder only happened yesterday and there is no concern for finding evidence. That what happens to normal people cases, they are killed and no one cares. She don't remember listening about this murder news than one or two times.

She moved with slow footsteps towards the door, she looked at door.

'No lock! Strange.' she thought.

'looks like government can't even afford, cheap locks for normal people's door.' she opened the door and closed it silently behind her.

'OK have your adventure than move out without getting caught' she thought and moved silently across the living room. Nothing was out of place. It was so clean.

She next move towards the kitchen which was filled with used bottles of beer the same she saw the constable having. She sighed angrily. She than moved towards the bedroom. It was dark and she was using torch on her phone.

Bedroom had a huge picture of the couple, they were smiling at the camera. He was holding her from back, their cheeks touching. They looked so happy. So what went wrong, she sighed sad.

She looked at her watch, it's getting late, she needs to went out of here soon. She needs to see the main crime scene first. She moved towards the bathroom.

She felt like puking at the site in front of her. Everything was covered in blood,floor, bath tub it was field with fried blood.

She felt silent footsteps behind her, but before she can turn. She felt a knife on her neck and a string arm holding her. She felt panic pass through her.

"looks like it's my lucky day again. Two killing in two days of extremely beautiful ladies. What could be better than that" he said in his heavy voice.

Tears fell down payal's eyes, as blood drowned from her face.what she have gotten herself into.

"enjoy your life's climax, it's going to be legendary " he said , his lips fanning her hairs near her ears.


This was not the climax she was expecting.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
I hope nothing will happen to payal. maybe he is a serial killer
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
I had read this story in the past. But reading it once again.. it feels so good.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: unnik7

I had read this story in the past. But reading it once again.. it feels so good.

ya I remember you reading it. Thank you so much for liking this story. 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fantastic update.hey dear you five or three shot story i dont remember but story is like that when khushi meet arnav before getting married to him and tell him she is no more virgin because of alot monthy bleeding once.i am not finding this sorty please send me link.thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Interesting just read all parts together
Really loved it too much
Waiting for next update eagerly
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very interesting update! Who is that intruder who gets hold of payal. Is he the one who supposedly ''killed'' khushi too? Waiting for next

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