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Geetalakshmi Maan Singh Khurana.. itna bada naam😲
maan loved mystery girl but marrying geetu!!
interesting village lovestory of maan.. she was on a mission & saved maan life & he became fida on the village beauty😊
bechari geetu missed her first night because of stupid hubby😔
geet is only mystery girl & loved maan from childhood😃
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one month judai.. so sad.. poor maan😆
cute & hot ending.. loved it👍🏼
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new story ka prologue is awesome😊
maaneet in each other's body.. it would be really hillarious🤣
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Thanks for pm. Sorry for late comment.
Nice update. Geet back story is very interesting. Her bonding with khuranas is awesome. But maan true love made her jealous of herself. Wonderful.
Maan has sacrificed his love for his family thats why destiny blessed him with his love. He recognised geet just by her voice.lovely .
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Thanks for liking and comments dearies ,if any grammatical & spelling mistakes in this part ..i am sorry.


Part 1 - click me
part 2 -clickme


Last part

Maan pout face: not again..once again she left her mission without informing me...she never changed ..some times she behave like more matured girl , sometimes totally opposite she behave like 2 yrs child but I love her nature, her antics, pout face, attitude yes great MSK never liked others showed their attitude infront of him but I love her dominating character with me. She is my crazy girl.

Maan phone ring as he come out from his mystery girl crazy land


Maan:Adi, tell me..if any problem in office. With bossy tone.

Adi: no boss, Problem in my home not our office..she is missing u so much and making mine & pinky life to hell with fuming voice.

Maan smiled : shame on u adi, I handover whole office into ur hand but u cannot handle ur own daughter ..she just 1 yrs 2 month child with chuckling face

Adi fuming voice: boss, I can handle one more company also without ur absence but I cannot handle this devil ..

Maan angry face: how dare adi , u calling my princess to devil..with angry voice.

Adi gulped his saliva and give his sheepish smile as same time pinky snatched phone from adi.

Pinky: Bhai, how r u and geet Bhabhi.

Maan: we r fine pinky. What happened to my princess why u r stupid hubby calling my princess to devil.

Pinky: nothing bhai, when in ur busy schedule also , weekly once u come to seeing her..last two weeks ,ur not come to meet ur princess, her eyes waiting for see u..i warned adi , don't call u but he did it without my knowledge with angry glare to adi..and u and bhabhi r in vacation .after long gap both have spend time each other in lonely but my stupid hubby disturbed ur privacy time.

Maan: not like that pinky,he not disturb me .by the way.. she not here..with pout face

Pinky confused face: bhabhi not with u..then where she went.

Maan : oh..she is in washroom.with hesitate voice .where is my princess ..give phone to her..i talk with her.

Pinky put loudspeaker and said to maanika talk with ur maan uncle.

Yes maanika , adi & pinky both r orphan and employee of KC . maan treat adi to his friend more than his employee and pinky is his own sister and overprotective with her like what he giving to annie same love, he giving to pinky..adi love with pinky and with maan permission both married . adi & pinky overwhelmed maan love to them so they put maan name to their daughter,, maan pampering maanika so much .atleast weekly one he went to see his maanika otherwise both maanika & maan heart not get peace. Whenever maan went out of station , baby missing maan so much. In maaneet first honeymoon , she is little kid .now she is more than 1 years old..

Maan : princess

Maanika angry look at phone.

Maan: princess , u not talk with ur maan .

Maanika : angly weth u ( angry with u ) with angry babish voice.

Maan: oh my baby angry with her maan Uncle .so sorry baby..i come back soon..i will buy chocolates, toys for u..

Maanika lips crept smile hearing chocolate & toys : manu unle , baby too( maan uncle , baby too)

Maan confused face : u mean baby doll , princess.

Maanika nod her head : nahi..baby with babish tone.

Maan:pinky, what princess saying ..

Pinky : oh ,Adi said to maanika , u and geet bhabhi went to buy baby child after u both return ..she will play with baby.

Maan grinned teeth : adi ..

Adi mind: she is really devil, tried stop her crying , I just said maan sir went to bought baby for her ..this devil said everything to him and my devil mom explained clearly to each my words ..after he return to home town ..he will kill me sure.

Maan: Adi, u spoiling my princess little mind with angry face.

Adi : boss, but not only her wish , we also want hearing good news from ur mouth..our KC waiting for heir arrival..when u and geet mam give that great news for us.

Pinky: my wish also same. this time , u return back from ur second honey moon ..u give good news .

Maan embrassed not speak anything..

Maanika kissed above phone and maan smiled .

Maan : bye princess.

Adi: boss..bosss..

Maan: now what adi.

Adi: All the best with naughty tone.

Maan grinned teeth : adi... adi cut the call.

Maan touched geet photo : everyone want good news from us but u went to ur mission..layed bed with photo and hugged pillow tightly imagine pillow as his geet.

Pinky : Adi, bhai said , bhabhi not here..with confused face.

Adi: both r weired couples , u remember, after geet mam, went to tamilnadu for aadi month ritual..what he did it ..with grinning face.

Pinky: how could I forgot that incident...with smiling face..

Maan also thinking about their separation days.

Flashback starts

Geet went to tamilnadu for aadi month rituals .. with in single day , both maaneet missing each other . one side geet curshing herself as played hide & seek game with maan..and other side maan, finally he got his mystery girl but elders separated them insake of bloody rituals..he cursing old rituals

After two days ,Tamilnadu

Geet got message "report her head officer in tamilnadu head office "..geet went to meet head officer in head quarters.

Head quarters..

Collegue wished geet for her marriage. Geet replied thanks to them..her legs forward to head officer room.

Geet enter his cabin and wished him with full respect and her head office nod his head ligtly and get up from chairs and side hug to geet.

H O : how r u my little girl with smiling face.

Geet: uncle , plz don't call me to little girl..now iam married woman.

HO : yeah I knew that my little girl married with MSK with proud tone ..but u always my little girl...ur father my close friend unfortunatelly ur parents left us alone with sad tone.

Geet : uncle sad face not suitable for u.where is my brave uncle. U r my inspiration joining to secrets agents .

HO: I am proud of u dear.. come sit and both sit in sofa comfortably.

Geet : uncle, why u send message to come report u immediately , any problem from my side with confused face.

HO: no dear, my little girl never did mistake in her job..u do one favour for me with request face

Geet: arghhh..uncle, why u request me..i do anything for u.

HQ: that my little girl, u need protect one person & his life in rishky state. He is big shot in all over india not only india all over world

Geet: so big shot but uncle why me, u send some more person to protect him..with confused face.

HQ: I trust u dear, so u do favour for me..just one month only , u stay with him like shadow , just one months we finish everything and.

After u become u r free bird and go honey moon with ur hubby anywhere with teasing voice from geet behind.

Geet turn back & angry glaring to voice of owner and man gulped his saliva .

Man: naina , talk with ur best buddy..plz...

Geet turn her face and look at uncle : uncle, plz say him, don't come infront of me..with angry voice.

Man: dad, say ur little girl. Iam innocent and when her marriage day, I went out of station for important project insake of only I missed my best buddy marriage with pout face.

Geet: uncle , I don't want talk useless fellows , give me case details..iam going .

Man: dad, u r little girl showing her attitude so much..say her , go showing her attitude to her hubby..he scared seeing her angry face but iam not ...by the way u r hubby is scary cat not me with teasing tone

Geet showing her index finger infront of his face: u ...dont say anything about my maan..with warning tone

Man: if iam not


HO: Rahul, stop it with strict voice.

Rahul: sorry sir..but sir , ur little girl talk with me without ur help with winning smile to geet..she fuming seeing his winning smile. Geet stamped his foot through her hill chappal to and went out immediately.

Rahul screaming in pain: ur sturborn girl hitted me dad..with complaining voice.

HO: u deserve it beta,go maniofy her and handover case detail to her ..

Rahul: ok dad ..H.O raised his eyebrow ..opps sorry sir..with straight face.

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Rahul searching geet outside and geet sit in bench outside of office with angry face.

Rahul held his ears and kneel down infront of geet: sorry naina..forgive ur buddy ..plz iam sorry .geet smiled seeing his pout face.

Rahul & geet r best friend .after geet family shifted delhi to Mumbai.Rahul father close friend of mohiender . both family met whenever they got free time, rahul & geet they start their training unison.

Geet : hey duffer, u missed my marriage ..hit his shoulder .

Rahul : sorry ...forgive me ..

Geet : I forgive u but ..with smirked face.

Rahul : matarani , don't use ur devil brain, how is ur hubby handle to u..

Geet twisted lips murmur : I miss him ..but he teasing me..he don't know how much I craving for my maan love with disappoint voice.

Rahul : hello madam, u dreaming about ur hubby later ...his hand unwrapped case file , his eyes look at person photo ..

Rahul : geet , after seeing his photos , u forgot ur hubby face totally with teasing tone. Geet glare to rahul.

Geet : Noone charm affect Geet Handa..(bit her tongue ) Geet Khurana with attitude voice.

Rahul smirked face: really , ok tomorrow I will come with u to meet this person ..(pointed to photo )..let see after seeing him , u stun in ur place or not.

Geet : are u bet with me ..

Rahul : ofcourse,if u any doubt in this ..

Geet : bet..

Rahul : then case paper with me..tomorrow , I will come to pick up from ur home.

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Geet angry face : long 24 hours, he did not single call for me.. her eyes strucked in her phone..Maan singh khurana just two days away from u, u forgot me .my aunty said right after woman went to her mother house, their husband forgot their wife enjoying their bachelor life one again. I am also seeing when he calling me ..

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Morning ..

Rahul driving car and geet sit next with him in angry mode.

Rahul : geet .. geet...

Geet : why u shouting my name..i know my name don't remind me with angry tone.

Rahul: why u got angry .. with teasing tone.

Geet : u shut ur mouth , concentrate ur driving ..with warning tone.. her lips murmuring no cursing her hubby..

Rahul stopped car stopped infront of villa ..

Geet get down from car : nice villa..

Rahul : Geet, not only villa, person also ..with teasing tone..u remember our bet .

Geet : I know, u don't forgot .. with attitude face.

Geet enter villa with attitude face and rahul behind her with smirked face.

Rahul & geet sit in sofa , geet in angry face and rahul reading magazine in calm face.

Geet : what the hell, we waiting for more than 30 minutes but that person not come to meet us with angry face.

Rahul : geet, he is big shot ,so wait for few mintues ..

Geet : I don't mind he was big shot or anyone.. he don't want any manner..we waiting for more than 30 minutes..we come for his protection but he showing attitude with us..u stay here..i am going inform uncle , I cannot staywith me ..geet jerk up from sofa..she turn move out to villa .

Mrs.Khurana, control ur angry and in ur job patience very important ..geet shocked hearing voice, her head turn look at person..she freezed in her place.

Rahul smirked face: I won bet ..with winning smile .

Rahul handshake to person: hi iam rahul Gupta , agent from Mumbai . and she is my collegue , Geet Handa with teasing tone..

Person : No .. geet handa nahi .. Geet Maan singh Khurana ..
Rahul : yes..but she freezes state after saw u ..

Person : wake up ur collegue from day dreaming ..with chuckling face.

Rahul shake geet arms lightly : geet ..

Geet : u , what r u doing here.. with shocked face

Rahul : Meet , Mr.Maan singh khurana.. whole months, u stay with him only with naughty tone.

Geet glare to Rahul and her angry shifted to maan: what r u doing here.

Maan : Mrs.khurana, u come for my protection, don't raise ur voice infront of me with bossy tone and Mr.Gupta , she look like very young , she capable for doing that work ..it not easy job stay with me 24 hours with doubting face.

Geet fuming : u..

Rahul : geet , control ur anger .. with murmuring tone.

Maan : Mrs.Khurana, u know how to make coffee ..

Geet : excuse , I come for ur safety purpose , not for ur maid work .

Maan : if my wife with me, she make coffee for me unfortuntaelly she went to her mother house with pout face ..so I asked for u ..

Geet excused and went out side ..

Rahul : hi maan.. how are u .. ur sherni angry with u .

Maan : I know, rahul .. I know how to handle her ..dont worry about me, u worry about ur friend with naughty tone.

Outside ..geet called H.O and he pickup her phone.

Geet : uncle with panic tone.

H.O: what happened beta, why u panic ..

Geet : why maan need safety, is he in danger uncle? With fear tone.

H.O : he got threating from unknown person , he asked protection to our higher official and he request specially , u only escort for his safety .its order from my higher office, I cannot denied their order .

Geet (mind): so everything my hubby plan. Now i will show u who is geet maan singh khurana..

Geet : Thanks uncle with smirked face.

H.O: Time God, I escaped from her but what about Maan..poor boy ..with mind thought.

Geet cut the call and she come back inside while maan & rahul talking with friendly manner.

Geet : mr.khurana , this whole month, what I am saying , u obey my word s otherwise I quit .

Maan: mrs.khurana, I protect my self , before I don't worry about my life (geet glaring him ) but now my life important for me not for my sake for her , my love with winked eyes.

Geet : u don't worry about ur safety , if anyone touch u before they face me ..

Maan : me too thinking same way ..with smirked tone.

Geet raise her eyebrow : Mr. Khurana what are u saying..

Maan: what I am trying say, u protect me like my angel ..

Rahul head turn maan to geet continuously (mind): both were not lesser than each other ..what attitude .. oh god, their conversation very entertaining ..

Geet : rahul ..with glare eyes.

Rahul gulped his saliva: Maan, I am going, u handle ur sherni .i am going back to Mumbai afternoon flight ..

Geet : are u going to mumbai?

Rahul: I came for tamilnadu , too see u only .. now I need go back ..duty first everything next ..

Geet : but uncle here, u going to Mumbai..

Rahul : few months, dad come with me to mumbai...bye maan..

Maan nod his head and rahul murmur to maan ear : all the best ..maan smiled and rahul left the place.

Maan hand wrapped geet waist as pulled her more to him ..

Geet tried push him but maan held her tightly : why u doing drama..with angry tone.

Maan : I am not doing any drama, I tried romance with my wife but she just boring girl with yuck face.

Geet pushed him and both fallen to sofa, geet top above him as maan in under to her .

Geet : why this fake drama.. we cannot stay in same roof ..

Maan : promise, i never cross my limits but stay with me.

Geet : maan , u running big company but come behind me like love sick puppy..

Maan: hello, madam, I am coming for business prupose not for u

Geet open widely and jerk up from maan : so u not come for me..

Maan (mind): ur mouth only enenmy for u ..

Geet : so , ur not come for me with fuming face..

Maan nod his head randomly : oh mishty .. I come for u and also Chennai project ..whole month, I stay here ..

Geet : u and ur hell business.. I hate u .. bye.

Maan held her wrist and pulled her , without wasting time, his lip placed in her lip ,two days separation , single kiss turned to aggressive ..geet pulled him more to her .maan left her ..both taking heavy breathe with their head touch to each other.

Maan : I miss u , jaan..

Geet : hmmm..

Maan eyes have desire for her and geet cheeks turned into red..geet pushed him with blushing face.

Geet : without my permission, u cannot touch me with warning tone otherwise I am not stay here .

Maan (mind); I m not only touch u right but u should ..with smirking tone.

Maan : promise.. I am not touch u without ur permission..

Geet (mind): dush danav..easily accept my demand ..

Geet : ok maan, where is my room and one more thing , I don't want anyone I am ur wife and ur my husband .. u got it .

Maan: ok with grinned teeth..

Geet : Good .. servant show her room.. she layed her bed ..

Geet (mind): babaji , why u doing exam for my control.. why u doing with me.. my hot hubby near me , but I cannot stay with me..what a fate ..i hate this ritual, if I did not take promise, he give me sweet tortue , I cannot control myself .28 days plz save me from my handsome hubby .. After u will save him from me ..with blushing face.

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Geet banged maan room , he come back from shower , he just wore pant and upper body in bare and his hairs water droplet dropping in his tone body ..geet gulped her saliva , his desire filled eyes look like he eat her raw just his look , same like her eyes strucked with him.. poor both soul whishpering control ..geet turn back and run out to her room and take long shower control herself . geet avoiding him physically but mentally around him.

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Geet talk with her grandparents & family members and making them understand , she in safe place and safe hand.. everyone accept , they know her stubborn nature .

Geet making coffee for her hubby , ofcourse she don't know how to cooking but she learn some dishes for him. Poor boy his fate , he eat her food life long in his life.


Door bell ring , geet opened door, one girl pushed geet one side and her eyes searching somewhere..

Geet tapped her shoulder and girl snapped her hand without looking her face.

Geet turn her and made look at her face to face: who are u .

Girl : I am pari..where is my dreamy ..i mean maan

Geet : dreamy ..with glaring face.

Pari : I don't need explain to employee ..where is ur boss with attitude face.

Geet : what the hell..she addressing me , I am employee for him..with mind thought.. ms pori get lost , he not in home .

Pari face fell down : he not here.. I come for him .

Geet : I said get lost with angry tone.


Pari face brighten seeing maan come down in stairs : omg he so handsome with dreamy face.geet mouth open widely .

Geet (mind): why he come down . this girl drooling my husband infront of me ..i want kill her through my hand before I want save my maan from her.

Pari run to maan side and jump to maan for hug , maan imbalance sudden hug both fallen to ground. Geet mouth open widely .

Pari in maan top & maan starring pari ..

Geet : Maan sir..with angry tone.. maan pushed pari while he get up from floor but pari sitting in floor.

Maan : Pari, what r u doing here..

Pari : I come to meet u , maan ..she tried to get up from floor but her leg have pain.

Maan helped to stand in her feet : are u alright with concern voice.

Geet (mind): what going on.. I thought I save my maan from chudail but first I save my life from her.. wow msk..how much concern in ur voice .

Pari : no maan..i think my leg twisted ..


Maan rolled his eyes and pickup pari in his arms and take her to guestroom and geet going to faint ..

Maan layed her in bed : I call doctor with worried tone.

Geet enter in guest room : Maan ..with angry voice.

Maan :time god, u came, u take care pari and call doctor , I come back ..he left room..

Geet : Ms.pari ..with rude tone..

Pari get up from bed and jumping like mad ..geet mouth in o shape ..

Geet : ur legs not twist..

Pari : yes.. how romantic,my dreamy pickup me in his arms ..that sec I want die in his arms .

Geet : I also thought same..how to kill u ..with murmur tone..

Geet : get lost before maan arrive otherwise ur beautiful face to horrible one with warning tone.

Pari : who are u..what is ur problem..with pointed her finger in front of geet .

Geet fold her hand to her back : i said get lost not only home, get lost my maan life, if I saw ur face anymore around with my maan..that day ur last day..u understand .. pari nod her head with fear face..

Geet : good...she left her hand ..pari held arms with pain face.

Geet : why u standing here..get out ..with murder tone..pari run out to room.

Few minutes , maan com back to guest room and geet sitting in bed with angry face.

Maan: where is pari ..with innocent face.

Sherni jerk up from bed and her angry eyes glaring to maan while her leg move forward to him as maan leg backward .. finally maan merged to wall ..

Geet : how dare u ..why u pickup her in ur arms, u want I take care that chudail ..

Maan nod his head negatively : oh...she is my cousin..so ..

Geet : so , ...with angry filled face..

Maan : I worried about her nothing else.. where is she ..

Geet : maan...I kill u, if u once again ask her.. go to shower first and throw this dress to any garbage.. I don't want u wore this dress anymore .

Maan mind: madam jealous with pari..let play with her..

Maan : then what about my hand , I pick up her in my arms ..

Geet : when ur hand touch her , I want chop ur hand into several pieces but I cannot .. u know why I cannot tolerate ur single pain, I will die rather before I am going see ur pain.. maan grabbed her arms forceily ..

Maan :don't talk about die ..i cannot live with u ..

Geet pushed maan: go take shower first ..


Maan : if u give company to shower with me ..i don't mind shower in many times with winked eyes.. geet whacked his arms playfully .

Geet : I hate u..

Maan : but I love u .. geet khurana..

*************

Lot of romance , teasing , dating ..almost one month going to cross , they spend more time each other , only two day left complete aadi month.. poor maaneet waiting for that day . geet waiting for maan with hall but he did not come back ..she called him but his phone out of reach .

Geet : if really he got threating from unknown person, if person harmed my maan, why I did carless in his life ..babaji bring my maan safe .

Geet got message from maan..he went out of station in two days , he come back soon .

Geet : dust danav,before u going , he did not said anything now he sent message ..i imagined more .. I hell worried about his safety but he calmly send message to me, I stay for him but he went out of station without my knowledge .u come back , next someday, u r my puching bag.

Two days geet missing maan, she felt hell better than house.she went to her home, spent more time with them but still her heart searching maan , her heart want him near .late night she come back to maan villa. His aroma filled in room but she ignore his aroma s, her leg to maan room and layed in his bed and hug his pillow tightly and closed her eyes .

Few minutes , some one arms pickup her in air , her hand automatically encircled in his neck .

Geet with closed eyes :I miss u maan..and hide her face to his chest .

Maan smiled and took geet to terrace yeah he left up geet in his arms like soft toy . he sit in place while geet in his arms.

Maan kissed her forhead : jaan, open ur eyes with husky tone...geet nod her head negatively , more hide her face to his chest .

Maan : mishty .. jaan ..cupped her cheek in his one palm ..open ur eyes..geet open her eyes slowly ..

Maaneet eyes locked and fragrance disturbed geet , her head turn look at place.. her cheeks changed to red tomato ..terrace decorate like honey moon step up ..one side two table arrange their date and other side king size bed decorated like SR . geet hugged maan tightly in sitting postion .maan reciprocate her hug ..

Maan : I don't mind, long life u r in my lap but now I am hungry with husky tone.

Geet realizes she still sit in his lap and get up from his lap ..maan make sit geet in chair ..he fed her food .. she eat it silently ..

Geet : u said hungry ..u too eat ur food..give food morsel to maan ..he denied ..

Maan husky tone: yes ..i am hungry for u not for food.. his single word make geet cheeks to red apple..

Maan take geet in his arms and move to bed ., maan worship her beauty through moon light ..both become one in all their sense..night very passionate , wild night both of them..love , separation showing their wildness .maaneet longing for their night finally they become one..

Next day maan booked Honey moon for Australia.. geet super dupper happy hearing Austraila name.. she have important work in Austarlia .. maan also decided for Australia..

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Hotel room ..

Maan wake up in his sleep room , when honey moon time,wish of every man, they wake up in sleep , first they want saw their wife face (just my imagination ) but maan life , his jaan left alone ...

Maan : Mishty ,where is she .. with worried face..maan noticed her note, she went for her mission. She come back soon..

Maan face fell down : why everything happen in my life..my honey moon plan ...

Two days back geet come back to hotel room with tied face..

Geet sit in bed and one hand give water to her and take water from hand and sipped lightly ..

Geet : thanks ..

Maan fold his hand in chest : u welcome ..

Geet head raised look at maan angry face: oh .. I went..

Maan hand stop to say anything and lift her in his arms and layed in bed ..and just caring her hairs softly.

Maan : sleep .. kissed her forhead ..

Geet admiring him and slept held his hand .. after wake up their passionate honey moon started ..

Flash end ..

Maan : I hope this time , u did not struck any place with worried face.

Maan ramping one side to another side..geet not come back..finally door creak sound, his face shifted to geet..

Maan angry vanished seeing her blushing face.. she wore saree ..she look like angel.. breathe taken for him.

Maan run out geet side and cupped her face : where r u went ..i scared so much ..

Geet : oh .. maan.. I am ..

Maan : yes..why u stammering ..

Geet : I went to doctor ..with eyes lash down ..

Maan mind stricked and lift her chin through his index fingers :Are u ..

Geet : you become father soon

Maan eyes moist : really

Geet nod her head and hugged him tightly ..

Maan : why u went alone..

Geet : I don't want disappoint u once again..last time u happy I missed my dates , unfortunately I am not preganat ..

Maan : we r going to parents .. I am happy so much..

Maan lift geet in air and rotate with haapy face..

Maan : u always mystery for me ... my mystery girl ..

Mystery girl journey end but not maaneet life ..😳😳😳

I will write sequel of mystery girl..

"everyone said I am his mystery girl but true one ,he is my mystery man"


Concept of sequel ..😉😉😉


not now ..some other time..i have more ongoing stories in my hand ..

If u likes this part ,plz do like and comment ..

Thank u ..😃

Love u all❤️

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