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Part 1 - click me

Thanks for liking and comments dearies..if any grammatical mistakes in this part, iam sorry

PART 2

Annie : wow great geet handa crying with surprised face.


Geet:annie ki bachi, now iam geetalakshmi maan singh khurana with pride voice.

Annie twisted her lips: then why Mrs Msk crying

Geet: he love his mystery girl so much with twisted her lips

Annie angry glare to geet: bhabhi with grinned teeth...

Dadi laughed : u never changed gudiya ..and annie joined to dadi for laughing session..

Geet: I am not gudiya dadi , u too teasing me..with pout face..

Dadi and annie unison: what we would do..


Suji enter in dadi room after seeing geet that just jumping to her..

Geet : my suji darling, I miss u so much..with kiss suji forehead and suji licking her face.

Dadi:see ur suji also found out u but my buddhu grandson not found u..with chuckling face.

Annie: really, he not found out , u r his mystery girl with dramatic shocked face..

Geet pout look and nods her head : what I do with him with angry face.but he so sweet..how geninuely said that his past life .after hearing his love about mystery girl.really I got jealous with myself..how truly he love with his mystery girl..

Annie: don't forgot both r same person..why u have more names..insake only maan bhai not found out u..muskan, naina, lakshmi, geet, guidya..ufff

Geet: aur , my maan ka mystery girl with blushing face..

Annie: don't stop u r blushing..night time not finish yet with teasing tone.go to ur room..bhai waiting for u..

Geet: he already going to sleep in study room with irriating face..

Annie laughed: omg then first night..

Dadi give fake coughed : I am also here..

Annie opps: sorry..but dadi , bhai bina with rolled her eyes..then geet bhabhi tell ur love story for us..

Geet: u already knew right..then why u ask me once again.

Annie: they do not know right ( I am right guys)

Geet take heavy breathe (mind): my fate ,today my first night but I narrating my love story because of u ,buddhu khurana..u deserve punishment ..with cursing maan in mindvoice.


Annie shake her arms: after cursing ur hubby now narrate u and maan bhai ka love story..

Geet smiled : ur bhai love story started to village but my love story started when my age of 10 yrs old..with blushing face.

Annie eyes popped out : in ur 10 yrs old..u mean 15 yrs back..u fallen love with bhai..wow..puppy love ha..with teasing tone..

Geet: yes, that day , I don't know what is that feeling..whenever my eyes meeting him..something happen in my body..i am happy ..u r very small , ur age only 5 yrs old..me and ur bhai first meeting , I never forgot my life..dad got transferred to delhi..my family shifted next to ur house.

Flashback start

After I shifted in delhi.

Mohi: geet beta, tried pedaling ur cycle. u want know how to cycling..ur dad with u , just try..geet pedaling cycling while mohi held her cycle as walking behind her.

Geet: dad, but don't leave my cycle while pedaling cycle with scared face.

Mohi: never beta..u doing very well..keep pedaling...with encouraging her..

Mohi leave his hand slowly from cycle and geet not realize mohi left the cycle ..geet pedaling continuously..

Mohi happy his little girl knowing how to pedaling cycle.

Geet turned back and look at mohi give thumb up sign for geet and left the place.as get things from car .she smiled and turn back look at road..opps she hit someone cycle ..both fallen to ground..

Geet arms scratched from road rocks and little blood come from wound place.some one give hand geet for raise up from place..geet look at his face..he so handsome boy and his browny eyes. I hitted him but he not angry , rather than he helped me..

Boy:are u alright..with concern voice.

Geet starring boy (mind):his voice so sweet ...

Boy : are u alright girl..

Geet nod her head and boy helped to stand in her foot..

Boy: omg , u arms have blood..wait ..i bring first aid box..helped geet sit in near place..he left the place.

Mohi come to see geet sitting place and arms have scratched..

Mohi: geet beta what happened with worried tone..

Geet: I slipped from cycle , dad..with pain voice.

Mohi: oh my little girl..he pickup geet in arms ..he tried move from place..geet stopped him..

Geet : oh.. ( mind that boy..even I am not say thanks to him.)

Mohi: what beta..

Geet: ha..my cycle..

Mohi smiled don't worry , beta, I say to driver uncle..he bring ur cycle to our house..mohi left the place.geet face fell down..

*****

Geet house

Rano : geet beta, I am going to neighbour house to invite our house..u come with me.

Geet : I am coming mom.

Rano and geet invite everyone for house party ..last they enter in khurana mansion.

Preeti warmly welcomed them and give snacks to geet.

Preeti caring geet hairs softly: what is ur name beta..

Geet : Geetalakshmi aunty..with smiling face..

Preeti : very nice name.Are u south india..?

Rano: iam south indian but my husband is north india..

Geet smiled: dad and mom marriage is love marriage with giggling tone.

Rano fake angry glare to geet: chup karo..

Geet give pout face: but real only na..i am saying right na aunty..

Preeti: bikul right..geet beta.

Dadi enter in hall and look at geet :who s this new little doll..

Geet: I am not doll..even I am not little..i am 10 yrs old..with proud tone.

Dadi pinched geet cheeks: u r so cute gudiya..

Geet pout face: see mom, granny addressing me to gudiya with complaining voice.

Rano smiled : sorry maaji..she is very naughty..she talked without thinking anything..such a chatter box.

Geet eyes popped : what , I am chatter box..with angry voice..left the mansion.

Dadi: very sweet child..

Rano: yes maaji , my one only child..some time very adamant but very lovely kid with start praising her daughter ..( mom never stop praising her child infront of others)

Party time..

Every surrounding Neighbour come to geet house..

Geet wore white long fork..she look like little angel..khurana also come to geet house for party.

Dadi: gudiya, in this dress u look like angel...

Geet: thanks dadi.but iam not gudiya with pout face

Geet mingled khurana family mainly Vicky and annie..both r smaller than geet..vicky is 7 yrs old and annie is 5 yrs old.

Geet : preeti aunty, I play with annie and Vicky..

Preeti: why not beta, u play with them..daily evening come to our house play with them..nooone stopped u.

Geet: thank u aunty.elders chit chat with each other..geet get boring ,geet dragged Vicky and annie to her room.

After few minutes geet running and annie behind geet as tried catch her..(they playing games..)

Geet turn back to see annie while running..geet bumped in someone..geet closed eyes because of sudden bump..geet lightly open her eyes..she feel, she in safe arms..same browny eyes starring her..his m shape moving but she did not hear anything..she come back to real world as hearing annie voice.

Annie : I catched u...with jumping

Boy: ur eyes back or front with teasing tone. Every time u bumped everyone..

Geet: I am not bumped everyone..i bumped only u.

Boy : I am only u target ha..

Geet pout look at boy..and annie shouting ..i catched u..

Geet: yes, annie, u catched me..

Annie smiled face: bhai..

Geet : bhai with popped eyes.

Boy chuckled face:yes , I am her bhai...dadi shouting every name ..

Everyone come to hall..

Dadi introduce boy to mohinder and rano..

Dadi: rano beta, he is my elder grand son, Maan singh Khurana with proud tone. Maan touched rano and mohi feet as asked blessed from them.

Geet whisper : maan, nice name...

Rano look at geet: learn anything from him with taunting tone..geet pout look at rano.

Dadi: why u scolding gudiya..she is sweet girl..geet hugged Dadi waist and showing her tongue to rano

Maan smiled : gudiya

Geet : dadi... I am not gudiya with twisting her lips.

geet most of time stay in maan house only..maan reserved type but some time help Vicky, annie and geet their studies.

A years running like cloud..when geet age 15, maan 18, annie 10 and Vicky 12 yrs old

Geet admiring maan and his love with family , over take caring for his sibling, genuine nature., respect elders ..she fallen love with him more..

Geet running to rano side: mom, I passed my exam with high marks..now my wish will fulfil soon..with huge smile.

Rano hugged geet: ur every wishes come true dear and kissed her forehead..

Mohi tensed face enter in house : rano, bring some water..

Rano and geet enter in hall and noticed mohi tensed face.

Rano pass water to mohi : ji, why u face so dull..with worried voice.

Mohi: I got one more transfer..next weeks we will be shift to Mumbai..with worried face.

Rano: its common for us..why u tensed ji..i will packed everything..but I miss khurana family so much..mainly geet...she is very close with them..

Geet got already already shocked state (mind): how its possible for me why I thinking I cannot see without him..i am very sad as I am going away from him..why..

Geet run to khurana mansion and her eyes searching maan..but maan not in mansion..she asked dadi about maan..dadi said, he went camping for two weeks.geet tears flowing in her eyes.

Dadi: gudiya, what happened why u crying..

Geet hugged dadi: dadi, dad got transferred to Mumbai..we r going to mumbai in next week.

Dadi carring her hairs: in sake only my gudiya sad ..mumbai near only dear..u come delhi in ur vacation days .

Geet :so u not miss me with sad face.

Dadi smiled : when I said..i never miss my gudiya..i miss u lot..one thing remember..whom with u or not..life never stop .dear so enjoy ur life..my gudiya now crying baby..with chuckling face.

Geet: I am not crying baby even I am not gudiya

************

Geet went to Mumbai with parents .. khurana sad after going handa to Mumbai..mainly annie and Vicky cried more after geet left..even though geet also state same even more she missed maan and she did not last time look at maan face .

Back to present..

Annie : after u went, how much I cried ...with side hug to geet.

Geet smiled: me too miss u more annie..

Annie naughty look at geet: u miss me or bhai.

Geet chuckled face: really I forgot ur bhai..( mind thought every sec I remember only him)..i concentrate my dreams only ..

Annie: Dadi said , u r in hospital..my heart beat stopped with angry face.why u risk ur life..with angry face.

Because she love her dream job ..

Annie : vicky bhai..dont support her..

Vicky enter in dadi room..

Vicky side hug to geet : I miss u so much bhabhi..i am very happy ..u never go away from us.

Geet: everyone miss me but which person miss me mainly that person not with pout face.

Vicky giggled : u r so cute in ur pout face bhabhi..but bhai also miss u..after he come back from camping..he knew , u went to mumbai..he really sad..whenever he going visit Mumbai.for business trip.every time said..i hope this time I meet gudiya in Mumbai..after he come back..he sad ..he did not meet u..

Geet smiled: really like child happiness as she got favourite chocolate.

Dadi , Vicky and annie chuckled face: no one say u r secrets agents and did more success operation in ur young age..

Geet: profession my passion but he is my life.

Annie: after when u met bhai ..in villge right..dadi how u knew about geet bhabhi in hospital.

Dadi : after maan come back village project..he is very sad and in front of us.he smiling but in his lonely time, he sit in moody ways and he engaged to his business more.most of time he spent in office.i am worried for him..even ur mom sensed he something hide from us .we never thought he hide his soul.or his love from us .same time ur grandpa got heart attack..he want see maan marriage..unwilingly maan accept marriage for our happiness.

Me and preeti worried about his decision..

Geet: how u found out..he love me , I means he love his mystery girl with curious voice.

Dadi: Adi..maan ka favourite employee or say best friend and he shared everything with him..

Maan went out of station and I used that chance..i went to KC.

Maan cabin

Dadi sit in maan cabin and adi standing infront of dadi with shivering body.

Dadi : I am not ur boss..plz stop scaring me..with rolled her eyes.


Adi : but mam, ur my boss ka dadi..

Dadi:hmm ok..i need important details from u with serious tone.

Adi: which important detail mam, u need account details..few minutes..up to dated account details I give u.

Dadi glare to him: Adi..

Adi: yes mam, I said anything wrong.

Dadi:I don't want any office detail..i want know about maan..if maan love anyone..with doubting face.

Adi: oh..mam..now adi stammering more..dadi doubt confirmed seeing his face.

Dadi: I asking for his goodness only..plz tell me everything..its my request with worried tone.

Ad; plz mam don't say big words..yes maan sir love with his mystery girl..adi narrated everything village incident to dadi..

Dadi felt bad for maan : thank u adi..u go to ur cabin..i will deal with this matter.

Adi left the place.

Dadi deeply thinking about maan matter.her mind distract hearing phone sound...dadi attend phone..after attend she faced change to tense..

City hospital

Dadi enquired about person and receptionist said person room no..

Dadi enter room but no one in room and hearing water sound in washroom..

Dadi : I know , u waiting for maan but he do not anything about ur shot news.plz go away from my maan life.he deserve happy life . if he married u.he never get happiness...every day he fear about ur safety..i don't want see grandson broken state..he already accept for marriage whom his family decide ..so go away from his life..dont call him anymore in ur life time.i know my words hurt u.. I am sorry ..plz think in our state also..my family happiness tie up with my maan happiness.plz forgot him and move on ur life also Don't forgot my word..dadi turn back and tried move on the room..hearing creaking sound..dadi legs stopped .

I never forgot ur words in my life time. Whom with u or not ..life never stop ..with painful voice.

Dadi mouth whispered and her eyes moist : gudiya ..and dadi turn back look at geet.

Geet: if u want, I go away from him dadi..i will do but I never forget him..i cannot dadi..my heart beating for him only..with sad face

Dadi run to hug geet tightly : sorry beta..i am worried about maan life and talk with u rudely..forgive ur dadi.

Geet: whom am I forgive u dadi..i am only spoiling his life .iam not deserve him.sorry dadi..plz forgive me,,

Dadi: I am sorry beta, u r best choice for my maan..u not forgive ur dadi, gudiya.

Geet: iam not gudiya with pout face while crying face.

Geet : he really accept marry to other girl with sad face.

Dadi : yes, half heartly he accept for marriage..but he did not happy beta..

Geet (mind): that day, he said that till my last breathe , he wait for me..even he did not wait for single month..he accept marry to other girl..how dare u MSK..if u infront of me..u get punch through my hand.

**************

Back to present

Dadi : after I informed everyone about geet in hospital n maan love with geet.

Annie :how can I forgot that day, dadi..everyone went to meet bhabhi ..everyone asking about her health but her eyes searching her hero only..bhabhi really that day u r face worth to watch..with laughing tone

Geet: annie, u laughing..wait madam even my chance also coming soon with smirked face.

Vicky: bhabhi, after u went Mumbai, when u met bhai ..in village or somewhere

Geet : after we went to Mumbai..most of time I thinking about of u all...

Annie: really with teasing tone.

Geet twisted her ears: shh..after few months dad and mom died in flight crash with moist eyes.vicky and annie side hug to geet and dadi caring her hairs.

Geet : after uncle ( rano brother ) bring me to his home and he take care me like his own child..after completed my training and got first mission in delhi..truly after my parents died I forgot my first love ..my aim only my goal.

First mission I want catch important terrorist ,same time, I meet ur bhai after long years ..my first love infront of me..something .happened in my body..once again my love blossoming like new flower.in my distraction terriost escaped while my first mission failed ..i totally upset..i don't want my dream job lose ..i tried to stay away from him but I cannot ..i collect every details about my love ( maan).after seeing his marriage status only. My heart get peace..long two years..i just starring him from far place..and I reaching my goal also..village project its important for achieved my goal..two months I stayed in village for secret operation..that two months really hell for me..without seeing ur bhai..i missed him so much..suddenly he come infront of me in village ..i shocked ..i want hug him tightly...but I control my every feeling


Annie : so fight with him for suji right..

Geet: I know..he not said anything but I want to talk with him..even I hell angry with him..he forgot me..he forgot his gudiya..so scolded him..after know about his project visit..i am worried his life..if anything happened to my love ..i cannot bear it..i warning him and attached tracking devices in phone and laptap..whenever he went as I found him easily.

Vicky: when ur realize bhai also love with u..

Geet: hmm ur bhai not love with me..he love with his mystery girl with sad face. His eyes show me for his pure love and sometime he jealous with suji also with chuckling face.when I know about his danger, I reached that place..how dare them .they attacked my maan..i got angry without thinking anything I shot that basard.

My maan faint in my arms and I collapsed ..raj (geet secret operation partner) consoled me..my tears not controlled ..raj enlighten the moments as he start teasing me.i want shout.to stupid raj .when we met , I lost my heart with him..ur bhai asked that will u love me..i want hug ur bhai like bone crush say I love u only u in my entire life but I did not..i fear about his life and safety..if anything happened me, insake of secret operation..then his life .i cannot imagine seeing him like that ..i know very well my maan more than anyone..so I asked promise...move on his life.

Back to present

Annie: wow bhabhi , u love bhai unconditionally..

Geet: no annie, ur bhai unconditional love with me..he accept for marriage in sake of our family happiness.even he did not care whom u going to marriage. Without seeing my face..he accept me to his wife..first I angry with him.as he accept anyone with his wife.every marriage ritual ,he did it robotic manner with painful heart..its made me guilty..i am cursing myself for hide and seek game with him.i thought I give surprise in our first night but my buddhu hubby..and his geninue character I fallen love with him each sec more...why god write worst fate in my life ...in my first night, I narrating my love story because of ur stupid bhai..with pout face.

Vicky and annie laughed loudly ..

Geet : dadi see, they teasing me with cursing her hubby..

Preeti and mr khurana come to dadi insake of heavy laughing sound..

Preeti : geet beta, what r u doing here with confused face.

Mr.khurana : where is maan beta..

Annie : dad and mom .dont ask anything to bhabhi otherwise she start story intial stage itself..

Mr.khurana : shut ur mouth, u both go to ur room and geet beta also go to ur room.

Preeti caring geet head : go to sleep..beta

Annie hug geet with whispering voice : All the best bhabhi..if bhai already slept na,..just pour jug of water in his face..otherwise better change first night to first day with naughty tone..geet blushing ..every one left the place.

Geet enter in study room seeing maan sleeping in cough..geet caring his hairs..and kissed his forehead..every day u snatched my sleep in my dreams..but u sleeping peacefully..what u do with u..tomorrow ur pay back time confirm.MSK.wait for rising sun ,u going to face GMSK avator,..with attutide voice.

Geet slept in bedroom amd maan in study room..

Morning

Maan wake up in sleep and his mind stricked .now .he married person..and come to check to his wife if she is alright or not in bed room.

Maan stunned seeing angel sleep in bed ..her anklet tied in soft foot ..her milky bare waist visible in sake of choli.maan gulped his saliva..his eyes move above to waist area..his eyes popped out seeing her half two blossoms and clearly her clevagae visible..his head raised look at her cherry lip ..he want taste his cheery ...maan closed his eyes (mind): how can I think other girl rather than my mystery girl..

(buddhu khurana, she is not any other girl..she is ur wife)

Yeah she is my wife its not means I take advantage without her permission right...my whole body firing after seeing her sleeping state..i need shower ...and maan left to washroom..

Geet open her eyes : babaji, why u give me unromantic husband with fake crying face..he running from me..whenever u going, I behind u MSk with smirked face.

Dinning table..

Maan sit in chair and someone standing next him..her fragrance make maan to insane..he did not raise his face as look at his wife..he remember morning incidents..he have no guts face her one again.but her bare waist disturb in his vision of sight..maan closed his eyes as control himself..geet enjoying his state even she diaappoint till now he did not see her face...

Dadi : beta serve kheer to maan..geet placed kheer bowl in front of maan..maan take kheer and tried place to his mouth na..dadi one word stopped him.

Dadi: gudiya , delicious kheer with smirked look at maan.

Maan murmured : gudiya...after sec ..he look at his wife face..he become numb seeing her beauty..in her red dress saree like new blossoming red flower. Her face glowing like moon.Both eyes meet..maan seeing so much of love in her eyes..vice geet seeing un conditional happiness, yeah confusion also there..

Vicky coughed distract their love birds starring : bhai, kheer very hot right ..with teasing tone

Maan : hmmm...

Geet chuckled face..and annie said : really bhai..kheer is hot or my bhabhi is hot


Maan embrasses and confuse more..but he did not open his mouth

Dadi: gudiya beta, go back ur dress ..u going to ur home for ritual right with same teasing tone.

Maan face fell down ..he don't know why..

Geet : ji dadi...

After hearing her voice and his body stiffened tears flow in his eyes..without his permission..maan get up from chair and straightly went to his room.

Geet : dadi..i come back..with almost run behind him. Everyone teasing look at geet

Maan closed the door and geet knock the door..

Geet: maan, open the door..with slow and fear tone..but otherside maan not give any reply.


Geet smirked face: tika, don't open the door . iam going to my mother house for ritual ..bye...hearing door creaking sound and she smiled while enter in room and his strong arms pulled

her..geet banged to his broad chest.


both starring each other..


Geet : maan..., ia..maan placed his index finger to her lips.

Maan: shhh..dont speak..anything until I realize my self..its not dream..u r infront of me.. my love infront of me with happy but show pain in his voice.

Geet :maan..cupped his face through her palm ..raised her toe while kissed his forehead and maan closed his eyes..geet kissed his eyes one by one..and come to lip ..geet blushed..maan open his eyes ..

Maan: may i..

Maan placed his lip to her lip ..both sucking their lip , maan want enter in her mouth but geet not allow him..his hand travelling her bare waist and pinch her waist..geet moaned his name..maan got chance enter in geet mouth.. both tongue latched...in their single kiss they showing their love, pain, separation, single kiss change to aggressive.. both dominating each other.maaneet leave insake of lack of oxygen..both breathing heavily...geet head bow down while blushing and maan naughty look to geet..he pickup geet in his arms..geet tried relieve from his arms..both maan held her tightly.

Maan placed geet in bed and jumped above her like prey lion..

Geet placed hand between maan and her as she stopped maan..

Maan: no one stop me, u too..i am waiting for long days..

Geet rolled above to him :I am waiting for u long years but u cannot wait for few months and married to unknown girl with whacking his chest in angry face

Maan pulled her arms , her whole body bump to him: I married to my mystery girl right..with husky voice

Geet angry glare to maan : don't forgot u married to geetalakshmi not any mystery girl with grinned teeth.

Maan chuckled face : but I love my mystery girl more than my wife while playing her waist..

Geet get up from him and open their cupboard and pack her things..


Maan jerked up from bed and hugged her back and placed his head in her shoulders : what r u doing..

Geet: iam packing my dress , mr.khurana..with attitude voice

Maan kissing her neck while asking: why u packing...for our honeymoon with naughty face.

Geet smirked face: no mr khurana, iam going to my mother house for marriage rituals..if u want go to hm ..go with ur mystery girl with grinned teeth..


Maan: but ur my mystery girl right..without u..how can I go alone with pout face.

Geet : but iam going to my mother house..that final..

Maan : single day only right why u packing more dress with cute angry face.

Geet turn back and cupped his face ..:u come down, u understand why with smirked face.

Maan : before we going down,..we do more..with naughty face..single day its not easy for me ..so

Geet : so with attitude voice.

Maan pulled her more to him and start to kiss her aggressively and geet tried stop him after she enjoyed his wild attack..

************

Hall..

Maaneet come down with held their hand ..their fingers tingled with each other..

Maan : I drop geet to her house..with happy face..

Everyone laughed even geet also joined them.


Maan: why everyone laughing with irriate face.

Dadi: maan beta, u know where is geet house..

Maan: I don't know with pout face.


Annie : how u drop bhabhi to her home with teasing tone.

Mr.Khurana: first time, I disaapoint u in ur behavior..u don't knew anything ur wife and ur law house..

Preeti: how he knew about her , without engagement , we straightly fixed marriage even sangeet, mehendi maan not come to mansion..he went to business trip..with defending maan side.

Dadi hugged geet: I will going to miss u so much..

Maan confused: she is going to single day only right.

Dadi hit maan forehead: she is going for whole month to her mother house in tamilnadu.

Maan eyes popped and mouth open widely : what shouting loudly..

Vicky giggled seeing his state: bhai, close ur mouth otherwise any flies going inside ur mouth,,

Maan: u shut ur mouth, why whole month..with angry and frustrated voice.

Preeti: because her family ritual..today start aadi month (tamil calendar month)..u knew geet mother in south india ..after her parents died , geet stayed in grandfather house in tamilnadu..

Maan look at geet with painfully and geet smiled weekly..maan held her hand tightly as gestured iam with u.

Preeti: in aadi month, new couples not stay in one place. so .geet stay in tamilnadu

(guys, this is our tradition, aadi month, new couple not stay in one roof ..its reason also there. If they become one that time..if possible to pregnant right..so delivery time it mid of hot of summer..it is very difficult for girls that summer days..i know what r thinking..if they avoid pregnancy to use protection but south india old tradition for girl wellness..that early time..they do not knew about protection anything..ok..till now we have following this ritual..so aadi month new couple separate each other)

Maan: horror face.: dadi, really she need go..for little hope voice .

Dadi : yes beta..with teasing tone..

Geet hugged annie and Vicky : bye take care..and geet take blessing from dadi, maan parents..next come in front of maan.

Geet : maan, take care ..After I reach , I call u..


Maan nod his head with irritate or say child angry face ..

Mr khurana: I think guys, plz give some privacy for them ..every one left and waiting outside for geet.

Maan grabbed her slim waist : plz don't go ..with pout face.

Geet pinched his cheeks: this is ur punishment..u r spoiled my dreamy first night.

Maan: I fulfil ur dreamy night to our second night na..with cute face

Geet: no ..i already decided ..bye enjoy one month without me..with teasing tone.

Maan (mind): u not stay in KM ..but no one stay , I come to ur place..u go and I coming behind u..with smirked face.

Geet : Mr. Khurana, u devil mind planning something..with doubting face..

Maan: no my dear wifey...I feel bad for u going away from me..with pout face.

Geet peck his lip and maan pulled more to her..after few minutes..he leave her..

Geet left the place ..

************

After one year..

Maan sleep in luxury hotel room in bare body and room fully clothes shattered everywhere..yeah maaneet last night passionate moments ..

Maan closed eyes and searching geet next with him..maan open his eyes..and geet not in room and maan eyes caught one bit paper in table..

Maan shout : not again..once time ..she left her mission ..

Maan read the note: Good morning hubby...already I ordered ur breakfast , I arranged ur dress, wallet and everything in ur table..i know this is our second honey moon..dont worry in last our hm , I come back after 2 days but this time..i come back to evening ..after I never going to any mission..forgive ur wifey and ur mystery girl..love u honey..

Maan smiled and shaking his head : My mystery Girl..

Guys , if u want one more part for their Aadi month separation as maan naughtiness in that period with geet. And geet attitude with maan .and their first hm ..otherwise u ok for part 2 ,this is last part of my mystery girl os..

Please scroll down for my next os prologue...just for fun only..i write this prologue..dont take seriously..if u feel this concept uncomfortable..plz mention..i drop out this concept..or if u ok for concept ..plz suggest title ..till now I did not decide yet..

Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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NEXT OS



PROLOUGE



Maan shouting: in my home. Geet torturing me and in my office my boss torturing me..

Geet : what u said, I torturing u..why u not take any responsibility our home..we have children but u did not care about them.i am only take care their responsibility,house hold work, u did not take any house hold work..why maan..i am also human..with angry voice

Maan: geet, in my office they torturing me. and pressuring complete my target before time..i doing more effort and hardwrking for my company .but my boss not give me promotion..i tolerate my boss torture because of u and my children welfare..why u did not understand geet..even I am also human being..one day u stay or live in my place ( my place means situation/paristhiti) ..u know my condition with frustrated voice

Geet angry glare : I am also saying same ..u live my place ( suitation/paristhiti) ..u know my condition..

Maaneetfavo :Babaji fulfill ur wish or not I don't know that .but i will do.😆😆😆 my sweethearts.❤️❤️❤️.but my buddies accept this concept😳😳😳 otherwise I drop out ur wish..


Note: maaneet mention their place right..its not mean to their work..i mean their soul..if soul interchange their bodies..what happen next 😉😉😉 i think now, u understand title of prolouge 🤣🤣🤣


Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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This week i will update all my stories dearies
1) Maaneet SS- HOPE -Epilouge A -pg 98
2) Tera Mera Rishta Puraana hai- Updated part 2
3) Mera Maasoom Patidev - updated- part 5
4) Hey Kaise Pyaar hai - updated part 4

5)My mystery girl - updating --part 2

6) Main Tumhaare Bina Nahin Reh sakata -may be tomorrow night or monday morning 😳




DONT WORRY about MFS dearies..i will write more 😉😉😉


Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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sorry for late , updated 😳

office work ..i went off..now i updated 😃
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Awesome update geet cribbing and pouting how her buddhu husband didn't recognize her and above all Annie and Vicky were teasing her geet told how she had met maan when she was small she fell in love with him then only but didn't understand it each day she seeing his caring side just kept falling for him but then her dad had to shift to Mumbai and geet went away without meeting maan who himself had fallen for her then geet met maan during her mission how hard it was for her to stop herself but her dream came true when maan confessed his feeling but geet had to let him go coz her life is unpredictable dadi found geet was shocked it was her but later she told how maan agreed to marry unknown girl and now he totally ruin his first night but maan was drooling on geet and later when he found out geet was his love was happy but geets punishment that maan had to wait another month for her coz as per ritual she was going away to her parents house for a month plzzz write the part abt maan naughtiness when he goes behind geet to her home town now geet still goes on her mission while maan waits for her to return so that he can have his way with her
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atlast maan got his mystery girl...

lovely ending...

loved it ...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...
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Loved the ending. Poor guy just when he realised that he is married to his mystery girl, Geet is going to her parents house for one month.
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Nice update dear
Lovely it!!
Geet was annoyed with maan that he didn't recognize her but was admiring maan for his honest demeanor and hid love for his mystery girl. Annie was teasing Geet to the core and was laughing heartily at geet's expenses. Geet was reminiscing her past and the moments she spent Khuranas during her childhood and was sharing her past thoughts . Past well penned dear . Finally maan realised that geet is his mystery girl and was happy to have her in his life for ever.
Thanks for updating Ana !!
Loved the OS to the core :)))
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I won't !ind if ur gifting us another part of his mystery girl Ana !!
Iam willing to read
:))

Loved next OS prologue dear
Maan is miffed and irked with his responsibilities towards his family and work .
Update soon !!

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