MaaneetFavo's OS Fantasy -My Mystery Girl last part-page 61(16-Dec-17)

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Hello dearies,
I know what u thinking ..once again i come with new story right..of course i cannot control my hand ,what i will do buddies..but little change in this thread..this thread not for one story.i will post my every os in this thread..what type of os i will write u thinking right..hmm..first i love barbie Animated stories i mean fairy tale stories..first option magical os fantasy and next option may be romance story..it is common one..and next option dark and horror..till now i didnot touch that genre..but i will try..and comedy os fantasy..i wrote some comedy scene in other stories..fully i had not written right..so i thought i will write comedy os...


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My first Os


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My Mystery Girl - page 13


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Teri Meri , Meri Teri ...Nahii..babaji!

Prolouge -page 32

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My first OS

Note :i already posted in ghsp anniversary thread..special thanks to priya di,sanju di and preety dear...thanks for title os, di..
this is my first os plz bear it..u know me right..i am dragging my stories part very well..but os first attempt..next time i will try level my best.


A girl sitting in dark beach side and thinking about her horrible life.she was orphan.she have no friends circle.everyone using her brilliant and nave character.she want someone for sharing her feeling and pain.it was dark lonely place ,only hearing rolling waves of sound.waves touching her foot.cool breeze and sea water chillness give some relax in her mind.

something touched her foot and she looked down see one bottle.she pickup in her palm with confused face

She opened the bottle. some royal cloth inside it.she unfold that cloth. something written

A girl read it

First lines - warning dont read it otherwise ur in problem

Girl thought - I already faced more problem.let see what problem will be come, continue reading.

Second lines- u rejected my warning so u handle me after 7 days.after 7 days I will stay with u like ur shadow.I will fulfil ur wish.but some condition also apply.

Girl thought- .I think someone do any prank with anyone .even condition also apply written.its so funny.

Third lines- condition- I will give u special three wishes.if u want u this wishes before 7 days over , u will use it otherwise ur wishes not true .I forgot introduce myself.iam ur jinni but only for 7 days

Girl thought- jinni with confused face

Hi iam jinni with cheerful voice.

Girl jerked hearing his voice and one man standing infront of her.

Girl: Who r u

Man: Iam jinni.now onwards I will stay with u with smiling face like whole tooth showing to girl

Girl looking head to toe selfthought: He is looking handsome, charming .but he not look like jinni.if he is jinni means he wore like Aladdin film's dress but he wore tight tee shirt and jeans..

Girl: Don't lie I know ur not jinni...jinni not wore this type of dress.

Jinni: iam modern jinni. i don't like old jinni dress with chuckled face .even I have also modern phone with smiling face. and show his new phone to girl.hmmm ok I do any magic, u will trust me that iam jinni with teasing tone.

Girl: I don't want u prove anything infront of me because I don't need u.

Jinni:no ways, this is ur fault,I already gave u warning but u ignored me .next 7 days I stay with u .by the way what is ur sweet name with flirting tone.

Girl irritating seeing his behavior but jinni not leave her

Jinni: ok I will guess, sanju,priya or preety etc...

Girl shout: enough iam geet ...ur hearing right...iam geet

Jinni: sweet name but why u shouting, are u not happy with ur name but iam happy for my name ..iam maan singh khurana..

Geet: kya... with shocked face

Jinni: u doubting my name..i will tell u full name but today I am not finish yet so shortly call me maan singh khurana or maan

Geet: ok mr maan singh Khurana I am going ,bye..

Maan: hey baby, don't call me Mr just call me maan in ur cherry lips with flirty tone and this is ur fate that I stay with u

Geet: u r not crazy right.u know where iam living..i live in girl's orphanage...boys not allow inside of orphanage with angry face

Maan: if u don't want see me anyone with u so no probem , u only see me .come lets go...

Geet placed her hand in her forehead: babaji please save me with worried tone.

Maan: Why u fear, maan is here ,geetu

Geet: u only my fear..and don't call me geetu..with warning tone

Maaneet enter orphanage and geet doubtly looking everyone if anyone seeing maan with her but everyone behave normally with geet .

Geet room but pinky sharing room with geet.

Pinky: geet ,when u come back

Geet: just now pinky.i need sleep

Pinky: Ok u sleep, tomorrow we need go college early.

Maan: I share ur bed , geetu with naughty tone.

Geet: U also sleep in my room even bed with irritating voice

Pinky: Geet obviously I sleep with u.this is our room with confused face.

Geet: Pinky I am not talk with u..i asked m..( geet stop her word, realised what trying to say)

Pinky: Geet in our room, u and me only here then whom u talk about

Geet: Nothing yaar, u go to sleep.

Maan: ok I am going to sleep.

Geet: not u

Pinky touched geet forehead: geet u alright with worried tone

Geet: pinky iam alright, u go to sleep.

Pinky slept in her bed , jinni laughing look at geet face.

Geet: u think I look like joker or mad

Maan:hmmm... u not look like joker but I doubt about u r mad..with teasing tone

Geet: enough, leave me alone...

Maan: not at all casualy said

Geet:ok u fulfil my wish right, whenever I need u, I will call u, now get out with harsh tone

Maan : ok , vanished in air..geet shocked suddenly she vanished even little bit sad for harshly talk with him

Maan: don't sad ,I always with u,once again vanished

Geet smiled:hey babaji why I strucked with him..

Next morning, geet college

Geet in library .suddenly door locked sound,geet scared looking surrounding nobody around her, it is totally dark place..strong arms hug geet tightly.geet body crushing in his arms.geet tried come out of his grip but everything is vain infront of strong arms

Geet shout : who r u, leave me.. with tears eyes.

Man: don't act like innocent, u want satisfy ur body so I helped u with lusty voice.

Geet digusting hearing his shameless word

Geet: leave me monster,plz leave me...tears flowing in her eyes

Man: after I enjoyed ur body, I leave u dear..geet faints in his arms.

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Geet wake up seeing place.she is in orphanage and pinky sit next with her.

Geet get up and hugged pinky tightly and pinky reciprocate her hug

Pinky: nothing happened with u geet, don't worry u r safe with rubbed her back softly.

Geet: after I fainted i didn't remember anything with fear face

Pinky: even I don't know what happened in library.i received message from ur phone.come soon to library.i came to library but u fainted and rohan...

Geet : u said about our senior rohan .my guessing right, he only misbehaved with me.but what about rohan...with scary tone

Pinky laughed loudly and showing her phone to geet.after seeing photo geet also laughed loudly.

geet: omg I cannot control my laughter.he wore girl fork above his knees ,lipstick,fake eyelasher,mascara even baby feeding nipple in his mouth..

pinky: even I cannot control my laughter,these photo reached whole college.i think he not enter our college anymore..time god every girls escaped from him.god only save u..pinky left the room

geet : I know whose save me.thanks maan

maan: I didn't it anything geetu..but that blue fork really suitable for his skin tone and baby nipple it so funny with naughty face

geet nods her head and give right hand infront of maan : friend

maan shakes her hand: friends ,geetu

geet shared everything to maan and maan also said about his friend even girl friends details also..geet jealous hearing about girls

almost three days over and rohan friends registered geet name in dance competition..

geet: maan iam in problem..

maan: u saying about dance competition right.

Geet: I don't know dance mainly I have no pair with pout face.noone come to dance with me..iam not looking beautiful.

Maan: whose said ur not beautiful with shocked face.i never seen any beautiful woman like u..maaneet starring each other..

Geet come back to sense: don't lie maan...I know about me..

Maan: u only hide ur beauty behind ur big glass specs and loose salwar..

Geet: but my pair

Maan: if u have no problem, I will dance with u

Geet: really...with excited voice..every girl drooling u only

Maan: I will challenge , in ur dance competition place every boys jealous with me..

Next day college

Geet wore white saree and see look like angel and maan woring black shirt and jean

Maaneet admiring each other..

Dance competition

Everyone dancing very well..now maaneet turns

Geet scared so much..

Maan: why u fear , ur maan is here...

Geet blushed hearing ur maan and maaneet danced like passionate one..every girls openly drooling maan and boys crushing themselves missed wonderful chance with geet.

After dance

Girs dragging geet to lonely place

Girs: geet plz tell me his number..i need talk to him ...with dreamy face

Geet stomach burning everyone talking about her maan body,his strucuture...she angry raised

Geet shout: enough he is my boyfriend...went out immediately

Geet realised 2 seconds before what she said to girls...Geet cheeks automatically become red ..

5th day ,night

geet starring moon...

Maan: why u starring that moon, geetu..u want that moon ,I will give u...

Geet : u give me anything maan with teasing tone

Maan: don't fogot iam jinni , I will fulfil any ur wish..

Geet: acha ji..ok I want see dinosaouras but not our place...their place..

Maan: millions yrs before dinosaurs died..

Geet: I don't need any explanation. this is my first wish..u fulfil or not..

Maan : ok closed ur eyes and hold my hand tightly...now tell ur wish..

Geet opened her eyes shocked and her jaws touched to ground

Geet tapped maan shoulder hardly : maan plz pinch me..i am looking dinosouras .

Maan rubbing his shoulder : ha, u looking dianosouars ...with irritating voice..

Geet: maan it so beautiful...wow iam in dianosouras world..omg...this is not dream right

Maan : beautiful but dinosaurs so danger with chuckle face

Geet: maan see sauropods dinosaurs..it is herbivore and eat only plants..how long neck yaar..my neck become pain seeing it face..maan help me, I want feed leaves to them..plz with puppy face.

Maan weird look: how u got this type of weird ideas..geet pout..ok I will help ,dont put ur face like that.

Maaneet standing on top of tree branch obviously our jinni magic .geet give plants to sauropods dino..

Geet: maan it is eating ... jumping like kid..

Maan: u r not fear,geetu

Geet: my maan is here why iam fear...said running to dino side

Maan : my maan...pagal ladki.. with murmuring tone

Geet: maan plz jump like tarzan...pickup that fruit iam hungry

Maan : u need that fruit ,I give ur fruit through my magic power.why I need jump like tarzan..

Geet pout look to maan and maan melts seeing her face..maan jump one tree to another tree .geet clapped her hands encourage maan..

Maan wore flower crown to her head & kneel down in front of geet : this is for u princess..

Geet pickup fruit: thank u mr maan singh khurana

Geet: maan..with horror face

Maan: what

Geet: oh..tyrannosaurs...with stammering voice.maan turned back..seeing gaint dino..infront of them..

Giant dino (mind): I got my meals...with smirked face

Maaneet gulped their saliva:geeet run...maaneet running and gaint dino chasing them...

Geet: maan ur jinni..why u running...u r magic power change dino to little...

Maan stopped and hit his forehead: my mind also changed like ur mind...maan did magic..giant dino become small one..geet pickup in her arms

Geet: now dino so cute..but dino tried to bite geet hand..maan harshly pulled dino in her hand throw it..

dino in air : my meals gone with sad face

Maan: are u crazy, ..it is not dog..its harm u..with angry tone..

Geet shocked and also happy ..in these 5 days she never see his angry face first time showing his angry insake of my safety..

Maan: lets go we need go our place..

Geet: maan plz..i want see every type of dinos, promise I never near to them..

Maan:ok, but it is ur last warning..

Geet enjoying looking dinos and maan admiring geet ka excitement...maaneet returned back to orphanage..

6th day...

Next morning

Orphanage warden room and geet enter in warden room

Warden : geet beta come inside and please help me in this file

Geet: sure mam

Geet reading old files and her eyes strucked one page ..tears flow in her eyes

Warden: what happened geet why u crying

Geet show file to warden and warden worried look to geet..geet went out with crying face.

warden: poor soul seeing her date of birth in files this is not her real date of birth..it is only her joining orphanage date..

Geet sitting corner of room with hugged her knees and hide face behind her legs.

Maan touched her shoulder..geet looking maan with moist eyes..geet hugged maan tightly..

Geet: why my parents leave me in orphanage.i want know about reason maan..plz maan help me..

Maan nod his head: close ur eyes and ask ur wish geet..with heavy voice..

Maaneet infront of orphanage..it is rainy day..geet looking old orphanage..

One couple enter orphanage door steps..maaneet hide behind pillar watching couples.

Lady: ji she will safe right

Man: rano ,today my enemies will kill u and me surely ..but I don't want my princess die with us..

Rano: mohiendar ji..my princess will live in orphanage..why god write this type fate with us..she live like princess in our mansion but now our own hand, we leave her to orphanage..with crying face...

Mohi: everything our fate..plz placed our princess to orphanage door..if gang see princess with us..they will kill our child also.

Rano and mohi kissed baby and wore geet name pendant in baby neck : we love u geet beta..plz don't hate ur parents..we did everything ur safety only..ur mummaa and papa love u so much..placed baby in orphanage caddle went out with heavy heartly..

Geet touched pendant in her neck : maan..plz save my parents..i want them...I want my parents love..plz save them hugged maan legs with crying face

Maan pulled and hugged tightly : chup karo geet..i cannot geet this is their fate..i never change their fate..geet.. with slow voice

Geet grabbed his collar: but u fuflfil my wish maan..she highly frustrated

Maan: no geetu one day I will fulfil one wish only...

Geet: I never got parents love even anyone love with me..everyone me alone..even u also leave me..

Maan have pain like anyone stabbed heart through knife..and he cannot tolerate seeing shattered geet..

Maaneet back to orphanage..geet sleeping in bed with murmuring u also leave me alone..

Maan starring geet with painful face..

Maan: tomorrow is my last day with u..i don't know when i fallen love with u ,first time I saw ur almond eyes I totally flatted.u have killer eyes but hide ur knife behind ur big eye glasses. in college competition every boys drooling u, i want kidnapped u to anyplace but i cannot..i controlled my anger. i love u geetu..but my fate I cannot live with u..ur my first and last love geet..maan singh khurana never love girls except u..ur my girl..ur my only lady love..why god u play with me..after I went out she will be shatter..plz stay with her always...kissed her forehead..

Last day..

Geet woke up in sleep it almost mid afternoon..geet eyes searching maan but maan not near her..

Geet: maaan...

Pinky: what happened geet why u shouting maan..whose is maan

Geet hugged pinky: he is my life..pinky..i cannot live without him...maan where r u..

Maan crying seeing geet in this state...

Pinky give sleeping pills to geet and slept once again..in sake of drugs..

11 0 clock

Geet wake up in jerkly..: no maan u not go away from ur geet ..

After fresh up ,she wore red saree..she know maan love red color saree..

Geet arrange her room with candles light...

Geet: maan come infront of me..

Maan: geet...

Maaneet starring each other..

Maan: geet what I sa..geet placed her finger to his lips

Geet: plz maan don't talk with pleasing tone

Maan closed his eyes accept his defeat..

Geet cupped his cheeks in her palm and maan seeing her almond eyes.

Geet: before u came..i have no one in my life..l eagerly waiting for anyone show me little bit love with me..everyone using me but I never got any love from others..everyone surrounding me but I feel alone.nobody listening my painful voice..u come my life..these 7 days I never feel I am orphan..i poured my pain in ur shoulder..i shared everything with u like friend..ur my best friend maan.i want share my feeling with u.

will u give ur friendship till my eternity.

.whenever I have problem..u come save me like parents save her child.

Will u save me any problem in my future also

...friendship ,parents love different from girl love with one person..i am in love..i insanely ,deeply love with him,if he not with me..i cannot alive .iam surely die..i cannot imagine single second without him..but he want go away from me maan with painful voice

Maan : geet..with painful voice..

Geet: shhh..dont talk..he thinking iam happy without him.why he came my life.why he give me every happiness..he show me parents and my parent not hate me..their fate leave me orphanage..iam happy. I don't know they alive or not but they love me..my third wish.u will fulfil right..

Maan mind: plz ask ur wish soon..only 1 minute left..

Geet closed eyes:my every birth I want life partner,my love only to my maan till my eternity I need his love ,care ..i need him...this is my wis...

Maan : sry..geet I need go now...12 clock bell ringed..

Geet open her eyes ,her maan not infront of her..geet kneel down with crying vigrously..

Geet: maan plz come back..ur love waiting for u...maan don't leave me..plz maan come back shouting continuously..

Maan tapped geet cheeks..and geet opened her eyes with shocking state..

Geet touched maan cheeks: maan u come back..

Maan: geetu what happened..

Geet looking surrounding she is in bed, room full of maaneet pictures even marriage pictures also there..

Maan: u have any bad dream geetu..

Geet nods her head negatively..hugged maan tightly..

Geet mind: time god this is only my dream..

Maan rubbed her back: ur maan is here why u fear geetu...with winked eye...😉


may be geet ka dream or jinni ka magic😉 whatever finally maaneet happily live forever .


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NOTE: sry dearies.today and tommorrow .i read every stories and comments plz forgive me for late 😊





sry i know i late updating my stories..what i will do..i strucked my work. u know very well i already six ongoing stories in my hand.weekly i will try update minimum any two stories..ok dearies..thanks for everything dearies...thank u so much..




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Lovely os dear
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fab thread! thanks 4 da pm! wonderful OS! looking forward 2 ur other OS!
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read it on anniversary thread 😊
awesome os ... that was dream of geet 😛

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