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Thank you sooo much faye...You wrote this story as we requestd...But didn't got time so i couldn't read or comment ( hope u read the PM)😕
About your beautiful story...😃❤️
It was A ❤️W❤️ S❤️ O❤️ M❤️ E...!!!!!🤗and a big hug for u...😃
I read the story taking soo much time...looking into the minute elementz that u included in it...and every dialogue Gauri said to Om...u nailed it dear...👏...Loved that one of his routine at night is carrying sleeping G to bed...This silent treatmnt is killing him...and he knw that he hurted her so much and want to win her back...yaar this man...he fell hard for her...
And when she talked with him in cold voice and called him Mr Oberoi might remind him that the way he used this word with so much hatred for his father...and his own dialogue mocking at him which he himself made to escape from his feeling and her cross questioning about the relation...and one more thing is clear he habitual of the old Gauri who feel pain when he got hurt...yahi tho pyaar hei...😳
And the last part ...😃 Payal...😳...it was one of the best part...😃
It was a beautiful scene...Thanks dear you didn't forgot that payal when CVs suffering a partial amnesia...😆
But dear now i bcm more greedy...😆 What will be Gauri's reaction when seeing her long lost paayal again in her ankle...😉
Once again Thank you sooo much...😃😳
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