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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
Ijaazat ho to. ..😳

⭐️

Bilkul hai 🤗

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Nik03

O My Partner..Aapka Res dekha to Dil baag baag ho gaya😃
Tabby🤗
How are you?

Nik🤗

Hey ya !!

Main theek. ..how r u?

Unres to main karti nahi, ,,res se hi baag baag karlo. ..🤣

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 7 years ago

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Sidhi

@ArtThouTheBest

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Res

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Unres

A fabulous piece of work with scenes I was hoping to get in EDKV when Shravan was all set to go back before Ramu's accident...N u fulfilled it😊

N the title

The way Pushkar was concerned about Shravu and Sumo knowing exactly what Pushkie wanted her to do once again shows the beautiful bond between them...I just love these three❤️

Coming to Mami; is she mad or what? So happy Nanu shut her down...Oh God Mamaji-Mamiji love story was bang on😆...N the way you fit in Mamiji's atrangi baatein and habits in your works👏 I love it...These moments are hilarious and agar you bring in Chachi in it to give takaar to Manju Mami; toh yaar maaza hi ajata hai🤣

That song sequence was so pure, unadultered; yet HAAWT in its own way...Scratch that entire ShraMan moments were bang on and 👏...Got no words to describe☺️...N the way Shravan knew that Suman is hiding her pain of separation just for him and the way he asked for permission and Sumo said ki jaane ki permission nahi hai usko; but jaake wapaas aane ki permission hai usko

Aha...Pushkar ho toh teasing naa ho aisa kabhi ho sakhta hai😆 Bechaara he was so upset to hear about Shravu's plan😭

P.S: Was re-reading Mrs & Mr Shravan Malhotra...Oh my god...That Impudence piece was hilarious🤣...Hass hass ke aasu nikal gaye mere...Pagalon i tarha hass rahi thi...N mumma was like tu pagal wagal toh nahi ho gayi exams ke presure mai😆

Thanks for PM Zoya

Love, Sidhi

Edited by Ivvy - 7 years ago

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sweksha

@sweksha

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Beautiful update dear superb...very well written👏 every emotion perfectly described... How much understanding they have become where a father couldn't understand his son..a best friend understood her best friend without even telling him...pushkar is so cute this shirtless idea was awesome and a bit naughty😉 by pushkar's view...I still thinking about that scene how quickly shravan wore his shirt when pushkar came and was shirtless in front of sumo without any worry...this shoes their comfort level...I am damn sure one day three of them will be planning for convecing ramnath for shraman's relationship like this😳 pushkar the lawyer ki nazre dhokha nahi kha sakti...thankyou for updating this early dear I enjoyed a lot...please update soon love you🤗

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Nik🤗

Hey ya !!
Main theek. ..how r u?
Main bhi theek ya😊
Unres to main karti nahi, ,,res se hi baag baag karlo. ..🤣
To main konsa karti jald😆
N aap res bhi nahi karte kabhi kabhi

@Bold😛

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Nik03

@Bold😛

Ye Res nahi...MOH MOH ke dhaage hain...😛

@red...Ye undino ki baat hai !!😆

Still,,I have a res somewhere !!😳

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

CONGRATULATIONS on Thread #2 ...Zoya !!!

Awesome chapter!!

A fabulous read

so the day has come...ironical much

Eagerly waiting for the next!!

Apoorva

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BloodRune

@BloodRune

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

RES!!!

Logging from the laptop and commenting in a minute!

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avni01

@avni01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Omg zoya!!!! Beautiful !! I'm at loss of words. How do you do this every single time? Each and every time you write its nothing short of a masterpiece. You are awesome girl!!! Such feels this one brought. I was totally imagining the scene playing in my mind. Such lovely emotions.Ijaazat hai?? Chala jaon?? Wow!! I can't get enough of it it. I'm gonna read this many more times.