Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Wow Zoya,

How do u manage to write sooo well dear...this was sooo very emotional...👏

Shravan came back for her, coz he needed her...aww...so beautiful...

Shravan is going back...that is so heart breaking...but Sumo will brave it for him, for his dreams...that's like a true soulmate ...it will b very difficult for both of them...but still both r willing to do it...that's love

I m dying to read whats gonna happen next...

superb dear
rgds

Anuradha

Quote

Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Ye Res nahi...MOH MOH ke dhaage hain...😛

@red...Ye undino ki baat hai !!😆
Still,,I have a res somewhere !!😳

Inhi dino ki baat hai Tabby😆

I know ji..Kitna intezaar or?😳

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Zoya, beautiful!!

I read your stories not for the plot of it but for the emotions you bring out wonderfully!!

Hats off to you!!!

Quote

CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Nik03

Inhi dino ki baat hai Tabby😆
I know ji..Kitna intezaar or?😳

Khuda jaaney... 😕

Waqt hi nai Mil ra

Quote

BloodRune

@BloodRune

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: BloodRune
RES!!!
Logging from the laptop and commenting in a minute!

Yikes! Res thoda lamba ho gaya, Lol!

BUT!!!

Shirtless 👏 Shravan 👏 That description... sitting on the ledge, legs on either side, hair all messy and all that golden tan skin *dead* Itna craze fictional character ke liye kabhi nahi hui 😳

Ohkay, so fangirl mode is a little settled but I was smiling like a loon the entire time I was reading. I don't know what it was, I can't pinpoint it but it was so Suman and Shravan, even when it wasn't them. LOVED this piece to bits! Can't wait to read more.

PS. Meri Ijazaat hai (aur request bhi) to write more Shirtless Shravan scenes and him catching Sumo off-guard (he can totally pull me into a hug like that anytime )

Quote

Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
Khuda jaaney... 😕
Happens..Just like this😳
Waqt hi nai Mil ra
Mil jaayega ❤️
Take your time ya!

@Bold

Quote

CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Nik03

@Bold

Quote

Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

@Bold

Quote

Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Hi Zoya,

I already read it twice..cant get enough of it.. such lovely scenes.. i can really visualize and feel those emotions.. You are a gifted writer.. will wait for next update eagerly.

Nivi.