RikaraSS-AAnkhon ki Gustakhiyaan-SeasonIV-The Wedding-P2-30.11

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Hello Lovelies,

The Wedding Season - Part 2 uploaded below.
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Aankhon ki Gustakhiyaan- Seasin IV- The Wedding

Part 2

Gauri was excited, in full anticipation of her engagement which was scheduled for next day. The glow on her face was visible to everyone and they couldn't help complimenting her for the same. It was as if she was flying in the air, her feet were not on the ground. She was finally getting engaged to her love, the ring exchange will be a promise of love for each other which was everlasting. Today was also her day off from studies, so she could organise everything for her engagement as she wanted. But time was just not passing, she was watching the clock like a hawk, but the day seemed to be getting longer with each passing second. She decided to go shopping with Anika and Bhavya and then they had plans to maybe watch a movie, to take minds off the engagement preparations and get some rest.

Omkara had gone out to buy something special for Gauri; he wanted to surprise her on the engagement. He ran into some old friends, who insisted on having tea in their old studio, which Omkara had stopped visiting a long time ago. He had shut that chapter of his life, after his family reprimanded him to. But his friends insisted and literally carried him along.

That afternoon, Shivaay entered the house walking swiftly, his throat dry , dishevelled and worried, closely followed by Khanna carrying Omkara in his arms and Rudy who looked equally worried but also angry. They moved swiftly to Omkara's room where Khanna deposited him on the bed Careful', said Shivaay. After checking Omkara was ok, with Jhanvi Ma and Daadi by his side, he picked up the phone and called Gauri,' Bachcha, tum jahan bhi ho, ghar aa jao, jaldi'

Gauri was buying popcorn whilst Anika and Bhavya purchased the movie ticket. Kya hua Bhaiya, hum cinema aaye hain, ticket bhi le liye, kuch chahiye tha aapko?

Bacha, bas ghar aa jao, tum sab' Shivaay couldn't keep the grief out of his voice. The moment she heard his voice, she knew, something was amiss. Omkara! Somehow, her heart had started beating erratically, she suspected something bad. All along the drive back home, Anika held her hands; she had spoken to Shivaay when Gauri was not looking. As soon as the car stopped outside OM, Gauri ran into the room, and saw Omkara. He was lying on the bed, all bruised, blood was oozing out from the corner of his left lip, his right hand and his forehead.

Omkara, kya hu aapko, Bade bhaiya, Rudy Bhaiya, yeh sab kya hain? Gauri was out of control. She was crying her eyes out and caressing Omkara's hair. He was unconscious. She got up, confronted Shivaay, took both his arms and shook him, Bade bhaiya, aap kuch bolte kyun nahin, kya hua inhe?' She then turned to Rudy,' Rudy Bhaiya, you tell me, what has happened to Omkara, he is ok, right, tell me he is ok?' Rudy was looking down, not wanting to show her his tears. Gauri went back to where Omkara was lying, put her head on his chest and cried like a baby. Daadi came, sat next to her and tried to calm her down. Gauri, doctor has seen Omkara and given him injection and medicines. He said he should be waking up soon,' Shivaay intervened. But when she couldn't be consoled at all, Shivaay took her by the arm and walked out of the room.

Bade bhaiya, kahan le jaa rahe hain aap, mujhe Omkara ke paas rehna hain' Gauri dragged her feet in opposite direction. Shivaay dragged her to the temple, in front of her Shankarji, then took her hands in his and said, tumhe bahut himmat ki zarurat hain Gauri, woh sunne ke liye jo main bolne ja raha hoon'. Gauri was looking at him, waiting.

This is about Omkara's past, you perhaps don't know this. Omkara was cornered today by some old enemies who saw him in the art studio he stopped going to long time ago and this is what happened. Par Bhaiya, why would anyone hit Omkara just like that, he is a person who would never harm an insect, what do these people have against him?' Before Shivaay could explain anything further, Rudra came running,' Chul Bhabhi, come fast, O ko hosh aa raha hain, who aapko bula rahe hain behoshi main'

Gauri and Shivaay immediately ran to the room, Omkara was moving his head, with his hand outstretched,' Ri' he said. She ran to him, held his palm with both her hands, kneeling down next to the bed, hum yahaan hain, aap theek hain na?' She kissed his palm and kept kissing, making it wet with her tears.

Main theek hoon' he started getting up.

Om, you should rest. Everyone lets go, let's leave them. Gauri is with Om' Shivaay ordered everyone. Daadi put her hand on Gauri and Omkara's head and moved out, Jhanvi Ma caressed Omkara's cheek,' rest beta' she said and left. Rudy and Shivaay moved out as well, Anika was just entering with juice, when Shivaay pulled her out,' give them some time'. Tej had just come after hearing the news and was taking long strides towards Omkara's room when Shivaay stopped him. How is he Shivaay, I need to see him, is he ok?' Tej looked worried. Bade papa, calm down, he is ok, abhi hosh aaya hain, woh Gauri ke saath hain' Shivaay comforted Tej. Oh thank God' Tej relaxed. You can see him later' with this Shivaay walked away and Tej collapsed on the sofa relieved.

She shut the door as soon as the last person had left, she then sat in front of him and started hitting him with both hands,' how dare you, how could you? If you ever, ever scare me like this again, I will kill you' she was crying and very very angry. Omkara had never seen her so angry ever before.
Aah, ohh, it hurts Ri' he took both her hands and pulled her into a hug. She sobbed on his chest, she kept sobbing for hours, and he caressed her hair. I am sorry Ri, I should have told you about this earlier. I thought not to worry you unnecessarily as this chapter of my life was closed.' He said.

She moved back and looked at him, waiting. I used to take drugs Ri.'

Kya? Kya kaha aapne?' She was shocked, looking at him very concerned. He hugged her.

Haan. I was an addict Ri. I started taking drugs after a complete breakdown. I was going through a bad phase, I felt very alone, having realised that the gf's in the past were not my love. I didn't know what love meant. The only love I knew by then was brotherly love and love I received from family members. There were problems between Mr. Oberoi and mom and she had taken to drinking, all us kids knew about this. Shivaay and I protected Rudra as much as we could, but Priyanka was very attached to mom, it was difficult to keep her away. She grew up to be a very nervous kid, who would get anxious at little things. One day I was dropping her off to her friend's place and she insisted on driving, I let her, but we met with an accident. A girl had come in front of our car, she was injured, we took her to the hospital ad paid for all her expenses. Later we learned she was discharged. In the police report I said that I was driving the car. I was asked to report to police station often until the case was resolved. But this affected both Priyanka and me badly. I started getting nightmares of the accident. I was sincerely depressed, drowning in my own black hole, which I had created for myself. Shivaay and Rudra tried to help me, but I even shut them out. On one of my trips to the police station, one goon met me on the way and sold me cocaine. I tried it and felt my pain had disappeared for the time I was under its spell. It became a regular occurrence, I started buying more and more cocaine from the guy and taking it more often than I should have. At one point, I went in a coma because of over-dose, that's when Shivaay found out. He put me in re-hab, where I was cured but not for long.'
By now, Omkara was sobbing on Gauri's shoulder, and Gauri was crying herself, she made him lie down with his head in her lap, caressing his hair. Don't stop Om, I want to hear everything.'


I left it Ri, at least I promised Shivaay I had, but it didn't leave me. Every time I was depressed or in pain, I went in a downward spiral from where the only way out was to go back to taking drugs, there was no other relief for me. I am not sure last time how I came out of it, it must have taken all of my energy to finally drop it. My life was in danger and everyone in the house pleaded me, I was under house arrest for a long time, under the watchful eyes of Khanna. Today, those goons saw me at the studio and asked me to buy cocaine from them, they know I am rich, and when I refused they started hitting me, I hit back, but they were many. I am sorry Ri, I am so sorry, I should have told you this before, but I was scared of losing you.' He put his head deeper into her lap and hugged her with both his hands, cocooned like a kid, wrapped around her, he sobbed.

Om, I cannot marry you. I cannot live with this fear every day that one day you will be gone, because of this habit. I cannot keep waiting to lose you at the hands of an invisible enemy that is inside you. How can I fight it Om, alone? ' Gauri was crying, she was in pain. She was afraid, of losing him, she had to do something.

He felt like someone had wrenched his heart out of where it used to be? He felt numb, on hearing those words. He couldn't imagine his life without her, not now, not ever. He hugged her even tighter.

I promise Ri, on you, the only intoxication I need in my life is you Ri. I promise you, I will never go that way ever again, why would I? I have you in my life, I need nothing else. But promise me, you will never leave me, I cannot live without you Ri, look at me Ri, you are my life, please' Omkara was crying like a baby.

Then promise me this, the day you feel like you need any drug, that you are even tiny bit sad, that you could succumb to something, you will tell me. And then together we will sort it out. Gauri pleaded
I promise Ri. I promise, I know I will never be lost when you are leading the way.'

Promise me this that the day you take anything, I will take it with you; we are together now, in everything'

I promise Ri, I will never take anything, never. You are the light at the end of this tunnel, there will never be any darkness again'

And, no more secrets between us?' She reprimanded him

I promise Ri, no more secrets, never'

And I promise you me, till the end, I will never leave your side, I will take care of you; I will never let you be sad, ever again. I love you' she vowed.

Her heart was breaking. For him. How could someone take so much pain, since childhood, he has suffered so much, silently? She kissed him on his forehead, whilst caressing his hair; his head was in her lap. She made him sit up, then kissed him on his forehead again where he was hurt, then kissed away his tears from his eyes, she kept kissing him, on the nose, on the lips, on the cheeks, on the neck, where he was hurt, on his hand, she opened his shirt and kissed his chest, on his heart, she kept moving down, kissing his pain away. He held her hair, moved her head back and took her lips in his.

The two souls spent the night soothing each other; they didn't know food, water, air, nothing. And no one came to disturb them. She was crying, he was crying, the sky was crying with them, that night it rained, washing away years of pain. For him.

END

So, guys, what do you think? I thought it was time for this.
Masti, mazaak will also come as usual but this is more Rikara angst, pain and passion...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Absolutely beautiful!!This is the Ri and Kara of our dreams.. intense, passionate , soulful and above all humans with their own share of flaws. Can't stop loving them:)..You have portrayed Rikara and their journey so far beautifully. Thank u!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is absolutely amazing. I love the way you write. Frankly speaking I don't care about the serial. I joined this forum only because I love these characters and wanted to create a world full time of them and you are doing that so wonderfully.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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His fear of losing her was so perfectly described..loved how she soothed him with her love..and their promise of not keeping any secret between each other...haaye..!! You penned down Omkara's past so beautifully..yeah..it's true there will be many occasions to celebrate..but before they start a new life they should know each and everything of their partner's past..
Edited by tasnimrodela - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was needed
Om had to disclose his past to her

Now Ri will be with him always and that is a good thing

They need to leave past behind before entering new life

I am gad you dealt with this issue now than later

Om actually tried to resist drugs, thats a good thing

totally awesome

loved it

continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ohhh!!!
so much emotional and beautiful update...👏

dark shadows of om's past came to ruin their love life

but Ri being a supportive and understanding wife, promise to stand with her husband in every suffer in their life of cause with the promise from Om to not getting in to the dark path again at any cost.

waiting for the Rikara engagement😃

pls update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Emotional and beautiful update
Loved it...❤️
U wrote it beautifully...😊
Waiting for next part...update soon...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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THANK YOU so much for addressing Om's addiction
He needed to tell her about his past, about the man he was before they met
Gauri is his biggest strength and she will be the reason for him to stay away from drugs forever
sadly he was beaten up and poor Gauri was scared to death
Om is her life
LOVED it dear
it was beautifully written
perfectly for RiKara👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank. you for giving th rikara of our dreams
Keep doing so😉
Edited by NESRIA - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW! You sure are adressing all the issues and that is what makes this story so beautiful. Loved the update-I am here for intense RiKara and you wrote it beautifully.
Looking forward to the wedding fun now! 😆

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