Woh Humsafar Tha - a RiKara SS (Ch 7: pg 23: 17.09)

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: crazyangel23
Nice Update. I really like the way you are shaping the story. This scene was lovely, I could totally visualize it happening. Loved the " abi bi current marti ho".
As much as I loved the character of omkara in the beginning of the series, I'm team gauri now. I cant tell you how much I love a strong female character and you are doing a wonderful job of portraying gauri.
I miss gauri on the show and with the way they seem to be ruining shivaay with a new wife- I think I'm just going to stick with the stories on this forum for a bit.
You can rant anytime about the butchering on the show. I definitely wont get bored with talking about IB.
Update whenever you can. I'll be waiting

thank you, Angel!

Glad you liked it and the whole dialogue and all. the static is still missed by us Rikarians. hope it makes a comeback.

I used to be an Omkara fan, like I still love him and all but DabanggRi is bae and I fell in love with her instantly, uparse that bulldozer scene! Just WOW!

thank you for the praise, I'm trying to do as much justice as I can to these two wonderful characters, as butchered as they are.

Shivaay has successfully managed to turn me off this show. I don't want to be reminded of everything he has done and work myself up, especially not when things seem to be looking up for Rikarians.

I'm working on the next chapter, will post as soon as complete!