Suraj.. Chakor, the chirpy bird's Placedo.. - Page 2

Originally posted by: maithu_

Oh dear!

We are the one who should thank you for these beautiful oeuvres!

And u got it!

Yep that is the word and the story with this title is something different!

No sp will be posted as the story will be posted directly!

And of course, we learn through eachother posts a lot and it's good to learn and I'm loving it!

Agree yaar!

All the 3 shades were portrayed beautifully.

Hope my story justifies the title! 😉

Originally posted by: Eatifi

Mere baazuon me aakar, tera dard chain paaye,
(Come into my arms and I am sure your all pain will go away)

Tere gesuon me chhupkar,,,
(By hiding in your long hairs )
Main jahaan ke gham bhulaa doon...

(I want to forget all the sorrows which the world has given me)
Teri zulf phir sawaaroon...
(I want to beautify your hair again)
Teri maang phir sajaa doon...
(I want to decorate parting of your hair with vermilion)

Sumi.🤗..another great post👏,just feel like soaking and drenching in this analysis,of one of the most beautiful and heartfelt Sukor scenes...

They are just each other quantom of solace,my "Baaghi Ishaqzaade"😳

She is with her,then he can single-handedly,fight the biggest battles of his life.👍🏼

And he is her ultimate,whenever she comes back accomplishing any mission

If said simply...

SHE IS HIS PALACE,AND HE IS HER HOME❤️

I remember,Nimmi di,in the very starting has said this-

Each one of us,can be compared to the four basic elements,that is fire,wind,earth and water...

Chakor is the fire actually,for whichSuraj is the wind❤️

(I took so long to comment,coz I wanted to read and read everything,and feel every word)😳

Keep.going Sumi👍🏼

Originally posted by: sumsukor

You made me complete with my favourite

Wow am wondering how you coin so aptly and beautifully

I always wait for yours as my wait is always worth.

Wish the sindoor soon adorn her...

Originally posted by: ndivyateja

Sumi,

That's a perfect ending to the episode..You started with Suraj, the rising sun..Then you moved on to Sukor's fight for each other..Now finished it off with Chakor, the bird reaching her safe abode..Its like a mini series with all the beautiful emotions perfectly written..😃

Your writings turned out my bed time stories these days..It gives me that pleasure if reading a good book..😳

P.S - Thanq for giving a new title to Maithu 😉 Another lovely story is on our way 😃