A poem by me

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Anjali Bhatt

@anjali83192

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Posted: 17 years ago

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My Poem:-

Aaj ka din hai bada nirala,

Aa raha hai hamara Rajat PRC wala,

Ayega wo tv par VEER bankar,

Hum chahte hain jise apna samajh kar,

Ji bharkar dekhenge sabhi apne Favourite actors,

Jinse milne ki khwaish rahti hai humein aksar,

Rajat-Mugdha sabhi aayenge humare ghar par(through tv),

Jinka Swagat karenge hum baahein phelakar,

DV chhoyega unchaiyon ko itni,

Ki kar dega hamari khushiyon ko dugni.

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khushi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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👏
amazing......you truly express the feelings of everyone.....are you professional or did it just come to your mind........newais.....whatever.......but its wonderful......i wish i could write like that......ab dv forum par talents bhi saamne aa rahe hain..... 👏
and thanxxx.

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@pollydolly

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Wonderfully written! 👏 Hats off to you!

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Anjali Bhatt

@anjali83192

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Posted: 17 years ago

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only two post 😭 😭
Kya pasand nahi aayi meri poem?

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Anjali Bhatt

@anjali83192

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Posted: 17 years ago

#5

Thank You! 😳
I was thinking of making more poems on DV but now i think i have to drop the idea as less people are liking my poem

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~SIMMI(BHAVNA)~

@Simmi-Bhavna

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Posted: 17 years ago

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wah wah wah! 👏 nice poem!

~SIMMI(BHAVNA)~

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