SurYa YuvAni KumSum FF - Ajeeb Dastan Hain Yeh - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 7

Rudra & Bhavya introduce themselves to Surya & Co. Ruvya joins their group. The trainer comes in. He said, "First of all, I want all of you to introduce yourselves. All the candidates introduce themselves. Now it is the turn of Surya's Group.

Sandhya: I am Sandhya Kothari. I want to join the police force to serve the country. I lost my parents when I was very small. They were being killed. I know that by taking revenge from them, I won't get back my parents but how many houses these thugs would have wrecked. At least, that can be stopped.

Suraj: I am Suraj Rathi. I want to join the police force because I want to serve the nation. I want to avenge the murder of my parents.

Suhani: I am Suhani Srivastava. I want to join the police force for serving the nation & self-defense. My dad himself is an IPS officer.

Yuvraj: I am Yuvraj Kothari & Sandhya's, brother. My reason is same as Sandhya's.

Bhavya: I am Bhavya Pratap Singh Rathore. I intend to serve the country & punish the ones who killed my parents in a bomb blast.

Rudra: I am Rudra Birla. I have a passion for bodybuilding & helping the society. I want to avenge the death of my family.

The trainer said, "All of you have given a good introduction."

He starts training the youth for the written exams.

All of them go through the rigorous training. Surya, Yuvani, & Ruvya clear the physical & written test. They all become IPS Officers.

After joining the police force, Ruvya learns that it is Salim's father who had caused the car bomb blast. Pratap Singh Rathore had adopted Bhavya as his daughter. All 6 of them have the same target.

Sandhya + Suraj: Salim has been studying in our college. He had tried to kill us at the college camp.

Yuvraj + Suhani: We are the witness for that.

They study all the files of the criminals & go to the Commissioner Pratap Singh Rathore to take up the challenge to punish Salim & his family.

Pratap: Before you take up this mission, you need to know they are very dangerous. They are not ordinary criminals. They are wanted criminals. They have a tie-up with the International terrorists. They live here but work for them. You guys have just joined this field. I can't put your lives at risk.

Sandhya: Sir, I know these people. They are the ones who killed my parents, made my brother dumb & molested me. So, I would like to punish them myself.

Suraj: They had burnt my house when I was young & had killed my parents. I live with my sister. Salim had tried to kill us at the college camp too.

Suhani + Rudra: As a friend, I want to support them.

Rudra continues: Even I lost my family because of them.

Pratap: Fine, I am impressed with your enthusiasm. My best wishes are with you.

All 6 of them take the constables with them & search for Salim.

Salim & Co see them & tries to escape but he is surrounded by the police. The police force begins to encounter. They keep fighting each other. Many people from both the sides get killed. Only Surya's team survive with Salim & his family.

Salim is shocked to see Sandhya in police uniform.

He said, "You have become a police officer."

Sandhya: Yes, I have taken up this task to punish the thugs like you. Your family has killed my parents & made my brother dumb. You have tarnished my image.

Salim: I am sorry, please forgive me.

Sandhya: You ask for forgiveness from the court. You did what you wanted to do & it is very easy to apologize but your apology is not going to get our parents back nor it is going to get back my dignity.

Yuvraj fights Salim's dad.

Salim's dad: Why you want to kill me? I tried to get you justice.

Yuvraj: Justice, my foot. In the name of justice, you have stuffed the coal into my mouth. I lost my original voice because of you. Your boy has disgraced my sister. Either you surrender yourself to the law or prepare for your death.

Sandhya beats up Salim black & blue. Bhavya & Suhani join her. Whereas Rudra joins Yuvraj. Both beat up Salim's father very badly.

Suraj shoots Salim's father. Rudra, Yuvraj & Suraj join the ladies against Salim.

Salim: I am sorry. Please forgive me.

Bhavya: You have to pay for your crimes. You have destroyed many families & abused many girls.

Suraj: Even during the college days, you have tried to kill us.

Sandhya takes out the chain & said, "This is the chance for you. If you play any tricks we will kill you like we did to your dad.

They capture Salim & bring him before Pratap & Pankaj. All of them go to the court.

Sumit & Kumkum had become advocates. But Kumkum is carrying. Sumit takes up the case.

He calls one by one at the witness box.

Sandhya: He is the killer of our parents & is a womanizer. He should be severely punished.

Suraj: He has also destroyed my family.

Bhavya: He is the one who caused a bomb blast to our car. My parents were inside the car.

College Trainer: He also cheated at the camp. He tried to kill Suraj & Sandhya.

Kashish: He threw the acid on one girl's face as she refused him to date him.

Sujal gets Chaturi to the court and told the girl, "Don't be afraid. Tell the truth at the court.

Chaturi: Salim is a criminal and a womanizer. He teases all the girls in the college. He proposed to me & asked for a date. When I refused, he threw the acid on my face.

Sujal: To the extent, I saw him, he is a loafer. I wasn't surprised when I heard these things from my ex-students.

Suraj: I have also lost my parents because of him & his gang.

Sumit: I was wondering how he was studying with them in the same college. He is senior to all of us.

The school principal comes to the court & said, "Salim has been a spoilt brat. He had framed many students in the cheating case. Their parents had to prove them innocent. Then we had to investigate the case. I had to re-examine the students for being unfair with them. He was caught copying in the board exams & had lost 3 years. He had also gone to jail but he is from a political background which had saved him.

After getting all the evidence, the judge said, "The court decides that Salim should be hanged till death.
They take Salim to the prison.
Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Part 8
This is the ending part. I request all of you to give detailed comments. Your fav scenes, fav couple & why you like them.

Pankaj & Lata come to the court with Pratap. He congratulates the team saying, "You guys have done a good job. You have freed the country from these terrorists.

Bhavya: Thank you for trusting us. If you had not given us a chance, it would not have been possible for us.

Sumit goes to his place to look after Kumkum. He invites everyone for the baby swarming.

Everyone goes there & give them gifts.

Sumit: Thanks for all the love that you have shown us.

After the ceremony, everyone leaves.

3 months later, Salim gets hanged. The entire country rejoices.

Kumkum delivers a boy baby. After a week, Sumit calls everyone for the naming ceremony. Devyani comes in. She said, "I am Sumit's grandmother.

Sujal: Thanks for saving my Kashish.

Devyani: I am happy for both of you.

Devyani names the child as Dhruv.

After the naming ceremony, everyone leaves. On the way,

Suraj to Sandhya: We have now made our careers as an IPS officer & completed our mission. It is time for us to settle down.

Sandhya: Yes, you are right.

Suraj: Will you marry me?

Sandhya: You had proposed to me at the college.

Suraj: Yes, I did but that was not the right time for us to marry & I had wronged you with respect to Sumit.

Sandhya: It happens. If I was in your place, even I would have reacted that way. But I have one condition.

Suraj: What is the condition. I agree to all your conditions.

Sandhya: You need to get the proposal to my place.

Suraj: Not a big deal.

He meets Pankaj & said, "I know that you have brought up Sandhya as your own daughter. We have loved each other since the college days. I am asking for your daughter's hand in marriage.

Pankaj + Lata: We are aware of your relationship with our daughter & we have full faith in you that you will keep her happy.

Yuvraj & Suhani come home & said, "We have also decided to get married.

Pankaj: Double celebration.

Rudra introduces Bhavya to his friends. One of the girls named Romi comes to him tries to kiss him. Bhavya leaves. Rudra feels the pinch. He said, "I am sorry, I don't love you.

Romi: Are you in love with someone else?

Rudra: Yes, I love Bhavya. I have never looked upon you in that way. You are my best companion but I cannot make you a companion for my entire life. Please forgive me.

Romi: It is ok. I have come to give you my wedding invitation card. Please come for my marriage.

Rudra: Sure.

He then goes to Bhavya to stop her.

Bhavya: I know you men are the same.

Rudra: I know that you love me. I have been proposing you since college days but you have been making excuses.

Bhavya: That is because I wanted to focus on becoming an IPS officer. If I had said yes at that time, it would have made me weak. I want my life-partner to be my strength. Not my weakness.

Rudra: Now that we have become IPS officer & succeeded in our mission, I think we can marry now. I love you a lot. Will you marry me?

Bhavya: You need to talk to Mr. Pratap Singh as he had brought me up as his daughter.

Rudra: Sure.

Both go to the commissioner.

Rudra: I have been loving Bhavya since college days. Even she loves me but she has been focusing on her mission.

Pratap: I know Bhavya very well. If she takes up one task, she won't rest or deviate till she completes it. I know that you have been very much co-operative. Bhavya cannot get a better partner than you.

Rudra kneels before Bhavya with the ring & asked, "Will you marry me?

Bhavya blushes. She said, "Yes.

Pratap: I know that you have lost your parents & were brought up in an orphanage. You have come up in a long way. But from now onwards, you are my son. You can stay with us after marrying Bhavya. We are staying in police quarters as such. I don't think it is a big deal.

Suddenly, it starts raining. Rudra & Bhavya go to the room for doing abdominal exercises. After sweating, Bhavya comes to Rudra. Both go out in the rain. The background song is

(Hulcul Hui Zara Shor Hua

Dil Chor Hua Teri Aor Hua) ... (2)

(Esi Chale Jab Hawa

Ishq Hua Hi Hua) ... (2)

(Hulcul Hui Zara Shor Hua

Dil Chor Hua Teri Aor Hua) ... (2)

(Esi Chale Jab Hawa

Ishq Hua Hi Hua) ... (2)

Ishq Hua Haaye

Ishq Hua Haayaaaeeein

Palko Se Hoton Tak Jo Rah Nikalti Hai

Gujare Na Wahan Se Yeh Teri Galti Hai

Palko Se Hoton Tak Jo Rah Nikalti Hai

Hooo

Rehte Hain Abb Hum Wahan

Ishq Hua Hi Hua

Hoo

Esi Chale Jab Hawa

Ishq Hua Hi Hua

Hulcul Hui Zara Shor Hua

Dil Chor Hua Teri Aor Hua

La Alal Ala A

Ishq Hua

Kadmo Ko Sambhale

Nazaro Ka Kya Karein

Nazro Ko Sambhale

To Dil Ka Kya Karein

Kadmo Ko Sambhale

Nazaro Ka Kya Karein

Dil Ko Sambhale Zubaan

Ishq Hua Hi Hua

Esi Chale Jab Hawa

Ishq Hua Hi Hua

(Hulcul Hui Zara Shor Hua

Dil Chor Hua Teri Aor Hua) ... (2)

Ishq Hua... (2)

Sujal & Kashish had gone out for the dinner. The background song is thoda sa pyar hua hain thoda hai baaki.

Yuvraj & Suhani light the lantern in the air. Both meet each other. The song is saawre saawre...

Sumit & Kumkum spend time with Dhruv. The song is lamhon se meeti guzarish...

Suraj & Sandhya go to Taj Mahal & take selfies. The song is tu Sooraj main Saanjh...

A week later, Suraj marries Sandhya

Yuvraj marries Suhani

Rudra marries Bhavya.

Romi marries Samir Kapoor.

They all live happily ever after.

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Lovely update dear
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wow nice updates loved all parts thank you for pm.
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Awesome updates!!
Loved them..beautiful pics..
Very well written..
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Edited by arshifansiri - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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good that u showed in fb what really happened to Kashish.surprised that here devyani is a NGO lady who saved Kashish.sad that again kashish tried to commit suicide thinking that sujal has moved on.but surprised that yuvani saved kashish n brought her to sujal.surprised to know that here too charu is there as kashish's sis.wish u had shown her too.loved SK dialogues.very romantic.liked kumkum not forgetting her ex hus n saying that she cant give her loving ex-hus' position to sumit,but his position will b unique.sumit is so understanding.loved sumit saying that he will fill her life with happiness again.Surprised to see ruvya as colleagues.thats good as bhavya is a cop on IB.i loved the edits
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Introduction scene was nice.shocking that like other team members Bhavya's parents were also killed by salim's family.surprised that u showed Bhavya as d adopted daughter of Pratap Singh Rathore.All of them became IPS officers.wow.fighting against salim n family was thrilling.u showed kumsum as advocates.wow.in the show Kumkum too Kumkum was an advocate.surprised that kumkum is preg.nice pics.surorised that suraj killed his dad .good that the victim girl too gave statement against salim n he was hanged to death.

Kumkum's godbharai was nice.surprised that devyani is sumit's grandmother.baby's name is Druv.wow.in Kumkum too Kumkum's son was Druv.Suraj proposing Sandhya was romantic.good to see suraj asking 4 her hand to suhani's family.Romi's marriage is fixed.Then y did she try to kiss Rudra.so cheap.good that rudra told her that he doesn't luv her.Ruvya's both proposal scenes were romantic n also rudra asking her foster dad 4 her was nice.Ruvya rain romance was sweet.loved d song.Loved ruvya in ur ff.SK dinner with thoda sa was romantic.perfect song 4 them.yuvani scene n song were romantic.Su-kk druv scene has kumkum title song.it made me nostalgic.Surya scene at taj mahal n title song was lovely.but I wish u had put pics 4 SK,kumsum,yvani n surya romantic song sequences.i missed their pics.Happy that all couples got married.surprised and happy that you chose samir as romi's bride groom.Nice ending.Nice pics.

My fav scenes-Suraj realizing Sandhya's innocence,proposal scenes of surya,ruvya,Sujal Kashish meeting n their scene in today's update.Fav couple is Sumit Kumkum as I am their fan.i love samir romi too though they had guest appearance as i am already their fan because of ssk.i liked ruvya n SK too in this FF.

Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm! awesome update! well written
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Amazing update...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks for adding sk yuvani surya pics wish I had added kumsum pic too

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