sorry was held up badly so now only read all the parts..
commin to all the characters..
firstly Mr john...hmmm u very well portrayed him as the devil man type..i though had a bad feeling dat he would harm geet..but it was maan who.wanted him to.test geet...
shilpa nd Yash...aww dey seems a cute couple..
but den a doubt why she tried commiting suicide..
or i missed some part were it is cleared..
payal...u after every updt say she is not bad...
but den her intentions are always bad.. first ditching maan..den making plan to kill him by geet ka hand..
nd staying mum in front of parents..
maan tho abhi bura bana hai..bcoz of wat.. betrayal..
so no.comparison ..but ha wat he did is also wrong..
i mean kiya payal ney nd geet is paying for her deed..
geet is naive here i liked her fighting spirit but now she has become all loyal love sick puppy.. I want to see her fight for her love nd also her dreams..whch she had bfore marraige to maan...
maan here is like one confused soul..seems like he has one more fight he have to go thru dat is his heart nd mind..nd am.sure heart is gonna win..whch is beating for geet..
nice plot..loving it..will b waiting to get pms for password of next i mean 15 th part..
Ishaani
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