Yakeen Ka Safar, Asfiya SS: Naya Safar (Chapter 1: Page 1) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unfazed by his words, "Wahan jo kuch bhi kaha gaya woh sirf aghaaz tha. Jab mein ghar ayi toh mera woh bhai jo mjhey apni guriya kehta tha meri shakal bhi dekhna nahi chahta tha.Woh insaan jiski ghairat sakoon ki neend soti rahi jab merey baap ney meri maa ko beydardi sey maar diya tha, mera gala daba dena chahta tha. Woh rishtey daar jo abbi key burey rawaiyey ki waja sey hum sey lataluq rehtey they bhabi sey humdardi karney lagey they. Par is sab sey abbi ka zameer jaag gaya tha. Unko ehsaas ho gaya tha key unkey gunahon ki saza unki beti ki ruswayi ki shakal mein mil rahi hai. Abbi key malaal ney unka gharoor tod diya tha. Woh shakhs jo apney paisey ki waja sey khud ko sab sey bartar samajhta tha, usney apni jayedad ka adhey sey ziyada hissa apni zindagi mein he apni beti key naam kar diya. Mje parhaya, doctor bnaya. Puri koshish ki key woh mje jitna pyaar dey saktey they apni ghaltiyon ka jitna azala kar saktey they kar lein." She stopped for a while as if living that again was taking a toll on her
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was really good. Please do continue.

YKS fandom. Talent ki dukan!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bhabhi ko toh mein waisey he kabhi nahi bhati thi. Jab abbi ney jayedad merey naam kardi tab toh mein unko kantein ki tarhan chubney lagi. Aik din abbi bhi mje chor kar chaley gaye. Duniya mein ab shayad mera koi sahara nai tha lekin chat thi. Par woh chat bhi mujh sey cheen li gai. Aik raat mujh par aik baar phir badkaari ka ilzaam laga kar mje merey he ghar sey nikaal diya gaya. Ghar key bahar bethey apni qismat par rotey hue mje khala ammi ka ehsaas hua. Ab bhi mera is duniya mein koi tha. Jo mujh sey bey los mohabbat karta tha. Meiney apna saman uthaya or us he waqt train sey Peshawar aa gai.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"Khala ammi ney aur Mohsin bhai ney bohat khuloos sey apni chat key neechey mje sahara diya. Lekin meri qismat mera peecha kaisey chor deti? Mohsin bhai ki biwi ko shaq honey laga key mein unkey liye khatra ban gai hoon. Mje who thikana bhi chorna para aur mein yahan aa gai. Ab is duniya mein mera koi apna nahi hai. Koi ghar nahi hai. Btaiyye, kya aap aisi larki sey koi rishta rakhna chahein gey jisey uskey apni khooni rishton ney apnaney sey inkaar kar diya ho. Kya aap aisi larki sey shadi karna chahein gey jis par zamana ungliya uthata ho? Jawab na deejiye ga. Himat nai hai mujh mein sun'ney ki.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Asfandyar spoke once he was sure she has said whatever she wanted to say, "I won't deny that I am hurt that you hold such a low opinion of me. But I understand. Aur eik baat tum bhi samajh lo, meri mohabbat itni kamzor nahi hai key zamaney ki tumharey barey raye sun kar kamzor par jaye. Mein ab bhi tum sey utni he mohabbat karta hoon aur tumhari utni he izzat karta hoon jitni pehley karta tha." After some thought he added, "Aur haan shadi toh mein sirf tumsey he karoon ga. Lekin I respect you too much to force you into anything. We will work on this. Jab tum ready ho gi hum tab he shadi karein gey. Aur meri family bhi tum sey shadi ki baat nahi kerey gi. That's a promise."

Zubiya was dumbfounded, what was this man? How could he not hate her like everybody else? She started, "But..," he cut her off, "No buts. It's too late, let me drop you home." Zubiya silently walked with him as he led the way. The car ride was silent too both of them in deep thoughts. Asfandyar thinking of his strategy and Zubia thinking about the change of events in such short time. The car stopped in front of the mess, Zubiya stepped out and said bye. Asfandyar held her hand and said, "Like I keep telling you, don't think about stupid things. Think about good things, maybe our future?" Zubiya just nodded her head unable fathom her luck as she walked towards the mess. Asfandyar called her from behind just when she was about to call the guard to open the gate, "Zubiya!" She turned towards him, "Jee?" He gave her a breathtaking smile and said, "I love you." She blushed a pretty pink and turned away. Both of them would sleep peacefully tonight, the sleep that they have craved for a very long time.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very good start ...good writing ... Can't wait to see where you take the story.
As Fanrya said above I am amazed by the creativity of the people in this forum.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a lovely story. Keep up the good work!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Awww! My reaction on reading this. Very interesting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow... what a beauitiful way to end the story.. Just the way , we all want it to end.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏fit yaar...
Waiting for the update

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