Ishq - EK Pratha (IKRS SS) chapter 11 updated on page 11

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Ishq -Ek Pratha - Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Viplav sat staring at horizon.River Ganga was flowing regally with people in the ghats taking ablutions and praying fervently .Viplav was evidently waiting for someone .

He could not help but smile at a kid who jumped into Ganges to have a swim.He had not thought that within a single day there could be so many emotions he had to go through!! Half a day earlier he would vouch he is the happiest man on earth!! His Love was reciprocated back to him.

Yes!! Dhani who he loved madly had finally accepted her love for him breaking all shackles around her!! Alas!! He had not got time to even to live the moment.

He had come home and announced about their love and intention of getting married.

His mother Kanak had made a ruckus about this and he kept his ground that his decision would never change.His GrandFather Dasharath Tripathi Mahant of Benaras was standing there without a word.

An hour later he was in his room about to call Tarini Ashram to talk to Dhani.

All seemed well. His mother was still against the marriage but h was sure she would come around.

But before he could call Dhani his grand father strode in with a grim face and blurted

"Viplav you cannot do this!! Mahants grandson cannot marry a widow!! This will cause ripple in Benaras. Its just not my position and status at stake here. People will go to any extent to stop this.We will be outcasted!! "

He held Viplavs shoulder tightly and shouted "there can be killings !! ". Saying this he sat down .Viplav was standing there speechless .Dashrath sat there for a minute waiting for Viplav to react but seeing no reaction he got up made Viplav sit next to him and explained him what all can happen once people come to know about this. Mahanth was equivalent to a king in Benaras . People looked up to him and doing something outrageous as marriage of a widow in his own family would never be allowed at any cost. Saying all this Dashrath left Viplav to come to terms with what he said.

It took a while for him to grasp what his grandfather had said.

Living most his life in Delhi a metropolitan city he was unaware of the nerves of Benaras. He had never thought there could be such grave consequences to marry the person he loved!!

He sat there don't know for how long not knowing how to react to this.

All of a sudden he got up and got out of the house . He needed fresh air badly . He ended up in the Ghat and sat there watching the river.

This was the place where he had first seen HER. And his life had changed completely. He had changed completely. No No.He could not lose her now . He could not imagine life without her.And he very well knew it would be same with her.They both had reached a stage where they could not go back !! It would be disastrous for both !!

His lawyer mind now started thinking the possibilities and solutions to each of the consequences his grandfather had explained about.

He was a lawyer and within a year of being in Benaras he had acquainted himself with Benaras legal community .Even cops and police commissioner was his friend ! He could certainly make sure no one dared harm his family.

But what about his grandfather??He would lose his position and status .How could he stop this!!

He couldnt get solution to this no matter how hard he thought .

His phone started ringing. It was one of his close friends Raj. Perfect timing !! Viplav was in need of his friend more than ever . He picked up the call and asked Raj to meet him immediately .Raj sensing the urgency came to meet him running .

Viplav led bare all his thoughts going on till now to Raj.Raj after listening patiently to viplav took a minute or two to reply. He then said something which Viplav had never thought of.

"Viplav you cant back off at any cost. If you do you are proving to the world that you did something wrong and if you cant handle this no one can ever dare!! Being a Mehants grandson you have the chance to change so many lives by setting example and not budging to society !! "

Viplav was seeing Raj amused about what he just said.

Raj was always involved in one or the other NGOs with his mother and realised this is what made him say that!!

Regardless Viplav wanted just that. A word of encouragement.

It would be a trial time now of their love and all he would need is his Dhani by his side !!


Now here he was waiting for his Dhani !!


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi All This is my first attempt at writing a story . 😉
Ever since i was watching KRS again from the beginning i was tempted tor write a story on what i thought was not handled upto the expectation as per the theme of the series.
Society at large was supposed to be one of the biggest hurdle in this story but it was never shown that way. So here is the story i wanted to see in my all time favorite series and favorite jodi.
Cannot reach the excellence of so many good authors like Dazz in this forum 😆
Specially language part .
Please let me know how is it.? 😳
Edited by AvaniVrinda - 7 years ago
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Avani, what a wonderful surprise! 🤗 The first chapter of your story has been exceptionally written. 👏 I loved your theme and how you've chosen to carry your story forward. ❤️ You're right; IKRS was based on a social message that was meant to bring about a revolution in society and the perspectives carried by many. It was meant to broaden the audience's outlook on widows, cultural norms, and oppression of the underprivileged. The opening scene was captivating with Viplav's outward display of despair of the tribulations ahead of him. True love must rise above the challenges drawn by society for their own greedy intentions. I'm also thrilled with how you've chosen to conclude the first chapter - Viplav determined to set an example by marrying his one true love. I also really liked Raj encouraging Viplav to stand up to the demons of society. Looking forward to you writing this story, Avani! 😃 You're an amazing writer and I know you'll do complete justice to this story. 👍🏼
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Thank you so so much Dazz. 🤗
So happy reading your comment and review .It means a lot 😳
I was hesitant not only about the story and writing also that it might not be that interesting anymore as most of us would not be connected to IKRS or Vidha after this long. I mean to actual story although we are very much connected with it otherwise like a community 😊
Thanks again Dazz 😳
Also have to mention your story is major influencer to me 😳
Any luck with your SS ??. Waiting for that too 😆 😳
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Originally posted by: AvaniVrinda

Thank you so so much Dazz. 🤗
So happy reading your comment and review .It means a lot 😳
I was hesitant not only about the story and writing also that it might not be that interesting anymore as most of us would not be connected to IKRS or Vidha after this long. I mean to actual story although we are very much connected with it otherwise like a community 😊
Thanks again Dazz 😳
Also have to mention your story is major influencer to me 😳
Any luck with your SS ??. Waiting for that too 😆 😳


We're all ViDha fans on this forum! 😃 You have nothing to worry about! 🤗 Watch the view count of your story and you'll understand how many silent members we have on this forum. 😆 I'm actually re-reading my own story to prepare for the next chapter. It's been so long that I need to reacquaint myself with my own style of writing. 😆 😆
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Ishq - Ek Pratha Chapter 2:

Dhaani was walking her way to the Ghat. Viplav her vakil babu had called her a while back . There was no usual chirpyness in his voice . He seemed to be worried too!!


Earlier that day she had finally accepted her love for Vakil babu. It was not at all easy for her. It was more than a week since Vakil babu had declared to the whole world and then later to her privately that he loved her to the moon and back !!

Dhaani although had realised that they had more than a mere friendship when they had stayed together for a while in Ghazipur she dared not think about that !! She just couldn't accept the fact!!

May be it was her status as a widow who was treated as an outcast or was it her humble background with not much education or was it her Mother the person who decided everything for her!! Or it was everything which was drastically different from HIM!!

So she kept denying adamant Vakil Babu but when she learnt he would go far away from her to some unknown distant part of the world she just couldn't fathom! So she ran to stop him forgetting everything . Only thing she knew then was she cannot bare to stay away from HIM.

Later She had reached Ashram and had informed her mother Dulari and all the ladies in Ashram were delighted about this although there was air of concern . Vakil babu was nothing less than a God to the ladies in white .

Dhani was waiting eagerly to hear news from Vakil babu about reaction from his family! She was sitting with basket of flowers to prepare garlands when she heard Ashram phone ringing. She ran to pick up the call assuming its His. But it was of Mahant Dashrath Tripathi.

"Child i need you to hear what i say carefully. I would be happiest to make you my daughter in law but the situation is making me say this. If you love Viplav truly deny this alliance.Else there will be grave consequences. I dread they might kill you and Viplav. You know how it is in Benaras . You yourself has faced this twice not once. I can arrange for you and your Ashram ladies to settle somewhere else . Please i beg of you to go away from here. It is your decision in the end. Please do think about it !

And the call was cut.

Dhani stood there transfixed for a while .Countless emotions going through her mind.

She ran to her room and let out a cry !! Why why why. She knew definitely that this would happen but she still dared to dream.The thought that she will be the cause of so many problems to her love and his family was unbearable. And killings !!Her body shivered thinking of it.

But the feeling that Viplav would be ready to face all this and not leave her at any cost made her sob again.


She had learnt to live in the true sense of the word due to HIM.She could talk , laugh , cry and fight with him without reservations which she could not with any other person in the whole world.

How to live without him , what else she can do, why why why always her !! Questions were thronging her head .

She had stayed in the room in a trance when she had got call from Vakil babu.The moment she heard his voice she knew one thing .Whatever happens from now on it would be his decision . It would be their decision together!


So here she was on her way to meet her Vakil babu.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Avani dear , I have to say Bravo 👏
Where were you hiding all this while??
What you have come up with is very interesting 👍🏼
Love the way your story starts off ...a very pivotal start & the continuation in
Chapter 2. Now I am even more curious to see how
you will take this forward after this conversation betn. Dhani & DT

Keep writing & don't ever feel discouraged. Like Dazz said, look at the views on your story
I am sure there are a lot of silent readers on the forum who are ViDha fans & would
enjoy reading fan fiction more than facts about just Mishal. So keep going..you are
really doing good. I will be really Looking forward to reading more.😛

Avani, I would consider this a special Diwali gift from you to all of us ViDha fans.
Thank You 🤗
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Originally posted by: Mishfan

Avani dear , I have to say Bravo👏

Where were you hiding all this while??
What you have come up with is very interesting👍🏼
Love the way your story starts off ...a very pivotal start & the continuation in
Chapter 2. Now I am even more curious to see how
you will take this forward after this conversation betn. Dhani & DT

Keep writing & don't ever feel discouraged. Like Dazz said, look at the views on your story
I am sure there are a lot of silent readers on the forum who are ViDha fans & would
enjoy reading fan fiction more than facts about just Mishal. So keep going..you are
really doing good. I will be really Looking forward to reading more.😛

Avani, I would consider this a special Diwali gift from you to all of us ViDha fans.
Thank You 🤗


Mish 🤗 Thank you so so much. You guys made my day 😳
I am so ecstatic after reading your review.
Awww i would be privileged if this can be considered as a Diwali gift from my side to you all lovely people:) Thanks a lot again for the encouragement . 🤗
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~



We're all ViDha fans on this forum!😃 You have nothing to worry about!🤗 Watch the view count of your story and you'll understand how many silent members we have on this forum.😆 I'm actually re-reading my own story to prepare for the next chapter. It's been so long that I need to reacquaint myself with my own style of writing.😆😆


Hahaha waiting waiting 😳 😉
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I thought you did exceptionally well with chapter one until I read chapter two! Superbly written, Avani! 👏 I agree with, Mish. Why were you hiding this talent of yours? 😊 I loved the thorough background you gave to Dhani's thoughts as she made her journey to her ultimate destination - her Vakil Babu. In a way, this chapter was metaphorical in the manner in which it was composed. Dhani setting out on foot to meet her Vakil Babu and the conclusion of the chapter being that everything now depends on their unanimous decision to take their relationship forward despite all the obstacles in their path. The most interesting portion of this chapter for me was Dashrat's phone call to Dhani asking her to relocate out of Benares away from his grandson. I'm eagerly looking forward to the conversation between Dhani and Viplav Baba in the next chapter! Please do post soon! ❤️

PS - Have you noticed your story has the highest views of all the posts from the last few days? 😉
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