Ishq - EK Pratha (IKRS SS) chapter 11 updated on page 11 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Omg !!!!!! How did I miss this out... Avani sorry for being a late latiff ... but anyway
What a nice sytory you are weaving dear. And yes ishq ka rang safed was all about the society n its vices but they deviated from the theme . In fact the original story n the writers had that in mind but the commercial aspect over shadowed.
In fact in the original story Kanak was supposed to have a almost incestuous (dont know if its the right word ) with dashrath tripathi . In flash back they were to show that when dt goes with his son's marraige proposal they she agrees for the money n dt .
Viplav was to fight entire banares for dhani ... Very intense .Some of it they showed .The stone pelting ,the trying to burn dhani scene. IKRS was full of such intense scenes.
But when they received a trp of 2 they became greedy n tweaked it ...

Anyway want to relive that magic thru your story .
Waiting...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AvaniVrinda


Zaj me too 😆 😉 . Hope you liked the story 😉

👏👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meenakshi-rg




Omg !!!!!! How did I miss this out... Avani sorry for being a late latiff ... but anyway
What a nice sytory you are weaving dear. And yes ishq ka rang safed was all about the society n its vices but they deviated from the theme . In fact the original story n the writers had that in mind but the commercial aspect over shadowed.
In fact in the original story Kanak was supposed to have a almost incestuous (dont know if its the right word ) with dashrath tripathi . In flash back they were to show that when dt goes with his son's marraige proposal they she agrees for the money n dt .
Viplav was to fight entire banares for dhani ... Very intense .Some of it they showed .The stone pelting ,the trying to burn dhani scene. IKRS was full of such intense scenes.
But when they received a trp of 2 they became greedy n tweaked it ...

Anyway want to relive that magic thru your story .
Waiting...


Thanks a lot Meenu 🤗
Really happy to read your review 😳
Really Sad that they didnt show what they had thought of earlier :(
ViDhas story would be much more intense!! The earlier promos had that intensity and affect !!
I am planning to bring out these aspects in coming chapters . Hopefully it will match upto you guys expectations 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Avani, my dear.😃...Yet another Wonderful chapter 👏.
It's simple, sweet & smooth flowing .
This 3rd chapter is such a reminder of the very sweet Viplav we all fell in love with❤️
As I was reading thru' I could visualize Vipu so well, uttering those words to Dhani.,
making her smile, the complete scenario. Just lovely 👍🏼


Avani I think you are doing an amazing job with this story & look forward to reading more.
I suggest you remove SS from your title...😛
I wish & want you to continue writing this for long...say until Mishal comes back with
another show & since we have no clue about it, be prepared ...😉 😆 😆

🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishfan

Avani, my dear.😃...Yet another Wonderful chapter👏.

It's simple, sweet & smooth flowing .
This 3rd chapter is such a reminder of the very sweet Viplav we all fell in love with❤️
As I was reading thru' I could visualize Vipu so well, uttering those words to Dhani.,
making her smile, the complete scenario. Just lovely👍🏼


Avani I think you are doing an amazing job with this story & look forward to reading more.
I suggest you remove SS from your title...😛
I wish & want you to continue writing this for long...say until Mishal comes back with
another show& since we have no clue about it, be prepared ...😉😆😆

🤗


OMG i got such a sweet comment before i went to bed 🤗
Thank you so much Mish 😳
Actually 3rd chapter i was not fully happy kinda a little doubtful as it looked a little fast paced than first two 🥱
So glad to know that toh liked it 😃

Hahaha my SS might end up to be a novel if i keep writing till Mishal cones back onscreen 😆 😆
But yeah i will try my best!! Big hugs 😊
Edited by AvaniVrinda - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Avani, chapter 3 was everything I had imagined it to be! 🤗 I loved the subtle romance you implied between our lovely leads. It made me reminisce of the good days when we were all witness to the magic they used to weave together on the daily for their audience. This chapter reflected the true essence of Viplav, Dhani, and their immortal love. I felt as if I was watching an episode of IKRS in my mind. 😉 Can't wait to read how Viplav and Dhani will fight the evils of society together all in the name of true unconditional love! ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Avani, chapter 3 was everything I had imagined it to be! 🤗I loved the subtle romance you implied between our lovely leads. It made me reminisce of the good days when we were all witness to the magic they used to weave together on the daily for their audience. This chapter reflected the true essence of Viplav, Dhani, and their immortal love. I felt as if I was watching an episode of IKRS in my mind.😉 Can't wait to read how Viplav and Dhani will fight the evils of society together all in the name of true unconditional love!❤️


Thank you so much Dazz 🤗
I was really apprehensive about this chapter 😕
About their interaction if it would match our ViDha their essence and their sparkle 😳
Very happy to know that you liked it 😳 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ishq - Ek Pratha Chapter 4:

Viplav and Dhani were seated under a tree in a corner of the Ghat. It was more than an hour they were talking and sharing their feelings. They had not got enough time to sit and talk after they had acknowledged their love for each other.

Earlier it was friends talking and sharing and fighting but now it was different. Their relationship had reached one more level. And situation too. Dhani was still apprehensive. She slowly with much persuasion of Viplav disclosed all her feelings her fears . Fear of hurting their family, Fear of reaction of the society, Fear of effect that would have in their relationship and above all wellbeing of them. Fear of grave consequences which she could not fathom!!

Viplav on the other hand was trying hard to calm her down with all possible solutions he could think of Its not like he was not apprehensive . It was not clear to him too to what extent this would go. But as always he managed to calm her down.

He managed to change the topic of their conversation and had drifted to random talks and their usual chatter about this and that.

Dhani all of a sudden got up realising that it was too late and she had come without informing anyone. Her mother would be furious !! "All because of you Vakil Babu!!. Maai will be so angry now

"What did i do !! Viplav retorted "Arey its ok i will drop you. You will be there in minutes. Now don't start complaining my Shikayati Pudiya " he chuckled.


Dhani got down from his jeep in front of her Ashram. Viplav too got down . Dhani turned to him when she was about to enter the Ashram. He swiftly held her hand in one hand and with other hand caressed her cheek and said "will call you in the night . Take care and don't worry about anything

Dhani smiled and entered her Ashram.


Viplav was heading home after dropping Dhani. There was something in mind bothering him since Dhani had mentioned him about his Grandfather calling her. How could his Grandfather do that? It doesn't seem right . When his Grandfather had discussed this with him why would he talk to Dhani? If required he should have talked to us together.

Anyway he had to talk to his grandfather about his decision of not to backdown.

He reached his home. He found his lovely grandmother working in the kitchen . His Grandmother his Princess was source of his strength since childhood. He would share everything with her. Even if he didn't she would somehow sense what he is going through!! She was truly happy about his and Dhani's relationship and had given her blessings when he had disclosed about his love for Dhani right after their Ghazipur stay. Viplav knew irrespective of who would be with him or not in his family his Princess would always be with him. He smiled at his GrandMother and asked "Where is Dadaji?" She answered "Your Dadaji is in his room studying. Anything urgent? She could sense he was a little thoughtful.

"Nothing Daadi He said and headed straight to his Grandfathers room.

"Daadaji i need to talk to you Viplav said entering the room

His Grandfather looked at him and asked him to come in and sit.

"Daadaji i have decided. I cannot and will not back off from this marriage. I love Dhani and cannot live without her. I don't care what the world thinks. But I do care about what my family thinks. What you think is important to me and you yourself have said that you don't have any issues with Dhani .We can manage if we try i am sure. You are Mahant of Benaras and people will listen to you . If we try we can change this meaningless custom forever. Its a chance for you too Dadaji. Please understand we can handle all of this if you stand your ground "saying this Viplav waited for his Grandfathers reaction.

His Grandfather after a minute or two sighed and said

"Let me discuss this with my other Mahants . Please give me sometime

Viplav headed out of his Grandfathers room. He hadn't questioned his grandfather about the call made to Dhani.

It was still troubling him. "Was his Grandfather actually fine with this marriage??


Dhani was in her room in the Ashram setting up things thinking about their conversation today. She had mentioned to Vakil Babu about his Grandfathers offer to leave Benaras.

How could she? It was his love for Vakil Babu .She could very well understand. But was it correct to hide this from Vakil Babu?


So here they were lost in their thoughts.


Edited by AvaniVrinda - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Everyone Story till now might be going a little slow paced . But this was necessary to bring out emotions of our ViDha 😊 It will pick up the pace in coming chapters. Hope you guys will enjoy this story 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow avani ... Get used to being complimented dear on every chapter.
But honestly ,how I loved that part where they sit alone n talk to each other after that confession. Just the two of them . Never happened in our show. Should have. There should have been an entire episode of just the two relishing their togetherness.That lift and twirl that viplav gave her is etched in my mind. But somehow you filled that gap. Felt good .
And that shikayat pudiya ... How I missed it . After marriage it just vanished. When he should have been using it more often. But the whole treatment changed.
Anyway wanna live those moments I missed out on thru your story. And till now you are doing fine.
Waiting ...

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