AsYa(KaBhi) TS 'Friendship : A Priceless Treasure' - Page 7

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Helllooo Di... 😊

Welcome back in a way...aapne bahut dinon baad update diya hai...😆

Khair coming directly to the update..

Di this was really a very nice and touching story on Friendship...

I liked the way how you played with the word FRIEND by removing a " I " , it really was thought full U see kyun the I here was Zoya who removed herself from this friendship and ended it on a wrong note i can say...

I liked the how U in a way portrayed her confusion regarding the end of this new book for which she needs to find her inspiration her Friend...

I really liked this part Di...

continue soonish...

# And yes special mention for this line...yeh bahut sahi hai...

One can't control the life but having control over desires is better somehow...

Thank you so much for welcome😊
And thanks a lot for lovely review...
yes you got it right about 'I'
continue?? complete toh ho gayi story

Originally posted by: Amin21khpul-wal

wow

after long time read such a wonderfully written story

really enjoyed reading it

thanks for such a beautiful ts and pm.

😊

Thanks a lot dear
I m glad you enjoyed it 😊

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Amazing...

Thats what I could say about this

You did a splendid job

Thank you so much Arpita 😊
I am glad you like it...

Mera reply kaha h :(

Such a heart warming and beautiful story.
Loved it so much.