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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Superb Vihu
She can do anything for Neil

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Awesome Os sis! 😃 Neil bhai talked so rudely! 😆 Liked that part when he assured her in such a sweet way! Continue writing more and thanks for pm.

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Shailja

@Kshailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Wow... Amazingly written...

If Neil's life is in danger due to Amol then I too agree that she should shoot him...

Pata nahi kaise it shaitan ho gya wo... Ekdum akal nahi h uss ladke mein...

And Neil is so so so good...

Now it's high time that Avni confess her love... But ab late ho gya...Neil knows Juhi is alive...pata nahi ab Kya krne wale h CVs... But kuchh achha hi hoga...

So vihuu you keep writing...

Your story is like fresh sunshine in the darkness...

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shikha

@shikhsk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Very well written.Thank you vihu for ur pm.Sry jus got time to read ur OS n it's brilliantly written n avni s mental state n Neil always dere for her is very well depicted

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Mehak Bhambri

@Mehakbhambri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Great yaar.. nice
Hope this happen in serial soon

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996203

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

vihu...u wrote an os!!?😲 aur upar se mujeh dedicate kiya?😭

i love you❤️

thankyou sooo much!!🤗

it was beautiful!

the whole thing prior to it and later...😭

loved how he assures her that he is with her...

reaction's on point..

yes she can ..agar baat neil ke baare mein ho toh...

thankyou vihu...

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__VIHU

@__VIHU

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: _SANJU
vihu...u wrote an os!!?😲 aur upar se mujeh dedicate kiya?😭
i love you❤️
thankyou sooo much!!🤗
it was beautiful!
the whole thing prior to it and later...😭
loved how he assures her that he is with her...
reaction's on point..
yes she can ..agar baat neil ke baare mein ho toh...
thankyou vihu...