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AVNEIL OS : MAIN HOON NA...
Hello guys..
This OS is basically how I want Avneil to see true colours of Chuza..
Sanju.. Meri jaan this is for you.. Waiting for mine..
Guys please bear my hindi English mixture in dialogues.. It was required..
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And chappal marne ho to please do that.. But please leave a review..
"Ali..." In the intense silence Neil screamed with his whole body. The scream tore through an equally shocked DD like a great shard of glass. It was a scream of hysteria, disbelief, bordering on terror that freezed the hearts of each person witnessing the scenario.
Ali was lying in the arms of Neil in a pool of blood. The thick red blood oozed between the cold white fingers of Neil as he clasped the bullet wound with his shaky hands to stop the free flowing surge of sticky blood.
"Sir.. Please.." DD squeezed Neil's arms and took him aside as the paramedics took over. Neil saw Ali being carried to the ambulance which disappeared in a whirl of blue light and blaring siren.
"Sir please control yourself. We need to handle Bhabhi too. And also find out the person behind all this" DD councelled Neil.
"It's not the time for investigation. I know who's behind all this. He'll have to pay for this" Neil slipped into the driving seat of his car and DD followed him.
Neil kicked the door down which made Amol jump in fright. Neil walked upto him.
"Kyon.." he asked holding Amol's collar and lifting him few inches up in the air.
"J..jeeju.. Aap ye..." he tried to maintain his drama.
"Kya lagta hai tujhe bewakoof hoon main? Tu mere ghar mein meri naak ke neeche games khelega aur mujhe kuch pata nahi chalega. Tujhe laga mujhe nahi pata chalega ki.. Wo pen drive kisne gayab ki thi? Woh hospital video footage kisne tamper ki? Wo phone kisne format kiya? Jail me Dayawanti Mehta ke visitors par bhi nazar nahi rakhoonga.. Ye tumne kaise socha Amol?" Neil asked almost shouting which scared Amol.
Neil loosened his grip and made him stand on his feet giving him last chance to accept his mistakes but Amol was too thick skinned.
"Jeeju aap ye kaise ilzaam laga rahein hain.. Main kuch nahi samajh paa raha hoon. Agar Ali bhai dhokebaaz nikle to iska matlab..." he said faking innocence.
Neil clutched his jaw in the tight grip of fingers.
"Not a word about Ali.. I am not here to applaud your concocted stories. I just want to listen the truth" he jerked away his face.
"Jeeju.." Amol was still stubborn and this tested Neil's patience.
"Main ek criminal se sirf ek baar pyaar se baat karta hoon" he glared him with pure anger radiating through his bloodshot eyes.
Amol got scared seeing the fireballs in his eyes. He decided to escape by pushing Neil.
Neil grabbed his hand ,bent it back to his chin and punched him in the stomach at the same time. He curled his finger in a tight fist and smashed it solidly on his jaw right below his eye. He fell on the ground groaning in pain.
DD tried to stop Neil but one angry glare from him made DD step back as he knew that explosion of Neil's anger is in progression, no reverse gear, no brake.
Neil didn't stopped there, he kicked him solidly in the midsection that knocked breathe out of him.
Before his unleashed fury trash him into pieces the thick skinned animal gave up.
"Please.. Stop.. I admit it" Amol said wincing in pain.
DD made him stand up.
"Kyon?" Neil repeated his very first question.
"Kyunki nafrat karta hoon main Avni se.. I hate her. I want to destroy her the worse way possible" Amol's words crashed out unchecked, unaltered.
Neil wasn't shocked but the image of a broken Avni in his mind racked his nerves. He doubted Amol from his very first actions but didn't interrogated him directly just because he can't see her breaking.
"Usne mujhe aur meri daadi ko barbaad kar diya. Mere man mein sirf nafrat hai.. Us ladki ki liye... Uski maa ke liye.
Isliye maine aur daadi ne use maarne ka plan kiya. Lekin daadi theek kehti hai...wo ladki rakshash ka beej hai, itna easily nahi maregi. Jeena chahti thi na woh. To use jeete ji maarne ke liye we tried to kill you. But unfortunately you survived" he admitted without a frown or a trace of remorse on his devilish face.
Neil was taken aback to see so much hatred in his heart for his own sister. A sister who forget herself for him.
He witnesses the worst killings of humanity on daily basis but this side of Amol tested him. It tested his faith in goodness of people and his natural optimism.
Now, he wasn't a husband investigating his wife's brother. Instead, he was the very epitome of authority and rage.
"Who else was involved in all this with you? And why the hell you dragged Ali in all this?" he inquired.
"Ali ki maut ki zimmedaar khud ko maankar pal pal maregi Avni. Hum use nahi maar paye.. Jeena chahti hain na woh.. To shauk se jiye tumhari maut ke baad ek zinda laash bankar" Amol started laughing, a cruel cold crackle.
Before Neil could comprehend his words he pointed a gun in the direction of Neil.
DD froze in panic.
"Tumhari maut Avni ko exactly waise zindagi degi.. Jaisi daadi chahti hain" Amol smirked cruelly.
A thunderous boom of the gunshot echoed in the air and within a second Amol hurled on the floor with a THUMP.
Neil saw Avni standing at the threshold holding the gun in her hands. There was a prolonged silence only to be broken by slow footsteps of Avni approaching Amol.
Neil and DD watched her in complete shock.
As the life fluid drained out of Amol, his skin took on the pallor of the corpse. The lifeless body lying in front of her ripped away a part of her, the part of her that was most loved. She staggered back at the sight of him.
The gun slipped out of her shaking hands and fell on his body. She crumpled to her knees not taking her eyes off of her pale hands, covered with scarlet blood.
Without wasting a second Neil picked Amol and rushed him to the hospital asking DD to take Avni home and be with her.
Neil was sitting in the hallway outside the OT. His mind replaying Avni's bloody hands and her traumatic condition, Ali lying in the pool of blood and Amol's hatred for Avni.
He could think of few words of consolation he would say to Avni if anything happened to Ali or Amol.
"Jin haatho mein kabhi gun nahi dekhna chahta tha main, aaj unhe khoon se range hue dekha hai. Please God.. Please.." Neil voiced out his thoughts closing his eyes and his sentence breaking many times in between.
A glossy sheen coated his bloodshot eyes. His hands open and close rhythmically.
He saw paramedics pulling miracles from thin air, he saw the emergency nurses with their quick hands and doctors giving their best.
"Good News officer! Ali is fully out of danger now" doctor informed Neil.
Neil sighed a relief.
"And Amol" he asked.
"He's still under observervation. But I can assure you his survival" the doctor said reassuringly.
Neil felt the tension released from his muscles and his heart felt quite light.
"You should go to Bhabhi now. I'll handle here" DD placed his hand on Neil's shoulder.
"How's she?" he blurted identically knowing well that she's not okay.
"She's not well. She needs you. So go home I'll keep you updated" DD replied.
Neil instantly ran from there but halted at a distance. He jogged back to DD and hugged him tightly.
DD was overwhelmed with the hug.
"Thank you.." Neil whispered.
DD smiled as he understood the deep meaning these words held.
He ran away patting DD's cheek.
"You're my world Neil sir.. Aur mujhe bhot khushi hoti hai jab aap mujhe ehsaas dilate ho ki aapki duniya ka ek important part hoon main." DD thought as he watched the retreating figure of Neil.
As Neil enered his room he found it to be absolutely dark...as expected.
He found Avni sitting behind the couch on floor hiding her face into her knees.
"Avni.." he said softly.
She lifted her head to see him.
"Neil tum... Tum theek ho na.. Tumhe... Tumhe kuch nahi hua na??" she mumbled caressing his face.
Her face was sunken and haunted and mind cold and empty.
"Huh.." he replied.
Suddenly she pushed him back.
"Tum.. Tum door chale jao mujhse... Avni.. Avni ke saath Neil.. Neil ko kuch ho jayega. Neil ko kuch nahi hona chahiye." she said sniffing. Her breath was uneven and hitched occasionally.
Neil held her and pulled her to his chest. She clinged to his body unmoving, unblinking, unthinking.
Everytime she remembered her loss it was another cut in her already damaged brain.
Realizing how foolish she had been, poisoned her spirit killing her other emotions until she was rendered with hollowness.
"Neil please mujhse door ho jao.. I m so unlucky. Tumhe kuch.." she mumbled.
"Shh" he sushed her.
"Baitho yahan" he made her sit on bed.
He softly cleared blood from her face and hands with a towel.
"Agar tum bologi nahi to main chala jaunga.." he said seeing a numb and unresponsive Avni.
"Amol ek baar keh deta.. Main khud uski zindagi se chali jaati. Lekin usne tumhe... Woh jaanta hai ki main tumhare bina main" she stopped for a second.
"Maine Ali ko Amol ke haatho kho diya... Aur Amol ko apne haatho se.. Shayad Ganpati ki yahi marzi thi... Shayad maine hi kuch aisa kiya tha ki unhone mujhe mere hi bhai ki kaatil bana diya.
Main Amol ko maarna nahi chahti thi... Par tumhe.." her breathe hitched due to the excruciating pain even thinking about him being shot brought to her.
"Avni... Ganpati aur tumhara pati na kabhi tumhare saath..na kabhi tumhare haatho kuch bura hone denge" he wiped her tears.
"Ali aur Amol dono out of danger hain.. Amol ko uski punishment jald milegi.. But not on an expense of you" he informed her.
"Please don't worry.. Main hoon na... I'll set everything and everyone" he added.
Avni felt the heaviness being released from her heart.
She hugged Neil tightly and cried hysterically.
He let her cry as sometimes tears are needed to wash off our eyes for a more clear vision.
"Hey calm down.. We need to go to meet Ali in the morning. So let's go to sleep now" he asked Avni.
Sleep was far fetched but Avni felt calm and safe hugging Neil and he stared her all night... His favourite time pass.
AUTHOR'S NOTE
so how many of you think Avni can shoot Amol?
Many of you might disagree but I seriously think she can specially if it comes to Neil.
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