With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141 - Page 50

wow!!! this was super amazing...light hearted and romantic at the same time...mujhe ab kiran aunty se koi problem nahi hai...wooohooo maan sings well...will the doctor make a comeback in the next part?? waiting eagerly to read the next part

Originally posted by: abazehere

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Great update. Difficult time for Dev Tara and Chandan.

Rasika Singhania eying Maan and his assets. So Maan's ex pari is her daughter. Rasika is going to create hangama in Maan and Geet's life.

"Little did she know that God protects the righteous and keeps them in his arms. No evil could get to them no matter what it tried.

Padhkar sukoon mila.

Sona and Dev had a past...daughter...???

Tum agar jao kabhi jao kahin

Waqt se kehna zara

Woh tehar jaaye Wahid

Woh Ghadi . . .Woh Ghadi wahi rahe

Geet ki feeling aur song ...nicely written.

Very interesting teaser.

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Indeed a beautiful
And Firstly I want to say Hatt Of Avi and I liked the way you say and warn other... I am so sorry If I ever hurt you with my comments
I love to see other couples with Maaneet...
In life there are so many couples no one and it's your story and you can write whatever you thought... I don't like the Person who complaint when Maaneet is not together and why you bring someone else... Etc Etc... I am cutting the long story short...
I love whatever you write
I am curious to know Teji and Shona story... What happen in the past so they have a daughter
Hmm great going and I feel bad for him...

I love the way you write the recognition part of Poonam when she heard her father voice
Poor girl suffered alot
Now we know who killed Poonam and that Daman just hate him so much...
Are they are after Dev and Chandan too... Poor guys hope their life will be better soon.
In my opinion they killed two birds with single stone... Will wait for next, what they will do now.

Now coming to Maaneet part it's beautiful written, Maan taking care of Geet and poor her she is in Dilemma...She is craving for love
And Kiran part is too Good...
"Don't talk to Maan, Geet" me saying, after all he tease her in front of his mother but Nakul Saves her...Ha Ha Ha

I am waiting for Rasika Entry and what will Maan do, as he was thinking to propose her in romantic way and here Pari and his Mother are coming...She planned dirty plan

Will wait for next part and it's awesome Avi
Love it so much

Take Care
Tons of Love ❤️

The story is getting more interesting day by day...Tara was sad knowing she was not there fr geet in need n happy that maan is rendering his help to cure Poonam. She know that dev won't be happy knowing the doc is Tej but she is helpless..She also decide to inform her father n do it in proper way...which is good.. I feel fr chandan...n Poonam..hope to see them happy soon..Tara assure dev that she will be his..in another part the devil rashika planing to trap maan due to her downfall using her useless daughter pair who is the reason fr their condition..now I think 4th couple is on the way... Dr.Tej seems to hv history with Dr.sonakshi..cant wait for their story to reveal... here geet is falling fr maan deeply..lovely tsr..can't wait for update..tq

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Originally posted by: dqno1

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wah kya pyar hein... raj and kiran are happy.. is kiran happy with geet as her daughter in law not sure.. she is a puzzle.. but maan seems happy
so tara now knows who is the doc 😆 worth the watch

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