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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice

Faye 🤗

For a Pluviophile like me... you had me at Baadal Barse


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As Gauri lives by the words ~

Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...It about learning to dance in the rain

For he is her Storm and her Rain !


Omkara is struck with the lightning truth ~

That he never wants to pass away by her like the very storm...
and that he is Falling hard for her like the very rain !

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Need I say more?? Yes I do, I like the way you treat the secondary characters of your write-ups... they are not randomly added for the sake of it. I haven't watched Ishqbaaz except for Omkara scenes, but your portrayal of Anika blends her so well with this scenario and provides the needed support to shape the plot.

Do I need to say more... Nah... I rather show...



Aye Yaar tere lafzon ki barishon ko samet liya isbaar...
Kal inhi mein khwabon ki kashtiyon ko bhejenge uspaar.

Worded the one above just for you Faye... Keep writing... Keep enchanting.


Till we meet again
Loads of ❤️ and 🤗
Sneha


As a pluviophile and a nyctophile myself, I can't even tell you what this climate is doing to me.

Its amazing how well you understand what the characters are going through and also manage to sum it up aptly without overusing words! And here I am, writing about 1k+ just to pen down one small thought.

Even I hate using characters as useless props (Gul loves doing it though!) this pic is SO pretty, the vivid colours standing out in the backdrop of the dark rains, reminding me that rain indeed does manage to wash away some of the pain, leaving space for brighter things.


This shaayari. I bleed shaayari, having learnt the beautiful language, urdu primarily for the sake of being able to read them in their purest form. I don't know how to let you know what this means for me.

Hope we keep meeting, Sneha. 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: FayeMia


Sach me! Rain and romance! Thank sushups for having this amazing dream and letting me write an OS on it!

Vaise yeh mausam paagal karne wala hai mujhe. Thank you, next part? What do you wanna read?

Bold@kuch sanskari meri sanskari behna😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: FayeMia



As a pluviophile and a nyctophile myself, I can't even tell you what this climate is doing to me.

Its amazing how well you understand what the characters are going through and also manage to sum it up aptly without overusing words! And here I am, writing about 1k+ just to pen down one small thought.

Even I hate using characters as useless props (Gul loves doing it though!) this pic is SO pretty, the vivid colours standing out in the backdrop of the dark rains, reminding me that rain indeed does manage to wash away some of the pain, leaving space for brighter things.


This shaayari. I bleed shaayari, having learnt the beautiful language, urdu primarily for the sake of being able to read them in their purest form. I don't know how to let you know what this means for me.

Hope we keep meeting, Sneha. 😳


@ BOLD -- You too 😲 * Camera zooms thrice with the needed Dhumtanana... Dhumtanana Sound FX... finally freezing at my happily astonished face* 😆

@ Blue -- 🤣 Only if my IF friends would read this... they call me essay ki dukaan for a reason 😆

@ Green -- Urdu is such a mellifluous language.

Agli peshkash aapke liye...

Main shayar to nahi...
Magar ae Faye...
Tuk lagane ki meri
Aadat gayi nahi

😆

@Red-- A few more lines to make up for the above lines 😉

Har jazbaat ko bayaan karen...
ye Zaroor to nahi;
Dost samajh lete hain
khamoshiyon ko yunhi.


Till we meet again
Loads of ❤️ and 🤗
Sneha

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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
superb os...loved itt
very well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Hi Faye di, 😊
Amazing update. 👏
AniRi scene was heart touching n so cute. 😳
And Rikara scene, ufff aag laga di baarish mein toh! 😉 So hot! ☺️
Okk I need to tell u something di, my 1st year honors final exam is starting from 25th of this month n will continue till the end of August. So I won't be able to visit the forums regularly, but will try to visit n comment but I can't give u a guarantee. So plzz keep sending me the pms n I'll read them as soon as I return. 😳
And if possible then plzz visit this link below n if u can then plzz help me plzz. 😔
Link:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/142913375
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice


@ BOLD -- You too 😲 * Camera zooms thrice with the needed Dhumtanana... Dhumtanana Sound FX... finally freezing at my happily astonished face* 😆

@ Blue -- 🤣 Only if my IF friends would read this... they call me essay ki dukaan for a reason 😆

@ Green -- Urdu is such a mellifluous language.

Agli peshkash aapke liye...

Main shayar to nahi...
Magar ae Faye...
Tuk lagane ki meri
Aadat gayi nahi

😆

@Red-- A few more lines to make up for the above lines 😉

Har jazbaat ko bayaan karen...
ye Zaroor to nahi;
Dost samajh lete hain
khamoshiyon ko yunhi.


Till we meet again
Loads of ❤️ and 🤗
Sneha


Your dramatic effects are on point!
I'm glad to know you. Hope you keep commenting away like this with beautiful shaayari that makes my heart go bump.

And ye tuk nahi, bohot pyaari shaayari hai. Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

superb os...loved itt
very well written


Thank you! What do I call you?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Priyanka-

awesome dear
thanks for pm...

You're always welcome dear!

Thank you for the support.


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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Faye di, 😊
Amazing update. 👏
AniRi scene was heart touching n so cute. 😳
And Rikara scene, ufff aag laga di baarish mein toh! 😉 So hot! ☺️
Okk I need to tell u something di, my 1st year honors final exam is starting from 25th of this month n will continue till the end of August. So I won't be able to visit the forums regularly, but will try to visit n comment but I can't give u a guarantee. So plzz keep sending me the pms n I'll read them as soon as I return. 😳
And if possible then plzz visit this link below n if u can then plzz help me plzz. 😔
Link:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/142913375
With love,
Aheli.


Hi Aheli! AniRi bonding is just beautiful and it is something I wanna explore more. Infact I wish the show would go more into it.
Thank you for liking the scene. I replied to your post.
Study hard, will wait for you.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
This is just awesome so romantic
I am so happy to have found ur works
Thanks a tonnn for sending the links

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