AvNiel: Sepration, Love, Life [Ch 1.25 Page 7] 20/11/2017 - Page 3

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Chapter 1.1: Jiye Toh Jiye Kasie

NEIL'S POV


Avni why did you leave me. I would have made things right. We could lived alone away from all my mother. Why did you just leave. You forgot all time we spent together you said
you loved me we spend so many nights together why did you leave. Did you not even realise my mother was waiting for this she has been behind me to get married to Riya but I can't give her your place in my life JAAN.

People say you died in the car accident but I know you are alive I am your JAAN I AM YOUR JAAN I CAN STILL FEEL YOU. Please come back JAAN. YOUR JAAN IS DEING EVERY SECOND FROM INSIDE IT SHOULDN'T I DIE WITHOUT SEEING YOU

You have made a straightforward DCP into a DEVDAS LOVER please come back. TODAY ALSO YOU JAAN IS ONLY YOURS. You are mine AVNI NEIL KHANNA only mine.

Neil. Prakash says

Dad. I say

Tillu you are drunk again. Bebe says

Bebe what should I do other then that. I say

Marry again and be happy. Shweta says

What this lady doing in my house. I say

I am your mother. Shweta says

Dad get your wife out of here now before I insult her. I say

Madam Mortarma go from here. Bebe says

This all because of that illegitimate Avni my Tillu has gone away from me. Shweta says

You yourself have every happiness of your Tillu. You have relentlessly killed your Tillu. I says

Bhai please stop drinking so much you know Bhabhi would have never liked it. Kareena says

4 years Kareena why hasn't she returned back. I say

Bhai... Kareena says

No Riya and that lady are the reason. I say

Tillu beta why are punishing yourself. Bebe says

Who else I should. My misfortune who is gone away from me is my life and the culprit is one who gave me life. I say

Bhai this ring. Kareena says

Kareena. Maddy says

Kareena, this my Jaan gave me. I say

Avni gave you. You also gave her something. Bebe says smiling at Kareena

Yes I have seen a similar ring in on Bhabhi's finger. Kareena says

I had proposed her with it that day was different. I didn't know not only but she also was going to propose me. That was the best and most special day of my life. I say

In Neil apartment)

Wifey what are you doing. Neil ask

Neil Self Talk] Today I will say what's in my heart. She says yes or no I will always say yes I will always stand by her. This Neil Khanna is only yours. Your are life. Jaan look at me once.

Something has come for you it's lieing on the table. See it.. Avni says

Did you see it Wifey. Neil says

Why should I see it's for you you see. Avni says

Avni Self talk] I have done for you dear hubby. I can't give it you myself. I wouldn't be able to take you rejection. You are my first and last love

Wifey... Neil says

I will change and come. Avni says

Neil see the paper

My dearest Hubby

Mein

Neil Self talk] Frist time she has accepted I am her HUBBY, romantic and all. My wifey my jaan just come out of the bathroom once. I will tell you what I have hidden my heart for so long.

Avni Self Talk]Till now he would have read the whole thing. Avni get ready to face the truth. (She come out see ring box still lieing in same place) Get ready for rejection. Shweta Aunty was right her son she would know today also he love Juhi, learn to live with his memories. Come on start packing and go to New York. There nothing left for you here. Nither Amol nor Neil. You were living in this dream Amol has changed. Then Neil loves you
You would tell yourself MERA NEIL is with with me with now your this misconception will also break. Neil was never yours he today also loves Juhi. Now hear it from his mouth then you will believe it. Now you hear hear that to.

Wifey what is written on that paper. Say it once. Neil says hugging from behind

Avni Self Talk] My confession which you rejected brutally. But for the last time I can hug you you are still my husband.

Avni turns around in his arms and hugs him tightly

Avni self talk] He looks so happy but he not wearing the ring for him. It's lying there he didn't wear it

Wifey I have read but once I hear then only I will be able to believe it... Neil says

Hubby... Avni says

Say again. Neil says

Hubby. Avni says clutching her hand to side

Wifey once more... Neil says

I will just come. Avni says

Neil Self Talk] it's now or never If she leaves she never come back.

Neil holds her hand turns her to face him

Neil... Avni says

Avni When we got married it was a compromise for you but from since then only I have loved. Either even before that. I don't know from when but now I can't think of living without you. Neil says

Neil is sitting on his knees. He makes Avni wear the ring.

Avni Self talk] Stop dreaming. Juhi is alive, she love him and Neil loves her.

Avni doesn't say anything no expression at all. Neil doesn't know she is happy sad surprised shocked

Juhi...Avni says

Neil Self Talk] JUHI I know since this Juhi had come back she been between us. How ever I try to make you understand that she is my past after Wifey you came there no place for her. I know you don't understand all this. I wish you had a boyfriend in the past then it would have been simple. Juhi is my collage time love or infatuation I don't know but she is my past

Juhi is my past, now it is just you are my Wifey. Neil says walking towards the window.

Avni goes from the back hugs him

Neil. Avni says realizing he didn't read the whole confession she had give.

Wifey... Neil says

Mr ACP you are seriously a fool. You always read everything till the last note. Mr ACP but but you read this half. Avni say

What's is. Neil says

Confession. Avni says

Means. Neil says

Means Mr ACP... Avni says

Avni hugs him both their eyes met. Her eyes immediately travel down to his lips she takes the opportunity and peck on them. Then she shy away hiding her face in his chest.

Wifey what kind of kiss was this. I am your Hubby at least kiss properly. Neil says

Neil kiss her back while extending one hand towards the table to pick the paper. He notices a ring which exactly similar to the one he gave her (basically the male version of it). In shock he stops kissing her. His eyes go to paper her love letter again he doesn't read the whole but in capitals

I LOVE YOU ACP NEIL KHANNA MY DEAREST HUBBY

Wifey this is your... Neil says

She kisses him again her arm tighten around her neck she bits his lower lip for entry which is granted without a due. Their tongues fight for dominance Neil let's her win. After a few minutes they are breath less. Neil connects their foreheads

Wifey this is your love confession. (She hides into his chest) Baby say it once I want hear it once. After that this Neil Khan body soul heart is only yours Mrs Avni Neil Khanna. Neil says

I love you Neil. Avni says

He hugs tightly. She kisses him again.

Jaan I love you. Neil says

I love you too Hubby. Avni says

Tillu beta you only when there was proof to support the claim. It been three years still you believe Avni is a live. Prakash says

Tillu you yourself said Avni was in that car. Bebe says

That Kareena and Riya also were there too. I say

Dhik hai Bhai, Riya aur mein the uss gadi mein magar mujhe toh beech mein udar diya tha. Kareena says

See Bebe she had a doubt that Amol has done something that why she didn't let me go and she got Kareena also down in between. That is my Jaan. And you never ready to understand her you were holding her responsible for such a small thing in which she had no control. I say

Neil that all that is fine but Avni was in that car so... Maddy says

Don't says anything more Bua my Avni is a life. I say

Bhai... Kareena says

Kareena, 4 girls. One out them is still in hospital. Other three were hard to recognise. I say

that's no proof that Avni is alive it's going to be four year see you own state think about us all. You call me Ma think about me. Neela says

Maa my Avni is alive. You see this ring did we find it from any of three. You know my wifey never took out her mangalsutra. Jaan would say... I say with tears

Neela looks at DD. DD nods

Tillu But... Bebe says

Bebe I met her before that day she wasn't wearing what those three were wearing. Kareena and DD also know this. I say

Both of them nod.

Why didn't you two say anything. Bebe says

Bebe I thought Bebe will come in some time when she didn't return I also thought, Kareena says

Bebe let it be she a kid being a mother I believed Avni is dead she... Neela says

Neelaji don't blame yourself we all believed it. Maddy says

Maddy Self Talk] Surely Avni would have returned, she couldn't live without our Neil Magar agar. Something would have happened. Surely Bhabhi would have done something

If Avni is life why didn't she return for so many years. Bebe asks

You are asking this Bebe. Prakash says

Sunny. Bebe says

She did so much for Neil she forgot herself also and what Shweta did. Shweta couldn't see the reality. Tillu even left the house. He didn't do anything wrong choosing his biggest happiness over his family. Prakash says

Sunny you knew everything. Bebe says

Bebe not only Bhai but Kareena and I also knew. Maddy says

She was so hurt with Shweta talks. That left her everything and went Don't where and who she will be. What have I done. Bebe says

Bebe you took four years to understand this. Jaan left me for a lifetime. And that lady. I hate her. I say

I trust God it will surely send Avni back soon. Bebe says

Where did Maa go. I ask

Bhai don't worry Neela Aunty will come. Kareena says

RIYA'S POV

Hetal you here. Neela says

Riya you came go take care of Neil. Shweta says

Riya what are you doing here I told you to remain away from my Tillu. Bebe say

Bebe that. I say

Bebe, but she is the only one who can take care our Tillu and can him forget that illegitimate Avni there is no one better then Riya. My Tillu ... Shweta says

My Tillu...Your Tillu died 4 years back MRS SHWETA KHANNA. Neil says

Shweta Anuty if any body can take care of Neil is Avni it been four years you haven't still realised. You were scared of loosing your son but you lost that day when you insulted for second time so she fall in Bebe's eyes by getting out the fact that illegitimate. I say

You keep quiet. Shweta says

Why truth is hurting you. It possible you now understand to Avni that her life comes into danger again because of her so she how hurt she would be. There was no mistake of hers that Amol for who she took torture from Dadi in childhood he would use her). I say

You realized this all so fast. Kareena says

Kareena I realized a while ago I told Aunty. Why Anuty I told you. Looks like you didn't tell anyone. Riya says

You keep quiet. Shweta says

Neela Tai please forgive me. Riya says

You have gone mad. Everything done will be spoiled. Shweta says

Riya speck there no difference in your Dadi and Shweta narrow thinking. Hetal says

You are you daughter's... Shweta says

Don't teach me a duty of being a mother you have spoiled own son life. Hetal says

Hetal. Neela says shocked

Neil I know you don't want to talk or listen to me or even see my face but this very important for me tell you. (Looking at Shweta) I thought Aunty would have told you this till now Avni is alive I don't know where she is but she is alive

You knew this for four years why didn't you tell anyone except for Shweta. Prakash says with tears

But how. Neil asks

That day Neil we were stopped on a check post and we were told to get down. That they can check the taxi. So we got down she was busy on her phone I thought she was talking to you. I got a call from Amol he asked where we were so I told him. A little while latter she said she met some friend of her and she is going with her. After she left Amol came and I came back with him. I say

Check post but there on that route there is no check post. Pankaj says

NEIL'S POV

Dad at times with order check posts can be put up. DD that day there was some VIP movement recorded. Neil says

No Sirji. DG sir had ordered I don't know the reason he was requested by the commissioner Sahaab on immediate effect. DD says

Who is the commissioner. Neela asks

Maa.. Neil says

Answer Neil.. It's for Avni. She my daughter. Neela says

Yashashwat Deshmukh. DD says

Who is the DG. Neela asks

Pratap Deshmukh. He is commissioner sahaab's taiya (father's elder brother) also DD say

Maa who are you calling. I ask

Your DG who else. Neela says

Bhaisahab. Neela say

Avni. Neela says

You both again had argument again. Pratap says

Argument.. means Avni is alive. Neela says

Oh so after that accident Avni didn't return to you. Pratap say

No bhaisahab. Do you know where she. Neela says

No but don't worry once chote comes from his mission I will ask him. Right now Sammy nor Veer , or Chote neither Pappu are here. One out those four would know. Chote will know very well. Pratap says

Ji Bhiasahab. Neela says

Maa, Maa Jaan zinda hai. My Jaan is alive. Bebe you heard Jaan zinda..Dad see Jaan is alive. I say

Ali Self talk] Finally he is back now soon or later he will realise Vidyut and Dayawanti are involved. That's the reason Avni

Ravi Kaka, is a doctor. Yash's dad. He saved Avni that time and then taiji and Avni left from here they returned after 15 years. Riya says

Neela beta you are sure that Yash would know where Avni bahu is. Bebe says

Bebe. Shweta says

Bebe Bebe what when I can accept you Avni is 100 times better. Bebe says

Everyone smiles

Maa what are thinking. I ask

But why did Bhabhi not contact anyone in all these years. Kareena asks

Why would she after what Shweta did. Bebe says

I will call Sam he is the last hope we have sh shall know about Avni. (Phone rings) Hello Sammy. Neela says

Neela everything is fine. Sameer asks

That Avni... accident... Neela says

Neela what happened are you talking about four years old incident. Sameer says

Sammy since then I was thinking Avni died but Riya just confessed Avni had left from there before Riya. But for four years there is no information about her. Neela says

Neela clam down Avni had come here with Chote for about 10 - 15 days she stayed here with me but after she left with Chote. I don't know but once Yash returns from his mission I will ask then I will tell you. Sameer says

That mean she came to Delhi with Yash. Neela says

Ya you don't worry where ever she is she will be fine. Sameer says

Ji inspector Sahaab I know you will figure it out. Neela says

oh you both mother daughter anyways now I am DG in Delhi. Sameer says

If you get permission from your nephew do tell me Sammy. Another thing brother called you before me. Neela says

Neela. Sameer says

Lie that also about Chasni that also to me I know you both well. You your that daughter and favourite Yash of both you. Neela says

Maa what was this. I say

Childhood friendship. Neela says

But how do you know they are lieing. Bebe says

Bebe they all are involved in this from day one. Brother even Sammy I tell them Avni is missing for last 4 year they so calm. They who would search whole of Delhi if Avni came half in hour late from school. Yash's secret mission not today's creation it was very 'Mission Rani'. Neela says

Rani. Matlab Yash knows everything. Ali says

Any one else who would know. Prakash asks

Prakash self talk] my daughter our Avni is alive.

Ji Prakashji. Neela says

My brother his sons specially Monu will know. Neela says

Who is he anyways. Maddy says

Raghuvidra Singh Shah. Neela says

He is...Prakash says

Ji Prakash he is youngest business men in the country he operates out of USA. Neela says

Hello Neela Bua. Raghu says

Neela Self Talk] Neela Bua confused no Choti Bua nor Choti Bua Maa neither Buamaa.

Monu do you know where Sona is. Neela says

I had met her four years back. Raghu says

tell me truth Neela says

She had come here with me for some time. Raghu says

You swear on Sona... Neela says

I have work. Raghu says

Neela Self Talk] Work here we are talking about his Sona work what could have happened. Daughter would be fine. Might be that why Bhaisahab and Sammy didn't tell anything but I will have find out. Daughter you are fine are we doing expecting wrong.

Maa what happened what are you thinking. I ask

Amol. Neela says

Tum What are doing here. I say

Finally Riya confessed. Di is alive it took you 4 years if you would have done it before she might have here with us. Amol says

Neil starts bashing Amol

Amol, you, your this sister, Dayawanti Metha aur Shweta Khanna. You all are responsible for this all My Jaan after being alive is so far from me I don't even know where she is. I say

I have been trying... to contact Di... at time it rings... phone rings but mostly it switched off... Amol says

Neil stop at least listen to what he is saying. Neela says

Maa him... I say

Tillu he is a kid who got influenced by his Dadi's talks for sure but he is one who got proof against her and made her put behind bars again. Pankaj says

Bhai what ever you say excepting you if anyone believed Bhabhi was alive is Amol. You also he again again stopped everyone from doing any sharaad or even even any other customs. DD says

Amol what were you saying. Bebe says

Bebe that I tried contacting Di. Not once by everyday from that day Once she picked it but then cut it without talking. Amol says

Kareena calls.

She not picking up. Kareena says

Everyone tries calling Avni sadly she doesn't pickup.

Neil you call. Neela says


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