AvNiel: Sepration, Love, Life [Ch 1.25 Page 7] 20/11/2017 - Page 4

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Veer Jaan tera pita hai. Mein Jaanu ke bare main kuch nahi sunugi. Tu MERI TILLU KA BILLU samjha. Avni say


(Veer, Jaan is your father. I not hearing any thing against Jaan. You are MY TILLU'S BILLU)


Nahi mein sarif aapka beta hoon. I say


(No I am your son only)


Agar tu Jaan ka batcha nahi toh mera bhi nahi. Avni says


(If your not Jaanu's son then not even mine)


Maa. I say


Udayveer bas. Jaan tera Dad bas usse ke bareme aase baat mat kar. Voh mera husband bhi hai main tujhe usska apman nahi karne dugi. Voh Tera Dad hai samjha Mein usse pyaar karti hoon aur humesha karti rahugi. tu uske beta bilkul uski parchaey hai. Tu TILLU KA BILLU. Avni says


(Udayveer enough. Jaan is your father stop talking about him like that he is my husband I am not going to listen to you disrespect your Dad you understand. I love him I will always love him. You are his son you are absolutely his shadow. You are Tillu is Billu.)


Mein usse ki tarah nahi ussene aapko chore diya. I say


(I not like him, he left you alone.)


Chinno yeh kya bakwas kar raha. Avni says


(Chinno what rubbish is he talking)


Veer batcha Neil ne nahi chora Chinni ko. Usse ki mom ne force kiya tha Chinni ko ko usko chor ne ko aur agar voh jaanta toh voh isske saath khada hota aur issko aapne aap se door nahi hoon deta. Teri Mom nahi voh aapni Maa aur isske bichme choone. Bilkul Ayesha Maasi ki tarah. Tujhe Neil ke barame aase nahi baat nahi karni chaheye. Usseki ki koi galti nahi hai. Jitna Mein usse jaanti hoon voh tujhe bhi aapna lega just for your Mom's happiness. Usse fark bhi nahi parega tu ladeka hai ki ladki. Sid says


(Veer son Neil didn't leave your mom, his mom forced Chinni to leave him if he knew about it he would have stood up for her and kept her with him. You mom didn't want him to choose between his mom and her. Just like Ayesha Maasi. You should not talk about Neil like that. It's not him to blame beta it's his mother. As much as I know him he will willingly except you without even meeting you. Just for your mom happiness he will not care about you girl or a boy.)


Sid dhik kheh raha hai Uday. Neil teri Maa se bhute pyar karta hai voh toh aapni jaan bhi de te isske bin kis gham. Yash says


(Sid is right Veer. Neil love your mom more his own life he would have given his life for her without regret.)


Sorry Maa. Magar Dad bekhoof hai unhe 4 saal lage yeh pata lagane mein aap zinda hoo. I say


(But Dad is stupid for sure it took him 4 years to figure out you are alive.)


Uday srif Tera Dad jisse iss baat jaana aur vishvaash karna tha kyuki usse kabhi iss baat par yakin kiya hi ki Rani maar chuki hai. Duniya aur unbelievable Neela Aunty. Angee says


(Veer it not only your Dad who had know and believe this because if it was only him he some how never believed Rani was dead. It the world and unbelievably Neela Anuty also)

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Chapter 1.25: Tumse Payar Kitana

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UDAYVEER'S POV

Why is this phone ringing. It never rings. What's wrong. Is Naano fine. Should I pick it up. Where is Maa. Mamu is also not here even Mishu Mami is not here nor is Maasi. What should I do.

Maa aapka phone is ringing like crazy. I say

(Maa your phone is ringing like crazy)

Billu kya phone. Avni asks

(Billu what phone)

India wala. I say

(India one)

Kya... Avni says

(What)

Sab dhik hai na. I ask

(Is everything fine)

Tere Maa zinda hai woh hua hai. Angee says

(Your mom is a life that's what is wrong.)

Unhe nahi pata tha. I ask

(They didn't know)

Magar kasie. Avni asks

(But how)

Maa aapka pati toh cop hai na oh aap toh bolti hai voh super cop hai. I say

(Mom isn't your husband a cop oh you say is a supercop he seems to be a fool.)

Veer Jaan tera pita hai. Mein Jaanu ke bare main kuch nahi sunugi. Tu MERI TILLU KA BILLU samjha. Avni say

(Veer, Jaan is your father. I not hearing any thing against Jaan. You are MY TILLU'S BILLU)

Nahi mein sarif aapka beta hoon. I say

(No I am your son only)

Agar tu Jaan ka batcha nahi toh mera bhi nahi. Avni says

(If your not Jaanu's son then not even mine)

Maa. I say

Udayveer bas. Jaan tera Dad bas usse ke bareme aase baat mat kar. Voh mera husband bhi hai main tujhe usska apman nahi karne dugi. Voh Tera Dad hai samjha Mein usse pyaar karti hoon aur humesha karti rahugi. tu uske beta bilkul uski parchaey hai. Tu TILLU KA BILLU. Avni says

(Udayveer enough. Jaan is your father stop talking about him like that he is my husband I am not going to listen to you disrespect your Dad you understand. I love him I will always love him. You are his son you are absolutely his shadow. You are Tillu is Billu.)

Mein usse ki tarah nahi ussene aapko chore diya. I say

(I not like him, he left you alone.)

Chinno yeh kya bakwas kar raha. Avni says

(Chinno what rubbish is he talking)

Veer batcha Neil ne nahi chora Chinni ko. Usse ki mom ne force kiya tha Chinni ko ko usko chor ne ko aur agar voh jaanta toh voh isske saath khada hota aur issko aapne aap se door nahi hoon deta. Teri Mom nahi voh aapni Maa aur isske bichme choone. Bilkul Ayesha Maasi ki tarah. Tujhe Neil ke barame aase nahi baat nahi karni chaheye. Usseki ki koi galti nahi hai. Jitna Mein usse jaanti hoon voh tujhe bhi aapna lega just for your Mom's happiness. Usse fark bhi nahi parega tu ladeka hai ki ladki. Sid says

(Veer son Neil didn't leave your mom, his mom forced Chinni to leave him if he knew about it he would have stood up for her and kept her with him. You mom didn't want him to choose between his mom and her. Just like Ayesha Maasi. You should not talk about Neil like that. It's not him to blame beta it's his mother. As much as I know him he will willingly except you without even meeting you. Just for your mom happiness he will not care about you girl or a boy.)

Sid dhik kheh raha hai Uday. Neil teri Maa se bhute pyar karta hai voh toh aapni jaan bhi de te isske bin kis gham. Yash says

(Sid is right Veer. Neil love your mom more his own life he would have given his life for her without regret.)

Sorry Maa. Magar Dad bekhoof hai unhe 4 saal lage yeh pata lagane mein aap zinda hoo. I say

(But Dad is stupid for sure it took him 4 years to figure out you are alive.)

Uday srif Tera Dad jisse iss baat jaana aur vishvaash karna tha kyuki usse kabhi iss baat par yakin kiya hi ki Rani maar chuki hai. Duniya aur unbelievable Neela Aunty. Angee says

(Veer it not only your Dad who had know and believe this because if it was only him he some how never believed Rani was dead. It the world and unbelievably Neela Anuty also)

Magar kasie. Avni says

(But how)

Rani lagata hai Riya Mehta ne confess kiya. Yash says

(Rani looks like Riya Mehta confessed.)

Riya... Magar abhi Amol ne nahi. Avni says

(Riya... But not Amol)

Chinni tu uske baarme sochna band kar de voh sudhar nahi sakta. Magar voh phir bhi tere bareme concerned hai a little bit iss liye ho sakta hai voh yeh jaane ke baad tu Maa baane wali voh tujhe bachchana chahata aur phir Dilli bhi tujhe dhundne. Sid says

(Chinni stop thinking about him he can't change. But he is still concerned about you a little bit that after knowing you are becoming a mother he wanted to save you and he came to Delhi to look for you)

(The phone rings again)

Main silent kar de do. Avni says

(I will put it on silent)

The screen displays 'Jaan'



NEIL'S POV

Neil's Self Talk] Jaan utha please utha.

(Jaan pick it up. Please pick)

Kya hua nahi uthaya. Shweta says smriking

(What happened she didn't pick up)

Mooh band rakh tu. I say angrily

(You shut your mouth)

Bhai ignore karo usse. Aap, Bhabhi ko call karo. Kareena says

(Bhai ignore her. You call Bhabhi)

Neil calls again

AVNI'S POV

(After the first call)

Neil... I say

Chinni. Angee tu take care of the phone. Sid says

(Chinni, Angee you take care of the phone)

Chinno, Jaan, mein baat karugi. I say

(Chinno, Jaan I will talk)

Rani koi bhi usske phone se call kar sakta SHWETA KHANNA bhi. Voh phele se jaanti hai tu zinda par aab jab sab jaane gaye hai voh kuch bhi kar sakti hai. Yash says

(Rani any one can call from his phone even SHWETA KHANNA. She has known from before you are alive. Now that everyone knows she can do anything)

Tujhe koi ruk sakta hai usse baat karne se. Mallika says

Lamboo, Jaan. I say

Chinni agar Neil hoga mein vaad karta tujhe baat karne se koi rokega nahi. Sid says

(Chinni if it is Neil I promise I will make you talk myself no one will stop you)

Vaad. I say putting my hand forward

(Promise)

Ek yeh hai jo teri undar ka batcha bhar leata hai. Sid says holding her hand and nodding

(He is only one who can bring out the child in you)

Mallika holds on to both her hand with smile

Lamboo. I say

Rani. Yash nods holding her hand smiling

Tu, Jaan sataigi nahi. I say

(You will not trouble Jaanu)

Mera se vaad aur voh bhi double. Angee says

(You are taking a promise from me that also double)

Angee koi masak nahi hai yeh. 4 saal main jaanti hoon uski kya halat hui hogi. I say

(Angee this not a joke 4 years. I know what state he would be in)

Dhik he magar baad mein mein hisaab lugi usse after all Jiju hai voh mera. Angee says holding her hand

(Fine but latter I will take my share after all he is my Jiju.)

Mishu tu Billu aur isske saath rahe iss par bharosa bilkul nahi hai. I say

(Mishu you stay her with Billu and her I don't have trust on her)

(Second call)

Angee picks it up.

Jaan, Jaan main hoon kuch toh bolo (Smiling and with tears in his eyes) Wivey kuch toh bol main hoon jaanta hoon tu sun rahi hai. Neil says

(Jaan Jaan it's me say something. Wifey say something it's me I know you are listening)

Jaan. I say

Aapne aap ko dekh Chinni asea baat kare ke usse uski himmat aur toot jaaiyegi. Sid say

(Chinni look at yourself you talk like this his strength will break)

Jaan dekh thori naa sakta hai. I say

(Jaanu can't see)

Aur usse dekh ne ki kya zarrot hai kya. Mallika says

(And does he need to see)

Main kya karu. Mujhe baat karni hai. I say

(What should I do I want to talk)

Mallika goes in room

Lamboo tu bhi bhar Chinni ke paas jaa I will handle Heroine at easy. Aur Billu bhi mein dekh lugi. Malika says

(Lamboo you also go to Chinni I will handle Heroine at easy. Even Billu I will take care)

Avni Avni sun rahe hai na. Kuch toh bolo. Neil says

(Avni, Avni. You are listening. Say something)

Avni nahi Anjali... ha yeh phone uska hai aur voh yahin rehati hai. Magar aaj kal mein use kar rehi hoon. Angee says

(Not Avni, Anjali. Yes this phone is Avni's and she lives here. But these day I am using it)

Avni. Neil say

Does Dad loves Maa the way Mom loves him. Will he leave everything for her safety the way mom did. Veer say looking at Mallika

Mallika nods

Voh dekhi hai. Magar yahin nahi hai. She gone somewhere. Your are Neil Khanna. Angee says

(She is fine. But she is not here. You are Neil Khanna)

Yes. Neil says

Tere vahaj se voh dusari bar India chori ke aaye. (Mallika gives her look) Mera matlab hai teri uss Maa ke vahajse. Angee says

(Because of you she left India for the second time. I mean because of that mother of yours)

Voh nazjraz dokhebaaz manhoos ladki mera Tillu ke layak nahi thi. Shweta says

(That illegitimate, fraud bad omen girl was not good for my Tillu)

Mallika Self Talk] iss aurat ki toh aukaad iss dhikane hi paryi gi acha ki Sid abhi yahin nahi hai nahi toh he would have blasted her like so bad yeh bolna toh bolna sochna bhi bhul jaati

(This lady needs to be show her status. It's good Sid is not here otherwise he would have blasted like so bad. She wouldn't been able to speak forget speak couldn't think)

Jaan se khaho na meri se baat kare. Neil says

(Tell Jaan to talk to me)

Angee Self Talk] Teri Jaan tera se baat kar ne ko tarap rahi hai. Magar jab tak main une sab yeh nahi samjha diya ki voh Rani ke kitani baade gunegar hai main usse phone nahi dugi vase toh tu bhi hai magar mein Rani se vaad ki tera ko kuch nahi khahugi iss tujhe baksh diya.

(Your Jaan is desperate to talk to you. But till I haven't given everyone understand what they all have done to Rani, I will not give the phone to her. In any case I promises Rani I will not that I will not say anything to you. That why you are spared)

Mallika self Talk] Doon taraf utani hi tarap. 4 saal mein na Chinni ka pyar badala na usska. Kash situation jo hai voh nahi hoti toh mein khud Papa aur Mom se ki hum sab Mumbai shift. Abhi toh Choti Ma aur Sammy Uncle ki shaadi bhi karvani hai. Kitane saal hoge usse Ashish Mehta ko mera abb toh Choti Maa bhi maan le gi. Hum sab ko maana bhi aapne grandson ko kasie maana kare ki.

(Both are equally desperate. In 4 neither did Chinni's love change nor did his. I wish the situation was not what it's then I would have told Papa and Mom that we all shift to Mumbai. Still we have her Choti Maa and Sammy Uncle married. It's been so many years that Ashish Mehta passed away now Choti Maa has to agree. She can say no to all of us how will she say no to grandson)

Mallika hugs Veer to her

Jaan ko baat karni hai. I say

(Jaanu wants to talk)

Mrs Shweta Khanna tumne pata hoga domestic violence case aab emotional torture bhi included hai 1000 fine aur 6 years jail. Fir aur defametion case jo 6 years aur jail. Voh hua 12 saal. Toh chup raho . Angee says

(Mrs Shweta Khanna, you know tumne 'domestic violence' law now includes emotional torture to. For that 1000 fine and 6 years jail. Then for 'defametion law' there 6 years more jail. That 12 years. So just shut up)

Mallika Self Talk] jhardi issne aapni vakalat ki degree

(Showed her law degree)

Tu kon hai. Shweta says

(Who are you)

Neil looks at Shweta and smirks.

Bhul gaye tu buiya... (Bebe, Maddy, Hatel, Riya, Juhi and Kareena laughs) mein Anjali Sharma Deshmukh. Vakli hoon. Supreme Court. Mile the hum 2 actually 3 baar. (Everyone is confused) Tune bataya nahi aapne ladele. Ya jo mein voh sach hogya. Angee says

(You forgot old lady... I am Anjali Sharma Deshmukh. I am a lawyer. Supreme Court. Met you twice. You didn't tell your dearest son. Or what I said came out be true)

Mallika Self Talk] oh ha Angee toh mile hai isse 2 baar ek baar Khanna House aur dusari baar Neil ke flat par. Vahin toh mein bhi aur Neha bhi humare saath thi.

(Oh yes Angee has met her thrice twice at Khanna house and once at Neil's flat. I was there Neha also with us)

[/I]Please Jaan se khaho na meri se baat kare. Neil says

(Please tell Jaan to talk to me)

Dhik khaha tha mein terase tera khud ka beta izzat toh chore tera se nafrat karega. Le bin kuch kare kahe ya uss mile Rani jeet gaye tera se Shweta Khanna. Angee says

(Looks like what I said to you was right. Leave respect your own son hates you. See without doing anything or without saying anything neither meeting him Avni won from you Shweta Khanna)[/I]

Mallika Self Talk] Now she is just stating the obvious.

Madame Mardorma yeh bachi kya kahe rahi hai. Bebe says

(Madame Mardorma what this daughter saying)

Mallika Self Talk] my god who all are there Chinni will kill Angee if she hurts anyone except this Shweta Khanna and probably even Choti Maa because she is hurt with what ever happened Choti Maa is her Maa she saw her accept at easy that she was dead and was doing sharad for this exact reason Sid is also extremely angry with Choti Maa and so am I and everyone.

Lagta hai tumne kissko nahi bataya. Chal 4 saal magar Riya Dayawanti Mehta ki zammen toh jage. Angee says

(Looks like you didn't tell anyone. Fine it took four years Riya Dayawanti Mehta's conscious came)

Bakwas kar rahi hai. Shweta says

(She is taking non sense)

Mallika Self Talk] duniya bhar ki bakwas karne ki degree toh tere hai Shweta Khanna.

(All world non sense doing degree is all your Shweta Khanna)

Haa bakwas toh phele bachpan voh Dayawanti karti thi aab toh karti. Na voh kabhi 12 saal ki Rani ko haar payi na hi tu Shweta Khanna aaj bhi Pappu vahin hai voh sab jaa[I]nta ek phone aur tu jail mein yaad rakh. Angee says

(Haa none sense first in childhood was that Dayawanti Metha did and you. Neither could she win 12 year Avni nor can you Shweta Khanna. Today also Pappu is there he knows everything one phone and you will be in jail)

Mallika Self Talk] fact

Shweta looked scared . Everyone was confused. But Juhi, Amol and Riya smirk at her and were thanking both of these two people without knowledge of circumstances and people.

Avni khain hai. Neela says

(Where is Avni)

Mallika Self Talk] Choti Maa bhi hai vahin abhi tak kuch kyun nahi kaha. Atlest she agrees with what Heroine is saying. Now you are also in for a dose

(Choti Maa is also there why did she anything till now that means she agree with what Heroine said. Now you are also in for a dose)

Neela Parkhi. Teri toh beti thi. Tujhe toh ek minute nahi laga yeh mane mein ki voh mer gayi hai. Angee says

(Neela Parkhi. She is your daughter you didn't take a minute to declare her dead)

Ms Anjali Sharma Deshmukh aap meri Maa se asea baat nahi kar sakti. Neil says

(Ms Anjali Sharma Deshmukh you can not talk to my Maa like this)

Mallika Self Talk] Chinni was right Neil is definitely man who deserve a salute iss kahte hai asli marad.

(Chinni was right Neil is definitely man who deserve a salute this is what is called a real man)


Shweta is shocked.

Mallika Self Talk] I just I could wish see Shweta Khanna face when she realises Neil consider her nothing more the his Dad wife and he calls his own wife mother Maa that the upmost respected he could have Choti Maa. After knowing Choti Maa is not even Chinni real Mom.

Shweta Self Talk] Neelaji isski Maa. Aur main srif isski Dad ki biwi hoon iss ke liye. kam se kam jab voh Avni the Tillu mujhe Mom toh khata tha.

(Neelaji's his Maa. And me, I only his Dad's wife for him. Atlest till when that Avni was here Tillu atlest called me Mom)

Angee Self Talk] Bewkoof insan bichme kyun bol raha hai khud ka kuch jaaya ga nahi magar agar mera gusa tujh par nikla teri Jaan mujhe zinda nahi choregi.

(Fool human don't speak in between nothing will happen to you but anger will shift to you. Your Jaan will not leave alive)

Aacha damaad kya mil gya beti ko bhul gye. 4 saal. Tumse se toh aacha voh dhokebazz Bhai hai Avni ka kaam se kaam usse itana toh yakin tha ki uski so called bhen zinda hai voh Dilli tak aa gya usse ke liye chahe usse marne hi aaya ho margar usse yakin toh tha voh zinda hai. Angee says

(You got a good son in law you forgot your daughter. 4 years. That fraud brother of her is better than you. At lest he believed his so called sister was alive he came till Delhi for her he might have wanted to kill her but he at lest believed she was alive)

Mallika Self Talk] Heroine will take Choti Maa to task today

Maasi please Neela Nani se ease baat mat karo. Veer whisper

(Maasi please don't talk Neela Nani like that)

Ms aap Neela Aunty ko yeh sab khena ka haq nahi rakhte. Ali says

(Ms you have no right to say all this to Neela Anuty )

You wish is granted Billu. Mallika says

Mallika Self Talk] yeh kon hai khain yeh Ali toh nahi.

Mote Mamu. Veer says

Angee smiles and nods looking at Billu

Mote tu bhi hai vahan. Angee says nodding

(Mote you are also there)

Mallika Self Talk] So its Ali. I never meet but I would love to meet him Chinni loves him a lot just like she love Lamboo, Heroine and me a little less. I am her college bestie Ali, Heroine and Lamboo are childhood besties.

Aap mujhe jaante ho. Ali says

(You know me)

Juhi Self Talk] Mote. Yeh hai kon.

(Mote who is this)

Bhute aacha se mein jaanti hoon tujhe Mote. Angee says

(Very well. I knew you Ali)

Juhi Self Talk] Yeh Ali ko jaanti hai. Magar kaun hai yeh. Ali itana muskar kyun raha jahan tak Avni ki baat mein samjheti hoon bachpan ke dost hai. Usska bachpan ka pyaar hai magar yeh ladki.

(She knows Ali but who is she. Why is Ali smiling so much I understand Avni and him childhood friends are is his childhood love but this girl)

Heroine... mera Matlab Angee tu hai kya. Ali says

(Heroine...I mean Angee is it you)

Juhi Self Talk] Angee... Aab yeh Angee kon hai.

(Angee, now who is this Angee)

Ha mein hi hoon Mote. Fikr mat kar humari Rani mera matlab hai Avni ek dam dhik hai. Angee says

(Yes Ali it's me only... Don't worry our Rani I mean Avni is absolutely fine)

Anjali tu Avni ke saath hai. Riya says

(Anjali, you with Avni)

Ha Ms Riya Mehta mein Avni ke saath hoon. Angee says

(Yes Ms Riya Dayawanti Metha I with Avni)

Bebe Anjali. Avni aur Ali ki bachpan ki dost hai. Riya says looking at Juhi

(Bebe, Anjali is Avni and Ali childhood friend)

Bebe smiles

Beta, Avni kasie hai. Maddy asks

(Daughter, how is Anvi)

Mallika Self Talk] Who is this anutie.

Anuty Ji Avni dhik hai. Voh puri tarah khush nahi hai. Aap bura na maane mein phuch sakti hoon aap koon hai. Angee says

(Anuty Ji Avni is fine. She is not completely happy. If you don't mind can I ask who are you)

Anjali mein Neil ki Bua hua. Maddy says

(Anjali I am Neil's Bua)

Kareena Self Talk] Meri super Bhabhi zinda hai. Thankyou bhagwan. Aab bas aap unhe vapas yahin le aao.

(My super Bhabhi is alive. Thankyou god. Now just just get her back here)

Maddy Self talk] Avni zinda hai. Bas batcha vapas aaja hum sab Shweta Bhabhi ko sambhal le gye.

(Avni is alive. Enough child now just come back we all will take care of Shweta Bhabhi)

Maddy Aunty, Anjali nahi bas Angee. Angee says

(Maddy Aunty, not Anjali only Angee)

Mallika Self Talk] Bebe and now Maddy Aunty bas Uncle shouldn't be there Chinni loves and respectes him and Heroine in angry is the not trustworthy at all. Please don't say something wrong

Angee, Avni. Pankaj says

Pankaj Uncle, Avni dhik hai. Angee says

(Pankaj Uncle, Avni is fine.)

Avni comes in the room picks Neil's photo and sits on the bed with tears in her eyes

Jaan mujhe pata hai tum vahan ho. Kuch to bolo.(Avni looks at Sid. Sid nods)Wifey mujhe akela kyun kar diya. Neil says

(Jaan, I know you are there say something)

Veer comes and sits her lap. She creases Neil photo.





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Jaan. Avni whisper

Jaan. Neil says

Jaan are you drunk. Avni asks

Nahi Jaan. Neil says

(No Jaan)

Jhoot mat bol i can smell it till here. Avni says

(Dont lie, i an smell it till here)

Jaan tera begaar kasie jeeiego. Vapas aaja. Main sab dekh loongi. Neil says

(Jann how can I live with you)

Vapas India... Mumbai tera paas... Main nahi aa sakti. Avni says

(Come India. Mumbai to you. i can't come)

Jaan kya hova. Neil says

(Jaan what happened)

Jaanu mujhe bhute kaam hai hai yahin. Avni says

(Jaan i have a lot of work here)

Neil realises something is wrong

Jaan gussa hai mujhe se... mujhe maff karde na... pata hai 4 saal bhute lamba time hota hai... please vapas aaja. Neil says

(Jaan, you are angry with me, forgive me I know four years is very long time please come back)

Avni Self Talk] Jaan is feeling guilty usse koi galti nahi voh Dayavanti Mehta phir usske jaan ke peche par jaaigi agar mein use ke paas vapas gaye i don't want that.

(Jaan is feeling guilty is no fault of his that Dayawanti Mehta is responsible again will be behind his life if I go back to him. I don't want that)

Jaan voh baat nahi hai I have a lot work here. Avni says

Dhik hai main aata hoon vahain, bata khain hai tu New York main aaja ke aaj aata hoon. Neil says

Hubby nahi yahin tu nahi. Avni says

Avni Self Talk] Jaan please to vahan hi hehe tu mujhe se dur hi rahe. I love you a lot tu mere zindigi hai. Tera like tera se dur. Isse sea hi rehang pari ga jab take bhagwan saath de.

Jaan kya hua hai tu kya chupa rahi hai. Tu jitana bhi chupa le main pata laga luga. Neil says

(Jaan what is wrong what are you hidding, How much ever you hid I will get to know)

Avni batcha kya hua hai main jaanti hoon kuch chupa rahi hai tu... Neela says

(Avni batcha what happend I know you are hiding something.)

Neela Maasi, Mallika, aap ko agar lagta kuch galat hai toh main bata doon sab ek dum dhik hai Chinni ek dam shahi salamat hai. Mallika says

(Neela Maasi, Mallika, If you think something is wrong then i will tell you every thing is absolutely fine . Chinni is absolutely wrong)

Neela Self Talk] Kuch toh garde hai phele Bhai sahab, phir Sammy, phir Monu, Phir Angee aur aab Mishu.

(Something is wrong first Bhaisahab, then Sammy, followed by Monu, followed by Angee and now Mishu)

Mishu batcha Chinno khain hai Avni ke saath nahi hai kya voh. Neela asks

(Mishu Batcha where is Chinno. Avni ke saath nahi hai)

Neela Self Talk] Chinno toh mera se baat bhi nahi karna chahata hai kuch toh ho hai.

(Chinno doesn't even want to talk to me. Something is wrong)

Avni batcha aapni Bebe ke liye vapas aaja. Bebe says

(Avni batcha come back for your Bebe)

Bebe aap kasie ho. Avni says

(Bebe, how are you)

Main kasie hoge jab mera doon batche khush nahi hai. Bebe says

(How will I be when both my kids are not happy)

Bebe asea kuch nahi hai. Avni says

(Bebe nothing like that)

Avni asea hi hai. Prakash says

(Avni it is like that)

Papa aap bhi ho vahin. Avni says smiling

(Papa you are also there)

Jaan vapas aaja. Hum aapne ghar par raheige jasie phele raheti the. Shweta Khanna se dur. Main toh aabhi humre ghar main reha raha hoon. Neil says

(Jaan come back. We will live in our home like we lived before. Away from Shweta Khanna. I am still living our home)

Avni Self Talk] Toh aaj bhi Jaan Khanna House mein nahi reha raha.

(So Jaan is still not living in Khanna House)

[/I]Agar tune sab ka haal chal pucha liye hoo bata kab aa rahi hai 4 saal se gumshuda hai tu. Aab bas aaja jo bhi hai hum sab yahin dekh lege. Ali says

(If you are done asking about every one wellbeing tell when are you coming it's been four years . Now come we all we take care of everything)

Ha Bhabhi Ali Bhai sahi khahe rahi. Kareena says

(Yes Bhabhi Ali Bhai is right)

Mote tu bol para toh jawab toh tujhe mile hi chuka hai Rani, India nahi aaye rahi hai aabhi. Yash says

(Mote finally you spoke. You have already got your answer. Rani , is not coming back to India Now)

Jaan yeh kon hai. Neil says

(Jaan yeh kon hai)

Jaan bas kar tu vapas aagi main khehe raha hoon. Neil says

Neil is jealous[/I]

Avni Self Talk] Jaan is getting jealous

DCP bol para. Yash says

(DCP finally spoke)

Avni smiles shaking her head on Yash. Yash smiles back

Yash, tujhe kya problem hai meri Avni ke vapas aane mein. Ali says

(Yash what is your problem my Avni will come back)

Mote mujhe problem bas itani hai ki tu sudhra nahi 15 saal pheli bhi tera yeh haal tha magar lagata nahi teri Avni teri nahi rehi 12 saal ki thi Avni jab tune kho diya tha usse tab se le aab tak voh mere saath hai aab toh voh srif meri Rani. Rani is mine only mine samjha teri liye yeh hi acha hai tu yeh baat samajh jaa. Yash says

(Mote my only problem is you haven't changed in last fifteen years before also you were like that but seem like your Avni is not yours 12 year old Avni when you lost her that time I was with her now she is only my Rani. Rani is only mine understood it's better for you you understand this)

Lamboo rehane de Mote nahi badlega tu chill kar. Avni says

(Lamboo let it be Mote wouldn't change you just chill)

Jaan mujhe ignore mat kar bata yeh kon hai. Neil says

(Jaan don't ignore me who is this)

Lamboo tu bhi bin soche samjhe kuch bhi karta hai. Avni says

(Lamboo, you without thinking do anything)

Avni bas itana hi bolegi isse. Main Neil ko kuch bhi bol de tha tu mujhe maarne ke liye aajata thi aab bas itana hi bolige Yash ko. Ali says

(Avni that all you will says to him. when I would says something to Neil you come to kill me. And now you will just say this much to Yash)

Ali asea kuch nahi hai. Lamboo kuch nahi kar rahi hai tu maon kya bolo. Jaan bina baat par jealous ho raha hai. Avni says

(Ali nothing like that. Lamboo has not done nothing you tell me what should I say. Jaan is getting jealous without any reason)

Jaan yeh hai kon jo mera se important hai. Neil asks

(Jaan who is this who more important then me)

Jaan nothing like that. Lamboo mera bachpan ka dost hai. Just like Ali. Avni says

(Jaan nothing like that. Lamboo is my childhood friend just like Ali)

Just like Ali... Is like toh Ali ko bhul gye tu. Ali says

(Is like Ali... Is like... Then Ali you have forgotten)

Nahi Ali nothing like that. Avni says

(No Ali nothing like that)

Toh bata kyun vapas nahi aati tu... 4 saal hoge hai. Mana hum bhi galat tha we also easily excepted you died in the accident Neil toh Lamboo ko nahi janta main toh jaanta hoon. I should have realised. Ali say

(Then tell me why you are not coming back. It's been 4 years. I agree we all made a mistake we all easily accepted you died in the accident. Neil doesn't know Lamboo. I should have realised)

Mote emotional blackmail kar raha hai tu. Lets do this when I come back to India this time Nanno ke saath I will meet you too. Yash says

(Mote you will emotional blackmail. Lets do this when I come back to India this time Nanno ke saath I will meet you too.)

Tera se kissene milna hai main toh Avni ko vapas aane ko kahe rahe hoon. Main toh joke kar raha tha chal dhik hai. Ali says

(Who wants to meet you. I am telling Avni to come back. I was joking okay fine.)

Jaan what wrong why don't you want to come back. Neil says

Jaan there nothing I just have a lot of work. Avni says

Jaan ek baat yaad rakhna I will get you back here very soon. Neil says

At lest stop drinking first. Avni says

Till you are not here I will not touch anything. I promise. Neil says

Bebe you heard him keep and eye on him. Avni says

Jaan tu aaja I will never touch any alcohol ever I know how much you hated it. Jaan I love I miss you please come back. Neil says

(Jaan you come I will never touch any alcohol ever I know how much you hated it)

Jaan I love you. Now I am sleeping. Avni says

Avni cuts the phone.

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Neil Self Talk] Jaan is alive. Why didn't Jaan come to meet me and tell me she would have come to meet at Khanna house.

DD get me CCTV footage of (Looking at Shweta) Khanna House since after the accident till today everything soon as possible. I says

Okay Bhai. DD says

DD leaves

Neil Self Talk] So Jaan did come. Now you will pay for you did to Jaan, SHWETA KHANNA.

Bebe comes hugs Neil kissing him on the forehead

Chalo Bebe Khanna House chalte hai. I says

(Let go Bebe lets us go to Khanna house)

Tillu that your home. Shweta says

No this is my home, humra ghar,Jaan aur mera ghar hai. I says

(No this is my home. our home, Jaan and my home)

Chup kar ja bhagwan ke liye. Bebe says

(For God sake keep quiet)

They reach Khanna house.

Neil Self Talk] SHWETA KHANNA now the fun starts

DD play it fast forward it till I tell you to stop. (After a while) Jaan... Neil says

DD plays it from there from normal pace

[UNeil Neil. Avni says

Whys have you come heres now. Shweta

Jaan. Avni says

Tillu is mine he my son. You are no one to him. Shweta says

Where is Jaan. Avni says

He not here. Shweta says

Bebe , Papa, Bua. Avni says

Everyone has gone out. Shweta says

Fine I will for Jaan in our room. Avni says

It's not your room it's my Tillu room. Shweta says

Your Tillu (with a smirk) Jaan is only mine am I clear. Avni says

Neil smile with pride

You illegitimate he is my son. Shweta says

How true are you he is your son who doesn't like you and soon he gets know who you behaved with Di he will hate you. And Di is his wife and love of his life. Neha says

This illegitimate is not worth my Tillu. Shweta say

Rani you go. I will take care of this Shweta Khanna. Angee says

Shweta tries to push her.

Avni goes up to AvNeil's room[/U]

How dear you hurt Jaan. I say choking Shweta

That whitch was snatching MY TILLU from me. Shweta says

Main srif Jaan ka hoon. Jaan is not you that she will not snatch me from you. I say

(I am only Jaan's. Jaan is not you she will not snatch me from you)

Tillu... Shweta says

Maar gaya Tillu... Srif DCP. That what i for you now. UNDERSTOOD. I say

(Tillu is dead... only DCP. That what I for you)

Where did this Shweta Khanna go. Angee says

DD upar ka CCTV laga. I say

Has Bhai come back. Kareena say

Yes. Shweta says

I will go and meet him.Kareena says

He is rest. Meet him letter. Shweta says

Bebe. Kareena says

Shh Kareena Tillu is resting he will get disturbed. Shweta says covering her mouth

Fine I will go tell Bebe. Kareena says

After a while

Who is this coming out off Bhai room...Juhi. Kareena says

Kareena where are going. Shweta says

So that was Bhabhi. That's why you stopped me to even go in the room. I would have called Bhai and today Bhai and Bhabhi would be together. Kareena says

Bhabhi. Bima says

Bima when Neil comes back just call me. Avni says

You want wait. Mallika says

No he will not come any time soon I am tired. Avni says

Yous don't need to come back Tillu does wants yous he is marryings Riya. Shweta says

In your dreams SHWETA KHANNA. Jaan will never marry anyone else not even Juhi. So keep out of our lives. Avni says

Chinni . Sid says

Chinno when did you come. Avni asks

Right now. Dad called. Sid says

I wanted to talk to Dad. Avni says

Mishu hold my phone after Chinni is done check she never believes me. Sid says

Dad... Lamboo. Avni says

Lamboo also called. Sid says

I knew Bhai called me too. Avni say

Rani give.. Mallika says

Chinno what are you doing. Avni says

Picking you up.You have walked a lot for today. Sid says

Bima. Bebe calls

Bebe you called. Bima says

Did Avni come after the accident. Bebe says

Ji Bebe. Bima says

Why did you hid this for so long. Bebe asks slapping Shweta

Bhabhi had come again. Bima says

When. Prakash asks

2-3 days after that. Bima says

DD forwards till he see Avni on the footage,

Bhabhi you are alive. One worker says

Neil. Avni says

Neil Sahab isn't here. Worker says

Bebe, Papa, Bua Kareena. Avni asks

Bhabhi you. Bima says

Where is everyone. Avni says

They all have gone to Neela Madam's place. Bima says

Maa. Avni says

Bhabhi you sit I will call Bebe. Bima says

Bima why didn't you call. Bebe asks

Bebe I was calling you Shweta Madam came. Bima says

You illegitimate get losts you nos one to mys Tillu. Shweta says

Rani what's wrong... Not again...Yash says

Who do you think you are. Shweta says

Rani you go... Arrest this lady now. (Someone handcuffs Shweta) Mallika go with Rani. Check every room. Yash says

I will tell Tillu he will save me. Shweta says

DCP... I mean Neil Khanna. I am his senior I am the Commissioner. Yash says

Sahaab, ASP Sir has send this for you DG sir told him. Constable says

There is your well demanded arrested warrant from DG office it self. Yash says

Sahaab where should we take her. Take her to ASP office he take special care for her. Yash says

You misusing your authority. Shweta says

Domestic Violence Act have you heard of it. Angee says

So these kids saved us from this Shweta's drama for a few days at least. Bebe says

I was in jail because off that...Shweta says

That the right place for you I wish their warrant was real. I say

And add to that you husband will suffer to... Rathore Empire I am sole owner. Mallika says

Shweta was shocked. They take Shweta from there.

Heroine you and your law degree. Didn't Rani top it. Mallika says

Chinno hasn't come yet. Angee says

Good lord he would have this lady apart. Rani where is she, Yash says

Monu Bhai. Avni says

Sona carefull. Raghu says

My hug Chinni. I get Bhai and you forget me. Sid says

Chinno. Avni says

Where is Damad sahaab. Raghu say

Not here for good. Jaan would be at the condo or the station. Avni says

Everyone else... Sid asks

They have gone to Maa's. Avni says

To Bua Maa's. Raghu says

We will go there letter enough for today look at yourself. Sid says

All this. Raghu says

My stuff. Avni says

Keep it down. Anwar... Raghu says

Ji sahaab. Anwar says

Take Baby's luggage. Raghu says

Ji Sahaab. Anwar says

Bhai but. Avni says

Rani what now. Yash says

Any ways today I have... (Sid picks her up) Chinno I can walk. Avni says

God knows whats alls she woulds have takens. Shweta says

That's our room... What ever is there is ours Jaan can take what ever she wants... Why did she leave me what concerns me... Congratulation you successfully snatched Jaan from me and me from Jaan SHWETA KHANNA. I say

Tillu. Shweta says

Neil ignores and goes up to their room. He could fell Avni essence in the room the moment he entered the room.

Neil Self Talk] Once you would have made a call, I would have come then you would told me what you want you know I never believed your were dead I could never the thought of it kills me.

Tillu. Shweta says

Shweta Khanna don't you enter our room Jaan and my memories are intact here don't spoil it you mere presence will tint it don't come near it.

Neil uncle what happened. Mishti asks

Mishti, Jaan is alive. I says happily

Angel is alive. Mishti says

Jaan is in USA...But she will be here soon. I say

Uncle how do you know? Mishti asks

I talk to Jaan. I say

What did Angel say when is she coming. Mishti says

Jaan didn't say anything. I say

Neil gets suspicious of Mishti

You want help Uncle you will spoil you shrit. Mishti says

Neil starts cleaning his and Avni photos with his shirt.

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MISHTI'S POV

Mishti Self Talk] How happy uncle looks today it been so long I have not seen him so happy.


Mishti what's wrong. Amol asks

Nothing like that uncle I also miss Angel. I say

(Ayesha's Grave)

Nanno who is this. Mishti says

Mishti just like Ali he is also my son Yash. Like your Neil Uncle he is also in the police. Fatima says

You are Mishti Vidyut.R . Mishti says

Mishti nods

But I show your registration in the NGO you it was something different name. Neha says

Choti let it be why are you interrogating the little girl. Fatima says

Maa what's wrong. Veer says

Nothing Billu. Avni says

Mishti drops what she has in hand come towards Avni. Veer come to protect Avni from Mishti.

What you name dear. Mishti says

Udayveer Avni Neil Khanna. Veer says

I am Mishti Pandit. Mishti says

Mishti. Avni says

Angel you are alive for so long come lets go meet Uncle he would be so happy. Mishti says

It's complicate. This Jaan and my son Billu. Billu this Mishti. Avni says

Has Vidyut done something again. Mishti says

Mishti keep away from all this please. Don't tell anyone for now. I can't put Jaan's life in danger. Avni says

NEIL'S POV

Tillu will you come back here now that Avni is alive. Bebe says

No Bebe with Jaan also I was living in my condo I will stay there but I will keep come here to meet Dad, Bua, Moti and you. Neil says

As you wish Tillu. Bebe says

Now that you are here lets have food and spend some time together. Maddy says

DD. I says

Bhai. DD says

Keep a eye on Mishti. I says

Neil, Mishti are you sure. Ali says

Ali Bhai wouldn't you keep an eye on Nanno now. Amol says

That's different. Ali says

Ali you keep an eye on her yourself. Now fine but remember it's about Jaan if she knows anything I will not spare her at all. I say

AVNI'S POV

Lamboo now what do we do. I say

About. Yash says

Lamboo. I say

You are thinking about Neil aren't you. Don't worry he surely doesn't know everything. Yash says

I know that but am I talking about Billu. I say

Veer Bhai and Pappu will take care about it. Yash says

Chinni are you planning to go to India for good. Sid asks

Not for now. But who knows when I will have go. I say

Rani, we will arrange before we go there. So don't worry. Angee says

Maa I want to sleep. Veer says

Lets go and sleep. I says

Avni is making Veer sleep. She was remembering the night AvNeil spend at Neela instead going for a party organised by Prakash

{At Neela House}

Jaan where are you. Neil

Jaan you look hot. Avni says

What are you wearing. Neil says

Saree...What was I suppose to wear. Avni says

Anything which does look so sexy that men get attracted to you. You know I cant take any man look at you like that. YOU ARE MINE. Neil says

I have look like ACP Neil Khanna wife that the girls at the party know. Avni says

Jaan none of those girls in in Dad business parties interested me... Interest me...will never interested. All I look at in any party is my JAAN you have all my tension always. (Back hug Avni and pulling her to him) Do you want to go I have no interest. Neil says

Seriously. Avni says

He nods. She truns in his arm kissing him on the lips. After a few seconds of kissing they part to breath.

Jaan you should have told me before. I would have organized something for both of us to spend some quality time. I say

Hum dono hai na aur cheez ki kya zarrorat. Avni says

(We both are here there no need of anything else)

Jaan I have been wanting to say this for long. Neil says

Avni was struggling to discard his shirt. Neil notices and discards his shirt in a flick.

Jaan listen. Neil says pulling her face up

What happened. Avni says

Jaan I wanted to talk to you. Neil says

Hmm. Avni says

I want to say I want a family our family Neil Avni's family our kid AnNeil's kid. Neil says

How will that happen happen Jaanu if we are not together. Avni says hugging Neil tightly

Jaan we are together. Neil says hugging her tightly

She kisses him on lips . He kisses her back. eventually their cloths come of . They are on the bed making love.

Avni Self Talk] This how you came to the world Billu

Avni is creasing Veer's forehead

Edited by AvNeil_TV - 8 years ago

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