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Sanju loved it...The proposal was the best one because they dont need a decorated place to tell each other how they feel...

proposal was as beautiful as it is simple😳 I thought Neil will say in his husky voice🤪

Originally posted by: tanyashah0110

Very sweet Sanju...

and thankyou all those who liked the all 5 chapters...it's ok if u can't comment...your likes let me know that u liked the story..and they motivate me to write more...soo thankyou guys...😃

Hey sanju loved part 5 :: I was actually able to imagine avni getting of the bike and taking of her helmet ...when someone pulled avni I thought could it be Neil as u mentioned he was wearing a mask but the way he said "shhh " even avni knew it was Neil ...loved how Neela and aman were worrying for avni a lovely scene ... Loved how Neil noticed the mangalsutra around avni neck when he first saw her and he knew it was her... Also liked how realised her eyes were red due to crying ...loved how avni told Neil she wants to talk and how he nodded and avni gave the bike keys to him and he sat down while she sat behind him...when Neil asked avni where she wants to go and how she said inside the jungle where they first met really sweet sanju... Aww the way Neil was talking to avni coldly all thanks to that stupid Ali ... When avni asked about juhi and how long has he loved her for .and Neil was surprised .. The way she thought what Ali said was true and sat down while Neil sat down next to her...felt sorry for avneil for a moment but by their talks they were getting things clear slowly and finally cleared all the misunderstand and happy how they realised Ali lied to both of them... Both avneil were hurt they couldn't believe their best friend could do this ...liked how avni said Neil's name and then hugged him tightly where Neil also hugged her back ...liked how neela still trusted Bebe and decided to call her...oh gods what is ali planning now ...hayyee loved the way avni moved closer to Neil resting her head on his arms and how Neil teased her saying " kya baat hai wifey...mujhse door nahi raha jarah?" And how she said no she can't and then finally the much awaited 3 magic words ...aww avni didn't feel like going back I wonder where Neil must have taken avni ...haha the way shweta was shocked seen Bebe talking nicely with neela and aman ...erghh y did this Ali have to come to the Khanna mansion...loved how Bebe told him to go away ..omg the way Ali shouted at neela asking where avni is even neela was shocked seen avni behaving like this ...loved the way aman answered back Ali but can't believe this Ali had a gun ...oh god even aman had his gun...erghh this Ali reached where avneil were ...aww how Neil was trying to romance with avni and when avni said she doesn't want a grand proposal if he comes and says it by been near her even that will do and how Neil came closer to her but damn this Ali had to spoil that moment ...omg avni came in between Neil and Ali when Ali aimed his gun at Neil... Haha smart boy aman beta good u took out bullets from alis gun while fighting ...yay avni slapped Ali party time ...when Ali fell down and started crying for a second I did feel sorry for him and the way Neil helped him get up was awesome ... Finally Ali realise his mistake ... Loved how shweta took avnis hand in hers and said sorry and how avni hugged shweta I hope we get to see a bond like this between avni and shweta soon ... Aww loved how Neil was hugging avni from the back

^^ preya

amazingly written
loved it so much