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__VIHU

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Really very well planned... Sanju

This Ali although irritating but a significant part of Avneil..

Avni on Mission Neil... That too on bike... So interesting..

Please update next part soon Sanju...

Love...

Vihu...

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__VIHU

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: _SANJU

itne jaldi comment bhi kar liya gur?😆
thankyou dear..😃😃
ali ke baare mein hi soch rahi hu...i want to make him negative...or grey..but as vihu said...uske bina adhoora sa lagega..😕

Yes...😃

Darkness na ho to moonlight nazar nahi aati🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: vu1998
Really very well planned... Sanju
This Ali although irritating but a significant part of Avneil..
Avni on Mission Neil... That too on bike... So interesting..
Please update next part soon Sanju...
Love...
Vihu...

thankyouu vihu..🤗

i just started writing the next part...

but will update tmrw only😳

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996203

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: vu1998
Yes...😃
Darkness na ho to moonlight nazar nahi aati🤣

yess...and for clarity...moonlight is avneil🤣

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pri12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Sanju I love u for giving Aman Avni scene in the story 🤗

i loved how Aman was all protective about his sister...Loved it

Ali is 🤬 How could he do that

Avni went to Jungle...pls continue soon

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996203

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: pri12
Sanju I love u for giving Aman Avni scene in the story 🤗
i loved how Aman was all protective about his sister...Loved it
Ali is 🤬 How could he do that
Avni went to Jungle...pls continue soon

thankyou prii🤗

yes...i wrote this after aman said sorry di...😳

😃

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srinithi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Avni n Aman scene was so good.. I really wanted them in the show too

hayee.. Avni in bike . I love it..

Ali toh 🤬uski koi hadd bi hai

ye wohi jungle hai Na where AvNeil first met.. waiting to read what is Avni gonna do.. I love her in Jean n off shoulder long top😳

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Aman and Avni scene was so good👏

And Avni on bike

But this Ali kya hoga iska😡

Seriously crossed every limit😡

But very well written Sanju...

It will interesting to read about Avni's mission to save Neil

Update soon😳

Edited by Deepti_98 - 8 years ago

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Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

THIS ALI MY GOODNESS. 😡😡

He is lying to both Neil and Avni and killing them from within. Hate him!

Update soon dear Sanju. I am loving this.

Can't wait for Avni-Neil meeting.

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RaindropsNRoses

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Posted: 8 years ago

#80

wow sanju u r back...
very happy to see u again...
awesome storyline...
read all the parts in one go...
loved it...
I m hating this ali more now...
avni aman bonding is beautiful...
do continue soon

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