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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: J.arora

Sanju back with an early update...

Awesome update...
Loved how Aman responded to Ali...
Aman ka character was too well portrayed by you...
Hopefully we see his same side in serial too...
And I hate Ali for creating that misunderstandings..
Par anyways it forced Avni to go to meet Neil so at the end I loved the way u made things fine... ❤️
Lots of love
J


Januu...thank you 😃
Fingers crossed...
Hope we some some amni scenes in show soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: preya_radev

Loved part 2' sanju.. All actually got on my nerves but I wonder y Bebe and shweta were glaring at him...though I didn't feel bad the way she spoke to him... Omg shweta showed Bebe Ali and Avnis picture and brainwashed her. I hope Bebe find out avni is not at fault and this was all shweta and Riyas doing... Liked how neela spoke to Ali and told him how she can see he is behaving odd these day... Glad that neela lied to Ali saying avni is sleeping when she wasn't ... I just love neela the way she won't let anyone come between avneil... Aww poor avni was lost in Neil thoughts liked how she was telling neela about what Neil must be thinking about her if he is angry and also about Bebe and the way neela questioned avni to get more out of her ... Love this daughter and mother bond between them...actually liked Neil and juhi flashback scenes and because of that Neil realised he loves avni liked how he shouted out saying I love u avni and on the otherside avni woke up thinking Neil called out her name and how she checked to see if there is any messages or call from him


Part 3 was lovely liked how avni ran to get her phone thinking it was Neil's phone but got upset seen Ali name ...urge Neil was calling avni at that time but because of Ali call he couldn't get through her...aww when avni made black coffee and how Ali said she doesn't like black coffee and how avni subconsciously said Neil likes it...liked how avni got excited when Ali mentioned about going to the khanna house ...no way this stupid Ali lied Bebe didn't say that at all sanju please can I slap this Ali...liked how neela is not ready to believe Ali ...poor Neil is also facing a lot of things ..liked how neela went to avni room and sat beside her and the way avni placed her head on neela lap and the way she said she misses Neil...liked how avni accepted she is in love with Neil ...omg what was that avneil hugging Neil falling on the ground in a pool of blood

Part 4 : phew that was only avnis Dream but I hope it doesn't come true...liked how Neil took avnis name before sleeping...loved how neela called aman to make avni feel better was actually touched when aman called neela mum and she told him he can call her mama really sweet ..awww avni was wondering if she should call Neil ... Liked how aman surprised avni it was a treat to read that scene... Ugrghh what problem does Ali have if avni is wearing mangalsutra and Sindhoor as she has the right to wear it .. Happy how even aman didn't like that...omg how dare he tried to pull that mangalsutra off avni happy aman pushed Ali and even more happy that avni screamed at him and told him to stay away... Liked how avni told Ali that how can he think she loves him and how she confessed that she only loves Neil ... I hate this Ali y did he have to bring juhi...just liked aman even I'm tired of Ali go aman go just beat Ali black and blue ...urghhh the way Ali tried to hold avni hands saying she loves him too happy that aman moved alis hand and stood in between them eve. Neela was shocked to see this side of ali..omg another lie Ali said and that to Neil that he proposed to avni and she said yes when avni actually said no and Neil was broken hearing that ...poor avni she called neil so many times but no answer thank God dd told avni where Neil was but before he could say she can't go there avni disconnected the phone ...wow amazing to see avni getting ready to meet Neil and that also by going on a bike... Glad She left her phone meaning no disturbance from anyone... Liked how avni left the note for aman and neela ... Sanju just loved these part it was amazing now I can't wait for avneil to meet and then confessing ...that will be a tight slap on Ali face do update soon



Preya..seeing..such a lengthy comment...for my story...makes me feel strangely happy...😳
Thank-you for all the love dear...
Thankyouu😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie

Sanju did you know Avni was gonna sing "Lag ja gale"? 😆 Is that why you wrote it in the 1st part? I was so surprised when she sang that song in today's epi. I was like someone wrote the exact samething in one of the os. I only knew Neil was gonna sing ADHM. I just scrolled though all the stories to find this. hahaha 😛


Yes...of course pata tha...
itni badi coincidence toh nahi hosakta na..😆
Aakhir pura din yehi sab search karti rehti hu na..😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
😛
Edited by _SANJU - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: _SANJU


Yes...of course pata tha...
itni badi coincidence toh nahi hosakta na..😆
Aakhir pura din yehi sab search karti rehti hu na..😛

All the olvs i came across were all mute 😆 What to do lol. Yeah itna bada coincidence nahi hosakta haha
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
^^
@EC

Ha...ab jab free hogi ..last part ka review batana...
Cuz it's a bit long...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Sannu's note:
Hello guys(waves excitedly)
So that's the last update of this series...
All for all the readers...I just want to say thank-you...for reading and commenting... and liking the story...
Cuz it really motivated me...
And RS stands for random shots...random shots are completely random..
Because I believe I'm not that great writer...
And don't think y the end is so abrupt...
Yaar kyu nahi hosakta?..bolo...
Kyu life simple nahi hosakti...
I really wonder y itna drame ki kya zaroorat hai..bechari avni itna already sehchuki hai...ab use happiness toh milni chahiyena...😛
And how many of you hate the lavish proposals/confessions?
I don't understand y it has to be in a fully decorated place with some beautiful setup...flowers...music..all those things...y can't it be simple?...y can't it be in pyjamas?..or during watching a movie...🤔
If u agree ...share your views...
If u dint...then also share your views..😛
And if u feel maine avneil ke dono confessions ko spoil kardiya...ek karele ke Chips ke saath aur Ali Babu ke saath... Then forgive me...I'm sorry...😆
Edited by _SANJU - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
I personally like both kind of proposals but I would also prefer a simpler one more. That would be more cute and sweet and romantic.😳
Coming to the update, it was beautiful. Really cute. I like how there is no much drama in this. A life that is a bit nearer to reality. Last part was the funniest. Cute how Neil teased her about being fatty. But I know fatty Avni bhi bohot cute hogi Neil ke liye. And that "Aaj kya toota bacho?" was hilarous! 🤣
Thankyou so much for such a light RS. Keep writing more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
Awesome update
Finally sab ki happy ending ho gayi
Continue soon your other works
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Ali has gone totally mad
Thank goodness for Aman he removed the bullets
Dadi was on the side of Avni only
She didn't misunderstand her
As for Avni and Neil they are together and happy
Superb ending

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