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plmzaq thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Awesome update
Totally love it
Beautifully written
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Sanju back with an early update...
Awesome update...
Loved how Aman responded to Ali...
Aman ka character was too well portrayed by you...
Hopefully we see his same side in serial too...
And I hate Ali for creating that misunderstandings..
Par anyways it forced Avni to go to meet Neil so at the end I loved the way u made things fine... ❤️
Lots of love
J

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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Loved part 2' sanju.. All actually got on my nerves but I wonder y Bebe and shweta were glaring at him...though I didn't feel bad the way she spoke to him... Omg shweta showed Bebe Ali and Avnis picture and brainwashed her. I hope Bebe find out avni is not at fault and this was all shweta and Riyas doing... Liked how neela spoke to Ali and told him how she can see he is behaving odd these day... Glad that neela lied to Ali saying avni is sleeping when she wasn't ... I just love neela the way she won't let anyone come between avneil... Aww poor avni was lost in Neil thoughts liked how she was telling neela about what Neil must be thinking about her if he is angry and also about Bebe and the way neela questioned avni to get more out of her ... Love this daughter and mother bond between them...actually liked Neil and juhi flashback scenes and because of that Neil realised he loves avni liked how he shouted out saying I love u avni and on the otherside avni woke up thinking Neil called out her name and how she checked to see if there is any messages or call from him

Part 3 was lovely liked how avni ran to get her phone thinking it was Neil's phone but got upset seen Ali name ...urge Neil was calling avni at that time but because of Ali call he couldn't get through her...aww when avni made black coffee and how Ali said she doesn't like black coffee and how avni subconsciously said Neil likes it...liked how avni got excited when Ali mentioned about going to the khanna house ...no way this stupid Ali lied Bebe didn't say that at all sanju please can I slap this Ali...liked how neela is not ready to believe Ali ...poor Neil is also facing a lot of things ..liked how neela went to avni room and sat beside her and the way avni placed her head on neela lap and the way she said she misses Neil...liked how avni accepted she is in love with Neil ...omg what was that avneil hugging Neil falling on the ground in a pool of blood

Part 4 : phew that was only avnis Dream but I hope it doesn't come true...liked how Neil took avnis name before sleeping...loved how neela called aman to make avni feel better was actually touched when aman called neela mum and she told him he can call her mama really sweet ..awww avni was wondering if she should call Neil ... Liked how aman surprised avni it was a treat to read that scene... Ugrghh what problem does Ali have if avni is wearing mangalsutra and Sindhoor as she has the right to wear it .. Happy how even aman didn't like that...omg how dare he tried to pull that mangalsutra off avni happy aman pushed Ali and even more happy that avni screamed at him and told him to stay away... Liked how avni told Ali that how can he think she loves him and how she confessed that she only loves Neil ... I hate this Ali y did he have to bring juhi...just liked aman even I'm tired of Ali go aman go just beat Ali black and blue ...urghhh the way Ali tried to hold avni hands saying she loves him too happy that aman moved alis hand and stood in between them eve. Neela was shocked to see this side of ali..omg another lie Ali said and that to Neil that he proposed to avni and she said yes when avni actually said no and Neil was broken hearing that ...poor avni she called neil so many times but no answer thank God dd told avni where Neil was but before he could say she can't go there avni disconnected the phone ...wow amazing to see avni getting ready to meet Neil and that also by going on a bike... Glad She left her phone meaning no disturbance from anyone... Liked how avni left the note for aman and neela ... Sanju just loved these part it was amazing now I can't wait for avneil to meet and then confessing ...that will be a tight slap on Ali face do update soon

Edited by preya_radev - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Sanju did you know Avni was gonna sing "Lag ja gale"? 😆 Is that why you wrote it in the 1st part? I was so surprised when she sang that song in today's epi. I was like someone wrote the exact samething in one of the os. I only knew Neil was gonna sing ADHM. I just scrolled though all the stories to find this. hahaha 😛
Edited by Electro.Cutie - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Avni n Aman scene was so good.. I really wanted them in the show too

hayee.. Avni in bike . I love it..
Ali toh 🤬uski koi hadd bi hai
ye wohi jungle hai Na where AvNeil first met.. waiting to read what is Avni gonna do.. I love her in Jean n off shoulder long top😳

Thank-you dear...😃
Will update the last part soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Deepti_98

Aman and Avni scene was so good👏

And Avni on bike
But this Ali kya hoga iska😡
Seriously crossed every limit😡
But very well written Sanju...
It will interesting to read about Avni's mission to save Neil
Update soon😳


Deepti...thank-you ...😃
Alika kya hoga?...guess karo...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie

THIS ALI MY GOODNESS. 😡😡

He is lying to both Neil and Avni and killing them from within. Hate him!
Update soon dear Sanju. I am loving this.
Can't wait for Avni-Neil meeting.


EC..thankyouuu😃
Last part coming sooon

996203 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: nimarious

wow sanju u r back...
very happy to see u again...
awesome storyline...
read all the parts in one go...
loved it...
I m hating this ali more now...
avni aman bonding is beautiful...
do continue soon

Yes I'm back...😳
Thank-you sooo much dear...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Totally love it
Beautifully written
Continue soon


Ekta...thank you soo muchh😃
Will update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Thank-you dear..😃

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