Akdha SS -HOPE last part A & B & epilouge /pg 59/62 /27-dec - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: avishimishra

I'm desperately waiting. When will u update??,try to update soon.I know ur managing more than 8,stories but I'm crazy. Take care also


saturday i will update 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: avishimishra



i understand , u r feeling dear..but iam not say akku is akdha child😉

ur making me more confused yar.u make me curious by your answer but I will soon get correct answer [ 😛
yeah surely u get correct answer dear😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

ur making me more confused yar.u make me curious by your answer but I will soon get correct answer [ 😛


yeah surely u get correct answer dear😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

wait for next dear😉

in CS u updated aabir with a lady picture but u didn't mention about her.something is fishy
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: avishimishra


yeah surely u get correct answer dear😛

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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: avishimishra

in CS u updated aabir with a lady picture but u didn't mention about her.something is fishy


but i am not update aabir picture..😉

bashir and naazira picture - Jalal 's mom and dad
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Posted: 8 years ago
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but i am not update aabir picture..😉

bashir and naazira picture - Jalal 's mom and dad

ohh they are jala's mom dad.my gutter mind. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
awesome update,
Like the families of JoJa.
Jalal's family is anger on him but they equally love him and Jodha.
Like Akku so much 😳 such a naughty and smart champ 😳
He talk so much merely at the age of 1.5 😲
and What a relation he share with Aabir 😲
I think in future Ja ko bahut papad belne padenge 🤣

Why I think JoJa meet in the park 🤔 that's y they act like strangers in the meeting room 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

awesome update,

Like the families of JoJa.
Jalal's family is anger on him but they equally love him and Jodha.
Like Akku so much 😳 such a naughty and smart champ 😳
He talk so much merely at the age of 1.5 😲
and What a relation he share with Aabir 😲
I think in future Ja ko bahut papad belne padenge 🤣

Why I think JoJa meet in the park 🤔 that's y they act like strangers in the meeting room 😉

thanks for pm and update ASAP😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats Avishi dear, enter in Goldie..👏👏👏...i updated for u dear..😳😳😳



NOte CS page -1

Bazir and Naazriya jalal , mizra and bakshi parents.

Hamida- dadi of jalal, mizra and bakshi

Mohinder and Rano- jodha parents.

Bakshi married with Abdul and they have one girl child, miyra

@ vrindu, My cutie pie do behind his age.😆😆😆.we never imagine what he will do next..that only everyone fallen love with my cutiepie @ akku.😳😳😳


First i updated after, i reply ur sweet comment dearies..thanks for lovely , beautiful and wonderful comment dearies.


Part 3

Jodha car stop in front of Jodha house.pinky and Jodha step down in car.

Jodha: Pinky come inside

Pinky: Mam if u don't mind I ask u one thing.

( Pinky is jodha PA)

Jodha: Tell me pinky but call me JR not mam

Pinky:in meeting Why u penetrated u don't know Jalal sir

Jodha : I don't want him pinky.my fate bring back me to his life once again with sad smile face

Pinky: He is such cunning man ,mam

Jodha with stern voice: Pinky, he is not

Pinky selfthought: I know JR u hide ur pain in ur heart.in meeting ur mind in presentation but ur heart around Jalal sir only.

Pinky: Sry mam.i am going now,see u tomorrow mam

Jodha: Hmm

Pinky went out and Salima come to Jodha house.

Salima: Jodha u came

Jodha: Salima where is Akku, he trouble u so much

Salima: no Jodha, He is such sweet child.he is sleeping with meeti.why ur face so dull.

Jodha:Work tension nothing else

Salima:Even though Akku sleeping u go take rest.after Akku wake up I will bring him.

Jodha: Thanks Salima

Salima: Oyie no thanks and sry in friendship and bye ..left the place.

Jodha went to room and pick up photo frame , tears flow in her eyes

Jodha : Why u did it with me.in meeting why u penetrated iam just client for u.u proved my hope is right.u don't love me.iam right in my place.iam nothing to u.i thought u come and hug me tightly.yes I also penetrated because iam only hurt in our past life.he told me u changed no he is wrong u never changed .today also that Ruqquia stay with u.she is only snatched my happinesss , my life.

Office

Mizra enter the Jalal cabin and Jalal is not there and come outside.

Ruqquia cursing someone and Mizra come to Ruqz place.

Ruqquia: She come to my life once again.i cannt leave that b****h this time.

Mizra what are u talking with irritating face.

Ruqquia: Mizra that b****h is back with disgusting face

Mizra: Whom u talk about

Ruqquia: Iam talking about that Jodha. Today,she came to our office

Mizra :how dare u say my Jodha to b****h.with angry voice

Ruqquia: How can I forgot u both are very closed right with cheap thought

Mizra hold her neck tightly : Who give u right talk me this way.u once again bad mouthed about my Jodha in ur slam mouth.i will kill u that place .if Jalal bhai know, u talk about my Jodha in bad words.he will kill u.this time I forgive u because of ur father face and mind it otherwise with angry tone and leave her and went out with angry face.

Ruqquia chocked : Jodha last time I left u alive , this time I will kill u surely.u r the one obstacle of reach my goal.iam not leave u Jodha...

Mizra dailed Jalal number but he not pickup the call

Mizra went to Mohammed farm house and saw Jalal car outside.Mizra enter the farm house and hears heavy punching sound.

Jalal punching sand bag vigrously and his hand bleeding but he not care about anything and punching bag continuously.

Mizra: Bhai what r doing stop it now but Jalal not stop and punching heavely.

Mizra: Now iam understand u also thought my Jodha is charcterless woman with harsh tone

Jalal shout: Mizra and grabbed Mizra shirt.

Jalal: U r mad .how can I thought my jaan is characterless.she is such pure soul.she is my jaan ,Mizra with hard voice

Mizra: Oh ur jaan why u hurting urself.today why u penetrated u don't know Jodha.

Jalal: How u know about this with slow voice

Mizra: I know everything bhai.tellme dammit.why u penetrating infront of Jodha.

Jalal: Because I want her happiness.

Mizra: Iam not understand bhai with confused face

Jalal: She move on her life Mizra i don't want that iam obstacle of her life .

Mizra: Whose told she move on her life with harsh tone

Jalal: Yesterday I saw her Mizra.

Yesterday me and mihra went out outing.First we go to ice cream parlour and then we go to park. Flash back start ( same park Aabir , Jodha and Akku went)

Miyra: Badi Mamu mami here.

Jalal: Baby what r u telling

Miyra :see Mamu Jodha mami here

Jalal: Jodha Where she is.. miyra and Jalal eyes searching every place with eagerly face

Jalal look Jodha and stunned in that place.after 2 years I saw my jaan

Jalal tears flow in his eyes and saw her smiling face

Jalal tried move to Jodha and heared some ladies talk about Jodha.

Lady: She is Jodha right.

Other lady: I thought Jodha husband come back to business trip.see how much happiness in her face.Jodha child is very attractive and naughty kid.they are such small beautiful family.

Lady: U right, see her husband protectively hug her and his child

Other : No evil eyes spread with them.

Jalal selfthought: My Jodha is move on her life .she married another man and she have a child also.what am I do now with closed eyes

Miyra: Mamu (uncle) lets go see Jodha mami (aunty)

Jalal: Miyra promise me u not say anyone to see Jodha mami in park with pain voice

miyra: Why mamu

Jalal: Its secret beta.u promise for ur mamu with pain voice

Miyra: Ok iam not say anyone

Jalal see Jodha went out to park and I want stop and hug her tightly but he control his emotions because of her happy family

Jalal drop miyra in home and went to office straightly and enter the cabin and pick up Jodha photo.

Jalal: I lost my angel.i want ur happiness only my jaan.no no ur not mine now.why u punish me like this way.why u away from me.yes iam one pushed out u from our marriage life.ur not mine now i cannot tolerate this pain.plz come back to me Jodha. And blabbering about these years ,sleep in cabin. Flash back end

Mizra: So u penetrated because she move on her life.

Jalal : Mizra first iam shocked I saw Jodha enter in ,mohammed industries with her office attrie through cctv camera.that time my happiness never end next second I remembered she have beautiful family.how can I vanish her happiness.already I hurt her so much.so I controlled all my feeling myself.that Ruqquia taunting my Jodha.I want shout she is my Jodha loudly but I cannot with painful voice

Mizra: Why u cannot bhai

Jalal: Because

Mizra: Oh bhai plz stop ur crazy thought.u definetly not see his man face right or Jodha told that she married to other guy with harsh tone

Jalal: yes iam not see his face and iam only saw Jodha side hug to one man and man other arms in one baby even iam not see baby face.but I never saw her happy face in our marriage time. yesterday I saw our childhood Jodha. She smiling face but something missing in her face .

Mizra: I told u bhai what she missing in her face, She missing u bhai only u

Jalal: Mizra why she missing me.she have a family.

Mizra:till now u not understand her .she starting and ending with u only. u forgot bhai eventhough she enter in the world ,she saw first u , u r everything to her. I don't know why she crazy about u and flash back start Other side Jodha also thought her past life

Bharmal and Mohammed family friend and also neighbour. Dadi thought Rano her own daughter. Rano and Naazira pregnant, both admitted in same hospital for their delivery.

April 9 , hospital

Dadi: mohinder, Rano beta kaise hai

Mohinder:I don't know maaji, she screaming but till now not delivery and Naazriya behan kaisie

Dadi: before 10 minutes only she delivered boy baby

Little Jalal: uncle why Rano aunty shouting with crying face.

Dadi: Akku nothing happen to ur Rano aunty ( dadi always called Jalal to Akku. Akku is pet name of Jalal also )

Nurse come outside with little pinky cot bundle and give to mohinder

Mohinder: maaji meri beti and show baby to dadi

Dadi: I wish Naazriya birth to daughter unfortunately she delivered to boy baby. Now iam happy my Rano beti give me grand daughter.she look like angel.

Jalal tucked dadi saree: dadi show me

Mohinder bent to Jalal level show baby to Jalal and baby open eyes her slowly and look at Jalal first and Jalal kiss to her cheeks with smiling face.

Dadi: see mohinder ur beti saw first my akku and even first akku kissed her iam thought both are bonding made by god.

Mohinder smiled: maaji first I go to see Rano and give baby to her.

Dadi: hmmm

Time passed like clouds moving

Jodha and Mizra both birth in same day but time difference Mizra is 10 minutes older than Jodha. Both are sharing everything in their life and birthday gift also. Both studying same school ,college even both wears same colour dress daily.

Jodha is innocent, nave and boldly talk in front of family but outside never talk anyone bravely and she don't mind about her scare because everytime her bodyguard protected with her.

Jodha enter the college and some seniors ragging to other juniors. Jodha scared to see seniors

Senior: oyie u come pointed out to Jodha. And Jodha come with scared face in slow step to senior and other senior told him that leave her otherwise u become trouble but he ignored friend advice.

Senior: why u come to baby step,come fast with harsh tone

Jodha quickly come in front of seniors.

Senior: what is ur name, which department.

Jodha:

Senior: ur dumb

Jodha nods her head negatively

Senior: then tell me what is ur name

Jodha: Jodha rai Bharmal with stammering voice.

Senior: nice name but why u weared full covered salwar and also covered with dupatta. This is not suite u if u wear modern dress u more become sexy dear with lusty eyes.

Jodha get disgusting hearing his word and his lusty look, with head down to ground and her eyes moist

Senior: now remove ur dupatta and I want see ur structure without duputta.

Jodha clutched her dupatta tightly and step back to backwards and senior come forward to her.

Jodha back bumped to some man and turns see her saviours infront of her.

Jodha : Mizra hugged him tightly.

Mizra: buddy, stop ur crying yaar ,iam here. No one touch u.

Senior: oh hero come to save heroine with villain smile

Mizra remove Jodha hug and punch senior stomach and grabbed his collar, twisted his hand to back ,ur new in this college right and which year

Senior: 2nd year

Mizra : she is final year and senior to u. go ask sry to her otherwise I will break Ur hand.

He said sry to Jodha and run out save his life.

Mizra: buddy u r not junior scaring for ragging even he is junior to u but u scared in front of him.

Jodha: Mizra in ur sake only everything happened with sobbing voice

Mizra : what I did

Jodha: u late wake up early so I came college alone today. in evening I told everything to my darling (dadi) she give u punishment with cute angry face

Mizra: don't tell anything to sexy (dadi) she make my life to hell. In ur matter she not tolerate anything.

Jodha smirked: ok iam not tell anything but one condition u give me icecreams treat in mid night.

Mizra nods his head: last time we went out side, sexy caught redhanded me, u forgot what she did with me.

Jodha laughed I never forgot that incidients and my darling gave super punishment to u

Mizra: Dont laugh u did everything but she gave me punishment.after one week in night time i became watchman of our mansion and morning she make me to slave , i washed dish and washing clothes ,cooking and gardening

Jodha fake crying face: U not my buddy.u scold me I definitely tell her about u.yesterday u went to disco with ur gf.

Mizra: Meri maa,sry dont tell disco matter to ur darling and she is not my gf just she is my friend

Jodha: Kya she is not ur friend iam only ur friend.noone got my place.

Mizra : My possessive Jodhu.ur only my friend, my crime partner, my darling, my special person but ur special person someone one right ( last line teasing tone)

Jodha blushed: No Mizra noone in my life.

Mizra: Acha then why u blushing.u thinking Jalal bhai right with teasing tone

Jodha: Kya I love with that robot no way.

Mizra: Don't lie to me.i know very well to u.if Jalal bhai went abroad to study.after two days u stayed in ur room ,u not speak to anyone .

Jodha: Oh that time iam not well. With stammering voice

Mizra:why u sad Jalal bhai not see ur face and not talk with u

Jodha: in childhood he is very close and friendly with me.but now he totally changed to rude man with sad face.

Mizra: yes , he changed because of maham bua.she give wrong advice to Jalal bhai and told money is only important thing nothing else.

Jodha: bua entered our life , everything to changed.he stay away from us.he never interact our family.he run behind for money

Mizra: He missed his joyful life.

Class bell ringed

Jodha: Lets go we need go to class.

Mizra: Ok Bhabhiji

Jodha: Dont call me Bhabhiji

Mizra: In future u r only my Bhabhi.

Jodha: Ur bhai not accept me with pain voice

Mizra: He accept or not u only my bhabhi and u only his wife.if anyone interface between u and bhai.i will make that person life to hell

Jodha: Ok devarji lets go to class.


CHAPTER END


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Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 8 years ago

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