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Part 4

flash back continues

Evening Mohammed mansion

Jodha cried loudly enter in mansion and everyone come to hall and saw Jodha crying face and Mizra come behind her with scared face.

Dadi cupped Jodha face:kibo beta why u crying my bacha and Mizra why my kibo crying

( kibo means hope, dadi ka hope is Jodha)

Mizra tensed face selfthought: today iam gone

Jodha show her left arm to dadi:darling I skipped in scooty.

Dadi: scooty, u don't know driving then why u driving

Naazriya caring Jodha hair: Jodha beta, first u learn driving and then drive ur scooty.

Maham bua: drama queen stop ur drama,it just small scratch why u behave like u armed cut in two pieces with taunting tone.

Dadi :Maham shut ur mouth, I am not tolerate anyone taunting my kibo with harsh voice.

Maham bua: maa why u behave she is ur own granddaughter she is not Bakshi ,she is Jodha,our neighbour daughter.

Dadi: u also forgot, u also not my own daughter, ur my sister daughter and I love my kibo more than my own grandchildren with taunting tone

Maham insulted dadi word and went to her room.

Dadi: kibo why u drive scooty beta

Jodha: Mizra told me that he teach me driving if I try to driving, he leave me suddenly and my scooty hitted to wall and I fell down to rocks with sobbing face.

Dadi: Mizra why u leave her suddenly with harsh voice.

Bakshi: ha bhai why u leave Jodha , how much she is crying.

Mizra gulped his saliva: oh dadi that time my phone ringed and try to attend my phone and I forgot Jodha practicing driving so she hitted wall and fell down in to ground with slow voice

Dadi: what the hell Mizra ur phone call is more important than my child. Handover ur phone , bike keys and ur credit card to me now and this month u not go outing with ur friends with angry voice

Mizra horror face: no dadi, please don't do with me,iam sry ,I will take care of her.and iam not live without my phone dadi.

Bakshi: no bhai u deserved it, dadi take his phone first and I will inform to dad

Mizra: I will give my phone , why u troubled to our dad and handovered everything to dadi.

Bakshi and Jodha giggled saw Mizra state.

Rano enter Mohammed mansion: maa why u people scold my Mizra

Naazriya: Rano bhabhi don't supported him. he deserved it

Mizra side hug to Rano: Rano maa save me from this devils.

Dadi, Bakshi and Jodha eyes popped out: kya we are devils, we will show u ,what devil will do .

Rano: why u people show ur big eyes to my son and Jodha stop ur drama come home now.

Jodha: darling , maa scolding me

Rano rolled her eyes: how many times I told u call dadi not darling.

Dadi: Rano what ur problem and she call me darling only and i call her to kibo, my kibo.

Rano: maa, u only spoiled and more pampered to her .she forgot she have also mom and dad .24 x 7 stay in Mohammed mansion and slept in ur room.

Jodha murmuring to dadi:darling,maa jealous with us

Rano: Ha iam jealous with maa and my child.

Jodha hug dadi and dadi reciprocate her hug.

Rano : Lets go Mizra beta all r one team and I already prepared ur favourite Gulab jamun with carrying Mizra hair.

Bakshi: Rano maa I am also ur team, iam ur little princess right.I want more gulab jamun than bhai

Rano: Ha meri princess I give u more .

Jodha: Bakshi Ki bachi.u jumped to other team for in sake of Gulab jamun.

Rano: If u don't want then shut ur mouth

Jodha : I also want my Gulab jamun with innocent face.

Rano: I am not give u, if u want then told ur darling give back every Mizra things to him

Dadi: Rano u blackmailing my kibo

Jodha : Darling ,give back everything to Mizra and if u don't give his bike key then who will become my personal driver.plz give him with puppy face

Dadi: Tika I will give him but he not repeat it once again

Mizra: Pakka promise sexy .thanks Rano maa

Jodha: Oyie I helped u not maa and thanks me & darling and I love u darling

Dadi kiss Jodha forehead: I love u too beta

Flashback end

Jodha : I miss u darling, I miss u so much.u give me everything and I am not ur kibo if iam ur kibo na iam not break ur hope with crying voice.


Akku: mummaa mummaa

Jodha wipes her tears and pick up Akku in her arm and settled down in her lap comfortably.

Akku: mummaa whose is this ( pointed family photo)


Jodha: oh Akku baby, she is ur badi dadi and my sweet darling.

Akku placed his head to Jodha chest: iam ur darling with sad face

Jodha smiled: ha meri Akku ,u also my darling but she is my first darling even she is my angel

Akku mindvoice: till now mumma said iam her angel and her darling, now that old lady come between my mummaa and me.i will handle her later with devil smirked.

Jodha: Akku u know she love me so much

Akku: she love me to with babish voice

Jodha: if she know about u, she love u more than me

Akku: sachi

Jodha touch his nose: muchi, and she ur naniji and he is ur nanaji but now both are stay with god with tears flow her eyes.

Akku: mumma u crying

Jodha: Ok mumaa not crying and she is ur dadi and he is ur dadaji ,u know Akku ur dadaji running toy company, in his company have more toys.

Akku with bright face: toys,dadu give me toy

Jodha: we are not stay with them so they are not give anything to u.

Akku dull face: meri toy

Jodha: I will buy for ur toys


Akku nods his head: who he ( who he is)

Jodha: silent

He is ur papa voice come from door side

Akku: Aabu he my pa papu hai

Aabir: yes my champ he is ur papa not papu ,Jodha why u silent

Jodha: silent is better than lie Aabir.

Aabir: but champ also have right know about his dad.

Akku: Namm kiya hai , why not papu stay us

Aabir: ur dad name is Jalal singh Mohammed and ur dad is bad person that only he not stay with u and ur mummaa

Akku: my papu badoo with crying face

Jodha: Aabir just shut up and Akku baby ur Aabu telling lie to u,ur dad is good daddy, u trust ur mummaa right

Akku angry face to Aabir: Aabu u badoo not my papu .

Aabir hold his ears: sry champ, don't angry with me, ur dad is best daddy.

Akku mindvoice: why papu not stay with me and my mummaa ,why Aabu said daddy is badoo and why mummaa crying see papu photo ,why dade,dadu, badi dade not come see me even meeti papu stay with meeti why my papu not stay with me ( in ur little brain why u thinking lot of questions Akku baby)

Night time,Jodha house

Calling bell sound and Jodha wake up in sleep.Jodha open door

A girl turn face to Jodha: Surprise

Jodha shocked and smiled: Shivanya

Shivanya and Jodha hug each other and after separated their hug.

Shivanya: Di, how is my surprise

Jodha: This is not surprised u give me sweet shock.

Shivanya: Haha.. di where is my boyfriend

Jodha: Come inside first and then see ur boyfriend.

Jodha: When will u return back London.why not inform early even sir not tell me u come back

Shivanya:dad don't know about my arrival

Jodha: U came to Delhi straightly not Mumbai.u stupid first inform maa and sir.

Shivanya: Relax di u r not happy and iam coming to Delhi.

Jodha: Oh my sweety, they worried about u na .yes, iam happy to see u

Shivanya: Relax di noone know iam back to Delhi.

Jodha phone ringed and show ID to Shivanya

Jodha: U thought noone know about ur arrival.see sir calling me.

Jodha: Hello sir.yes Shivanya in Delhi.

Jodha give phone to Shivanya

Shivanya: Dad how r u

Dad: How many times I told u dont do any crazy thing.

Shivanya: Sry dad , I want to see di and my boyfriend

Dad: Behave like grown up child.

Shivanya: Dont worry about me

Dad:I am not worry about u, now u in safe hand.my elder daughter Jodha take care of u.dont disturb ur di in ur crazy idea.she work our company important project in Delhi.when will u come back.

Shivanya : Dad I will come back after one week and I want meet my important friend Delhi.

Dad: Friend or boyfriend.

Shivanya: Dad I will talk with mom later and cut the call.

Jodha: Oh u meet ur important person then only madam come to Delhi not for me with teasing tone.

Shivanya: Not like that di I miss u too till now iam not see my boy friend.

Jodha: He is sleeping in my room.come I will show ur boyfriend both enter Jodha room

Shivanya: Di first time I see him straightly till now I am chat with him only in video call in ur delivery time I back to London.i miss my baby antics everything.mom told me he is very naughty

Jodha: Now u completed in ur studies and then u joined our company soon

Shivanya: No ways iam not join our company.i want enjoy my life di.

Jodha: Then who will take care of our company.ur not ordinary girl.u r business tycoon Neil Gupta ka one only daughter.

Shivanya: First, u will take care of our company and second Neil Gupta have two daughters ur elder and iam younger.

Jodha: No Shivanya iam just employee of our company.i know sir and mom take care of me like their own daughter in these years but u r heir of our company

Shivanya: First iam angry with u and ur Aabir.

Jodha: Why u angry with me and Aabir.till now u both not see each other.

Shivanya: In sake only u stay in this house not our Gupta mansion in Delhi.I definitely know he only told u not stay in gm

Jodha: This decision fully mine not Aabir

Shivanya: I want to see ur Aabir.everytime mom and dad call me talk about ur Aabir and praising him.

Jodha smiled: U jealous with Aabir.

Shivanya: Not jealous even my bf also tell me Aabu..aabu

Jodha: U eat ur dinner or not

Shivanya: I already finished my dinner

Jodha: it already late. come to sleep

Morning

Akku wake up in sleep and searching for his mummaa

Akku saw one girl side hug to mummaa.

Akku angry to girl and tucked her clothes and Shivanya turn to see his little Akku

Akku shocked Shivanya infront of him

Shivanya: Hi boyfriend and pick up in her arm

Akku touched her face with shocked face.

Shivanya: Yeh bf why look like iam ghost.


Akku: Mummaa see gurfrind infront of my

Jodha: Ha Akku ur girlfriend is infront of u.

Akku:how come out to lolipop

Jodha smiled and Shivanya confused with his word

Shivanya: What he said

Jodha: Akku told how u come out from my laptop.

Shivanya: Kya

Jodha: U both are speak only video call.that only he thought u stayed in my laptop.

Shivanya laughed: Oh my boyfriend ur so cute and pinch his cheeks

Akku: Mummaa see pinch my cheeky

Jodha: She is ur masi na.she come to see u

Akku: Massee

Shivanya: Iam ur girlfriend call me girlfriend

Akku blushed: Gurfrind (girl friend)

Jodha and Shivanya mouth opened widely because of Akku shy

Jodha: Aabir u spoiled my baby so much.iam not leave u

Shivanya:di u going office today.

Jodha: No yaar iam going to site today. After few hours I returned back.u stay in home with ur bf. I will return back soon

Shivanya: Come soon di

Jodha: Have ur breakfast and then I will go

...

Construction site

Jodha ,pinky and Adi in construction site.

Adi shows everything to Jodha.

(Adi trustable employee of jalal)

Adi: Mam very soon site problem will be solved

Jodha:Mr Adithya call me JR .

Adi: Ok JR u call me Adi only

Jodha: Where is Mr Mohammed and I thought he also come

Adi: JR

Jalal: Iam here

Jodha turn back and see Jalal standing in front of office attire with dazing look.Jodha see head to toe

Pinky: JR

Jodha: Ha pinky

Pinky: JOdha mam, we need too see basement work

Jodha: Yeah lets go

Adi: JR come I will show u

Jodha: Its ok Adi I will and u take care to Mr Mohammed and left the place.

Adi:why I take care of him and Adi noticed Jalal have bandage in his hand.

Adi: Sir what happened in ur hand.

Jalal: What she told u

Adi: Jodha mam told me take care of u

Jalal mind voice: Mizra right, she is mine only.i only foolished thought she move on her life.i want to talk with her first but whose with her in park and baby.

Jodha come to Jalal place.both are starring each other

Jalal: Jodha I need talk to u with slow voice it may be guilty

Jodha mind voice: Almost two years I heard Jodha word in ur mouth with emotional look to Jalal

Pinky disturbed her thought: Jodha mam, we need to go Manali today evening.

Jodha: Why pinky sudden journey to Manali.

Pinky : some problem in Manali project.that owner want to meet u.it necessary u need to go.

Jodha: Ok pinky arranged flight ticket soon.

Pinky: Nod her head

Jalal: Jodha u go alone

Jodha:Lonely only give me more lesson with taunting tone

Jalal closed his eyes and then control his emotion

Jalal: Jodha

Ruqquia: Hi Jalal, I come in correct time right

Jodha mindthought: U always come wrong time only

Jodha: Mr Mohammed, I need to go know after come back my trip I will meet u with heavy voice

Bye ms Ruqqia irritate tone and went out

Jalal: Ruquia who said to u ,come to site with angry voice

Jodha house

Akku and Shivanya playing inside room

Aabir: Champ where r u

Akku: Aabir came and running outside and Shivanya come behind to Akku

Shivanya: Aabir

Aabir turn back to Shivanya face and both look at each other.

Shivanya shocked: U r Aabir

Aabir shocked: What r u doing here

Precap:

Akku baby in mohammed mansion.😳😳😳

Shivanya and Aabir fight 😡😡😡



If u like this Part, plz do likes and comment dearies..😳😳😳


plz ignore grammatical and spelling mistakes dearies..😊😊😊



CHARACTER SKETCH -PAGE 1
PART 1 & 2 -PAGE 5

Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
dear please continue ur story princess jodha
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: avishimishra

dear please continue ur story princess jodha


u mean Maasoom patidev or Marriage at first sight dear🤔
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Thank you thank you alot maneet.u gave a big surprise like vrinda.update itna jaldi wow awsme.aaj to lucky star hai meri pas.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Fantasy-ka-Love



u mean Maasoom patidev or Marriage at first sight dear🤔

yes u can do it.that to be soon in this week
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fantasy-ka-Love



u mean Maasoom patidev or Marriage at first sight dear🤔

actually I was asking to Roulan to continue her story.but u want to give me surprise .so update soon 👏 😉 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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another chapter 😲
res... res and res
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: duhasaad

another chapter😲

res... res and res

👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: avishimishra

actually I was asking to Roulan to continue her story.but u want to give me surprise .so update soon 👏 😉 😆


opps sorry but roulan u writing story..but u did not give me link..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: avishimishra

dear please continue ur story princess jodha

It Was Deleted From My Tablet And I Cant Find It So I Will Starting A New One

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