AvNiel: Sepration, Love, Life [Ch 1.25 Page 7] 20/11/2017

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

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Chapter 1: Jaiye Toh Jiye Kasie

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

CONCEPT

So this is my new story on AVNI and NEEL post honeymoon and basically the sepration/ divorce tack. The realisation and confession track.

I will be having the existing characters and some new (maybe old characters who are grown up now

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vidya dasan

@vidz2122

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

yaar seperate math karo ... why not love track

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shikha

@shikhsk

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

No separation track pls.jus confession man !!!!! M tired of reading this

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vidz2122
yaar seperate math karo ... why not love track

Originally posted by: shikhsk
No separation track pls.jus confession man !!!!! M tired of reading this

I totally understand what you are saying but with distance hearts grow founder

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AvNeil_TV
CONCEPT

So this is my new story on AVNI and NEEL post honeymoon and basically the sepration/ divorce tack. The realisation and confession track.

I will be having the existing characters and some new (maybe old characters who are grown up now

There is changes in the concept as I could not start when I planning to start... I was just highly disappointed what was happening in show and I am still a little disappointed with it... but this is little different I will update the concept soon

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

CONCEPT

So this is my new story on AVNI and NEEL. The story is post revelation track and basically the sepration. But Avni decided to leave the country after that. There is a leap.

And due some reason she returns. I am keeping Amol positive.

I will be having the existing characters and some new (maybe old characters who are grown up now

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Fantastic concept
Update soon please

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

PROMO

Avni why did you leave me. I would have made things right. Bebe would have realised wasn't there was any trust between us. We could lived alone away from all this. Why did you just leave. You forgot all time we spent together you said you loved me we spend so many nights together why did you leave. Did you not even realise Mom was waiting for this she has been behind me to get married to Riya but I can't give her your place I my life JAAN. People say you died in the car accident but I know you are alive TERA JAANU HO NA MAIN AAJ BHI TUJHE MEHSOOS KAR SAKTA HOON. (I am your jaanu, I can still feel you today)Please come back JAAN. TERA JAANU HAR PAL MAAR RAHA ADAR SE ASEA NA HO TUJHE BINA DEKHO MAAR JAU MAIN. (Your jaanu, is dying ever moment it shouldn't be I die without seeing you)You have made a straightforward ACP into a DEVDAS LOVER please come back. AAJ BHI TERA JAANU SARIF TERA HAI. (Today also your Jaanu is only yours)You are mine AVNI NEIL KHANNA only mine.

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