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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mukhiji: My Old Shoes

I walk along
in my old shoes
wrinkled and worn
well used, but not torn


What a story these shoes can tell
Where all I have been - and done so swell
I am from a gaon, folks - so I care about the past
As time is slow and life does not fly fast

When Aru saw them for the first time around
She got into a fit and threw them out of bounds
But I got them back as they are not so bad
They have stood by me on my bright days and sad

Now I know what you are thinking
They are so battered and probably smell
But what the hell
They are mine to use every step so wish me well!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anonee

Mukhiji: My Old Shoes

I walk along
in my old shoes
wrinkled and worn
well used, but not torn


What a story these shoes can tell
Where all I have been - and done so swell
I am from a goan, folks - so I care about the past
As time is slow and life does not fly fast

When Aru saw them for the first time around
She got into a fit and threw them out of bounds
But I got them back as they are not so bad
They have stood by me on my bright days and sad

Now I know what you are thinking
They are so battered and probably smell
But what the hell
They are mine to use every step so wish me well!

Awww...this is soo sweet... 😊😊 You put Mukhiji's undying love for his boots in such sweet words...👏👏 Well done yaar... 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is the cutest thing I read today :) Thank you for writing on Mukhi's shoes and his love for them :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank for the applause! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Awww...this is soo sweet... 😊😊 You put Mukhiji's undying love for his boots in such sweet words...👏👏 Well done yaar... 👍🏼


Thank you for the appreciative comment 😊

You are right, Mukhiji has "undying love" for his boots 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..wateva..

This is the cutest thing I read today :) Thank you for writing on Mukhi's shoes and his love for them :)


Glad to know that my poem made your day!

To be honest your post about Mukhiji's boots was the inspiration for this poem!😊

So, I owe you a big thank you 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anonee


Glad to know that my poem made your day!

To be honest your post about Mukhiji's boots was the inspiration for this poem!😊

So, I owe you a big thank you 😆


😆 Awesome!! 😳




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