MG- Tujhey Dhoondon Kahan Part 12 pg 54 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome dear..geet already planned everything before leaving mansion..so cool..she booked hotel.she called her friend , he detective unfrotunately he in africa..geet shared everything to vicky..vicky give idea what she will do.how to find out maan..even geet take care of her unborn child..so brave yaar.our herione Mission start MD.she come to village it almost night time.she searching .time god one lady come help geet..lady give motherly figure to geet..she said she come for her husband.lady assured she help her..i hope geet mission become success..
thanks for pm and continue soon
sry for late dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

geet after settle their she took help from vicky and than tai ready to company hr in this mission MD

thanks for commenting
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Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

awesome dear..geet already planned everything before leaving mansion..so cool..she booked hotel.she called her friend , he detective unfrotunately he in africa..geet shared everything to vicky..vicky give idea what she will do.how to find out maan..even geet take care of her unborn child..so brave yaar.our herione Mission start MD.she come to village it almost night time.she searching .time god one lady come help geet..lady give motherly figure to geet..she said she come for her husband.lady assured she help her..i hope geet mission become success..

thanks for pm and continue soon
sry for late dear

thanks dear😊
late k lye koi naa chalta hy😉
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Part 6

Next morning bring some hopes for geet she wakes up and said

Good morning baby and good morning baby k papa ap jahan py bhi hain

She got ready quickly and came to tai when tai saw her she passed a smile to her and said

Arrey geet to uth gyi aur itni jaldi ready bhi ho gyi chal aja breakfast kr lay phr us kay baad ma tujhey ly kr chalti hoon

Geet sits with her and asked

Tai pr hum kahan sy start karein gy hum kahan chal rhy hain

Hum phele ramu k haan chalein gy wo yahan ka postman hy us sy pochtey hain pata hy uski kal hi shaadi hyi hy to hum uskey ghar hi chalein gy bht acha larka hy

Pr tai uski kal hi shaadi hyi hy to kya us kay pas time hoga humarey lye

Arey beta wo bht acha sab k kaam atta hy usko kuch pata hoga to zaror bataye ga kya pata wahin sy kuch pata chal jye tarey pati k barey ma aur tujhey poora village na ghoomna parey

To phr tai jaldi chalo na dair kis baat ki hy

Arey ruk phele shi sy nashta to kr phr chaltey hain

After few minutes they left for ramu's home after reaching there geet saw many people there with happiness on their faces some girls laughing kids running here and there and make noises geet enter with tai, tai talked with someone then she saw bride came and touched tai's foot tai blessed her some girls sit with bride and teased her tai said to geet

Geet ramu zara thori dair k lye bahar gaya hy bus 10 minutes ma ajye ga jab tak hum intezar krtey hain

Ji tai

Geet heared giggles of girls and automatically her concentration goes on them girls are teasing bride a lot about her shuaag raat which makes her blushed a word shuaag raat brings memories to geet how sameer plays prank on them

Flash back

After all rituals when they enter their room geet mesmerized by the decorations and she asked

Yeh sab ap ne kia hy maan?

Nhi yeh saari decoration sameer ne ki hy keh raha tha gift hy humarey lye achi hy na?

Haan bht achi aur yeh phoolon k curtains to bht hi achey hain pr yeh itney heavy kyun hain k uskey peechey kya hy kuch bhi nazar nhi arha

Yeh hi ma ne sameer sy pocha tha to keh raha tha bhai yeh itney heavy iss lye hain kay is ski khushboo poraey room ma sama jaye khair ab yeh sab choro aur idhar bed py baitho

He then dragged her towards bed and then takes her hands in his and placed kiss on her knuckles she blushed and said geet

You know geet jab ma ne tumhein pheli baar dekha tha to bus dekhta hi reh gaya tha k god ne innocence and beauty sath sath di hy bs dil ne usi waqt kaha maan singh khurana yeh tumharey liye hi bani hy sirf maan ki geet aur tumhari yeh eyes dil chahata hy bus in ma kho jao

and then he bent towards her and kiss her eyes one by one then he said

aur yeh tumhari choti si cute si nose jab baat krtey hoay iss ko charhati ho uffh dil krta hy iss ko kha jaon

and then he bit on her nose

aur yeh tumharey lips oh god smjh nhi arha kya bolon bilkul rose petals ki tarah hain aur sirf marey lye hain

and he bent a little towards her which makes geet blushed hard but a knock on their door disturb their moment maan opened the door and saw her mother

mom kya hoa sab theek to hy?

Sorry beta tumhaein iss waqt tang kia pr yeh sameer pata nhi kahan hy mil hi nhi raha

Mom yahin hoga kahin ghar ma kuch khurafati kr raha hoga

Nhi ma ne pora ghar check kr lia pr wo kahin nhi hy tumhaein kuch bataya tha?

Mom relax ap tension mat lo ma abhi call krta hoon

He then call sameer and they heared a loud ring from their room

Yeh ring ki awaz yahan sy kyun arhi hy

Maan dekhye shahyd sameer ka phone isi room ma hy

Haan pr kahan?

Maan awaz to ye phoolon kay curtains ki taraf sy arhi hy

Ek min let me check

And when he move curtains their appeared sameer with a grin on his face which makes maan shock

Tum yahan kya kr rhy ho?

Obvious si baat hy bro chupa hoa tha

he said with naughitness

pr kyun?

Wo kya hy na bhai ma bhi dekhna chahta tha marey serious type bro romance kaisey krtey hain apko romance krta dekhna meri bht badhi wish thi aur ma uski video bhi bana raha tha pr end moment py akar mom ne sab kuch kharab kr dia

He makes puppy face on his statement geet laugh loudly mom also giggles but maan hold his head

Oh god sameer tu pagal hy kya?

Arey nhi bhai ab statue ko to romance krtey dekhna bht hi unique baat hogi na aur ma yeh chance kaisey miss kr skta tha

Acha beta tu ruk abhi batata hoon tujhey

He take step towards him but sameer dodge him and ran in whole room which makes geet and mom laughed then mom take step and catch sameer and hold his ear

Sharam nhi ati tujhey bhai aur bhabi ko tang kr raha hy chal tujhey to ma batati hoon

After they maan closed the door checked his room and saw geet who still laughing

Bht hansi arhi hy haan?

Ab hansney wali baat hy maan to hansi to aye gi na

Tum hans rhi ho aur ma soch raha hoon thank god mom time py agyein warna to yeh sameer bhi na pagal bilkul

Maan yeh to chota sa prank tha sameer ka oh god wo kya keh raha tha kay statue ka romance!!

And laughed and stopped when maan hold her waist suddenly and said

Mrs. Khurana bht maza arha hy apko abhi batata hoon

Flash back

Giggles of girls makes her came in reality she then saw tai who is talking to someone then after a while a man came towards them and touched tai's feet

She blessed him and said

Ramu iss sy milo yeh geet hy delhi sy ayi hain apney pati ko dhondney shyd tum in ki madad kr sako

Then geet narrated him whole thing after hearing ramu said

Geet ji phele to ma apko kahun ga ka ap bht brave hain jo akele apney pati ko dhondney ayi hain aj kal kon yeh sab krta hy ur dosri baat yeh bht acha hoa jo ap marey pass agyein dekhye ma poraey village ko janta hoon humarey village ma to aisa to koi nhi aya hy pr ma sath waley village bhi jata hoon wahan raju hy jis k pas sab information hoti hy kay kon paani sa ayah y kya cheez ayi hy kya gyi hy ap ja kr us sy mil lo ho skta hy usko pata ho apkey pati kay barey ma yahan dhondney ka koi faida nhi ap wahin chali jao

After talking with ramu they return to tai's place and she asked

Geet ab tu kya karey gi?

Abhi to marey kuch smajh nhi arha tai kya karun?

Meri maan ramu shi keh raha hy wo iss village k barey ma sab sy ziada jannta hy wo keh raha hy to tu wahan chali jaa

Hmmm tai keh to ap shi rhi hain yahan time waste karney ka kya faida jitni jaldi maan mil jyen wohi acha hy na

Haan beta!!

Tai to phr ma aisi krti hoon abhi hi nikal jati hoon

Chal to ready ho ja ma kuch khaney k lye pack kr deti hoon aur ramu sy keh deti hoon k wo raju ko keh dey k wo tum sy bus stop py mil ley aur uska number bhi ly ke deti hoon aur sunn apna bht khayal rakhna aur haan haar bilkul mat maanana thori mushkil zaroor hogi magr dekhna jeet tumhari hi hogi

After bid good bye to tai geet is now towards her new destination with determination to find maan...

Edited by nehaa9 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice
geet was ready to search maan tai said first nashta than they go to ramu fr help he said to take info fr another guy
in between gert remember hr wedding night and sameer prank
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update
geet ready to search Maan
flash back was awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear
Liked it!!
Geet was all set to find Maan and Tai was helping her out
Geet was reminiscing her past were Sameer played prank on her and Maan on their wedding night and called Maan as a statue.
Well according to Ramu , maan is not in there village as he didn't see any new face in their village .
Well geet is set out to search for maan in nearby village with raju's assistance
Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks 4 da pm n great update! well written! Tai helps Geet! Geet hears some girls tease another girl abt her SR n recalls her SR! Sameer teased Maan! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely Chapter

Geet remembering her wedding night and Sameer playing a prank on Maan
I wonder will Geet get the help she seeks from the wedding house
waiting for next chapter

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