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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Awesome👍🏼
Suraj's confession is nice
As said by Sania & Rinka,that line is superb
Waiting for next part of this & TTW !!

Thank you yaar!
Happy that you liked that last line LOL
Will be updating this in few minutes and TTW before Thursday!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: arena99
awesome
suraj confession is nice
love the bonding between vivan and chakor cute bonding 😊

Thanks dear!
Glad you loved the bro-sis combo and bonding!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Loved it!
So Suraj confessed, I thought his resistance will last longer.
The brother-sister duo is crazy.
Chakor is always thinking of their babies 😆.
I hope her parents don't have issues with Suraj's parentage.
As mentioned above, Chakor's last line was 👍🏼.
Can't wait to know what Suraj has to suffer through next.

Thanks you a lot dear!
Glad you loved and find her crazy!
I too hope so for her parents!
You will see it today!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: taahir004
Fantastic Chapter

Finally Suraj has accepted Chakor but I liked that he told her the facts of his life
and she so easily accepted him too well I guess she is already in love so hearing the gory details of his life just adds spice to their life 😆
Suraj wants to talk to her parents first and I like that very much so now will Chakor be able to control herself staying away from her love knowing now he too likes her

Thank you so much!
Me too! Else it wouldn't be easy for the crazy girl to be more crazy 😉
You are right! A lot more spices are coming LOL
Ah the last part of ur question/hypothesis is a big thing to answer!😛

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Hello buddies!

Sorry to say this!
I forgot the part 10 at work and today I'm on leave.
I just now checked it to find the next part to be left at work!
So the next part will be updated tomorrow once I will be at work!
So guys, SORRY!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Hello!

Finally here with the next part!
Hope you all like it!

Link to previous part: Part 9

Happy reading!

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Part 10

Hearing her naughty talks, he wanted to act and he tried.
"Is this the way to speak to your teacher?" he tried to talk sternly.
"You aren't my teacher here." still showing all her teeth.
"Then?"
"Can I say husband?"
"Going fast I think." with a thinking expression.
"The sooner The merrier!"
He laughed a small laugh.

"Can I sleep here please?"
"No! It's wrong."
"I will not do anything! Please!" with a baby face "Hugging is not a sin. And moreover I don't know when will be the next time I can sleep with you. It might be our wedding night." with a sad expression thinking when it will be but it turned immediately happy one "But after that I will always be with you. So please today!"
He sighed defeated and nodded after a lot of pleading and promise peeks.
She did a happy dance in her head and kissed a chaste kiss before getting up from him and settling on the bed.

He got up and took his night dresses in his hand and looked at Chakor.
"What?" raising brows.
"I need to change."
"Change! I don't have any problem!"
He shook his head and asked for bathroom for which she gave a small kiss on his cheek as she exited the room to leave him freely for few minutes.

He can see that his life is starting to have colours in it and he wishes it stays longer with everyone's acceptance.

"How much more time do you need?"
"It's been just 30 seconds you left."
"I feel like 30 minutes." she said exaggerating!

He unlocked the door and went to put his folded clothes on the side table while she locked the room and hugged him from behind.
"Chakor!"
"Hmmm"
"It's 1:45 AM now!"
"Hmmm"
"We need to get to bed."
"Ok!" she said, left him and closed her eyes and lifted her hands like Christ the Redeemer statue.
With complete silence, he tuned to find her in that pose.
"What are you doing Miss. Statue!"
"Waiting for my Man to lift me and take me to bed."
He shook his head laughing lightly "I I don't!"
"I will start to call your name huskily louder in a sexy manner and brother will think you aren't as you are showing!" with closed eyes.
He gaped with what he heard and said "I think I should reconsider my feelings for you."
"In that case! Say bye to this life Mister!"
"Unbelievable!"
She smiled.

He scooped her like a child and they went to bed and slept peaceful under the same quilt with just their arms across each other and their body stuck like a stick.

Suraj was the first one to woke up the next morning.
Seeing the sleeping beauty and someone this close while waking is all together a different experience.
He pushed few strands of hair covering her face and smiled before getting out of the bed with all the care he can.

He went to the room next to Vivaan's and luckily it's the bathroom.
He got freshen up and went downstairs to the kitchen.
Knowing that he is a stranger to this house, he made coffee and started to search for something to make breakfast and found few simple ingredients.

By the time his friend came freshly, he almost finished making Aloo(Potato dish) and started to role chapatis(Indian pancakes).

"Smells yummy buddy! Didn't know you could cook!"
"I learnt as I'm living alone!"
"No worries! It will be only for 3 or 5 more years and my sister will prepare yummy yummy dishes!"
"Bro! When did you started to cook?" a scream came from upstairs and the sound of anklets stopped mid way "I... I... I..."
Both the boys smiled.
One sheepishly while the other one happily.

She came downstairs and entered kitchen with wide eyes.
"Why are you looking like you saw a ghost?" enquired Vivaan.
She shook her head and left kitchen.
"Hey! Tell me! What you did to my sister that she forgot to speak?"
"Can you please close your mouth!"
"You know you could have just said 'Shut the F man!'."
It was Suraj's turn to shook his head before turning off the gas and taking the dishes to table.

Breakfast was a calm affair with the buddies talking about what they could do for their project and Chakor mostly looking at Suraj as she sat opposite to him.
Once they finished, the boys went upstairs to continue the rest of the work while Chakor went to her room to finish all her homework.

"What do you want for lunch?" she asked entering her brother's room to find them fully immersed in their files and laptops.
"Hmmm?" Vivaan as he looked at her.
"What should I cook for lunch?" she repeated.
"Can't we just go to a restaurant?"
"Why?" hands on her hips.
"You need to improve your cooking skills before anyone else than me tastes."
She glared her brother.
"Oh! I'm going to die!" Vivaan exaggerated.
A smile appeared on Suraj's face seeing the drama.
"Say that you want to waste money instead of telling lies about my cooking skills." folding hers arms over her chest.
"Oh! How I wish it was true!"

Suraj laughed.
Now it was his turn to get deadly glare from her.
"Sorry!" he said with a smile which brought a smile on her face.
"She would be the one saying sorry to you once you tasted her food." Vivaan.
"I'm going to kill you!" She announced approaching him when he hid behind Suraj, so she has to stop.

"Thanks dude!" Vivaan whispered in Suraj ears.
"You are going to starve!" she stomped her foot and left his room.
"Thank god I escaped!" Vivaan said a little louder so that she can hear but she didn't return.
"Hey!" Suraj.
"It's normal buddy!"
"I don't think so!"
"Why so?"
"The reason is ... me" scratching his nuke.
"I see." going back to thinking mode "I think you should go and say sorry." he added.

"What?" Suraj exclaimed.
"What what? She is embarrassed because of you, so go and tell that we will go to restaurant. Go go go!" he started to push him.
"Hey! Wait! I will go! Just 10 minutes to check one last time everything and it's done."
"Hmmm Ok!" he accepted as if it was the biggest decision he had made.

"Come in!" she said hearing the knock.
Seeing the person on the doorstep, she immediately got up and sat down properly.
"Are you still angry on your brother?" supporting his body on the open door.
"I don't know." getting up and going towards him.
"So are you ready to go to restaurant?"
"You don't want to taste my"
"It's not that."
"Then?" stepping closer to him and putting her hands around his neck.
"He always wanted to go out and all. But me being busy I declined every time. So he used you to make me go."
"So you want to go now?"
"If that's ok with you."
"I will sit next to you over the table."

"No way!" a voice from outside the room came which made her jerk few feet away from her love.
"Can't you see we were talking?" she asked her brother after making her heartbeats even.
"Yeah! I saw what you were up to with my poor friend!"
"You are talking as if you love him!" she said mockingly.
"Do you think only you have the rights?"
"Yes!" showing all her teeth.
"What if"
"Guys! Please stop! I'm starving! It's already 2:15! Can we go?" interrupting his friend.
"Sure!" she said taking his hand and exiting her room, followed by her brother "Italian restaurant in the 4th street on the left. Come there after closing the door!" she said to her brother without turning to his side.
"You are coming with me Choti!"
"No!"
"Chakor!" Suraj called.

"Hmmm!"
"Go with your brother."
She shook her head and held his arm tightly as they came out the main door.
"Don't be stubborn."
"I know that we will not go out as normal couple. So this time please." she said in a low voice with pleading baby eyes, only in a way Suraj can hear it.

Vivaan locked the door and said:
"Let's race who is going first!"
"No!" Chakor jumped in between "No bike race! We will go slowly!" she added eyeing her love.
"Are you scared Choti?"
"I don't want DOT!"
"Calm!" he said instead of her brother.

"So?" Vivaan waited.
"Would you mind if I come with him?" she asked not meeting her brother's eyes.
He smiled and replied "Come with him." as he got on his bike and turned the motor.

She puller her teacher to his bike making him to take it out of its stand.
She got behind him and they made their way out of the black gates.
She put her shawl hiding her face and hugged him tightly before resting her face over his back.

"I love you a lot!" she said.
"Why suddenly?"
"If I can I will say for each breath I take."
"Am I worth the"
"You are everything." she interrupted him.
"Why me?"
"Reason unknown to me."

They arrived at the restaurant and saw her brother enter it.

"Come!" she said getting down and waiting for him.
She took his hand in hers and made their way, when they found the person they searched, they went near that table.
She made him sit opposite to her brother in the small cabin where they are and sit next to him.

"I feel like a alien being here." Vivaan commented sarcastically.
"Feel like that! No one asked you!"
"Since when you started to talk to your brother like this."
"Since the time you wanted to play with me in front of your friend!"
"Yeah just my friend."
"Of course ... NOT!"

The waitress came at the correct time to take the order.
From there on it was as peaceful as the morning breeze.
Chakor took hold of Suraj's hand under the table when he put it over his lap and entwined their fingers.
He saw her questioningly but she smiled at him while his friend was giving full attention to his food knowing well what he will see if his concentration was somewhere else.

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What can you wait in next part?
Naughty talks + Discussion with parents

Next part: Part 11

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Very very platonic it was...

Loved the trio bonding!!

Suraj what to say he is sooo careful about his princess!!!

very nicely done!!!

waiting for the next part !!!!

Hope some naughtiness and mature talk with parents.

Love this Chakor - bubbly, cute...

thanks a lot!

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#158

It was awesome sis..

Chakor naughty talks and suraj acting was superb..

Vivan chakor nok jhoks was very funny..

I loved the bond btwn the trio..

Chakor was so romantic..bt suraj was more confused in their relationship..

Poor vivan..he was hung up btwn lovers..he have to full concentrate on his food..otherwise this poor soul has to see his sis romancing his poor frnd..

I loved tis part very much..

Eagerly waiting for next part sis..

Luv u..tc

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Amazing update👏

Loved chakor's naughty talks & suraj's confused state😉

Loved the trio bonding😊

Poor vivan , he was stuck between lovebirds😆

Waiting for next

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#160

Lovely Chapter

Chakor wants every moment with Suraj whenever its possible as she says she has no idea will the chance will arrive again and I suppose Suraj now accepting everything as now he too feels he can have love and family in his life

Chakor , Suraj and Vivaan at the resturant and again she takes the chance to hold onto her loves hand

I admire the bold daring Chakor but it would be great to see Suraj too getting a little bolder with her or perhaps demanding maybe possessive too