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arena99

@arena99

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#161

amazing update

loved the trio bonding,naughty brother sister combination and decent suraj😊

ty maithu for pm and lovely story
waiting for TTW updates 😊

Edited by arena99 - 8 years ago

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Amazing update!

Pushing a strand of her hair is a signature Suraj move.

Suraj is still reserved around them, I'm not sure if it's his nature or due to his personal history.

Even Vivaan and Suraj together can't handle Chakor 😆.

Loved the trio bonding, Vivaan was desperate to avoid her cooking 😆.

Suraj must be grateful Vivaan is focusing on his plate, he'll be embarrassed too.

Can't wait for the next update!

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RINKA

@R_Ritz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Wow maithu this update was awesome yet again... I loved it to the core... This Chakor is completely different from the show... i like it..today is again 21/07...please update soon.. sorry I was busy these days, could not visit here at all...stay blessed

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Very very platonic it was...
Loved the trio bonding!!

Suraj what to say he is sooo careful about his princess!!!

very nicely done!!!

waiting for the next part !!!!

Hope some naughtiness and mature talk with parents.

Love this Chakor - bubbly, cute...

thanks a lot!

Thank you so much dear!

I don't know the level of naughtiness you are waiting for, but I hope the next part will be satisfying.

This Chakor have won all your hearts more than Suraj LOL

I'm happy for that!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
It was awesome sis..
Chakor naughty talks and suraj acting was superb..
Vivan chakor nok jhoks was very funny..
I loved the bond btwn the trio..
Chakor was so romantic..bt suraj was more confused in their relationship..
Poor vivan..he was hung up btwn lovers..he have to full concentrate on his food..otherwise this poor soul has to see his sis romancing his poor frnd..
I loved tis part very much..
Eagerly waiting for next part sis..
Luv u..tc

Thanks dear!

Glad you enjoyed it and loved the bonding between them!

What do dear, if Vivaan wanted to play cupid, he plays until the end! LOL

Will be updating soon!

U too TC! See u! Love you too dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
Loved chakor's naughty talks & suraj's confused state😉
Loved the trio bonding😊
Poor vivan , he was stuck between lovebirds😆
Waiting for next

Thank you!

Glad you are loving the story and how it's going!

Yep Poor Bro!

Will be there soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: taahir004
Lovely Chapter

Chakor wants every moment with Suraj whenever its possible as she says she has no idea will the chance will arrive again and I suppose Suraj now accepting everything as now he too feels he can have love and family in his life
Chakor , Suraj and Vivaan at the resturant and again she takes the chance to hold onto her loves hand
I admire the bold daring Chakor but it would be great to see Suraj too getting a little bolder with her or perhaps demanding maybe possessive too

Thank you so much!

I too feel the same for Suraj :-)

I will try to bring a bit of Suraj but not fully as this story is owned by Chakor and it was fully for her and it is still!

Hope you understand!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: arena99
amazing update

loved the trio bonding,naughty brother sister combination and decent suraj😊
ty maithu for pm and lovely story
waiting for TTW updates 😊

Thank you dear!

Glad you are loving this combo!

Please don't mention it! I'm happy that you are liking my writings!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing update!
Pushing a strand of her hair is a signature Suraj move.
Suraj is still reserved around them, I'm not sure if it's his nature or due to his personal history.
Even Vivaan and Suraj together can't handle Chakor 😆.
Loved the trio bonding, Vivaan was desperate to avoid her cooking 😆.
Suraj must be grateful Vivaan is focusing on his plate, he'll be embarrassed too.
Can't wait for the next update!

Thanks a lot buddy!

Yup dear! You remarked that small thing of Suraj style!

I love when men do that to their women LOL!

I think he is like this due to both thing you mentioned above!

Yep Suraj should be grateful to Vivaan as for Chakor, it's not a matter LOL

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Rinka_Ritz
Wow maithu this update was awesome yet again... I loved it to the core... This Chakor is completely different from the show... i like it..today is again 21/07...please update soon.. sorry I was busy these days, could not visit here at all...stay blessed

Thanks dear!

Glad you loved it!

And I'm really happy that this Chakor is getting her fans LOL

I will be updating soon dear!

Hey! No need to say sorry!

Thanks for the wishes!