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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: TAMOGHNAD11

Suprrbbb chapter Gayu di! Loved it! Devakshi's romance was awesome! ⭐️
Please update soon.
Thanks for the pm. 😊





Thanku dear
Awww glad tumhe accha laga
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ria_Ca


Lovely update Gayu 😉
Devakshi romance was sizzling ❤️
Looking forward for next chapter




Thanku so much Ria
Will updatehthe next one soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 2728..1113

Lovely update...

😊😊
Continue soon...

Thanks for the pm diii...😳





Thanku dear
Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuku_92

Hey gayatri di...

How r u feeling now...R u better now?
Your update was very nice n exciting😆
I really like jay as a father...
Dev really required a good scolding which he got.. i really feel sorry for Tina... She was trying to help...

Why do i feel the black mailer is that rahul ?

Waiting for the next part di





Hey Tanu

M better now bt not still ok
Even i like jay as a father
N yes even i feel sry for tina
Dev ko daant padi
Ab banda line pe aayega
Will update soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: FLW70

Awesome story!!...read all 28 chapters in one go...you are a gifted writer n storyteller!!

Eagerly awaiting the update.




Thanku so much for the lovely appreciation dear
Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _RS_

Di di di

Insaaf chahiye ab hume aur DevAkshi ko
Ab to babies ko milwado
Elena ne aaj gussa dila dia
Ab koi ni beech mn pls




Haan haan ab bass agle waale mein mil hi gaye samjho 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Fabulous Chapter</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I don't blame Tina as she thinks of Sona just as an employee and all she is trying to do</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">is protect Mrs Dev</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Jay scolding them was delightful indeed</font>





Hey shaun
Y3s indeed i dont blame her too
She was just trying to help
N jay had to scold his babies
They have been acting too cranky ths days 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Update do...

Update de do😛



Deti hoon baalike
Deti hoon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Ok guys here's my next installment of the series...I hope you enjoy reading it... happy reading...

I know I'm extremely late in updating this time but do forgive me owing to my ill health...

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Banner Credits : Binnu (my darling Binnuuddiii)

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Chapter Twenty Nine


Bijoy was sipping his morning tea when his phone buzzed, he was pleasantly surprised to get an early morning call from Jay...arrey Jay, aaj subah subah kaise yaad kiya bhai?...koi khaas baat?...an equally pleasant jay answered from the other end...arrey kyun bhai, agar kuch khaas baat ho to hi dostoan ko yaad karte hai kya? Aise hi mann nahin kar sakta apne dostoan se milne kaa?...they both chatted for a while before deciding to meet up at their regular coffee shop.

As they sat across the table discussing their business matters over a cup of coffee later that day, Jay cautiously put forth his main concern, "Bijoy darasal baat yeh hai ki main chahta hoon ki Sona ab humare ghar aa jaye, bohot din ho gaye woh tumhare yahaan reh rahi hai...nahin isse humein koi takleef nahin hai par mujhe lagta hai ki Dev aur Sona agar saath rahenge to ek dusre ko behtar samajh payenge...tumhe kya lagta hai?, he waited patiently to see what would be Bijoy's reaction.

"dekh yaar Jay, mujhe koi problem nahin hai Sona ke tere ghar jaane se, aakhir woh uss ghar ki bahu hai aur uska farz hai uss ghar ke prati...par Dev ne jo kuch bhi uske saath kiya, mujhe nahin lagta ki unn dono ko saath rehna chahiye...main to soch raha tha ki accha mauka dekhke, Sona se divorce ki baat karunga...Bijoy put forth his suggestion while shocking Jay...aisa kabhi mat karna Bijoy...dono bacche ek dusre se bohot pyaar karte hain...main nahin chahta ki tumhari galat faimi unn dono ki jindagi barbaad kar de......Jay explained to him how Sona had fetched a job in Dev's office so that she could spend some time with him, he also told him about how they had still not revealed the truth of their relationship to their peers, and hence were facing so many issues...he assured him that Dev was indeed repenting for his deeds and it was actually their destiny to end up together...at the end of the conversation, Bijoy did seem convinced.

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Bijoy reached home with a grumpy face...it was a Sunday so Sona was at home today...he went up to her room so that he could have a chat with her, something which he didn't have since months...Shona bete, kya tum free ho?tumse thodi baat karni hai...it had never occurred before that Bijoy had to seek Sona's permission to talk to her...but since their relationship had hit rocks due to their misunderstanding, Bijoy thought it's better to be formal...Sona instantly left what she was doing and moved towards the window, settling down she signaled her Papa to join her there too...this was their favorite chat spot before their lives changed drastically...a place she had only shared with Dev.

"Beta aaj Jay mila tha...usne bataya ki tum Dev ke office mein kaam karti ho...woh keh raha tha ki tum aur Dev ek dusre se bohot pyaar karte ho...main tumhare muh se sunna chahta hoon beta...kya yeh sab sach hai?...Bijoy tried to gauge Sona's expressions as Sona decided to pour her heart before her dad...Dad ne jo kuch bhi kahaan sab sach hai Papa...main aur Dev ek dusre se bohot jyaada pyaar karte hain...aapne Dev ko iss ghar se nikaal diya, mujhe usse bahar milne se bhi darr lagta tha...isiliye maine uska office join kiya...taaki uske saath thoda waqt bita sakun...Dev bohot accha hai Papa...woh bass thoda bhatak gaya tha...use apni galti ka ahsaas hai...woh sachmuch mere saath rehna chahta hai, mujhe khush rakhna chahta hai...please Papa...kya aap use maaf nahin kar sakte?...mere liye......Bijoy got emotional and hugged his daughter to his heart...he was aware he had also equally wronged her...but the fact that she still cared for him and waited all this while to reunite with Dev, just because he was not approving it, made him feel overwhelmed.

"ab kya din bhar hum dono yehi rote baithenge?...apne sasuraal jaana hai yah nahin?...tumhare sasurjii aaye hai neeche tumhe lene...chalo tayyar ho jao...mujhe aur bhi kaam hai...arrey bhai meri beti ki bidaayi hai, tayaariya to karni padengi na......he got up trying to hide his tears...Sona stopped him just in time...I'm sorry baba...main bohot buri hoon na...maine aapko uss din gusse mein bohot kuch suna diya......Bijoy kissed her forehead and patted her head lovingly...sorry to main hoon beta...maine tumpar bharosa na karke bohot galat kiya hai tumhare saath...maaf karogi na apne baba ko?...Sona held his hands in hers...haan karungi par ek shart par...aap aaj mujhe bida nahin karenge...Dev ne kahaan tha ki woh mujhe iss ghar se lekar jaayega...aapke aashirwaad ke saath...toh aaj main Dad ke saath jaungi jaroor...par iss ghar se officially tabhi bida houngi, jab Dev mere saath hoga...ok......Yes Ma'am......Bijoy mock saluted her as they broke into fits of laughter.

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Jay drove Sona to Dixit Niwaas as Sona questioned him...Dad, Dev aapke saath kyun nahin aaya?...usne aana chahiye tha naa......she cribbed as Jay consoled her...mera beta Sunday ke din kabhi 12 baje se pehle utha hai jo aaj uthega...woh to tum use jabardasti uthakar jogging keliye le jaati thi...warna majaal hai kisiki jo uss kumbhakaran ko jagaye......Sona blushed as she recollected how he would be sprawling lazily on his bed, his mouth slightly open...wearing only his track pants...kya aaj bhi woh waise hi soya hoga?...bina shirt pehne?...she blushed hard as this fact didn't go unnoticed by Jay.

They reached Dixit Niwaas as Ishwari welcomed Sona with a huge smile...aa gayi beta...aankhen taras gayi thi tumhe dekhne keliye...ek hi shehar mein hokar bhi aaj hum 4 mahine baad mil rahe hai...ab aa gayi ho toh apne pati ko khud sambhalo...mujhse to nahin sambhalte tumhare laad sahib...waise aarti utarni chahiye mujhe tumhari...par Jay ne mujhe bataya tumhari shart ke baare mein...toh jab tum uss ghar se officially vida hokar aaogi na, tabhi iss ghar mein tumhara official gruh pravesh hoga...theek haina?......Sona hugged Ishwari lovingly as the older couple left to their room, leaving Sona alone in the living room...as they ascended the stairs Jay instructed Sona...arrey beta wahan khadi rahogi to Dev nahin aayega tumhare paas...jaao jaakar apna kaam karo...uss nalayak ko neend se jagao......Sona blushed while Jay and Ishwari felt content seeing their kids happy.

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After waiting at outside the room for a long while, Sona finally entered the room to see Dev sprawl over the entire bed, all fussy...his hair disshelved making him look all the more hot...she lowered her eyes as she realized today yet again Dev had slept shirtless...taking silent steps towards him, she gently tapped him on his shoulder, making sure to make the minimal contact with his bare skin...when he refused to budge, Sona had no option but to use her age old method for waking him up...she picked up a pillow from his bed and whacked him hardly on his butt...as usual he woke up screaming loudly, as he was astonished to see his beautiful wife all decked up in a saree, standing in his room with a pillow in her hand.

"Sona tum yahaan?...tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?......he got up worriedly as she tried to calm him down...relax Bunny...mujhe yahaan Dad lekar aaye hain...aur woh bhi Papa ki marzi se...so calm down...she hit him playfully on his forehead as he looked onto her dreamily...matlab Papa maan gaye...matlab tum ghar aa gayi...matlab hum dono ab saath rahenge...matlab ab sab sort out ho gaya?...he kept on blabbering as Sona giggled at his antics...haan haan meri matlab ki dukaan...sab kuch set hai...ab main yehi rahungi apne Bunny ke saath...samjhe......she winked at him as he yelped in excitement.

Holding her by her hand he pulled onto the bed...before she could understand what he's upto, he rolled over and brought her under him, taking her by surprise...Dev yeh kya kar rahe ho...darwaaja khula hai...koi aa jayega...chodo mujhe......she tried getting out of his hold as he tightened his grip over her...Dev apni patni ko pyaar kar raha hai...aur iss ghar mein sab log samajhdaar hain...toh woh humein bilkul disturb nahin karenge......he nuzzled in her neck as she tried pushing him away...Dev tumne shirt nahin pehni hai...atleast shirt to pehenlo......Dev giggled at her innocence...main yahaan romance karne ki baat kar raha hoon aur tum ho ki kapde pehenne ki baat kar rahi ho...romance karne keliye kapde pehne nahin utaare jaate hai Cheeku......Sona blushed at his bold comment as he looked onto her passionately.

Dev pinned her hands on the bed as his lips made their way on her skin...before she could realize he unpinned her saree pallu and kissed her over her face, neck and chest...Sona's finger's entwined in his locks as he continued getting his fill from her...they were lost in their monogamy as Dev heard someone approaching their room...he looked up at Sona who was too lost in their moment to notice anything around...Dev quickly pulled the duvet over themselves as they were not in a state to get back to normal...Dev properly covered both of them with the duvet so that the person approaching them shouldn't realize their compromising state as he pretended to be in deep slumber with Sona under him, her effect drained down now bringing her back to her senses...her mouth clasped by his palm.

Jay walked into check if Dev had woken up or not, but was surprised to see Dev still enjoying his beauty sleep, he wondered where Sona had gone, he was about to turn around and go looking out for Sona as she moved in her position, the tinkling of her bangles earning Jay's attention...he turned around abruptly as he was quick enough to see the change of expressions on Dev's face which lasted for a fraction of seconds...Dev face palmed himself virtually and slowly opened his one eye to see if Jay had gone or was still there...he quickly shut his eyes again as he saw his Dad starring at him mischievously...So jaao So jaao...main toh bass yeh batane aaya tha ki main aur Ishwari aaj bahar ghoomne jaa rahe hai...woh kya haina humein ek dusre ke saath thoda waqt bitana hai...woh kya kehte hai tumhari trendy language mein...haan quality time spend karna hai...toh hum na raat ko der se lautenge...umeed hai ki tum ghar pe akele bore nahin hoge...main darwaaja band kar deta hoon...taaki koi tumhari neend kharab na kare......Ishwari who had come after Jay to look out for him, was surprised to see Jay talking to someone standing at the entrance of Dev's room...she moved towards him and tapped on his shoulder as he signaled her to be quiet and observant...she looked into the room as she noticed Dev piously pretending to sleep while the duvet seemed a bit too raised to accommodate a single person.

She looked on carefully as she noticed Sona's saree peeking out of the duvet from one corner...she realized the situation and pulled out Jay from the room, shutting the door behind her before he could notice these minute details...they both left for their date as the younger couple moved out in open pushing the duvet aside to have a hearty laugh, before getting back to complete their unfinished business...Sona's giggles died down sooner as Dev didn't seem to be in a mood to await for the night to dawn...he set out to claim her there and then...

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"Dev mujhe tumhein ek baat batani thi...jo itne dino se main tumhe batana chahti thi lekin phir socha ki tum already pareshaan ho, tumhe aur pareshan kyun karun......Sona spoke while picking up her clothes from the floor where they were dropped by Dev during their make-out session a while ago, as Dev looked back at her from the washroom, where he was busy trimming his stubble, all exhausted after romancing his wife for around 2 hours...he moved out of the washroom, and waited for Sona to continue...mera phone uthana wahaan se...told him while wearing her clothes back...yeh video dekho...mujhe kisi unknown number se aaya hai......Dev looked on intently into the phone as his expressions changed from that of curiosity to anger...tum mujhe ab bata rahi ho...pehle kyun nahin bola Sona......he threw her phone on the bed and sat down annoyingly as Sona sat next to him consoling him...maine bataya na tumhe...tum pehle hi pareshan the...aur pareshan nahin karna chahti thi main tumhe... I'm sorry......she pulled his face towards pecked him lovingly on his lips.

Dev made a quick call to someone and gave him the details of this unknown number...on getting assured that the intruder will be tracked down immediately, he put the phone down and hugged Sona to himself lovingly...yeh kal tak pakda jayega...aur phir humein office mein bhi sabko sach batana hai......Sona interrupted his chat...uss sab se pehle, kal humein Papa se milne bhi jaana hai......Dev gave her a confused look as she cleared his doubts...patidev main yaahaan aayi jaroor hoon par apne ghar se officially vida nahin hui hoon...kyunki aapne mujhe promise kiya tha ki aap mujhe wahaan se poori respect ke saath apne ghar lekar aayenge, toh kal jab aap Papa se milenge, unse baat karenge, unhe apni baat samjhayenge aur unse humari saari galtiyon keliye maafi mangenge, toh meri wahaan se official bidaayi hogi aur phir yahaan pe official gruh pravesh...samjhe buddhu......Dev nodded like an obedient kid before posing an instant and innocent question...toh kya official bidaayi aur gruh pravesh ke baad humari official suhaagraat bhi hogi Cheeku?...Sona's mouth fell open in a wide "O as she whacked him on his forearm...no ways Dev, not again...atleast not for a week now...tum na bohot jyaada despo ho gaye ho...tumhe andaaja bhi nahin hai ki how sore I'm feeling right now, so you better stay away from me for a while now...Dev looked onto her concerned and quickly pulled her into his warm embrace...I'm sorry...did I hurt you much?...main iss mamle mein bilkul bhi experienced nahin hoon na...you know you are the first and the last girl with whom I share a physical relationship...so agar maine tumhe jyaada hurt kiya ho to I'm really very sorry Cheeku...he held his ears apologetically, as Sona felt her heart melt at his state.

"it's ok Bunny, I guess sabke saath aisa hi hota hoga first time mein...there's no need to worry...I'll be fine...aur tum mujhe kabhi jaan boojhkar hurt kar hi nahin sakte... I trust you......she pinched his nose playfully as he kissed her palm thankfully...I promise Sona...main khudko tumpar kabhi force nahin karunga...aur agar tumhe takleef hogi na aise hi to hum dubara kabhi yeh sab nahin karenge......Dev seemed to be in a mood to renounce his life...oh hello, itna melodrama karne ki jaroorat nahin hai ok...maine bass kuch din dur rehne ko kahaan hai...poori jindagi nahin...tumhara mujhe nahin pata, par main jyaada din khudko tumse dur nahin rakh paungi...koi paagal ladki hi hogi jiski niyat itne hot husband ko dekhke nahin bigdegi......she bit her tongue as she realized what all she had confessed in the heat of the moment...Dev being the quickest to observe such things quickly pulled her to himself...so you find me hot? Yeh kabse hua matlab...pehle se tha ki abhi abhi shuru hua hai...yeh mujhe dekhke yeh sab sochna aur apni niyat bigaadna?...Sona slowly got up from the bed to escape while engaging him in her words...jyaada galat faimi mat paalo ok...main toh bass tumhe aise hi better feel karane keliye bol rahi thi...don't take it seriously......she was about to run out of the room when he caught her in time...itni jaldi nahin Mrs. Dixit...abhi aapne apne hot pati ke andaaj dekhe hi kahaan hai...aaj ka poora din hai humare paas...mom-dad to raat ko der se lautenge...so come let's sit and talk araamse......he pulled her inside the room again and locked the door to utilize the Sunday in the best fruitful way he could do...

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Ok that brings you to the end of this chapter...hope you guys enjoyed it...silent readers do hit the like button and other please do comment...stay tuned while I bring in the next update soon...

The next one is going to be the last update of this series...as promised to my wattpad users, I will continue this FF there if my time, mood and health permits...so do stay tuned to the chapters as they come up on my wattpad profile...

Do check out my latest dark FF "The Forced Apology which will be uploaded only on wattpad due to its mature content...my ID is #GayuKul...

Edited by DevakshiCrazy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow what a lovely Update Gayu😳👏👏..
Love it ...bijoy also agree for Devakshi 😊...

Now who is that person who is doing all that kahi dev ki ex gf tu nai 😒...

Sona's water is awseome 👏

Waiting for next update 😊
Edited by cancerian87 - 8 years ago

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