OS : Promises [Happy Birthday Neha]

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well, it's a special, special day. It's a poetess who was born this day, a one who has a special insight of rhymes and songs. Be it any situation, she's sure to find a perfect melody for it. And she doesn't shy away from etching out her own tunes too!
Needless to say, it's NEHA's birthday today!🥳

It calls for a party, isn't it? So let's sway to dance!

Here's presenting a small ode to you Neha, from an amateur writer :


OS : Promises

On a fateful night, below the serene light of far away stars, stood the two. They were absorbed into each other's presence so much so that they didn't care to shower their attention on the heavenly atmosphere.

"Yaad Hain Naina, main aksar tumse kehta tha, ki Mai yeh Shaadi, yeh phere, kisiko Nahi maanta", told Karan. She nodded slowly in agreement, her eyes reflecting the misery of those days.

"Toh aaj main Chahta hoon ki hum phirse phere le, iss Baar, inhe maankar", he asserted.
"Kya?", She chuckled in amusement.

"Haan Naina, Chalo", he took her hand softly and moved towards the bonfire.

Hand in hand, soul in soul, they went around, promising their better halves...

"Main tumhe vachan deta Hoon Naina, tumhaara Saath Kabhi Nahi chodoonga. Tum apne haath Mein hamesha Mera haath paogi", announced Karan.

"Main tumhe vachan deti hoon Karan, tumhe apne piche chode hue andheron mein Kabhi nahi Jaane doongi", told Naina.

"Main tumhe vachan deta Hoon, aisa koi kaam Nahi karunga, Nahi kisiko Karne doonga, jisse tumhaare Swabhimaan ko thess pahunche"

"Main tumhe vachan deti hoon Karan, tumhe duniya ki har musibat se bachaungi, chahe Woh Ghar ho yaa bahar"

"Main tumhe vachan deta Hoon Naina, tumse hamesha Pyaar karta rahunga, Bina ruke, Bina thake"

"Main tumhe vachan deti hoon Karan, main Kabhi tumhaara confidence low Nahi hone doongi. Tumhaare kaam mein hamesha tumhe support karungi"

"Aakhri vachan, Meri Zindagi Ka aadha hissa tumhaara hoga. Chahe Woh property ho yaa main khud", he beamed proudly.

A loud shower of rain descended the earth, extinguishing the fire. Karan lifted her up joyly and off they went indoors, giggling and enjoying, lost in each other's eyes.



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Hope you like it Neha!

Muah. <3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow it's so lovely. Well done yar. Wish we get a scene like this in the real show too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Twin .. super duper.. it's short but it's gud loved it😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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mahi...that was awesome...loved it..do write more 😊
Posted: 8 years ago
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Oml
This is so beautiful!!
So amazing!
M feeling so special... Thankyou so much for lovely gift 😳
The edit n this short OS also
Edited by ___Neha___ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Super cute Mahi. Loved it. ❤️

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