chalte jana hai- my own-UPDATED

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golu

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Posted: 18 years ago

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hi friends😊

i am golu ..and i am new to sher-o-shayari forum..iam posting lines of my own poem ...chalte jana hai

~ chalte jana hai~

baadal jab chhate hain,bundein barsatein hain,man mein bechhaini kar..dil ko tarsaate hain..

aakash ka soonapan man mein to chhata hai,thandi hawa ka jhonka fir kyun mujhe chhu jata hai..

maine seekha hai ek jhonkhe se hi khush hojana..

kyunki mujhe to bas hai chalte jana! !

neele gagan mein gum ye dil..panchhi jaise udta ye dil..

dhundhta hai jaane kise..kaun hai aakhir iski manzil !

maine seekha hai bin Manzil bhi safar mein muskurana..

kyunki mujhe to bas hai chalte jana ! ! ! golu

Edited by friend_125 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

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wow u r a gud shair.........btw welcome

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golu

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Posted: 17 years ago

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thanks...eijaz_the_best.. 😊
this poem is long but there were no replies so

i deleted paragraphs...
but if u liked n wish to read i may paste full poem...>?

Edited by friend_125 - 17 years ago

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Kaajal

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Posted: 17 years ago

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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... i just really like it.. 😊

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Muhmmad Usman

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Posted: 17 years ago

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gud wOrk 😊 even bOht khub 😛

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Nandini Bhat

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Wonderful!Keep writing!! 😳 👏

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