Rikara ff: When she coloured my canvas!!! Pg 29 ( 21 Aug) - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Shradhha 🤗


You are gem of a conversationalist, a writer. You chhupi rustom

What? Om slapped Gauri 😡 He is not Original Om ... He is bloody Fake Kara who is under the wrong impression that Gauri is behind his money even after she has done way too much for him to now put up with his tantrums ...

Anika & Gauri are two royal rajasthani princesses ... I had a similar thought at the back of my mind ... Not that their personality will get affected by this but they will surely experience a better life because they got to know that even they have a family ... 😳

Om started behaving like a moron again. You definite son of Tej Singh Oberoi in all ways! She was giving him a good idea about his parents relationship and now again he is accusing her for being greedy ... Literally enough Om ... I loved Gauri's response! He seriously does not know anything and does not even care to do so ...

Anika! You go girl! Why one ... You should have slapped your brat devar twice, thrice ... Multiple times. Om had come to deserve it!

Now that she is pained and hurt, ignoring him is a very good decision even after taking care of his minor requirements.

Thank the merciful lord that Om finally knows the truth and has switched to repenting mode, you ought to be Guilty Kara Om and keeping your Oberoi size ego aside ... You have to say sorry to her ...he is very correct that he does not deserve a good woman like her to be his wife.🥺

RiKara preferring to ignore and stay away from each other ... Dear God ... They desperately need to have a real mature conversation. Their self created distance in between the rooms is making matters worse.

& the Ani-Om convo was a refreshing delight to read ... With finally Anika in her full Tadi to Bring back RiKara on board. The best part of everything is that it is a family conspiracy.

What's the khidkitod plan?

And about it ... I don't want it to be easy on either of them ... Be it On not being able to express his now conscience or be it Gauri with whom messing up and getting away cannot be easy! 😉

Even after the plan execution, I want Om to put in a sincere effort to win his love back... After all he did the melodramatic crap!

I really don't like Omkara to be such a man, but for this story he is well portrayed ... I so much want to see such a cold blooded Gauri ... At least trying not to give a damn about Om

"Woh hai Zara khafa khafa ... Toh nain yoon Churaaien hain ..."

It is very interesting to think about the kind of level of crazy when the mad bunch of Oberoi's initiate mission ... "RiKara Milaap". I am expecting every kind of emotion from the next update ... 🥳



Chupa rustomi is funny yaar... thanks...
Yes a pile of emotions on the way...dunno whether it will b up to ur expectations
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara1990

A bit sad with Om's behaviour. But Gauri's love will cure him. Mission rikara is on. Waiting for your next update. Thanks for the pm


Thank u Sara for commenting...yes of course good rikara moments r gonna come
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aw gauri princess
Om seems totally nuts plz continue soon loved all the parts 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi all, next 2 parts coming back to back ...
Hope u guys would like this.Try to guess the colours of this chappy

Check 1st page for previous chappies

Recap:- Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family. Om not ready to accept her, RIKARA confrontation.
Om came to know the truth. Gouri avoids Om. Gouri told her family that she is unmarried. Oberois plan to unite rikara.

Colour 10

Om was enjoying the night beauty of the palace, the rooms were so large. He had never been to a palace.He smiled, thinking that his wife is a princess...but...she did not introduce him as her pati today...may be she might b hating this beast who had tortured like hell. It is good if he is moving out of her life, in fact he didn't even ask her permission b4 marrying her. It was not a proper marriage even. So it's better not to inform her family about this meaningless shaadi.But... somehow he was still missing her...their fights on who will sleep on the floor...Everyday she would bring ice water for him by her own hands. He used to tease her for being dharam patni to look after him.

He heard a knock on the door. He wondered whom it could be.There was a servant on the door.
" saabji, rajkumari gouri had asked to give this barfwali pani here!!"

His heart ached for 1 moment. He took the tray inside.He was trying to forget things for a peaceful night. But he understood that he cannot totally get rid of her from his mind. He was crying the whole night...

2 days had passed. Rikara's ignorance continued. But gouri was taking utmost care of him without going near him. All he needed reached in correct time in front of him; whether it was food or any other comforts.She had even sent him an art kit for drawing or sculpting. She had appreciated him in front of her family about his art; the family was so happy to know this.

The palace was filled with music and dance Everytime. The palace excitedly viewed their rajkumari's talents.Aniri were also happy as they could spend so much time together. They used to play with Anshika and the younger generation of Jodhpur palace just like kids. Shivay was happy as he could see his wife enjoying the love of a family. The sisters were treated like kids by the family by dadi, dadu, choti ma, buas, chachus etc. It was a big joint family after all.

But Om couldn't enjoy whole heartedly all this.because he badly missed gouri. He didn't have the courage to go in front of her.

As he was lost in thoughts, he passed by gouri's room. He was astonished to see her. She was standing there like an angel in pure white salwar; with a brush in her hand and a canvas in front of her.

He entered the room without thinking, just staring at her.Even gouri didn't notice him. She was trying to draw but couldn't; something was holding her back. She was startled when Om called her. She was shocked. He expected her to ask him to get out. But surprisingly she just looked him & turned towards the canvas.
G: ka hua?
O: wo...gouri...
He actually wanted to apologize to her about all his past deeds. But he was afraid if this would lead to another scene, which would expose the truth in front of the Royal family. So he thought to divert the topic.

O: I want to ask u something. From the time when I taught u , u had big problem in drawing in the canvas. What is ur exact problem? Share it with me.. Don't worry, U need to say this to ur teacher, not pati.

She was silent for sometime. Then she faced the canvas and began unfolding the mystery.
" My papaji, was an art teacher. He used to draw magically.He also used to teach me.I always loved all his classes.My papaji had been the witness of a murder done by kali long back when I was 12 years. He even appeared as witness in the court.

One evening , papaji was teaching me . That time kali entered and shot him dead. He died in my hands.His blood fell on the canvas and thus brush. Since then whenever I see the canvas, my papa's death cones in front of my eyes.I smell blood in the canvas..."

Her eyes were red and teary. She took an old brush." This is papaji's brush. I always feel he is with me whenever I take this brush. My papaji.."

She was nearly breaking down. An already broken Om was again torn apart. Without thinking he asked.
" shall I make u draw?"

Gouri had not expected this.Both of them reminisced their old moments when he used to teach her. A sweet silence filled the room.Gouri didn't turn back, she was facing the canvas.

Om moved close to her. She was moving away. He grabbed her by her waist. She gasped.Still she didn't turn back.He slowly took her wrist which was holding a pencil. He was feeling her hair's fragrance. He raised her hand and began drawing looking at her; he didn't see the canvas even once.

Gouri was breathing deeply. Even b4 meeting Om, she had dreamt this same situation where he is making her draw. She was closing her eyes all the time and was feeling him.Sometime later ,she opened her eyes and saw the canvas.

It was the picture of 2 birds sitting on a branch together , looking each other lovingly with opened wings; their heads touching each other. She didn't know what to say. She felt a wetness in her nape. She turned back and saw a teary eyed Om.Both were reading their minds thru eyes,without saying anything. Both were so close . Both were so calm . They were actually enjoying and anxious about their proximity. It seemed that they had made another world for themselves; where there was only love and love.

"Chutki beta!!!" both were started by this voice. It was gouri's dadi's voice. Om was confused. He didn't know what to tell dadi. As she entered, she saw Om moving out of the room; he plainly smiled at her. Dadi was doubtful.She had come to call gouri for shopping.

Later she called anika to her room.
D: anika beta, mein kuch poochna chahti Hun, chutki ke bare me.
A: zaroor dadi.
D: wo...is there any connection with chutki and tumhari devar?
Anika was confused. what will she tell?
D: mein dekhri hum.These 2 days, I had been seeing the way she is doing things for him.She knows everything needed for him; that too at correct time. Today I saw him in her room too.I can see both r having special feelings for each other. Y is this beta?

Anika decided to disclose the whole matter to her parivar and somehow bring them closer...

This was the 3rd day in the palace. It was morning and was a busy day, as some special guests from royal family were coming to meet aniri.Both sisters were active in doing all arrangements and their family were so stunned with the simplicity of the sisters.

At 10 am, the guests arrived.Oberois were also excited as this is aniri's elder bua and her family who were the guests.

The guests entered the palace after the grand welcome functions.All were seated in the main darbar.

Bua hugged the sisters
" namasthe betiyaan, mein hu rajini Singh, tumhari papaji ki didi."
All smiled. The sisters said, " humhe pata buaji." and took her blessings.
"ye he MERI pati, balramji . We do have a big business empire and also his bhaiyya is an mp too."

And then came a dashing young gentle man in perfect business suit. Bua continued.
" ye he humari pyari beta, suryajith Singh."

He did a namasthe to both sisters.
A: (to gouri) very sanskari ladka hai na chutki?
G: haan didi, bilkul.

Om was noticing this.
B: he is a very nice boy. He is the only owner of our business empire and now he is gonna try his luck in politics too.But he is a very cultural person too in spite of this tender age. Very religious too.
D: bilkul , one of my best grandchildren.He is a dadi's beta.

B: tumhe pata. Surya's and Anika's wedding was fixed in their childhood itself, according to our custom.

Shivay almost frowned and anika saw this. She was laughing and teasing him with her eyes.Gouri was also smiling.

D: it's ok, rajini. We have chutki also right?? She is also a good match for him, hai na anika beta????

Few pairs of eyes were shocked.They were constantly watching rikara.

2 pairs of eyes were bulged out!!!!

Precap:- will Rudy's " plan a " be executed???

Next part in next post
Edited by Shraddhadikshit - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
Moving to next part,
Colour 11

Recap:- Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth. Gouri is getting a marriage proposal from her bua's son.

Rikara were intensely seeing each other. Both thought that the other person would stop these kind of marriage talks. But , the thing was that the family in fact didn't know about their shaadi. So it would b wrong to disclose it like that .

Gouri felt that she would collapse any moment ; it was due to her mistake that all this was happening. Even Om thought the same; if he had apologized to her, then this situation would have never raised.

Whereas, a superb bhabhi devar jodi were enjoying all these. Finally everything had come the way they had planned. Now addition of little more spice is gonna make big fun.

Bu: oho, aayi what r u saying? Both of them saw each other just now and & u r talking about shaadi.
D: it's ok rajini. Surya is going to stay here for few days na, so both can interact & get to know each other right?

Om was holding his fist tightly. This was unimaginable for him. He didn't know whether to react or not.

A: dadi, we will discuss about these later. First let them freshen up and have lunch.

All went back to their rooms. But 2 souls were disappointed and broken. They were just seeing each other.

The following days, Om was busy. The family wanted few sculptures from Om for their annual Jodhpur cultural fest. He even taught the kids few basics of drawing and art.The kids were in good company with Om and Anshika was also enjoying all these.But she was sad that she was not able to sleep along with them just like in OM.

But , gouri bonded with Surya in this time.They spend time together discussing about many topics. Surya was a good stage artist in music and their topic was usually music.
Om was restless seeing this. He was sad because he didnt have the right to question her about this. He felt that she was so happy with Surya. He tried to understand that fact with pain, but he couldn't. He badly wanted to go to her; he really wanted her back. He was thinking of ways to get her attention back to him.

He once made up his mind to open up his mind to her; but was not totally ready for it. As he approached a lone gouri, suddenly he saw that Surya came to take her.This was more than enough for him.

Gouri could understand all these. But even she wasn't ready to talk to him; she didn't know what was going on in his mind.

The masterminds of these plans were happy for their successful plans. They know that rikara wouldn't open up easily; but theeywere all set for this.

Finally, it was the day for oberois to go back. Gouri was going to stay here. RIKARA were badly missing each other.

Om packed his bags and went to meet gouri. He could see a restless gouri drawing in the canvas. He was happy to see that she has overcome her fear and began drawing.
"Gauri!!!" his voice was a bliss for her
"Omkaraji..." she went to him.
"I...I'm going, may b v will never see again...so."
Gouri's eyes were filled . She wanted to stop him, but was hesitated...
" Gouri, I'm sorry for all that happened. I know that I don't deserve an apology, but please do forgive me. I never wanted to hurt you it was the situations.
"it's ok omkaraji, I know. U r a good person.U never want to hurt anyone.U don't need to ask for apology. It's ok. I'm happy & thankful to u. U have saved me many times & because I came to OM, I could get back my family."

Om was relieved as she doesn't hate him.But...still he thought she would stop him or come back to OM with him. But he wasn't confident enough to ask her. What relation does she have with him to come back? They have never acknowledged their marriage,so...

Heavy heartedly he asked " shall...shall I go...?"

Gouri didn't know what to say, she wanted to stop him. But who is she? She just silently nodded.
" one more thing gouri, please... please don't forget me!!!"
He didn't know y he said this. As Om moved out of the room, gouri closed the door and cried. She was in a big Whirlpool of feelings.

OBEROI family was sad to leave gouri there.But this was indeed their plan for the next move; so they were ok with this.

The sisters were also sad, anika apologized to gouri in her mind for doing this; after all she wanted gouri to come back as bahu...

Back in OM, after 4 days...

Om was gloomy from the time he had come back. As he came down for breakfast, he heard the family discussing,
A: dadi did u know, gouri's marriage has been fixed with Surya.

Om got a good shock of his life.

D: so soon?
A: no dadi, they just fixed it. May b next month they will do an engagement.

As they were discussing, they saw Om. All were sad.They knew what is going on in his mind.

J: Om, u...were here.
O: ha mom, I'm always here.Its ok mom.
Pi: come on Om, u should move ons.Anyway ur marriage was not legal
so.
Bu: haan, om anyway u don't have any problem if she is getting married again na.

O:( sad) ha...it's her life na? she ...she has the right to take any decision. Y should I have problem.Its...it's fine..
Surya is also a good guy. He is very...very nice match for her.
It's good.

He went back. Jhanvi called him for breakfast but he didn't stay...

Someone was showing a thumbs up behind the pillar to all the ladies sitting in dining table.Who was that??

Precap:- Om to marry another girl!!!


Waiting for ur comments 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Amazing update...
Simply.loves both d parts..
So.rudy plan a starts...
Gauri to marry Surya & make om.confess ...
But til now om had.not confessed but is too gloomy...
Sad to see him this way...
Sad to know gauris father's death story & her fear & emotion for drawing...
Om helped her.come over it...
Good...
Continue soon
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
RES SHRADDHYA...i will comment in detail after reaching home!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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bhai waaahhh kya baaatt hai...m a bengali so Fatafati chapter!!!!


OM is nearly broken...n its good gauri given cold shoulder to Om only that OM could learn something...
its brilliant to see OM have feeling fr her...bt cant say...they paint together...wooww



see this painting...is this the painting Rikara painted



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Posted: 8 years ago
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brilliant update dear
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Amazing update...

Simply.loves both d parts..
So.rudy plan a starts...
Gauri to marry Surya & make om.confess ...
But til now om had.not confessed but is too gloomy...
Sad to see him this way...
Sad to know gauris father's death story & her fear & emotion for drawing...
Om helped her.come over it...
Good...
Continue soon
Thanks for pm...


Of course shall pot the next soon

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