Shivika ff : solitude chap2A updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi
This is my first try to write a fanfiction .If u like it do comment

In this fanfiction ,
Mahi is not shivay's brother

Chapter 1

10 months and everything had changed , people changed,relationships changed but love can never changed ,it just hid in some corner of their heart.

Pinky has been ill for quite a long time owing to her bad karma but what hurts her is not the pain of illness but the guilt of spoiling her son's life.
She had lied to Annika.Eventhough she didn't gave birth to Shivay she was his biological mother as Kamini was his surrogat mother.

Pinky: She was just like me.Innocent,middle-class and most importantly a misfit in the Oberoi Family.I was very happy when Shivay himself threw her out .My possession ,my son was now only mine.But it didn't last long as my Shivay became a living corpse.The stone hearted SSO came back with full force.I was happy as everything was back to the same stand as before Annika entered our lives.But I was wrong she never left us.She was always there in prayers of Dadi,secret chats of Omru and the heart of each and every member.
I thought that I had succeeded in my plan but I was wrong as this plan backfired.Jhanvi came to know about my doings and she confronted me.She made me realise how I had failed as a mother and how many insecurities had spoiled life of my son and daughter in law.But I paid no heed to that rather I was determined to remove jhanvi out of oberoi Mansion as she could disclose my real face.I planned to throw out her out of oberoi Mansion by taking advantage of her sour relationship between Tej
This grave mistake landed me in pool of guilt.My family was broken even my husband started seeing Kamini again.I realised how I had transformed into a bad women who killed everyone soul.I realised how I killed the chirpy Annika who was a younger version of me.

But as they say karma lands back to u.Iam in a hospital bed counting my last days.My family says I can recover from this brain tumour but they donot know that I donot want to recover ,I just want to apologise for my mistakes and die.As I won't to be able to face by dear ones after what I have done with them.I rectified my mistake by solving everything between Jhanvi and Tej but the pain remains the same of doing wrong with Annika.

There is a knock on the door

Jhanvi: how r u pinky ?
Pinky : iam fine .Did u find abt Annika ?
Jhanvi:I have told Khaana to search for her .We will find her soon
Pinky: we need to be fast otherwise I will die with this pain in my heart.



Next part : Where is Annika,Will she meet the Oberoi's,Shivay condition during the 10 months of separation





Teaser for chap 2:

Somewhere in USA:

Music was on full swing ,guests started arriving ,clinking of glasses could be heard and a hall full of rich people. People started enjoying themselves and it was midnight when the party ended.

After the party ended ,the host came to a young pretty lady and handed over to her a check in the name of AniSa Event Management Company.



Chapter 2A

Somewhere in USA:

Music was on full swing ,guests started arriving ,clinking of glasses could be heard and a hall full of rich people. People started enjoying themselves and it was midnight when the party ended.

After the party ended ,the host came to a young pretty lady and handed over to her a check in the name of AniSa Event Management Company.

The pretty lady was Annika .Dressed in a black knee length dress ,hair tied in a messy bun and wearing pointed heels .She was looking like a epitome of beauty.

Glancing at the check once she immediately put it in her purse .She thanked her employer for trusting their company and made her way to the exit of the hall.

She went to her car and drove back to her home. Her home,no longer a 1bhk house in a chawl but a penthouse in one of the most posh areas of USA.

Annika :It has been 8 months since I left Oberoi Mansion forever .it seems it was just yesterday when I moved here. Life has never been fair for me in terms of relationships but for the last 8 months ,life has given me so much .So many friends ,money ,fame and everything I could desire for. Sahil is going in the best boarding school .But still I am lonely as there is no one who could take Shivay's place. Many tired to approach me but I couldn't move on .I think I won't be able to move on ever but I want to and erase this pain forever.

Shivay: My life has been wrecked in past 10 months .My strength(Annika) is no longer with me. Mom is ill and is hospitalized .So many questions are answered in front of me ,Why did Annika's behavior changed all of a sudden, Why did she return after 2 months(2 months after I asked her to leave Oberoi mansion),If she returned why she did not meet me ,Why do I always feel that she was forced to leave me, Why is that all the CCTV footage during that period is not present...,Why has mom started remembering her when she is gone ,Why does it seems that mom is guilty of something ,Where is she now..

All these questions along with her memories haunt me .But I pull a mask of SSO in front of my family and pretend as if nothing happened .I have told my men to find about annika but they have not been able to.

I just can't understand why are they not able to reach her when we all know that she must in this country .She had no relatives or family .Where could she go...

I just want to meet her once...find my answers so that she stops haunting my dreams...



So Annika did come back after 2 months but happened after that???????

To know ,keep reading and commenting...😉

Also thank u everyone for the overwhelming response...sorry i couldn't reply to everyone..

Guys do comment if u like the story!!!!!!

Index:

Chap 1+ teaser chap 2 pg 1

chap 2A pg 1

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome story! Update soon :)
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Thanks !!!😊
Will try to update asap!!
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Originally posted by: rainbowveins

Awesome story! Update soon :)


Thanks!!!
I will try to update asap!😊
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Awesome dear ;-) Loved it.
Can't wait to read your version on the current story line.

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Amazing start dear.
Loved it.
Waiting for next..
Update soon..
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Very nice start do continue soon
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Awesome story
Nyc plot
Pinky ponky regretting
Update soon
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Great story!!! Do continue soon😊
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Pinky's redemption story
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