When we meet again: Shivika TS Sequel SS HOME updtd!

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Shivika short story on current track.
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Shivaay sat at the bar hoping that the burning liquid would soothe his broken heart. His eyes were red with the tears he had tried so hard to contain. His mind reeled with the string of occurrences that had taken place 2 hours earlier.

A day before, Anika had accidently got drunk she wanted to tell him something but she couldn't complete it. She had cuddled onto him hugging him tight and slept. But in the morning she had become a completely different person. She had gone causing problems and talked about partition. He had felt that something was amiss something was bugging her but couldn't find what it could be. His anger had got better of him when she went on to target his brothers and he had lashed out at her mercilessly.

"Leave..I don't want to see your face ever, you filthy gold digger"

He gulped down a little more of the hot liquid. He has seen how she had flinched at that, a layer of tears forming in her cocoa browns. But she had contained them and wore up a mask.

"I thought you had changed but you never will, you are the very same Shivaay Singh Oberoi".

She had left.

Shivaay rose from his chair feeling a little tipsy, he walked towards his room, their room. He didn't want to go in there, he would die. It was full of her, the memories would definitely strangle him.

"Shivaay" he turned to see Om, his brother. Shivaay feared that his mask would wear off under his intense gaze".

"Shivaay bhabhi.." Om started, only to be cut off by Shivaay.

"Om muje neend arey, ham kal baat karte hai".

Omkara stared at his brother's retreating figure, he looked broken. He felt the urge to go and confront his brother but decided against it. "Shivaay needs rest" he thought.

He couldn't understand what Anika wanted, it wasn't her. He trusted her as much as he trusted his brother. Shivaay was their wall and Anika his.

"O, apko pata hai kya, ki bhabhi aise kyun kiya?" Rudra's question disrupted Om's fleeting thoughts.

"Pata nahi Rudy, par woh jo kuch bhi kiya Shivaay ke liye hi kiya hoga"

"Mujhe bhi aise lagte hai" Rudra said as he moved towards Shivaay's room.

"Nahi Rudra, usse soney dete, usse rest ki zaroorat hai". Om stopped his younger one.

"Kya apko lagta hai ki bhaiya sambalpavungi kudko, woh abh sso nahi rahe. Woh Anika bhabhi ki Shivaay ban gaya da".

Om ruffled Rudy's hair and pulled him with him. His brother had voiced his own fears. He wished that Shivaay finds the courage to go through it.

...

Shivaay stood stunned at the entrance of their room. It had been just 2 hours since she had left but the room left no trace of her. The extra furniture that he had sneaked in just to suit her taste was missing. The new colours he had slowly brought in just to make her feel it was hers too had went missing. He had done it all without making it evident as she had complained that the room had no taste of hers.

Shivaay shouted loudly for the staff.

"Mera kamre mai ye sabh bina puche kon kiya" he seethed making the maid tremble with fear.

"Sir, Annika madam.." Shivaay's face fell at the mention of her name.

"Sir Anika Madam ne kaha tha, pehle ki, apke kamre pehle jaise banane"

Shivaay stood unable to comprehend anything.

"Anika ne? Kab kaha".

"Subah, madam ne kaha ki 6 baje tak sab kuch set karna da. Aur sir, madam ne bas unke liye huve kapde aur cheezey leke gayi hai. Baki unke dresses aur sab ek suitcase mey daal kar unki key dadi ko dene ke liya kaha tha".

"Tikke tum jaa sakti ho" he said his voice coarse with emotion.

After the servant left, Shivaay locked door he rested on it and puffed in some air. Why would she do this that too in the morning? He recalled how she was always hinting on separation for the past 2 days.

He opened his wardrobe, nothing, only his clothes. Not a trace of her. The room was thoroughly cleaned, bedsheets and covers washed. The floor was scrubbed and polished. Even her fragrance had left, leaving him with nothing to hang on.

He noticed a box lying on his bed. The contents stabbed another knife into his already bleeding heart. Divorce papers.Signed, Mangulsutra, The engagement ring and the Kangans.

Shivaay sighed. She had done this. Faked this all. But why?

He had changed, a lot and was still trying. He had fallen terribly for her. Why had she left him alone?


Tear drops constantly falling Shivaay placed his head on the bed. The alcohol kicking in, he fell into a dreamless slumber.

...

Breaking down in the middle of the road, Anika wailed bitterly. Her agony wasn't something that could be contained. The last thing she saw was a car speeding towards her before everything darkened out.



Guys do give long comments and suggestions. Trying to cope with depression. If very less comments I'll lose the interest to update.



Edited by MariaRebecca - 8 years ago
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I'm updating part 2. It has come out longer as I had promised a TS.
New Character: Naina Mehra( Drashti Dhami)

Two


Three months later.

Naina Mehra put down the file hastily on her table sitting on her chair she leaned backwards and closed her eyes. Her door clicked and the man she was waiting for made an appearance.

"What do you think of yourself Shivaay, why do you do this to me" she shouted half angry, half concerned.

The blue eyed monster seemed unaffected.

"How is it" Omkara questioned.

"Worse, worser" Naina said putting her hands up in the air.

"Now you get it why I dragged you here" Om added as he leaned onto the backrest.

"I do Om" she said glaring at Shivaay.

"You are simply making a mess, I'm just fine" he said getting up but soon flopped back.

"Kya hua? Fine ke bache, Weakness aya na?

I remember the times that you guys have made me tell him, not to eat unwanted medicines. I never thought you'll break up with your food, medicines and sleep". Naina paced through the length of the room.

"Jo hona da woh hogai Shivaay. Tum aise kudki khayal rakhne se piche hat nahi sakte". Naina said softly looking into hiseyes.

"There is nothing like that, Mujhe koi farak nahi padta" Shivaay shouted. He had got up and walked towards the glass wall through which he could see the outside world .

Om looked at Naina and she shook her head. The past three months had been, not less than a battle for him. Coping with her absence and also trying to act unaffected.

"We are visiting an orphanage today evening. You also come with us". Naina said looking at Shivaay.

"Nahi.."

"Shivaay I'm your childhood best friend and also your cardiologist. This is a part of my treatment and you are coming, evening 5 clock". Naina walked out without waiting for another word

...

Shivaay sat in his room not wanting to go anywhere. He just wanted to lie down and sleep. But he knew that Naina was stubborn and he would finally have to give in. The little chime of bangles made him look up. This pretty woman always reminded him of her. Strong yet delicate.

"Haan Gauri abh tumey kya advice dena hai" he asked as if disinterested.

"Hame bas puchne dey bade bhaiya" he gestured her to go on.

"Agar Omkaraji koi musibat mai gir jaungi toh aap unne bachayengi nahi" Gauri asked while fiddling with her duppatta.

"Ye kaise sawal hai Gauri, woh mera bhai hai" he replied.

"Agar Omkaraji ko bachane ke liye agar apko ye ghar chodke jaana pada tho? Unne bhi chodke jaana pada tho?" She beamed.

"Haan karungi, ye sab kyun puchre Gauri" he asked in confusion.

"Bas aise, tab aap galat hogi kya". She raised her eyebrows.

Shivaay was lost in thoughts. "Nahi, par Om muje jaana nahi dengi".

"Tho aap kuch aise karenge jaise woh apko jaane dene padengi, nahi bhaiya".

"Haan, Gauri tum ye.."

"Kuch nahi bas aise puchliya, bhabhi...mein aati hun" Gauri waved her hand and ran outside as Janvi took her name.

Shivaay wondered what she was trying to imply. On her way back Gauri bumped into Omkara falling right into his arms. Shivaay noticed the couple share a pained eyelock. He looked away unable to bear the thousand memories that came rushing in on seeing them.

After Gauri left shivaay walked to Om and pulled him into a protective hug.

"Long time bro" Om laughed.

They hugged again while Om's eyes shone with gratitude for the little pretty woman.

Something flashed in Shivaay's mind which made him feel better and miserable at the same time.

"If you leave your brother for his good, then will you be wrong?"

...

Shivaay stood wearing his black suit in the pretty garden of the little children's home. Naina was busy giving some last minute instructions to the staff. She had been associated with such programmes since school. He remembered the scoldings he would receive when he would occasionally lose the first rank to her.

"Abhi bhi tum wahi sochre na Shivaay? Ki achcha hua ki mein bio choose kiya aur tum commerce?" She laughed.

He laughed in response.

"But you were my inspiration ok" she added as they walked along the lawn.

"I know that you wanted to become a cardiologist because, I was heart sick". He said tapping at his heart. Naina felt happy seeing him laugh.

She caught something that send tremors through her, blinking her eyes she made sure that she wasnt dreaming. Grabbing Shivaay's hand she led him back.

...

3 months earlier.

"Dushyant" Tia screamed as their car screeched to a halt few centimeters away from a slumped figure on the ground.

Tia kneeled on the ground and pulled up the woman who was drenched in rain.

Tum teek ho...Oh my God Anika, Anika open your eyes dear" Tia screamed, genuine concern dripping from her voice.

Annika's eyes opened and closed, she was only half conscious.

"We need to give her medical attention Tia" Dushyant said as he picked her up.

...

Present

Naina didn't know how to save the situation she feared whether the Oberoi's would sue her for medical negligence or something.

"Shivaay now you can go home" she said in tension.

"Naina abhi bas ek ghanta hai.." Shivaay's eyes caught attention of what Naina was trying to hide from him. His heart swelled up in pain and anger.

He took long strides in that direction. Naina hid her head in her sweaty palms.

Shivaay yanked the woman dressed in a lime yellow kurti. Her eyes grew wide as it met with his hazels which had now gone steel grey. Rage.

"Hiding from me huh, from the past three months?" He shaked her little form.

"Shivaay No.." Naina ran in and tried to hold him back. Shivaay raised his hand signalling her to stay away.

"This is between us Naina.I want answers this time. Tell me Anika why did you pull such a stunt"

Shivaay didn't notice when Anika swayed a little. Naina caught hold of her as she slipped onto the ground. Pulling her up onto her chest she shouted.

"Oh my God, what you have done Shivaay, she is not even breathing".

Shivaay scooped her up in his arms and rushed to a room. He laid her on the bed.

"Dekha Shivaay maine kaha tha na, kya kiya tumney ye".

Naina noticed how Shivaay's closed his eyes in pain as tears fell on the bed through Anika's closed eyes. She noticed how his expressions continously changed from extremely worried to being unaffected and back.

"Shivaay move back, tum uski pati aur sso ke beech mein switch karna band karo" she pushed him back and he sunk onto a nearby chair.

...

Anika opened her eyes feeling hazy and lightheaded. She soon noticed a haggard figure sleeping just few centimetres away from her face. His hot breaths fanning her face. His hand lying over her waist tightly held her onto the bed. She ran her hand through his hair and pressed a kiss on his forehead.


Naina felt her eyes prick. She turned away to wipe a stray tear.

"Anika" the girl snapped out of her daze and looked at the other one as she struggled to get out of Shivaay's hold without waking him.

"Tum ye juice peelo" Naina said as she forwarded the glass to a half lost Anika.

"Just take it Anika, you were so weak. That is why you had fainted and you were unconscious for a pretty long time" she said with genuine concern.

Anika drank the liquid hesitantly.

"Mujhe jaana hai" she said faintly.

"Tikke...I'll drop you, I'll Anika whether you like it or not" Naina said sternly when Anika nodded in hesitation.

She looked on as Naina pulled Shivaay up on the bed and covered him with a sheet. Anika looked away hiding the tears that were dripping from her eye, sas Naina caressed Shivaay's forehead.

...

Shivaay woke up and looked around in confusion.

"You had fallen asleep Shivaay after 3 months without any external aids. I think I have almost found your medicine" Naina said as she walked towards him.

"Where did she go?" He asked half angry half desperate.

"She went back".

"I won't let her run away this time, without giving me answers".

"Don't do anything stupid Shivaay, you may end up hurting both of you".

...

As soon as she saw Neela's forced smile Anika knew that Shivaay had played with her life again.

"I'm sorry Anika.." Neela started.

"I know madam, Shivaay Singh Oberoi has bought this company and he doesn't want me to work here" Anika said dejectedly.

"Anika I am.."

"It's ok Mam I'll manage." Anika replied as she flung her bag onto her shoulders and walked out.

...

"Where would she have gone from there" Shivaay scratched his hair. "Khanna I need to trace her location now".

5 mins later

"Address? I'm coming there in a minute Khanna". Shivaay walked out from his cabin with a resolved expression on his face.

...

Omkara's world turned upside as soon as he saw the news flashing on the television.

...


Guys do give long comments and suggestions. Trying to cope with depression. If very less comments I'll lose the interest to update soon.


I hope that Additi Gupta's character stays a cameo and she'll leave in a month. Navina was far more bearable!



Edited by MariaRebecca - 8 years ago
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Three

So keeping my word, posting the third one!


As soon as he got the address he rushed out.Ninety days! It had been exactly ninety days since she had left him. 13 hrs before, she had again made a run out from his life.

There wasn't a single day he hadn't thought about her. The nights were worser, falling asleep without she being there on the same bed was impossible. Shivaay needed answers from her for making his life miserable like this.
...

Anika's condition was not any different. Living without him and living with his hate, she had called all this upon herself.

She hoped that she would never have to come in front of the Oberois again, not even OmRu until that fateful day.
...

Omkara kept on trying his younger brother who was unreachable since the morning. The entire fiasco between his bhai and bhabhi as witnessed by Naina made him panic.

When they got to know the truth, both the brothers wanted to tell it out to Shivaay. They knew the absence of their sister in law would do much more damage to him than the truth itself. She never knew how much he loved!
...

Shivaay reached the place Khanna had seen Anika. It was a pretty little cottage. Ringing the bell he stood with his icy cold attitude only to be met by a furious woman.

"Tum" he asked confused.

"Shivaay what do you want" she questioned irritated.

"What is Anika doing here Tia" he replied angered.

"She is my friend and why do you care" Tia shot back.

"Because she is my w..." he left it incomplete.

"She is your what Shivaay" she taunted.

"I don't know where she is. You, your mother have given her enough pain, nothing more is needed. Can't you just let live her life, why did you snatch her only job. You must have moved on but it isn't necessary to rub it on her face. Just spare the poor girl" Tia shouted, the pregnancy hormones taking the better of her.

"Tia you shouldn't stress" said Dushyant coming from inside.

"Baby don't you remember how broken she was, why can't he just leave her alone" Tia whined getting impatient.

"Anika left in the morning, Shivaay we exactly don't know where she went. She was so upset, so broken. Please don't hurt her anymore" Dushyant's words almost sounded like a plea.

As Shivaay turned to leave Dushyant held Tia protectively helping her balance while he felt his built up emotions trouble him. As the couple entered their home he heard her say "She did all this for him, to save him from hurt. I cant believe that Pinky auntie was such an evil woman"

"What are you talking Tia" shivaay barked furiously.

"The truth, when you didn't trust Anika then are you going to trust me? Go and ask you mother and brothers" Tia screamed before banging the door shut.
...

Anika was content. She had Tia and Dushyant. As Tia was alone in the second stage of pregnancy they were more than happy to have Anika in. Anika felt bad to know that Mrs. Kapoor had always fed drugs to Dushyant to make him look unhealthy and useless. Far from her he, Tia and their baby had made a perfect family!

The only thing that broke Anika's life was Mahi. Shivaay's brother. Her brother, just like OmRu. However she tried to get close with him he had pushed her away. When he got to know what had happened between her and Shivaay, he was all set to kill Pinky. Anika had a hard time covincing him against it.
...

Om still had the moment fresh in his memory. Rudra was highly elated when Anika decided to call them after all. But Anika's tear choked voice pulled the life out of them too. They had ran to her and she had broken down in their arms.

"I couldn't save him Om, Shivaay will never forgive me"

They had found a pale, fragile Mahi lying on a hospital bed waiting for death. They both had hugged him tight and cried. They told him that they'll love him like they love Shivaay. Mahi just held their hands together and pressed Anika's into their's. Om had known what Mahi wanted eventhough he went away without saying it.

It was this that prevented him from telling the truth to Shivaay. Even if he would live with truth of being illegitimate he knew that Shivaay wouldn't live through the guilt of letting his brother die due to lack of treatment.

His world turned upside down as soon as he saw the news flashing on the television.
...

Anika blamed herself for Mahi's death. She hated her weakness, her limitless love for Shivaay and even her ignorance of Mahi's health. She felt that she should have let him know, let him suffer, Mahi would have lived!
...

Shivaay's world was breaking apart. He couldn't process what Tia had said. What was that he didn't know that had transpired between his Mom and Anika that made her leave him.

As he stepped into the house he was stunned to see Omkara shouting at his mother.

"Abhi sach pata dey 'chotiMa'" Om was furious.

Pinky had won, she had broken Shivaay. She didn't have to hide anything anymore. "Haan Sach ye hai ki Shivaay ek najayaz aulat hai, us kameeni ki gande koon, oh jo faatichar yehan woh banke aya na woh uska judwa hai. Phir tumari pyari bhabhi Anika bekasur hai par woh toh mar gayi na. Dekh..dekh TV kya writes hai". Pinky spoke like a possessed woman.

Shivaay's breath caught in his throat, too much to take at once. He felt the ground beneath slip as he crashed on his knees. Struggling hard he glanced at the tv screen. An unidentified body had been found in a Lake and the reporters where speculating it as Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi. Everything blinked away like a dream. He needed to find her, It can't be her.

As the family dealt with Pinky's poison, Om flopped on the ground and held Shivaay as he refused to breathe and fell backwards. Naina was in the theatre and Om cried unable to help Shivaay. Rudra's phone broke him out of his daze he sprang up and dragged Shivaay with him.

"Shivaay tum haar nahi maan sakte mere saat chal, bhabhi will be fine"
...

Rudra knew his bhabhi. He knew that how much she loved. He knew that she was the strongest of them all. He adored her when she took up the broken pieces of her heart and put them together every time his brother broke it.

Even when Sahil disowned her for hurting his Shivaay bhaiya she had stood headlong through it, even when her heart bled to stay away from him, she had let him for his better future.

"She loved them enough to let them go".

Rudra's heart broke when he saw her perched on a wooden seat on the lakeside crying her heart out. He pulled her into the tightest bear hug and let her cry away all the pain. When he had finally got all the messages that Om had sent him, he pulled Anika to the little cottage at the entrance of the Oberoi Estates.

"These two idiots should stop hurting each other by staying away" he had screamed through the phone putting the soul back into Om's body.
...

As Om pulled a half dead Shivaay and shoved him into the car he was blocked by a large crowd of people who have probably come to celebrate the death of the Oberoi's eldest daughter in law.

"Hamari babhi ko nahi kuch hua, nahi kuch hoga, aap sab please ghar jayiye" he screamed before sliding into the driver's seat and driving off.
...

Anika had to answer the calling bell as Rudra had sneaked out a minute before. She was surprised with the sight she saw. Shivaay Singh Oberoi or rather just Shivaay was at the door completely drenched in rain.

Kneeling on the floor, he held her hands together and kept his head on them.

"I'm sorry Anika" it was a choked whisper only she could hear.

Anika fought back her tears. The pain in his eyes passed a knife through her heart".

"It's ok Shivaay , I forgive you". His head shot up and she saw light return to his hazels.

"But I won't be able to love anymore" Shivaay felt as if life was sucked out of him at that moment.

"Anika I.."

"It's not your fault Shivaay, its mine. I'm the one who ran away without fighting for us. I don't anymore find that in me to trust myself with love. I will always have our beautiful memories. I'll always be indebted to you for giving me two brothers like Om and Rudra who trusted me more than themselves, sisters like Gauri, Saumya who loved my like their own and an entire family, eventhough it all existed only for a small while. Those memories are enough for me to live the rest of my life" Anika closed the door and slid down against it, she stifled her sobs by biting onto her hand.

Shivaay didn't know what to do, it was her or nothing. If he didn't have her would die.
...

A few metres away Om and Rudra sat in a small cafe hoping that his brother would have got the love of his life back. Revealing about Mahi's death to Shivaay would be another an herculean task. They hoped that Anika's presence in their brother's life would be able to heal all his deep wounds.
...


As a car screeched by, Anika sprang up from the floor, she had fallen asleep on due to exhaustion.

She had lied again, pushed him away due to the insecurities brewing inside her. The old fear strengthened that the people whom she loved would be snatched away from her. He would have left by then she thought. She had no tears left to cry out her pain.

Opening the door she peeped outside to make sure that she had become alone again. But he was still there, just like how she had left him. His head hanging down, eyes closed, hands on the sides, crumbled on his knees. Wet and cold in the rain, how long had he been there?

"Shivaay" she shook him, panic ran through her seeing him numb.

"Mujhe chodke mat jaana Anika, mai marjaunga" he said leaning onto her shoulders.

She couldn't push him away again. She held his head and he pulled her into his arms. She sobbed into his chest while he dropped wet kisses on her face and hair. Happy tears ran down their cheeks and mixed with each other and heartfelt smiles found way back to their lips.The heaven send more showers of blessings drenching the man and his beloved wife.

The OmRu were the happiest on seeing the sight in front of them. Rudra worried whether they both would get penalised for such public display of affection in the middle of the road, although it was a projection of their emotional state. Omkara laughed at his brother's worry happy tears glistening in his eyes.


Sach mein dhal jate hai kisse,
Dil se dohrane ke baat;
Ishq pe hoga yakeen,
Ishq ho jane ke baat



Guys do give long comments and suggestions. Trying to cope with depression. If very less comments I'll lose the interest to update.
Epilogue coming soon on page 12!





Edited by MariaRebecca - 8 years ago
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Instead of epilogue writing a sequel!
Shivika SS: HOME
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This is amazing!The sadistic part in me sort of wants to see Shivaay suffer a bit, for once, and this is perfect.Update soon!
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tum agar ishqbazz ki writer hoti to jyada acca hota 😳 loved ur story waiting for second part
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oh my godd.. my heart goes out to Shivaay. 😭😭
Okay he understood she has faked it all. 👍🏼

whose car that was n what happend to Annika. 😲

Amazing start to the story dear.. ⭐️
Eagerly waiting for part 2 . Update soon pls.




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Heart breaking update
But i know in the end everything will be just fine btwn shivika

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Mind blowing
Shivay and Anika both are in pain
I hate this separation
Update soon

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