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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: -Rhea-

I'm starting to like Shivaay's cheapda mode. I typed this on my phone so please ignore some spelling errors or anything.


Rhea, this is beautiful and I so wish this coming true, if and when, the fake pregnancy track plays out. Would be fun to see a scandalised Anika; not sure how to handle Horny Singh Oberoi ... šŸ˜†

@Bold - I never liked these kind of scenes before in any show, Ishqbaaaz is a first ... 😳

You typed it all out on your phone ...? That is some serious effort and skill, girl ... šŸ‘

Looking forward to read more from you; thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Loved it
Even I love cheapda shivay 😳 😳
I want to read more please continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Too cute...loved it!!! Shivvay is on full Chepade mode these day!!!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Amazing
Anika said the lie of her being pregnant so that Shivay can hate her and make her leve the house'
BUT BUT
Ye toh ulta hi hogayašŸ˜†
Shivay ka cheapda version bahar aa gayašŸ˜†
And it is not going to vanish easily
Amazing
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

Reserved.

And Continue please !

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YAYYAY ! I am just so happy because for the first time I am the first one to comment.Well technically the first one šŸ˜† Nowadays people are so fast that within seconds people are there before you , so it's a pleasure to be the first one in your work 😳
This was so so good. It was like you gave me the Avengers wala toy in My happy meal at McD. I totally got the old IB wala feels and savored it till I could.
Even while reading it I was like I hope it doesn't end. It was exactly what was needed in midst of this negative aura. This is the Shivaay who trusts Annika and is Annika's mischievous billuji. I just hope the scene plays out like this in the show if this spoiler is true 😳 I especially loved the last scene Typical Tadibaaz Annika šŸ˜† Needless to say Loved itā¤ļø
I hope you continue this *Please* and show how Shivaay's Tadi is no lessšŸ˜†

Thank you for making this beautiful stress busteršŸ¤—

Waiting

Loads of Love ā¤ļø
Lisa

Aww! Thank you so much! It really means a lot! šŸ¤— I'm so glad you liked it. 😃
I totally geddit. The happiness when you're the first one to comment on a fiction. 😳
I will definitely try to update it. Maybe this weekend, once all my assignments and all are done. 🄱
Again, thank you so much! ā¤ļøā­ļø
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: MrsSSO


Rhea, this is beautiful and I so wish this coming true, if and when, the fake pregnancy track plays out. Would be fun to see a scandalised Anika; not sure how to handle Horny Singh Oberoi ... šŸ˜†

@Bold - I never liked these kind of scenes before in any show, Ishqbaaaz is a first ... 😳

You typed it all out on your phone ...? That is some serious effort and skill, girl ... šŸ‘

Looking forward to read more from you; thanks for the PM!

Thank you so much, Vidhi! šŸ¤— It really means a lot. ā¤ļø 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Hey Thank you for the PM 😊
It was fantastic and especially the last part SPLASH!!šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
Continue writing and PM me 😳

Love,
Sakshi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Wow ! Awesome update
I loved it
It was so funny and romantic
I so want show me bhi aisa he ho but 😭
Shivay's trust in anika was awww
In short it was khidkekod update! !!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
waiting for next part dude...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Part B




I had entered the bathroom to take a shower and before I could close the door, Shivaay barged in and locked the door behind him.

I was avoiding Shivaay the whole afternoon but now Shivaay stood right in front of me.

I stepped back as Shivaay started towards me with an evil smile on his face.

He slipped his arms around my waist and pulled me closer to him and I gasped.

With his free hand he tucked a strand of hair behind my ear and nuzzled at my neck. My whole body tensed at this.

He looked right into my eyes and whispered, "You threw water on me. And this is your punishment."

I looked at him questioningly wondering what he was planning to do and by the time I realised, it was too late.

Splash!

He pushed me backwards and I fell right into the tub of water.

I regained my composure and look around to see Shivaay right beside me in the tub.

He found my hand amidst all the foam within the water and twisted it around my back, "What're you hiding, Anika?"

"Huh?" I looked at him confused. What was he referring to? The pregnancy or did he know anything?

"I've noticed that you haven't been yourself lately. Talking about leaving me, and our marriage ending. Something's not right here Anika. And about that pregnancy announcement, how on earth did you even expect me to believe something like that! What's bothering you? Why're you doing this?"

Sensing my hesitation he continued, "Or should I go with the whole tumhe bacche chahiye theory?"

Seeing my eyes widen in shock he chucked.

"Shivaay, I'I sorry. But I can't.. I just..." I struggled for words.

"Anika, you can trust me." He encouraged.

"I can't Shivaay. I'm sorry." I choked on my tears, "I mean, I do trust you. More than myself. But I can't tell you this."

He let go of my hand and cupped my face. "Fine. But just know that I'm always there by your side. And.. and if you want to talk to anyone, I'm right here." Saying that, he kissed my forehead.

"Sooo..."

"So?"

"Do you still want kids?" Shivaay winked.

"Shivaay!" I blushed as he pulled my into an embrace.


~The End~

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