Shivika 2S - Bacche | COMPLETED

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ShivIka 2S - Bacche


Part A


"Shivaay what're you..." Shivaay closed the door and turned to Anika. He had en evil smile on his face as he slowly walked towards Anika.

As he reached near her, Anika started stepping backwards until she reached the wall.

"Anika.." he said as he pinned her to the wall. Anika was so confused. She looked into this beautiful kanji aakhen to find a mischievous glint in them.

"Shivaay, let me go. What're you doing." Anika stammered.

Shivaay loosened his hold only to slowly twist her right hand behind her back.

He gently traced his finger on her back sending shivers down her spine.

"Let me go, Shivaay. Koi aa jayega. Didn't you hear what I said outside?"

"I heard Anika. And I also understood what you were trying to say."

"What?"

"Yahi na... ki tumhe..." he pulled her closer and nuzzled behind her ear.

"Ki tumhe... bacche chahiye." He whispered. "You want babies right Anika?"

"Wh-whaatt? I-uh-no-" she stuttered turning into a light shade of pink.

"What I told in the hall about being pregnant is t-" Anika couldn't complete as Shivaay stopped her by placing his index finger on her lips.

Anika desperately tried to free her hand only to have Shivaay hold it tighter.

"I won't let you go anywhere, Anika. Hume humari chotti si family banani hai. And today we'll take the first step." Anika looked at him shocked.

"Yeh aap kaise 2 ruppee bate kar rahe hai Shivaay."

"Waise have you thought about names for our kids?" He continued completely ignoring her, "Well, I've thought. Beta hua toh Ansh, and beti hui toh. Umm.. Anshika, ya Shivika."

"Nahi- You're supposed to.."

"Don't tell me what I'm supposed to do. I know very well..." and within a fraction of a second Shivaay scooped Anika in his arms and carried her to their bed.

Anika was too shocked to say anything. She couldn't understand what Shivaay was doing.

She had announced in the hall that she was pregnant so that Shivaay would kick her out of the house, but here Shivaay was family planning! Her plan was backfiring. She had to get out of here.

Shivaay suddenly tripped causing both of them to fall on the bed. And their eyes locked.

"Shivaay please let me go." Anika pleaded.

"Arre Anika.. Itni Jaldi kya hai!"

"Shivaay daadi!" Anika said hoping that Shivaay would fall for this trick but he knew better.

"Aaj koi bhi aa jaye Anika. I won't let you go." He smirked.

Anika was trying to find anything that would make Shivaay let her go. And she finally spotted a glass of water on the bedside table. She got hold of it, and what was to follow?

SPLASH!

Shivaay was caught off guard and he jumped off the bed.

"Fhat the Wuck!" He cursed wiping his face.

He was glaring at her, and before he could say or do anything more. Anika got up from the bed and rushed out of the room.


Part B - Page 6

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Hey guys. I have no idea what I was thinking while writing this. I'm starting to like Shivaay's cheapda mode. I typed this on my phone so please ignore some spelling errors or anything. Please do tell me your views. And chamelis are welcome. 😳
Edited by -Rhea- - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Reserved.

And Continue please !
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YAYYAY ! I am just so happy because for the first time I am the first one to comment.Well technically the first one 😆 Nowadays people are so fast that within seconds people are there before you , so it's a pleasure to be the first one in your work 😳
This was so so good. It was like you gave me the Avengers wala toy in My happy meal at McD. I totally got the old IB wala feels and savored it till I could.
Even while reading it I was like I hope it doesn't end. It was exactly what was needed in midst of this negative aura. This is the Shivaay who trusts Annika and is Annika's mischievous billuji. I just hope the scene plays out like this in the show if this spoiler is true 😳 I especially loved the last scene Typical Tadibaaz Annika 😆 Needless to say Loved it❤️
I hope you continue this *Please* and show how Shivaay's Tadi is no less😆

Thank you for making this beautiful stress buster🤗

Waiting

Loads of Love ❤️
Lisa

Edited by CaffeineMuggle - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Rhea loved it totally..
Love Shivaay in this mode..
Please continue it..
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This was both romantic and funny! Loved it :)
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Love the beginning. Please continue;)
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i dont know abt others
but i felt this funny😆
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It was a perfect combo of both romance and funniness.
Loved it
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Water is a great weapon
Great
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Posted: 8 years ago
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that's exactly the scenario that was running in my head today, and thank you for penning it down, you made my day dream into a reality.
just imagine if that actually happened😲
I WANT YOU TO CONTINUE THAT AND ILL BE DESPERATELY LOOKING FORWARD FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE HON
...IM DAY DREAMING ALREADY
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I was grinning at this read 😃
If Anika's plan backfires like this, I am all in... Tell 'em you're pregnant 😆

This was adorable okay? Shivaay turning cheapda and water being Anika's only defence... I don't even know what I liked the best. Just that I loved this ❤️

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