Tasveer Banaata hun Mein 1 SHOT, Om & Gauri updtd on pg 33 19 June

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: yayini
Yeah ru bhu naa. Nautanki kahin kaa..he is the one to best provoke om and ends up in shut up rudra. I hope he comes up best antics to tandofy om s gussa

Thnx for commenting...

Well Let's what Will Ru do to tandhofying Omkara...Lets see what should i Do i have to think and I am not getting the idea

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: lakshmi32
Awww such a cuteee update..I loves obro moments.. Rudra is such a naughty kid..he is scared of his O..so shivru is plotting his to calm down volcanokara..omggg om thrown statue at tej ..beautiful update year..u penned down it so amazingly...

YEah Omkara is still Shivaay's brother and Gussa Oberoi khaandaan ke har Member mein Daudta hai...

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: angelSRJ
Wow wow wow.. It was so sweet one. Want obros more 😃

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Riddhima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Shut up rudra 😆

Fabulous update...

And superb dialogue too...

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Shut up rudra 😆
Fabulous update...
And superb dialogue too...

Awwwhhh..

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BloomingAway

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

This was so cute!

Loved Rudra's antics!

It was lovely to see the bonding between the brothers!

I'm loving that we're getting everyone's point of view!

Thanks for the PM!

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Love_Family
This was so cute!
Loved Rudra's antics!
It was lovely to see the bonding between the brothers!
I'm loving that we're getting everyone's point of view!
Thanks for the PM!

Thanks for the reply...

Awwh... Glad you liked tosee everyone's point of view and the story is just like this sometimes... you feel this way...😳😳😳

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Tasveer Banata Hun...

Tasveer Nhi Bnti...

Tasveer Banata Hun...

Tasveer Nhi Bnti...

Ek Khwaab Sa Dekha Hai...

Tabeer Nhi Bnti...

Tasveer Nhi Bnti...

Tasveer Banata Hun...

Tasveer Nhi Bnti...

Song That touched my Heart Sung By The Legend himself. Mr. Jagjit Singh.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CUK_egar8nM[/YOUTUBE]

Hii

I am Glad that lots of people have like my previous One Shot but I will be more happy to recieve your valuable comments on my One shot. Here is the Teaser of upcoming One Shot I hope You will like this one too. But do hear this beautiful song before reading the upcoming One Shot. I am sure you will love this song. I am waiting for your precious Comment.

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Ila

P.S. Do Try to figure what is Next

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: kavsy
Awesome OS.

lolzzz without reading you put the comment it was a teaser...

anyway I am still loved your comment as you always constantly keep commenting atleast you do read some part of it... even you are not familiar with the character