Talking body - A RiKara OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: nikki.171

This is building expectations lol 😆But I love it! A perfect mix between the passion and their banter.

"Why did you do that?"

I though Om was referring to her breaking the kiss...he clearly has more control.

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome yar loved it

it was superb...

They are pretending it before svetlana but sometimes it will become real...after all she is his wife...

awww gauri pulled out his hair tie...it was so cute

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Amazing OS

Can't believe u put it up in 25 mins

Hats off to u

Marvelous job

Coming back to OS

Loved how Omkara is trying so hard

Gauri is effecting him

And the way she fights

Don't underestimate her just cuz she is tiny

When time comes she can be a lioness

Wish u make it a 2shot or SS

Want to see Gauri irritating omkara more

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

will you make it an ss so that we can seemore IRRITATION EPISODES like this?

finally omie should lose tolerance and start to irritate gouri back ( just a wild thought)

anyways os was awesome, just loved it

Me: *takes five hours to write a paragraph* so proud of myself *pats herself on the back*

Originally posted by: FayeMia

Oh. My. God! You keep heaping praises on me! Mujhe aasmaan par pohoch jaana chahiye. And I'm never hitting you for a sixer because I'm a hugger! (not really, just a huge Bayley fan!)

You actually expected something out of our convo? Girl, you make an amazing friend.

Thank you for loving my RiKara. OK, quick confession: the first thing I noticed about Omkara was his hair. I've got a thing for guys with long hair. Ufff that hair (I'm dead)

And however street-smart Gauri is, she is bound to be naive a bit about these things. I think after the MU, Omkara will definitely enjoy this fact about her. And who wouldn't be affected if Omkara decides to seduce them?

Oh men, they are all the same. Can't think rationally! Isn't that why we women are beating them almost everywhere?

And life is never fair! Let Omkara bear the brunt of the affect his wife has on him as a payback for leaving her stranded!

All your hugs have been accepted. Sending you many back.

Oh, and I also cannot stop blushing at your words! I'm working on something, it should be up soon!

Originally posted by: DamseLInActioN

Me: *takes five hours to write a paragraph* so proud of myself *pats herself on the back*

Faye: I wrote this OS in 25 minutes so please...

Me:...

also Me: *jumps off the cliff*

three words - Overwhelming, exciting, and wonderful!!!

They have such sparkling chemistry dear lord! And the way you write the physical aspect of their relationship makes me wanna run for a cold shower! just so agghfuyygrukighdLY GOOD!!

His body is betraying him like it isn't his body xD he's detached and mechanical but just not in control ;-) HAHA!! This kinda things are bound to happen ,sooner or later with the contract marriage thingy!!

I loved the part about the hair ties and I especially liked the final scene with a confused Gauri thinking about new ways to irk her patidev whereas a TurnedOnKara needs a cold shower!🤣

Bless you and your writing talent !!

xx

Originally posted by: Joyel

Good work Faye👏🤗

Originally posted by: twerping

This was amazing!

*dead*

Hello Faye dear, 😊
I hope u got my pm where I told u about me suffering from fever, that's why I couldn't read the stories for these long days. 😳
Coming back to the OS, I just loved reading it. Its like the fresh air 😃, after watching so rude n heartless Om's behavior towards poor Gauri in the show. 😭 I loved it. ❤️
With love,
Aheli.