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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update
why they r caged in the glass
what is the mystry behind it
i am very curious know about it

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angelwords

<h1> <font size="6"><font color="#242424"></font></font></h1><h1><font size="6"><font color="#990033"> ~ THE UNDOING~</font></font></h1><h3><font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990033"> ~PROLOGUE~</font></h3>

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<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">From our childhood we are told that we are born to fulfill our destiny. We are here for a purpose but what if the purpose is never fulfilled. What if what you been told is all a lie? what if every lie is beginning of new purpose? . How will you feel when you every Logic is questioned and every answer you are finding is within you? Are you ready to embrace it or Denial is the only way to be protected..!! PROTECTED but from what?</font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Each and Every Story has an happy ending.. do you believe so? what about those who doesn't have one?. Are those stories destined to have this end? or there is some thing still left to conquer? does life give u second chances ??.</font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">This story is not a typical love story.. this story will take you a roller coaster ride of emotions.. it will challenge your thoughts and mind.. it will surprise you with every turn.. but the question is are you ready to accept it??</font>

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<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#242424"></font><font color="#0000cc">VERY IMP--> This story will be updated on my blog after 5 parts.. so if anyone want to read it further please tell me ...so that i can add you on the blog... but if i saw all of you loving it then, i will continue it here also..no p</font></font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hello everyone!!!!</font>

i am so excited for this one... this is not a typical love story.. its a combination of every genre you ever read.. thriller, romance adventure... i hope you like my plot...

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beginning is indeed different.
all set to read dis one
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Posted: 8 years ago

sorry to keep you waiting..updating today 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
waiting di as well for other storirs two plz update di
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~The Undoing~

Chapter-7




Oh god, beyond the Glass wall , I saw trees . It seems like a forest. Trees were all around . In between huge pile of trees there was a dusty road. Not a proper road, But a dust one. Suddenly heard laughter. I tired to move my head to see the source of voice. But I wasn't able to. It feels like my whole body was jammed. I hear the voice approaching. I was waiting for them to reach me. Praying to god to make them hurry to me. I saw two women approaching. They were laughing and talking to each other. They seems happy. I tired to call them. I wanted to ask them what place it is. Why am I here. But no voice came out. I saw a man rushing to them. They dropped the bag in hand and suddenly started crying. I tired to calling them ask. Both women and men started running in depth of forest through the dusty road. I have no idea where am i.

I can still hear the faint voice but i am unable to understand where it is coming from. I shift my eye towards Emma. i saw her lips moving. She is alive, thank god. I tired to call her aloud, but i failed to do so. Tears were continuously coming out from my eyes. I just wanted to back. Just wanted to in arms of my mother. But Alas! no one hear me. Here i am trapped in a glass box, unable to do anything. Suddenly i felt there was vacuum of Power. It feels like all my energy is being sucked out. Suddenly everything feel blur. Slowly my eyes are closing and all i can feel is darkness indulging me in itself. I felt a jerk and i quickly opened my eyes. I saw i back to Emma's Drawing room. I further scanned the room and saw my mother and Emma's mother standing still in the same position i which we left. Quickly i saw towards Emma and saw her staring right at me. Our hand still touching each other. As i broke our staring session, I saw everything around us went back to normal, like nothing happened. Suddenly i felt a jerk in my hand. I saw towards she seemed pretty shaken and very next moment i heard her screaming at me. She was calling me a freak. She suddenly held me by my shoulder and started roughly shaking me and asking me what just happened , what i did to her. I was totally numb myself to answer anything. I cannot process what just happened. I was so shocked that i felt that stood numb for hours. I saw towards Emma still trying to process, what just happened, when i saw her mother calming her and ordering her to go back to her room.

After she left, Her mother started apologizing to my mother, blaming her rude behavior on climatic change. My mother was calming telling her it was okay, but i knew her mamma bear has woken up. She protectively put arms around me to bring me out of such a state. She told Emma's Mom that i was late, we both should leave. After saying so, she dragged me home. She was protectively embracing me. We reached our house, my mother made me sit on the couch and ran somewhere. I was still numb. I am still trying to process what just happened. What was that place where we were trapped. Why were all those people running towards the forest. Why wasn't i able to move my body or speak. And Most importantly why did it happened. Was it due to my and Emma's touching. I saw my mother nearing me with a glass of water. She made me drink the water and asked if i was okay. i slowly nodded and asked her if i can go my room. She nodded in approval. I quickly move towards my room. After reaching the room, i quickly closed the door.

i can totally understand Emma's reaction. I hope she is okay. But this place is really strange. I can't stay here. I have to leave. I will talk to my father about it and i know he will understand. I just cant stay here anymore. Yes, i leave tomorrow, I will talk to my friends. I will stay with them and apply the college nearby. Yes, this is my final decision. Enough is enough, i am not staying here. (IMPORTANT NOTE ..DO READ)

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NOTE- FIRST OF ALL I AM SORRY FOR LATE UPLOAD, I WAS TOTALLY BUSY...SO SORRY PLZ FORGIVE ME.. AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENT, I READ EACH ONE OF THEM AND LOVED THEM... ALSO SOME NEW PEOPLE HAVE JOINED ME..SO WELCOME TO ALL THOSE... HAVE A ASUM DAY PEOPLE

SECONDLY, All those people who are waiting for Maan in this story, i like to say, please wait, have little patience, it will be totally worthy, i promise you that

THIRDLY, Some people are asking for love story only, as i said it has everything, every genre not only romance. I have written various love novel but this one i wanted it to be different and unique. i know many people here love to read romance novel, all i can say please give it a try also. I am putting all my imagination skill here , so hopefully you like it

LASTLY, I will try to update regularly, but don't know if it will here or on my blog. There are chances i can upload here or there, also there are chances that i upload on both, it depends on how much time i have. So if you are not added on my blog, do add yourself. Just PM me and i will send you my blog link and then you can send request

THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN FOR YOUR TIME AND HAPPY READING..

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NEXT- ~UNDOING~ CHAPTER 8

Edited by angelwords - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cutical

waiting di as well for other storirs two plz update di



Hello, i am trying, i will upload all my stories as soon as possible, now days i so so busy , i am hardly getting time, but i will try my best.. until then you enjoy CHAP - 7 and hope you like it😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update..again unusual happened with geet and also that new emma..both felt it too
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh emma totally scared of all things even she felt it ..this place so strange
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update geet found herself in a cage where she saw a forest a couple of woman coming laughing but something the men told them that changed everything geet was really confused and scared she saw Emma who was just staring at her geet felt she would faint any second as she felt she would suffocated when she saw herself in Emma home still holding Emma's hand and immediately left and everything was normal till Emma freaked out as she felt the same as geet though geets mom was very protective at the moment but geet had decided to leave asap she can't stay at this place anymore waiting for maans entry maybe he can help her figure out what's going on
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Posted: 8 years ago
hello! thanks 4 da pm! lovely update! well written! strange things r happening! Emma felt it as well! update soon, pls update Gosh...

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